Comments received on poems by gray0328
She Was Still a Tyro in Pottery
gray0328 said:
Your smile brought a smile to me. Thank You
June 13th, 2024 19:40
gray0328 said:
Your smile brought a smile to me. Thank You
June 13th, 2024 19:40
She Was Still a Tyro in Pottery
Mutley Ravishes said:
Sublime! Thanks for bringing a smile to my face.
June 13th, 2024 18:59
Mutley Ravishes said:
Sublime! Thanks for bringing a smile to my face.
June 13th, 2024 18:59
A Day in the City
peto said:
Totally agree with previous comment
Very visual
Pleasure to read
June 9th, 2024 12:34
peto said:
Totally agree with previous comment
Very visual
Pleasure to read
June 9th, 2024 12:34
A Day in the City
sorenbarrett said:
This pulls at the heartstrings and is masterfully worded. Powerful and raw.
June 9th, 2024 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
This pulls at the heartstrings and is masterfully worded. Powerful and raw.
June 9th, 2024 08:45
Please Tell Me How We Can Stop Being So Offended
aDarkerMind said:
a very clever write...
and how true things are these days of woke!
June 8th, 2024 12:15
aDarkerMind said:
a very clever write...
and how true things are these days of woke!
June 8th, 2024 12:15
Life is Like a Game of Chess
Cassie58 said:
Such a good metaphor. Really enjoyed the read.
June 6th, 2024 08:47
Cassie58 said:
Such a good metaphor. Really enjoyed the read.
June 6th, 2024 08:47
Life is Like a Game of Chess
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I love the metaphor.
June 6th, 2024 07:33
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I love the metaphor.
June 6th, 2024 07:33
Changing Clothes
Cassie58 said:
Nicely penned stanzas. I have to agree with the third stanza. The sun suits best. Nothing like the feeling of being clothed in sunlight. The most appropriate summer outfit. I enjoyed the read.
June 5th, 2024 11:38
Cassie58 said:
Nicely penned stanzas. I have to agree with the third stanza. The sun suits best. Nothing like the feeling of being clothed in sunlight. The most appropriate summer outfit. I enjoyed the read.
June 5th, 2024 11:38
Crevices
Cassie58 said:
A fun write with some great metaphors. Much enjoyed. Thank you.
June 4th, 2024 11:01
Cassie58 said:
A fun write with some great metaphors. Much enjoyed. Thank you.
June 4th, 2024 11:01
The Goal of Love
2781 said:
And they overcame him by the blood of the Lamb, and by the word of their testimony, and they loved not their lives unto the death.
May 23rd, 2024 06:27
2781 said:
And they overcame him by the blood of the Lamb, and by the word of their testimony, and they loved not their lives unto the death.
May 23rd, 2024 06:27
Her Pen
dandelion.drafts said:
I very much love this - especially the back-to-back lines about being like a surgeon or a thief, the imagery and possible meaning of those in relation to creating art. Absolutely gorgeous writing; thank you
May 18th, 2024 15:14
dandelion.drafts said:
I very much love this - especially the back-to-back lines about being like a surgeon or a thief, the imagery and possible meaning of those in relation to creating art. Absolutely gorgeous writing; thank you
May 18th, 2024 15:14
Depression
Cassie58 said:
Some excellent poetic expression here when writing about depression. You paint the picture well. Fabulous imagery. Pleased I stopped by.
May 3rd, 2024 21:01
Cassie58 said:
Some excellent poetic expression here when writing about depression. You paint the picture well. Fabulous imagery. Pleased I stopped by.
May 3rd, 2024 21:01
beauty is in the eye of the beerholder
Cassie58 said:
Great title. You had me hooked. I would imagine that half a dozen beers could make a pensioner look like Aphrodite. Most enjoyed gray0328
April 29th, 2024 16:03
Cassie58 said:
Great title. You had me hooked. I would imagine that half a dozen beers could make a pensioner look like Aphrodite. Most enjoyed gray0328
April 29th, 2024 16:03
beauty is in the eye of the beerholder
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You nailed it.
April 29th, 2024 10:48
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. You nailed it.
April 29th, 2024 10:48
Impunity Wears a Wristwatch
2781 said:
To me belongs vengeance, and recompense; Their foot shall slide in due time:
April 27th, 2024 00:09
2781 said:
To me belongs vengeance, and recompense; Their foot shall slide in due time:
April 27th, 2024 00:09
Consider the Possibilities
Cassie58 said:
Nothing ventured nothing gained comes to mind with your words. You have to put effort in to make a difference. Building blocks. You have to build one brick at a time. I enjoyed the positive message in your poem gray0328. Happy Saturday.
April 20th, 2024 07:00
Cassie58 said:
Nothing ventured nothing gained comes to mind with your words. You have to put effort in to make a difference. Building blocks. You have to build one brick at a time. I enjoyed the positive message in your poem gray0328. Happy Saturday.
April 20th, 2024 07:00
The Unanticipated Buzz
Parisab said:
So playful while solving nature’s rhyme:
‘One simply bursts forth in a riot of color’ so no ‘Fantasy or Forecast’ …
April 14th, 2024 09:54
Parisab said:
So playful while solving nature’s rhyme:
‘One simply bursts forth in a riot of color’ so no ‘Fantasy or Forecast’ …
April 14th, 2024 09:54
Two Powers
Parisab said:
I saw both ‘masters’ to befriend… but they were both lost when I visited NOLA during COVID…So disappointing to miss that jazz …moving words…
April 14th, 2024 09:43
Parisab said:
I saw both ‘masters’ to befriend… but they were both lost when I visited NOLA during COVID…So disappointing to miss that jazz …moving words…
April 14th, 2024 09:43
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