Comments received on poems by gray0328
Fire in the Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
This has a very dark tone to it yet it reads in an inspiring way. Very enjoyable read
November 8th, 2024 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
This has a very dark tone to it yet it reads in an inspiring way. Very enjoyable read
November 8th, 2024 12:54
At the Edge of the Lagoon
Dan Williams said:
Phrasing to die for, clear pertinent message. Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:42
Dan Williams said:
Phrasing to die for, clear pertinent message. Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:42
The Strength of a Redwood Tree
sorenbarrett said:
Been there and seen their grandure, A lovely poem of nature
November 7th, 2024 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Been there and seen their grandure, A lovely poem of nature
November 7th, 2024 05:47
At the Edge of the Lagoon
sorenbarrett said:
The painting of a beautiful picture of nature which could be a metaphor as well.
November 6th, 2024 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
The painting of a beautiful picture of nature which could be a metaphor as well.
November 6th, 2024 13:52
Mr. Ball\'s Bouncing Curriculum
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and tribute to one that impressed and taught something that lasts in the lives of others
November 5th, 2024 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful memory and tribute to one that impressed and taught something that lasts in the lives of others
November 5th, 2024 09:59
Renegade Honey Bee
sorenbarrett said:
Story of my past life and in metaphor this as well. Unfortunately such a bee remains homeless and ostricised. A poem of a free spirit
November 4th, 2024 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
Story of my past life and in metaphor this as well. Unfortunately such a bee remains homeless and ostricised. A poem of a free spirit
November 4th, 2024 10:52
Flannel Embrace
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully worded tribute to cold weather and the joy some find with it.
November 3rd, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A beautifully worded tribute to cold weather and the joy some find with it.
November 3rd, 2024 09:20
Misunderstanding
Doggerel Dave said:
Projection when it occurs in a relationship is pretty hard to unravel. You had the strength to withstand and withdraw.
Good move, rich write.
November 2nd, 2024 18:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Projection when it occurs in a relationship is pretty hard to unravel. You had the strength to withstand and withdraw.
Good move, rich write.
November 2nd, 2024 18:24
Misunderstanding
sorenbarrett said:
Accuizations that are ment to upset are best left alone. A good write of false accuiztion put aside.
November 2nd, 2024 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
Accuizations that are ment to upset are best left alone. A good write of false accuiztion put aside.
November 2nd, 2024 10:25
Woodstock Summer
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory just clicked into place. A pity I\'m forced to return. A rich romantic ride I thoroughly enjoyed.
October 29th, 2024 15:24
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory just clicked into place. A pity I\'m forced to return. A rich romantic ride I thoroughly enjoyed.
October 29th, 2024 15:24
Woodstock Summer
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days. My favorite lines were the last two. A nostalgic read.
October 29th, 2024 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
I remember those days. My favorite lines were the last two. A nostalgic read.
October 29th, 2024 13:38
Assets of the Soul
Dan Williams said:
A fine list of attributes we all should aspire to. Well done.
October 27th, 2024 23:06
Dan Williams said:
A fine list of attributes we all should aspire to. Well done.
October 27th, 2024 23:06
My Father, Scholar of the Unwritten Halls
sorenbarrett said:
Ivory walls are not needed for knowledge they are just a right of passage for a job. A great tribute to your father. Nicely done
October 27th, 2024 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
Ivory walls are not needed for knowledge they are just a right of passage for a job. A great tribute to your father. Nicely done
October 27th, 2024 06:10
Assets of the Soul
Doggerel Dave said:
Nicely placed as a personal experience and not a lecture.
Great with insights on every line.
October 26th, 2024 15:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Nicely placed as a personal experience and not a lecture.
Great with insights on every line.
October 26th, 2024 15:13
Assets of the Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words that tell of the human spirit in its daily journey Loved it
October 26th, 2024 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words that tell of the human spirit in its daily journey Loved it
October 26th, 2024 14:23
Assets of the Soul
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love your title, it\'s quite genius, then each line, how to recognise one\'s inner self and accept each flaw how ever big or small, humans are complicated but reading this makes it seem all so understandable. A wonderful piece of poetry. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 12:31
Teddy.15 said:
I absolutely love your title, it\'s quite genius, then each line, how to recognise one\'s inner self and accept each flaw how ever big or small, humans are complicated but reading this makes it seem all so understandable. A wonderful piece of poetry. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 12:31
Assets of the Soul
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, VERY lovely. Trickling down the page almost like the sound my tea gives when I\'m pouring our cups of tea which my brother calls calming to hear, this is gently rendered with wonderfully tasteful imagery and a clinging, haunting poignancy refusing to let the reader simply walk away. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 12:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, VERY lovely. Trickling down the page almost like the sound my tea gives when I\'m pouring our cups of tea which my brother calls calming to hear, this is gently rendered with wonderfully tasteful imagery and a clinging, haunting poignancy refusing to let the reader simply walk away. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 12:18
The Consolation of Boethius
Parisab said:
Sounds like he is free at all cost…Your work is always powerful, sir….
October 26th, 2024 10:29
Parisab said:
Sounds like he is free at all cost…Your work is always powerful, sir….
October 26th, 2024 10:29
The Consolation of Boethius
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of the persistance of the human spirit. Wonderfully worded it raises the spirt of the reader. Lovely
October 25th, 2024 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of the persistance of the human spirit. Wonderfully worded it raises the spirt of the reader. Lovely
October 25th, 2024 12:26
The New Hip-Hop Hooray
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure my back can take it - but still.....
October 24th, 2024 08:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure my back can take it - but still.....
October 24th, 2024 08:37
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