Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Dark Talent
Cloie said:
Your poem is so captivating! I love how it delves into the idea of courage and talent, painting a vivid picture of midnight\'s mystery and the hidden depths within ourselves. It\'s like a gentle nudge to step into our own light. Amazing work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:40
Cloie said:
Your poem is so captivating! I love how it delves into the idea of courage and talent, painting a vivid picture of midnight\'s mystery and the hidden depths within ourselves. It\'s like a gentle nudge to step into our own light. Amazing work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:40
Heart of the Tree
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly celebrates the act of planting a tree, pulsating with hope, community, and the enduring legacy it brings. It\'s a vibrant ode to stewardship, echoing through time with each leaf\'s whisper and each branch\'s sway.
February 25th, 2024 05:37
Cloie said:
Your poem vividly celebrates the act of planting a tree, pulsating with hope, community, and the enduring legacy it brings. It\'s a vibrant ode to stewardship, echoing through time with each leaf\'s whisper and each branch\'s sway.
February 25th, 2024 05:37
Carrying the Cross
orchidee said:
A fine write gray.
It\'s more than giving up choccie biccies for Lent, we know. Though I suppose that\'s some small cross to bear, if whimsical.
February 23rd, 2024 03:22
orchidee said:
A fine write gray.
It\'s more than giving up choccie biccies for Lent, we know. Though I suppose that\'s some small cross to bear, if whimsical.
February 23rd, 2024 03:22
Sometimes In the Stillness
Kinsey Peterson said:
This is among one of my favourite pieces I have found on this site. Thank you immensely.
February 22nd, 2024 13:46
Kinsey Peterson said:
This is among one of my favourite pieces I have found on this site. Thank you immensely.
February 22nd, 2024 13:46
Marvel At The Riddle
Classicmister said:
\"There is no art to find the mind\'s construction in the face\"
W. Shakespeare
February 19th, 2024 08:17
Classicmister said:
\"There is no art to find the mind\'s construction in the face\"
W. Shakespeare
February 19th, 2024 08:17
Marvel At The Riddle
2781 said:
a man\'s wisdom maketh his face to shine, and the boldness of his face shall be changed.
February 19th, 2024 07:23
2781 said:
a man\'s wisdom maketh his face to shine, and the boldness of his face shall be changed.
February 19th, 2024 07:23
Marvel At The Riddle
Alan R said:
Behold the etched line of worry or wisdom, who knows.... beautiful
February 19th, 2024 07:07
Alan R said:
Behold the etched line of worry or wisdom, who knows.... beautiful
February 19th, 2024 07:07
Love, A Fire
Alan R said:
the beauty of warmth, the necessity of light....
Gorgeous
February 18th, 2024 08:54
Alan R said:
the beauty of warmth, the necessity of light....
Gorgeous
February 18th, 2024 08:54
Don\'t Give Up
orchidee said:
I didn\'t \'give up\' on this poem, but read it to the end!
February 17th, 2024 03:45
orchidee said:
I didn\'t \'give up\' on this poem, but read it to the end!
February 17th, 2024 03:45
Don\'t Give Up
Alan R said:
The tree knows its script by heart, offering up a leaf like a magician
Very beautiful
February 17th, 2024 02:35
Alan R said:
The tree knows its script by heart, offering up a leaf like a magician
Very beautiful
February 17th, 2024 02:35
Morning Bread
John Lee said:
Such a satisfying read. It digests as a psalm to my soul.
February 12th, 2024 19:20
John Lee said:
Such a satisfying read. It digests as a psalm to my soul.
February 12th, 2024 19:20
Crows In The Wind
gray0328 said:
Thank You for sharing your feedback Tom I appreciate it brother
February 9th, 2024 01:01
gray0328 said:
Thank You for sharing your feedback Tom I appreciate it brother
February 9th, 2024 01:01
21 Grams
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the weight of my brain - 21 grams! lol.
February 3rd, 2024 03:02
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the weight of my brain - 21 grams! lol.
February 3rd, 2024 03:02
Fruit Bats
Doggerel Dave said:
Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are viewed with a certain hostility by inhabitants when visited by a congregation they consider noisy and smelly.
Good write.
January 26th, 2024 06:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are viewed with a certain hostility by inhabitants when visited by a congregation they consider noisy and smelly.
Good write.
January 26th, 2024 06:39
Magnetic Cereal
Cassie58 said:
I will be looking at my breakfast cereal with new eyes in the future. There is science everywhere for those who look. I enjoyed my visit here as much as I enjoy a bowl of nutty cornflakes to get my day started.
January 17th, 2024 02:45
Cassie58 said:
I will be looking at my breakfast cereal with new eyes in the future. There is science everywhere for those who look. I enjoyed my visit here as much as I enjoy a bowl of nutty cornflakes to get my day started.
January 17th, 2024 02:45
Uncertainty
Cassie58 said:
The unknown can be scary and difficult to decide whom to trust. Situations like that have to be handled with care. Weigh them up carefully. The scales need to be balanced. I enjoyed my visit here.
January 16th, 2024 03:32
Cassie58 said:
The unknown can be scary and difficult to decide whom to trust. Situations like that have to be handled with care. Weigh them up carefully. The scales need to be balanced. I enjoyed my visit here.
January 16th, 2024 03:32
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