Comments received on poems by gray0328
Marvel At The Riddle
Alan R said:
Behold the etched line of worry or wisdom, who knows.... beautiful
February 19th, 2024 07:07
Alan R said:
Behold the etched line of worry or wisdom, who knows.... beautiful
February 19th, 2024 07:07
Love, A Fire
Alan R said:
the beauty of warmth, the necessity of light....
Gorgeous
February 18th, 2024 08:54
Alan R said:
the beauty of warmth, the necessity of light....
Gorgeous
February 18th, 2024 08:54
Don\'t Give Up
orchidee said:
I didn\'t \'give up\' on this poem, but read it to the end!
February 17th, 2024 03:45
orchidee said:
I didn\'t \'give up\' on this poem, but read it to the end!
February 17th, 2024 03:45
Don\'t Give Up
Alan R said:
The tree knows its script by heart, offering up a leaf like a magician
Very beautiful
February 17th, 2024 02:35
Alan R said:
The tree knows its script by heart, offering up a leaf like a magician
Very beautiful
February 17th, 2024 02:35
Morning Bread
John Lee said:
Such a satisfying read. It digests as a psalm to my soul.
February 12th, 2024 19:20
John Lee said:
Such a satisfying read. It digests as a psalm to my soul.
February 12th, 2024 19:20
Crows In The Wind
gray0328 said:
Thank You for sharing your feedback Tom I appreciate it brother
February 9th, 2024 01:01
gray0328 said:
Thank You for sharing your feedback Tom I appreciate it brother
February 9th, 2024 01:01
21 Grams
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the weight of my brain - 21 grams! lol.
February 3rd, 2024 03:02
orchidee said:
Ahh, that\'ll be the weight of my brain - 21 grams! lol.
February 3rd, 2024 03:02
Fruit Bats
Doggerel Dave said:
Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are viewed with a certain hostility by inhabitants when visited by a congregation they consider noisy and smelly.
Good write.
January 26th, 2024 06:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are viewed with a certain hostility by inhabitants when visited by a congregation they consider noisy and smelly.
Good write.
January 26th, 2024 06:39
Magnetic Cereal
Cassie58 said:
I will be looking at my breakfast cereal with new eyes in the future. There is science everywhere for those who look. I enjoyed my visit here as much as I enjoy a bowl of nutty cornflakes to get my day started.
January 17th, 2024 02:45
Cassie58 said:
I will be looking at my breakfast cereal with new eyes in the future. There is science everywhere for those who look. I enjoyed my visit here as much as I enjoy a bowl of nutty cornflakes to get my day started.
January 17th, 2024 02:45
Uncertainty
Cassie58 said:
The unknown can be scary and difficult to decide whom to trust. Situations like that have to be handled with care. Weigh them up carefully. The scales need to be balanced. I enjoyed my visit here.
January 16th, 2024 03:32
Cassie58 said:
The unknown can be scary and difficult to decide whom to trust. Situations like that have to be handled with care. Weigh them up carefully. The scales need to be balanced. I enjoyed my visit here.
January 16th, 2024 03:32
Pillows of Emotions
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Pillows of emotions” by gray0328 (Courtney Weaver Jr).
The pillow is a silent witness to human emotions and experiences. If only it could talk… But, then, it had better not… The pillow is a reliable confidant. However, being endowed with higher perceptive gifts, poets are able to see the significance of objects like the pillow. Some key points raised in the poem : museum; emotions; pillar; sadness; joys and sorrows of life; past memories flowing by; halls of those memories; short duration of those memories reminding us of fleeting life; the memories have corridors, through which we wander; some of the memories are good, others are not; in spite of sadness, there is beauty; somehow we succeed in scraping through the memories; in spite of the sadness, the human will struggles to survive and to face the future; the past is a museum; it is a place where our memories and emotions are kept; sadness is the springboard that helps us to facing our remaining life.
“Our sweetest songs are those of the saddest thought.”
--Percy B. Shelley (1792-1822)
Soman Ragavan. 15 January, 2024.
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January 14th, 2024 20:05
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Pillows of emotions” by gray0328 (Courtney Weaver Jr).
The pillow is a silent witness to human emotions and experiences. If only it could talk… But, then, it had better not… The pillow is a reliable confidant. However, being endowed with higher perceptive gifts, poets are able to see the significance of objects like the pillow. Some key points raised in the poem : museum; emotions; pillar; sadness; joys and sorrows of life; past memories flowing by; halls of those memories; short duration of those memories reminding us of fleeting life; the memories have corridors, through which we wander; some of the memories are good, others are not; in spite of sadness, there is beauty; somehow we succeed in scraping through the memories; in spite of the sadness, the human will struggles to survive and to face the future; the past is a museum; it is a place where our memories and emotions are kept; sadness is the springboard that helps us to facing our remaining life.
“Our sweetest songs are those of the saddest thought.”
--Percy B. Shelley (1792-1822)
Soman Ragavan. 15 January, 2024.
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January 14th, 2024 20:05
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