Comments received on poems by gray0328
Whispers of Learning
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in tribute to a holy place, the library of wisdom. Lovely
July 24th, 2024 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in tribute to a holy place, the library of wisdom. Lovely
July 24th, 2024 07:05
The Great Marriage
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words written in metaphor with meaning deeper than what may appear either on the surface or the layer beneath.
July 22nd, 2024 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words written in metaphor with meaning deeper than what may appear either on the surface or the layer beneath.
July 22nd, 2024 06:07
Urban Love
Parisab said:
Love’s brief glow in the electric night.
Great end line!
July 21st, 2024 12:11
Parisab said:
Love’s brief glow in the electric night.
Great end line!
July 21st, 2024 12:11
Winter Vigil
Parisab said:
You kept the entire rhythm as “slow and deliberate” I really like that it fits the theme of your poem…
July 16th, 2024 20:27
Parisab said:
You kept the entire rhythm as “slow and deliberate” I really like that it fits the theme of your poem…
July 16th, 2024 20:27
Winter Vigil
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful sonnet. Lovely winter description and a feeling of peace being attained. Happy Tuesday.
July 16th, 2024 14:02
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful sonnet. Lovely winter description and a feeling of peace being attained. Happy Tuesday.
July 16th, 2024 14:02
The Gift of Absence
Parisab said:
Loving in silence is filled with grace-
I really enjoyed this tender write…
July 7th, 2024 23:46
Parisab said:
Loving in silence is filled with grace-
I really enjoyed this tender write…
July 7th, 2024 23:46
The Gift of Absence
RSM0812 said:
It message is a virtue of truth. I really like it.
July 7th, 2024 15:02
RSM0812 said:
It message is a virtue of truth. I really like it.
July 7th, 2024 15:02
Unyielding
Parisab said:
Great metaphor about how the light came through the dark mirror…Grace is beautiful from all angles…Good read…
July 5th, 2024 11:21
Parisab said:
Great metaphor about how the light came through the dark mirror…Grace is beautiful from all angles…Good read…
July 5th, 2024 11:21
Embrace the Stillness
Cassie58 said:
rest in slumber’s cradle
be cradled by the night
Such beautiful lines in your stanzas. I am sorry for the loss of your mom. May she rest in eternal peace.
June 30th, 2024 02:34
Cassie58 said:
rest in slumber’s cradle
be cradled by the night
Such beautiful lines in your stanzas. I am sorry for the loss of your mom. May she rest in eternal peace.
June 30th, 2024 02:34
Late August
Bloomingcereus said:
great poem I really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work.
June 20th, 2024 19:58
Bloomingcereus said:
great poem I really enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work.
June 20th, 2024 19:58
Evening Walk
Bloomingcereus said:
through and through a great poem. keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
June 18th, 2024 10:18
Bloomingcereus said:
through and through a great poem. keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
June 18th, 2024 10:18
A Blue Heron Stands
Mutley Ravishes said:
Life feeding on life. I guess we are all learning...something?
June 18th, 2024 01:15
Mutley Ravishes said:
Life feeding on life. I guess we are all learning...something?
June 18th, 2024 01:15
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