Comments received on poems by gray0328
If You Were Me
Parisab said:
Important ideas and mighty wisdom… Glad that you aren’t silent, gray…
September 23rd, 2024 01:10
Parisab said:
Important ideas and mighty wisdom… Glad that you aren’t silent, gray…
September 23rd, 2024 01:10
The Breath That Fills My Sails
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed the quatrains set in AAAA BBBB format with great word choice and the consistent image of the sea and sailing across it. The metaphor was just below the surface and its current pulled me to the destination
September 22nd, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed the quatrains set in AAAA BBBB format with great word choice and the consistent image of the sea and sailing across it. The metaphor was just below the surface and its current pulled me to the destination
September 22nd, 2024 05:55
If You Were Me
sorenbarrett said:
More wisdom given in this poem replete with greatlines. Well done
September 21st, 2024 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
More wisdom given in this poem replete with greatlines. Well done
September 21st, 2024 05:30
The Riven Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Not religious but that does not prevent the admiration of fine art. From the first lines I was enraptured with the classic style ofthis poem and how it rolled out of the mouth like one\'s own tongue. Beautifully stated a wonderful message reminding me of Willis \" For as love\'s wild prayer disolved in air her woman\'s heart gave way!. But the sin forgiven by Christ in heaven By man is cursed alway!\"
September 21st, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
Not religious but that does not prevent the admiration of fine art. From the first lines I was enraptured with the classic style ofthis poem and how it rolled out of the mouth like one\'s own tongue. Beautifully stated a wonderful message reminding me of Willis \" For as love\'s wild prayer disolved in air her woman\'s heart gave way!. But the sin forgiven by Christ in heaven By man is cursed alway!\"
September 21st, 2024 05:11
Faith In the Greater Design
sorenbarrett said:
Some would see this as applying to God I see it as applying to the force of nature itself and love the power you have put in these words and the view of unity in all. Nicely written
September 16th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Some would see this as applying to God I see it as applying to the force of nature itself and love the power you have put in these words and the view of unity in all. Nicely written
September 16th, 2024 07:03
Punctuation At Happy Hour
Cassie58 said:
I guess the period spoilt the evening. Putting an end to the fun. A most entertaining write and clever with it too. Happy Friday.
September 13th, 2024 09:13
Cassie58 said:
I guess the period spoilt the evening. Putting an end to the fun. A most entertaining write and clever with it too. Happy Friday.
September 13th, 2024 09:13
Ozzie Enters My Chest
sorenbarrett said:
Your words bring the feelings and transport one to the very spot. Nicely done
September 12th, 2024 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Your words bring the feelings and transport one to the very spot. Nicely done
September 12th, 2024 05:31
Semaphore of Life
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent. You\'d think that\'d suffice in this society where fewer know the English language yet somehow the comprehension still seems elusive.
September 11th, 2024 13:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent. You\'d think that\'d suffice in this society where fewer know the English language yet somehow the comprehension still seems elusive.
September 11th, 2024 13:40
Hurricane Francine Comes Ashore
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! I never knew a herricane could be rendered superbly and in such fashion as this beauty! Wow! Impressively rendered to effect with such details as effectively illustrate to perfection the idea. Awesome! I love it! Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 11:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! I never knew a herricane could be rendered superbly and in such fashion as this beauty! Wow! Impressively rendered to effect with such details as effectively illustrate to perfection the idea. Awesome! I love it! Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 11:22
Semaphore of Life
sorenbarrett said:
So many nonverbal signs to follow in life. Nicely said
September 10th, 2024 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
So many nonverbal signs to follow in life. Nicely said
September 10th, 2024 13:21
The Return of Roller Skates
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia for many in this poem. When I was a kid there were no colors all skates were just plain metal. Guess that tells you my age.A fun read
September 9th, 2024 15:16
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgia for many in this poem. When I was a kid there were no colors all skates were just plain metal. Guess that tells you my age.A fun read
September 9th, 2024 15:16
The Shape of Survival
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and inspiring, reminding the reader of what we prefer not to mention, yet know too keenly well.
September 8th, 2024 17:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and inspiring, reminding the reader of what we prefer not to mention, yet know too keenly well.
September 8th, 2024 17:25
The Joy of Losing Me
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some of the lines are too good for prosaic appreciation
\"Love isn’t a thing to be captured
But a river that flows through all
Achievement is not a mountain
But the air I breathe with ease
Perfection is not a mirror
But the joy of being cracked \" - almost takes us into the relam of philosophy. Loved it very much
September 7th, 2024 11:00
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some of the lines are too good for prosaic appreciation
\"Love isn’t a thing to be captured
But a river that flows through all
Achievement is not a mountain
But the air I breathe with ease
Perfection is not a mirror
But the joy of being cracked \" - almost takes us into the relam of philosophy. Loved it very much
September 7th, 2024 11:00
Remontant Hydrangeas
Dan Williams said:
Yes, I did have to look up remontant. Like annuals times two. Very nice.
September 6th, 2024 01:14
Dan Williams said:
Yes, I did have to look up remontant. Like annuals times two. Very nice.
September 6th, 2024 01:14
Remontant Hydrangeas
Parisab said:
Two lives converge within one tender bloom
Old and new embrace, the seasons dance
Never seen these transitions described in such a way-great choices and very artful Gray0328
September 5th, 2024 23:46
Parisab said:
Two lives converge within one tender bloom
Old and new embrace, the seasons dance
Never seen these transitions described in such a way-great choices and very artful Gray0328
September 5th, 2024 23:46
Crack
sorenbarrett said:
A very interesting poem. Metaphorical in many ways. Mind provoking.
September 5th, 2024 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
A very interesting poem. Metaphorical in many ways. Mind provoking.
September 5th, 2024 13:31
Remontant Hydrangeas
sorenbarrett said:
Oh yes, Resurrection reincarnation call it what you may if not, literal metaphorical each of us have a new birth. Beautiful images.
September 4th, 2024 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
Oh yes, Resurrection reincarnation call it what you may if not, literal metaphorical each of us have a new birth. Beautiful images.
September 4th, 2024 12:52
The Law of Reflection
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and all the more charming with a subtle depth in brevity how sweetly it shines!
September 1st, 2024 15:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and all the more charming with a subtle depth in brevity how sweetly it shines!
September 1st, 2024 15:50
The Solitary Oak
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful poem. I can relate. We have an oak on a small island in the Thames which probably goes back to the civil war. Five times the width of my embrace. Stand alone. All that time it has endured. Really enjoyed the read. Thank you.
August 31st, 2024 17:55
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful poem. I can relate. We have an oak on a small island in the Thames which probably goes back to the civil war. Five times the width of my embrace. Stand alone. All that time it has endured. Really enjoyed the read. Thank you.
August 31st, 2024 17:55
The Pedagogues of Iron Will
sorenbarrett said:
A noble job that is not recognized as much as it should be.
August 29th, 2024 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
A noble job that is not recognized as much as it should be.
August 29th, 2024 11:02
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