Comments received on poems by gray0328
Crows In The Wind
gray0328 said:
Thank You for sharing your feedback Tom I appreciate it brother
February 9th, 2024 01:01
gray0328 said:
Thank You for sharing your feedback Tom I appreciate it brother
February 9th, 2024 01:01
21 Grams
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the weight of my brain - 21 grams! lol.
February 3rd, 2024 03:02
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the weight of my brain - 21 grams! lol.
February 3rd, 2024 03:02
Fruit Bats
Doggerel Dave said:
Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are viewed with a certain hostility by inhabitants when visited by a congregation they consider noisy and smelly.
Good write.
January 26th, 2024 06:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are viewed with a certain hostility by inhabitants when visited by a congregation they consider noisy and smelly.
Good write.
January 26th, 2024 06:39
Magnetic Cereal
Cassie58 said:
I will be looking at my breakfast cereal with new eyes in the future. There is science everywhere for those who look. I enjoyed my visit here as much as I enjoy a bowl of nutty cornflakes to get my day started.
January 17th, 2024 02:45
Cassie58 said:
I will be looking at my breakfast cereal with new eyes in the future. There is science everywhere for those who look. I enjoyed my visit here as much as I enjoy a bowl of nutty cornflakes to get my day started.
January 17th, 2024 02:45
Uncertainty
Cassie58 said:
The unknown can be scary and difficult to decide whom to trust. Situations like that have to be handled with care. Weigh them up carefully. The scales need to be balanced. I enjoyed my visit here.
January 16th, 2024 03:32
Cassie58 said:
The unknown can be scary and difficult to decide whom to trust. Situations like that have to be handled with care. Weigh them up carefully. The scales need to be balanced. I enjoyed my visit here.
January 16th, 2024 03:32
Pillows of Emotions
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Pillows of emotions” by gray0328 (Courtney Weaver Jr).
The pillow is a silent witness to human emotions and experiences. If only it could talk… But, then, it had better not… The pillow is a reliable confidant. However, being endowed with higher perceptive gifts, poets are able to see the significance of objects like the pillow. Some key points raised in the poem : museum; emotions; pillar; sadness; joys and sorrows of life; past memories flowing by; halls of those memories; short duration of those memories reminding us of fleeting life; the memories have corridors, through which we wander; some of the memories are good, others are not; in spite of sadness, there is beauty; somehow we succeed in scraping through the memories; in spite of the sadness, the human will struggles to survive and to face the future; the past is a museum; it is a place where our memories and emotions are kept; sadness is the springboard that helps us to facing our remaining life.
“Our sweetest songs are those of the saddest thought.”
--Percy B. Shelley (1792-1822)
Soman Ragavan. 15 January, 2024.
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January 14th, 2024 20:05
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Pillows of emotions” by gray0328 (Courtney Weaver Jr).
The pillow is a silent witness to human emotions and experiences. If only it could talk… But, then, it had better not… The pillow is a reliable confidant. However, being endowed with higher perceptive gifts, poets are able to see the significance of objects like the pillow. Some key points raised in the poem : museum; emotions; pillar; sadness; joys and sorrows of life; past memories flowing by; halls of those memories; short duration of those memories reminding us of fleeting life; the memories have corridors, through which we wander; some of the memories are good, others are not; in spite of sadness, there is beauty; somehow we succeed in scraping through the memories; in spite of the sadness, the human will struggles to survive and to face the future; the past is a museum; it is a place where our memories and emotions are kept; sadness is the springboard that helps us to facing our remaining life.
“Our sweetest songs are those of the saddest thought.”
--Percy B. Shelley (1792-1822)
Soman Ragavan. 15 January, 2024.
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January 14th, 2024 20:05
Houdini\'s Grave
gray0328 said:
Thank You Tom I truly appreciate your feedback
January 10th, 2024 13:43
gray0328 said:
Thank You Tom I truly appreciate your feedback
January 10th, 2024 13:43
Houdini\'s Grave
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. A fascinating poem about a fascinating man.
January 10th, 2024 04:50
Tom Dylan said:
Really enjoyed this. A fascinating poem about a fascinating man.
January 10th, 2024 04:50
If Tomorrow Doesn\'t Come
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, tomorrow isn\'t looking too promising, is it? ironically, I just posted a poem of same subject. Take care.
January 9th, 2024 10:04
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, tomorrow isn\'t looking too promising, is it? ironically, I just posted a poem of same subject. Take care.
January 9th, 2024 10:04
Dilation
2781 said:
The transformation of the body that you have now, into the body the body you will have, will be instantaneous. All believes will receive this gift at the same time.
January 6th, 2024 02:45
2781 said:
The transformation of the body that you have now, into the body the body you will have, will be instantaneous. All believes will receive this gift at the same time.
January 6th, 2024 02:45
Papa Benny
Alan R said:
I pull the glistening prizes from the water...beautiful
January 4th, 2024 07:20
Alan R said:
I pull the glistening prizes from the water...beautiful
January 4th, 2024 07:20
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