Comments received on poems by sunshine777
My Dream Walking
sorenbarrett said:
We all search for what some call a soul mate others true love. A match that will hold its glue through time. Very nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 12:51
sorenbarrett said:
We all search for what some call a soul mate others true love. A match that will hold its glue through time. Very nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 12:51
My Children
Poetic Licence said:
This is a beautifully write of a mother\'s eternal love and dedication to her children, lovely read
April 3rd, 2025 02:05
Poetic Licence said:
This is a beautifully write of a mother\'s eternal love and dedication to her children, lovely read
April 3rd, 2025 02:05
My Children
sorenbarrett said:
A mother\'s love and a proclamation that she will always feel this. There is no stronger love than a mother\'s and this was a lovely write
April 2nd, 2025 16:40
sorenbarrett said:
A mother\'s love and a proclamation that she will always feel this. There is no stronger love than a mother\'s and this was a lovely write
April 2nd, 2025 16:40
This Is
Poetic Licence said:
Our basic need and want is just to feel safe, and for so many for a multitude of reasons this is never the case, nicely expressed and written
April 2nd, 2025 01:54
Poetic Licence said:
Our basic need and want is just to feel safe, and for so many for a multitude of reasons this is never the case, nicely expressed and written
April 2nd, 2025 01:54
This Is
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing someone from the past. Well worded and expressed. Very nice
April 1st, 2025 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of missing someone from the past. Well worded and expressed. Very nice
April 1st, 2025 13:24
Dear Monster
Poetic Licence said:
Monsters will always come and go, don\'t let them control you or abuse you and they will leave quicker, enjoyed your writing
March 3rd, 2025 03:00
Poetic Licence said:
Monsters will always come and go, don\'t let them control you or abuse you and they will leave quicker, enjoyed your writing
March 3rd, 2025 03:00
Dear Monster
sorenbarrett said:
A good read that portrays the situation as a monster. The metaphor fits well
March 2nd, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A good read that portrays the situation as a monster. The metaphor fits well
March 2nd, 2025 18:36
Dear Monster
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine. We all have our own monsters from time to time. Such a sense of release when they go. Enjoyed reading you dear poet. All the best.
March 2nd, 2025 17:29
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine. We all have our own monsters from time to time. Such a sense of release when they go. Enjoyed reading you dear poet. All the best.
March 2nd, 2025 17:29
My Heart Is Cracked
rin said:
The heart is a fragile thing that can crack or disappear.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:31
rin said:
The heart is a fragile thing that can crack or disappear.
``Tenderness to You\\\\\\\'\\\\\\\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 01:31
My Heart Is Cracked
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of sadness and the need to put on a mask to the world for self protection, sometimes though we need to let the mask slip, so we can move on. Well written tender piece.
December 23rd, 2024 12:57
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of sadness and the need to put on a mask to the world for self protection, sometimes though we need to let the mask slip, so we can move on. Well written tender piece.
December 23rd, 2024 12:57
Never Be Me
Poetic Licence said:
A few powerful words covering rules and emotions, Well written
December 23rd, 2024 04:45
Poetic Licence said:
A few powerful words covering rules and emotions, Well written
December 23rd, 2024 04:45
Never Be Me
sorenbarrett said:
Asserting boundaries and respect despite pain or feelings of loss. Nicely worded
December 23rd, 2024 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Asserting boundaries and respect despite pain or feelings of loss. Nicely worded
December 23rd, 2024 03:51
Emotions
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I hope your writing is cethartic.
November 26th, 2024 16:04
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I hope your writing is cethartic.
November 26th, 2024 16:04
Emotions
Cassie58 said:
Your strong faith will help you deal with those negative emotions. A good cry helps sunshine. Yes roller coaster, they can be. Thank you for sharing this spiritual poem with us .
November 24th, 2024 16:55
Cassie58 said:
Your strong faith will help you deal with those negative emotions. A good cry helps sunshine. Yes roller coaster, they can be. Thank you for sharing this spiritual poem with us .
November 24th, 2024 16:55
Double Minded
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine, I felt the chill here. Words mean nothing. It is always the actions that speak volumes in a relationship. A sad fact.
November 18th, 2024 08:56
Cassie58 said:
Dear sunshine, I felt the chill here. Words mean nothing. It is always the actions that speak volumes in a relationship. A sad fact.
November 18th, 2024 08:56
Double Minded
sorenbarrett said:
A hard truth in many relationships where words do not fit with actions. It seems that this is just part of the human condition nicely written.
November 18th, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A hard truth in many relationships where words do not fit with actions. It seems that this is just part of the human condition nicely written.
November 18th, 2024 05:50
2Pac
sorenbarrett said:
Are you speaking of the rapper? Who else I\'m sure. A tribute nicely written
November 4th, 2024 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Are you speaking of the rapper? Who else I\'m sure. A tribute nicely written
November 4th, 2024 04:22
Self Obsessed
peto said:
Hi sunshine
Great to see you still writing
And as previous comment said
Nailing it
November 1st, 2024 17:48
peto said:
Hi sunshine
Great to see you still writing
And as previous comment said
Nailing it
November 1st, 2024 17:48
Self Obsessed
Young Fella said:
Emotionally moving lines .Really liked them. Heart is the heart of the topic. Excellent.
October 30th, 2024 17:55
Young Fella said:
Emotionally moving lines .Really liked them. Heart is the heart of the topic. Excellent.
October 30th, 2024 17:55
If We
Young Fella said:
Gorgeous verses. Enjoyed the topic and how your ines flow.
October 30th, 2024 17:54
Young Fella said:
Gorgeous verses. Enjoyed the topic and how your ines flow.
October 30th, 2024 17:54
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