Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Final Hour
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the metaphors you have used here gray. With limited time left, I think we would all take a good look at our priorities and put them in order prompto.
March 8th, 2025 14:36
Cassie58 said:
Enjoyed the metaphors you have used here gray. With limited time left, I think we would all take a good look at our priorities and put them in order prompto.
March 8th, 2025 14:36
The Final Hour
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem. The last two lines resonated (time becomes an endless river when each drop is savored) A great question to which we should know the answer. Lovely
March 8th, 2025 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors in this poem. The last two lines resonated (time becomes an endless river when each drop is savored) A great question to which we should know the answer. Lovely
March 8th, 2025 11:27
Coffee With My Younger Self
Doggerel Dave said:
I believed that encounter - brilliantly imaginative.
March 7th, 2025 16:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I believed that encounter - brilliantly imaginative.
March 7th, 2025 16:13
Coffee With My Younger Self
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read meeting our younger self\'s, if we knew then what we know now, hopefully the passion is now remembered,really enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 14:05
Poetic Licence said:
Interesting read meeting our younger self\'s, if we knew then what we know now, hopefully the passion is now remembered,really enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 14:05
Coffee With My Younger Self
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so matter of fact and everyday that speaks much deeper and delves into psychological depths. Lovely
March 7th, 2025 13:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so matter of fact and everyday that speaks much deeper and delves into psychological depths. Lovely
March 7th, 2025 13:17
What He Gave Me
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that only in our older age do we really appreciate what parents have done for us. A beautiful poem of looking back and the good fortune of still having that person with you. Lovely
March 6th, 2025 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that only in our older age do we really appreciate what parents have done for us. A beautiful poem of looking back and the good fortune of still having that person with you. Lovely
March 6th, 2025 03:36
Two Spirits Merging
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully you have worded this poem for your beloved Ramona. Perfectly lovely.
March 5th, 2025 19:41
Cassie58 said:
How beautifully you have worded this poem for your beloved Ramona. Perfectly lovely.
March 5th, 2025 19:41
Two Spirits Merging
Natalie Gladmir said:
A wonderful couple. Long life to you both and unfading feelings!
March 5th, 2025 17:03
Natalie Gladmir said:
A wonderful couple. Long life to you both and unfading feelings!
March 5th, 2025 17:03
Two Spirits Merging
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of union and of love well written and in good form
March 5th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of union and of love well written and in good form
March 5th, 2025 13:46
Stories in the Margins
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy of each person a book. The metaphor works well in this poem that is well worded and with great images. Nicely done
March 4th, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy of each person a book. The metaphor works well in this poem that is well worded and with great images. Nicely done
March 4th, 2025 11:29
The Day I Learned to Ride
whats write for me said:
What a wonderful memory Gray!
March 4th, 2025 06:40
whats write for me said:
What a wonderful memory Gray!
March 4th, 2025 06:40
The Day I Learned to Ride
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude! In a twinkling you\'ve hereby dredged from deep burial that day my daddy likewise removed the training wheels off that yellow Schwinn, and oh! How wonderfully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, exquisite poignancy. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 18:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude! In a twinkling you\'ve hereby dredged from deep burial that day my daddy likewise removed the training wheels off that yellow Schwinn, and oh! How wonderfully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, exquisite poignancy. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
March 3rd, 2025 18:07
The Day I Learned to Ride
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around a wonderful memory, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:13
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write around a wonderful memory, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:13
The Day I Learned to Ride
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how I also remember that day. A great write so descriptive and well imaged. This seems a metaphor for many other times in life as well.
March 3rd, 2025 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how I also remember that day. A great write so descriptive and well imaged. This seems a metaphor for many other times in life as well.
March 3rd, 2025 05:56
Kitchen Demon
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and great in its neologism well done.
March 2nd, 2025 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and great in its neologism well done.
March 2nd, 2025 11:22
punctual predator
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several through the years and each just as demanding as the last. Independent too. A fun and nostalgic read for me.
March 1st, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
Have had several through the years and each just as demanding as the last. Independent too. A fun and nostalgic read for me.
March 1st, 2025 14:44
the lessons we swallow
Poetic Licence said:
We decide which way we go, enjoyed the read and the layout of the piece
February 28th, 2025 12:31
Poetic Licence said:
We decide which way we go, enjoyed the read and the layout of the piece
February 28th, 2025 12:31
the lessons we swallow
sorenbarrett said:
There is a positive side to every coin and even the most difficult has another side
February 28th, 2025 11:19
sorenbarrett said:
There is a positive side to every coin and even the most difficult has another side
February 28th, 2025 11:19
Grammar
whats write for me said:
Wow, Gray this is masterful. It tells the story of written word with grace and eloquence and merges it with speech effortlessly.
February 27th, 2025 09:24
whats write for me said:
Wow, Gray this is masterful. It tells the story of written word with grace and eloquence and merges it with speech effortlessly.
February 27th, 2025 09:24
The Heart of the Innocent
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and truth in its simplicity reveals the face of a child. May be a metaphor as well where we are all children with our own potential.
February 27th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write and truth in its simplicity reveals the face of a child. May be a metaphor as well where we are all children with our own potential.
February 27th, 2025 05:10
Grammar
Cassie58 said:
I like your thoughts here concerning punctuation and grammar. Visual and nicely expressed. Have a good Thursday.
February 27th, 2025 03:09
Cassie58 said:
I like your thoughts here concerning punctuation and grammar. Visual and nicely expressed. Have a good Thursday.
February 27th, 2025 03:09
The Door Knob
whats write for me said:
Excellent writing Gray. The symbolism, imagery and craft.
February 26th, 2025 17:47
whats write for me said:
Excellent writing Gray. The symbolism, imagery and craft.
February 26th, 2025 17:47
Grammar
sorenbarrett said:
How difficult it must have been before punctuation and even before they separated words. A fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
How difficult it must have been before punctuation and even before they separated words. A fun read
February 26th, 2025 14:22
Moonlight Over the Bayou
whats write for me said:
Paints an erie scene. Would fit right into \"Uncle Tom\'s Cabin\" by Warrant.
February 25th, 2025 13:41
whats write for me said:
Paints an erie scene. Would fit right into \"Uncle Tom\'s Cabin\" by Warrant.
February 25th, 2025 13:41
The Scent of Who You Are
sorenbarrett said:
A sense too little used in life. Used in poetry in regard to flowers but little else. Very nice Gray
February 25th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
A sense too little used in life. Used in poetry in regard to flowers but little else. Very nice Gray
February 25th, 2025 10:48
Moonlight Over the Bayou
sorenbarrett said:
With the scene set so carefully it seems a trap to the reader waiting for it to spring. Beautiful wording here with vivid images painted in the heart of nature. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
With the scene set so carefully it seems a trap to the reader waiting for it to spring. Beautiful wording here with vivid images painted in the heart of nature. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 04:23
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