Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Smile Room
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems are consistently good. They deserve more views. This is another that has so many good lines and metaphor. It sets a mood and is masterfully done.
February 23rd, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems are consistently good. They deserve more views. This is another that has so many good lines and metaphor. It sets a mood and is masterfully done.
February 23rd, 2025 12:57
The Clowns of the Evening News
whats write for me said:
The reality of our modern news cast. Does not matter leaning left or right, the bloat is so wide it covers both sides.
February 22nd, 2025 16:44
whats write for me said:
The reality of our modern news cast. Does not matter leaning left or right, the bloat is so wide it covers both sides.
February 22nd, 2025 16:44
Becoming
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful magnificent words and images painted so well. Metaphor in poetic form so well done. Lovely! Brilliant!
February 22nd, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful magnificent words and images painted so well. Metaphor in poetic form so well done. Lovely! Brilliant!
February 22nd, 2025 06:28
Telling Truth
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a meeting being held at the top of twelve steps. A lovely write.
February 21st, 2025 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a meeting being held at the top of twelve steps. A lovely write.
February 21st, 2025 14:09
Fated Road
Thomas W Case said:
You paint this journey well with your words.
February 20th, 2025 14:32
Thomas W Case said:
You paint this journey well with your words.
February 20th, 2025 14:32
Fated Road
sorenbarrett said:
The idea of fate or destiny is still up for debate and in todays society is taking a back seat. I hate back seat drivers. Fun read my friend
February 20th, 2025 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
The idea of fate or destiny is still up for debate and in todays society is taking a back seat. I hate back seat drivers. Fun read my friend
February 20th, 2025 13:05
Unseen Blessing
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice flow to this poem with a message and good rhyme Gray
February 19th, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice flow to this poem with a message and good rhyme Gray
February 19th, 2025 15:23
Quiet Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, sexual, erotic and with very poetic wording
February 18th, 2025 14:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sensuous, sexual, erotic and with very poetic wording
February 18th, 2025 14:29
Sloth Superpower
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting animals and a possible metaphor. Nicely done Gray
February 17th, 2025 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting animals and a possible metaphor. Nicely done Gray
February 17th, 2025 06:00
The Quiet Sanctum
Parisab said:
Divine messaging about seeking the silence in faith -great word play
February 16th, 2025 22:41
Parisab said:
Divine messaging about seeking the silence in faith -great word play
February 16th, 2025 22:41
The Quiet Sanctum
sorenbarrett said:
I have felt it and still feel it. A wonderful write of what is needed
February 16th, 2025 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
I have felt it and still feel it. A wonderful write of what is needed
February 16th, 2025 06:20
Karl is a Drunk
sorenbarrett said:
The way you describe him I think I have met him. A great write with a strong message
February 15th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
The way you describe him I think I have met him. A great write with a strong message
February 15th, 2025 13:31
Karl is a Drunk
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Worded Poem, though I feel for your Friend. I’ve known people like that. Hope he gets better.
February 15th, 2025 13:18
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Worded Poem, though I feel for your Friend. I’ve known people like that. Hope he gets better.
February 15th, 2025 13:18
A Spark at the Beginning
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem masterfully written of the advent of fire to man and what it was to bring to a species. One of two or three most important tools leading to man as he is. It has a haunting quality and feels like it has come out of the mists of the past. Lovely
February 14th, 2025 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem masterfully written of the advent of fire to man and what it was to bring to a species. One of two or three most important tools leading to man as he is. It has a haunting quality and feels like it has come out of the mists of the past. Lovely
February 14th, 2025 13:14
Quit Beating Around the Bush
sorenbarrett said:
We all long for a straight shooter. A very nice write Gray.
February 13th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
We all long for a straight shooter. A very nice write Gray.
February 13th, 2025 08:21
connected
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and seperation in this poem haunting! Too real
February 12th, 2025 12:24
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and seperation in this poem haunting! Too real
February 12th, 2025 12:24
Morning at the Beach
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very beautiful, rendered frankly with a seeming sense of classic style though lacking end rhyme or any clear rhythm, trickling excellent imagery down the page unfolding a lesson charmingly tendered with a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 23:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very beautiful, rendered frankly with a seeming sense of classic style though lacking end rhyme or any clear rhythm, trickling excellent imagery down the page unfolding a lesson charmingly tendered with a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 23:52
Salt
Distant View said:
An inventive poem! Salt (both literal and metaphorical) is a required condiment for a life of any note!
February 9th, 2025 16:46
Distant View said:
An inventive poem! Salt (both literal and metaphorical) is a required condiment for a life of any note!
February 9th, 2025 16:46
Salt
sorenbarrett said:
Ye are the salt of the earth. Necessary for life and the functioning of the nervous system it gives savor. Once precious. They say that Roman soldiers were paid in salt. Nicely done.
February 9th, 2025 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
Ye are the salt of the earth. Necessary for life and the functioning of the nervous system it gives savor. Once precious. They say that Roman soldiers were paid in salt. Nicely done.
February 9th, 2025 14:19
Snip
sorenbarrett said:
Such disturbing sounds join others like barking dogs, crowing roosters and those that start their lawn equipment too early in the morning. A fun read
February 8th, 2025 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
Such disturbing sounds join others like barking dogs, crowing roosters and those that start their lawn equipment too early in the morning. A fun read
February 8th, 2025 20:11
Snip
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful read, the imagery certainly pertains to the pesky cat, yet i feel it could to apply to others, really enjoyed this piece
February 8th, 2025 14:33
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful read, the imagery certainly pertains to the pesky cat, yet i feel it could to apply to others, really enjoyed this piece
February 8th, 2025 14:33
Tiny Echoes
Cassie58 said:
Lovely, and your author’s notes add even more value to this piece. I love that marmosets call each other by name. So intrigued I want to know more. Much enjoyed gray0328. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:33
Cassie58 said:
Lovely, and your author’s notes add even more value to this piece. I love that marmosets call each other by name. So intrigued I want to know more. Much enjoyed gray0328. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:33
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