Comments received on poems by gray0328



Elusive Mistress
Thomas W Case said:

Superb I say on my sleepless night.

November 2nd, 2023 02:16

Old Concepts
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

October 31st, 2023 02:53

Beyond the Flesh
2781 said:

I liked that.

October 30th, 2023 08:01

Beyond the Flesh
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant writing.

October 30th, 2023 07:49

Canoe
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

October 29th, 2023 06:21

Canoe
2781 said:

God spelt backwards Man\'s best friend.

October 29th, 2023 06:05

Timeless Square
David Wakeling said:

This was a confusing disappointment.While it is well structured after 400 words we still don\'t know who the statue is of.I like the rhyme.

October 27th, 2023 15:49

Timeless Square
Thomas W Case said:

Nice work.

October 27th, 2023 15:39

The Pebble
Miss_Dreamer said:

What a great poem! Its rythm ebbed and flowed like the waves you talked about, I loved it

October 26th, 2023 11:35

Yellow Flower
Muse Gong said:

nice sentiment

October 25th, 2023 19:34

Yellow Flower
Thomas W Case said:

Beauty in the most unlikely place. Great job.

October 25th, 2023 12:44

Rooms
Thomas W Case said:

I like the metaphor. Well done.

October 24th, 2023 15:33

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