Comments received on poems by gray0328
The New Hip-Hop Hooray
sorenbarrett said:
A very encouraging write where the spirit never ages only the body. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
A very encouraging write where the spirit never ages only the body. Nicely done
October 24th, 2024 05:57
Housecleaning Mediation
Doggerel Dave said:
You put me to shame until I read your note above.
October 23rd, 2024 21:54
Doggerel Dave said:
You put me to shame until I read your note above.
October 23rd, 2024 21:54
Housecleaning Mediation
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a ritual but a metaphor well written in verse
October 23rd, 2024 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a ritual but a metaphor well written in verse
October 23rd, 2024 12:53
What Makes a Hero
sorenbarrett said:
Unsung heros that do for others that which no others see. A most beautiful write
October 22nd, 2024 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
Unsung heros that do for others that which no others see. A most beautiful write
October 22nd, 2024 08:45
The Weight of Unforgiven Sins
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt is a heavy burden and heavier still is self deception. We all carry the later to some degree or other but some carry much more. Nicely written
October 20th, 2024 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt is a heavy burden and heavier still is self deception. We all carry the later to some degree or other but some carry much more. Nicely written
October 20th, 2024 06:33
The Last Voyage
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a story I\'ve never imagined. Heard of wolves breaking in to a winter bound train and lions eating railroad workers in Africa, bears breaking into cabins and igloos but never a ship, only whales and sharks at sea. Gripping read
October 19th, 2024 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a story I\'ve never imagined. Heard of wolves breaking in to a winter bound train and lions eating railroad workers in Africa, bears breaking into cabins and igloos but never a ship, only whales and sharks at sea. Gripping read
October 19th, 2024 10:50
A Dod Named Tension
tallisman said:
Strangely haunting quality…good piece!
October 17th, 2024 15:33
tallisman said:
Strangely haunting quality…good piece!
October 17th, 2024 15:33
A Dod Named Tension
sorenbarrett said:
Tension was a good name and serves as a good metaphor. Reminds me of an old dog I used to have.
October 17th, 2024 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
Tension was a good name and serves as a good metaphor. Reminds me of an old dog I used to have.
October 17th, 2024 11:46
The Invisible Bars
NinjaGirl said:
Live in the comfort of lies or fight for the satisfaction of truth?
October 14th, 2024 21:14
NinjaGirl said:
Live in the comfort of lies or fight for the satisfaction of truth?
October 14th, 2024 21:14
The Invisible Bars
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s marketing for you. Plenty of that now days
October 14th, 2024 17:50
sorenbarrett said:
That\'s marketing for you. Plenty of that now days
October 14th, 2024 17:50
the garbage man
sorenbarrett said:
Recycling now days is the word. One man\'s trash is another man\'s treasure
October 10th, 2024 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
Recycling now days is the word. One man\'s trash is another man\'s treasure
October 10th, 2024 20:07
Calamity Meets Serenity
peet said:
Wow. Lovely words there. Simple and straight.
October 9th, 2024 12:29
peet said:
Wow. Lovely words there. Simple and straight.
October 9th, 2024 12:29
the invention of hell
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message sent clearly. Well said
October 8th, 2024 20:36
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message sent clearly. Well said
October 8th, 2024 20:36
What You Find in the Mud
Cheeky Missy said:
Perhaps, yet I think it is more visible in the hands of sweet motions, like my father\'s crafting espressos or my mother\'s teaching my younger siblings, like the baby fingers picking flowers for mama, and the like. Excellently rendered with lovely details and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2024 08:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Perhaps, yet I think it is more visible in the hands of sweet motions, like my father\'s crafting espressos or my mother\'s teaching my younger siblings, like the baby fingers picking flowers for mama, and the like. Excellently rendered with lovely details and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2024 08:57
The Old Thespian \'s Gift
Seek said:
A caustic reminder of shedding masks before they become an integral part of us - false and enduring. The rendering is as beautiful as it is powerful. Thank you.
October 4th, 2024 12:14
Seek said:
A caustic reminder of shedding masks before they become an integral part of us - false and enduring. The rendering is as beautiful as it is powerful. Thank you.
October 4th, 2024 12:14
The Excuse and the Escape
Lorenz said:
Sometimes there are flashes of poetic research on this site .
September 29th, 2024 05:54
Lorenz said:
Sometimes there are flashes of poetic research on this site .
September 29th, 2024 05:54
For the Boss at Seventy-Five
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, if my mind were less bogged down or me less ignorant, I might know better whom you\'ve dedicated this so beautiful to, rendered with a subtly striking poignancy and a delicious abundance of details, imagery to make the soul swoon, and a tenderness to woo the same to sleep. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it.
September 28th, 2024 14:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, if my mind were less bogged down or me less ignorant, I might know better whom you\'ve dedicated this so beautiful to, rendered with a subtly striking poignancy and a delicious abundance of details, imagery to make the soul swoon, and a tenderness to woo the same to sleep. Thank you very much for sharing. I love it.
September 28th, 2024 14:29
What\'s in My Kitchen
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and rather charming at that, rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting sense of poignancy which lingers after the close. I like it very much. Thank you for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and rather charming at that, rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting sense of poignancy which lingers after the close. I like it very much. Thank you for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:28
Otis and His Chessboard
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! Cull a low whistle in concluding. My la. What a breathtaking beauty this is, drawing me into its folds to nestle in its embrace whilst I marvel. Fond of taking too long on my moves in chess, apparently, the metaphor grandly rendered to effect with details to bring in the kill, I dearly love this. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 11:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! Cull a low whistle in concluding. My la. What a breathtaking beauty this is, drawing me into its folds to nestle in its embrace whilst I marvel. Fond of taking too long on my moves in chess, apparently, the metaphor grandly rendered to effect with details to bring in the kill, I dearly love this. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 11:27
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