Comments received on poems by gray0328
A Taste of Home
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. Your words reminded me of my Nan and the recipes she passed down to younger generations. Lovely work.
August 14th, 2024 15:10
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem. Your words reminded me of my Nan and the recipes she passed down to younger generations. Lovely work.
August 14th, 2024 15:10
A Taste of Home
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and unusual it smells like home. Nicely said
August 14th, 2024 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting and unusual it smells like home. Nicely said
August 14th, 2024 11:27
The Lizard in the Coffee Pot
sorenbarrett said:
A fun write and a metaphor at the same time. We all seek warmth whether climatic, emotional, or psychological. I loved the last line \"gone into the light\"
August 13th, 2024 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
A fun write and a metaphor at the same time. We all seek warmth whether climatic, emotional, or psychological. I loved the last line \"gone into the light\"
August 13th, 2024 10:53
The Unseen Struggle
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded with some great lines it does speak to the heart. Loved it
August 12th, 2024 14:50
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded with some great lines it does speak to the heart. Loved it
August 12th, 2024 14:50
The Role of Adversity
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded it flows like a river to the sea. It\'s meaning so well stated in images so vivid and metaphor. Nicely done
August 11th, 2024 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded it flows like a river to the sea. It\'s meaning so well stated in images so vivid and metaphor. Nicely done
August 11th, 2024 07:06
The Balance of Narcissus
sorenbarrett said:
Love the last line \"life is best without the lens of death\" Nicely written
August 10th, 2024 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
Love the last line \"life is best without the lens of death\" Nicely written
August 10th, 2024 07:19
The First Thought
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoy a glass half full it still has flavor and nourishment. A wonderful message of positivity.
August 9th, 2024 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoy a glass half full it still has flavor and nourishment. A wonderful message of positivity.
August 9th, 2024 12:06
The First Thought
Caring dove said:
An engaging writing .. nice , and interesting poem ,
August 9th, 2024 10:46
Caring dove said:
An engaging writing .. nice , and interesting poem ,
August 9th, 2024 10:46
Questions I Often Ask Myself
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully penned images that float off the page. Nicely done
August 8th, 2024 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully penned images that float off the page. Nicely done
August 8th, 2024 10:56
The Splender of Two Natures
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as a metaphor with in a metaphor. Symbolic god now a fading memory. Very nicely done
August 7th, 2024 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
I take this as a metaphor with in a metaphor. Symbolic god now a fading memory. Very nicely done
August 7th, 2024 11:44
Is There Anything More Beautiful Than the Bow of a Ship touching a New World
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich imagery, but horrendous when the results of that touching are considered - havoc and devastation on the populations already resident in that new world.
August 6th, 2024 18:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Rich imagery, but horrendous when the results of that touching are considered - havoc and devastation on the populations already resident in that new world.
August 6th, 2024 18:25
Is There Anything More Beautiful Than the Bow of a Ship touching a New World
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery in this poem. Vivid and identifiable.
August 6th, 2024 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful imagery in this poem. Vivid and identifiable.
August 6th, 2024 11:27
The Champion of Coney Island
Parisab said:
Your poem is actually operatic and elegant even though is describing an absurd act (and the sin of gluttony.) I’m loving all the elements like the seagulls and the proud mother knitting from the bleachers. I was entertained and I thank you.
August 6th, 2024 00:13
Parisab said:
Your poem is actually operatic and elegant even though is describing an absurd act (and the sin of gluttony.) I’m loving all the elements like the seagulls and the proud mother knitting from the bleachers. I was entertained and I thank you.
August 6th, 2024 00:13
The Champion of Coney Island
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid scene with imagery galore but I sense something deeper rumbling in the belly of this glutton. The frivolity and gluttony of society the metaphor grows as we feed our need for entertainment with the competition of meaningless and even harmful and disgusting activities. This is a mystery to our ancestors and older beholders who had simpler gratifications. But then again it could just be a hotdog contest.
August 5th, 2024 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid scene with imagery galore but I sense something deeper rumbling in the belly of this glutton. The frivolity and gluttony of society the metaphor grows as we feed our need for entertainment with the competition of meaningless and even harmful and disgusting activities. This is a mystery to our ancestors and older beholders who had simpler gratifications. But then again it could just be a hotdog contest.
August 5th, 2024 07:42
The Champion of Coney Island
2781 said:
It must be one of the most obscene sports
August 5th, 2024 06:02
2781 said:
It must be one of the most obscene sports
August 5th, 2024 06:02
Breaking Bad Habits
sorenbarrett said:
Modern man\'s prayer. To achieve it one must return to the past. Destroy technology and modern society. Urges I have felt and only temporarily been able to overcome. Nicely written
August 4th, 2024 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Modern man\'s prayer. To achieve it one must return to the past. Destroy technology and modern society. Urges I have felt and only temporarily been able to overcome. Nicely written
August 4th, 2024 06:19
Music To Lift the Spirits
sorenbarrett said:
This was music to the ears. I love music of all types but particularly the blues. I could hear it play with this piece so nicely written.
August 3rd, 2024 11:44
sorenbarrett said:
This was music to the ears. I love music of all types but particularly the blues. I could hear it play with this piece so nicely written.
August 3rd, 2024 11:44
Forgiveness On Layaway
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded this poem has some great images and the meaning is intriguing.
August 2nd, 2024 16:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully worded this poem has some great images and the meaning is intriguing.
August 2nd, 2024 16:02
Dance of Ambiguity
sorenbarrett said:
A enlightened view of sexuality and in fact any differences that we hold as human beings or even other species. Open minded and refreshing to hear. Lovely words and great metaphors as well.
August 1st, 2024 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
A enlightened view of sexuality and in fact any differences that we hold as human beings or even other species. Open minded and refreshing to hear. Lovely words and great metaphors as well.
August 1st, 2024 07:44
Returning the Key
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren, I appreciate your feedback and it was inspired by an older poem.
July 31st, 2024 12:47
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren, I appreciate your feedback and it was inspired by an older poem.
July 31st, 2024 12:47
Returning the Key
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing and well rhymed this poem has an old flavor to it but a modern message. Nicely done
July 31st, 2024 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing and well rhymed this poem has an old flavor to it but a modern message. Nicely done
July 31st, 2024 12:05
The Biggest Lie
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here with a view of life as difficult at best and impossible at worst. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:36
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here with a view of life as difficult at best and impossible at worst. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:36
Cauliflower Ears
sorenbarrett said:
A story of badges earned in life and cleverly etched in flesh as well as word. Beautifully crafted this is a wonderful piece of art
July 29th, 2024 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
A story of badges earned in life and cleverly etched in flesh as well as word. Beautifully crafted this is a wonderful piece of art
July 29th, 2024 13:07
Uteruses Stretch
sorenbarrett said:
Well described in verse the physical process of conception and birth. Well done.
July 27th, 2024 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
Well described in verse the physical process of conception and birth. Well done.
July 27th, 2024 20:12
Salubrious Retreat
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the imagery and especially the line \"where shadows sleep\" very quieting and peaceful. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the imagery and especially the line \"where shadows sleep\" very quieting and peaceful. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 12:46
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