Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey



New line
FredPeyer said:

And every new line is filled with opportunity and wonder!
Well done, Aa!

January 29th, 2018 02:24

It\'s in her eyes
Accidental Poet said:

Very beautifully written Aa.

January 27th, 2018 17:42

Toast
FredPeyer said:

The boredom in the poem does come through perfectly! Ah well, what\'s done, is done! :-)

January 26th, 2018 11:27

Love-right
Louis Gibbs said:

Great advice, Aa, well expressed in this most enjoyable write!

January 25th, 2018 10:24

A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Alien
Michael Edwards said:

A little gem Aa - and by coincidence I\'ve just written a few love is pieces which I\'ll post later in the week.

January 22nd, 2018 01:15

Chalk
FredPeyer said:

Well written, sounds like the perfect woman!

January 20th, 2018 17:56

Gold is your soul
Caring dove said:

hello aa harvey .. so nice to be able to read this :-) really , i read this several times , its just such an amazing and interesting piece of writing , very engaging and kept my attention from line to line . this is seriously well written , you seem ever so talented ! reading this , just makes me think of how our expectations can let us down , things are not always as we expect them to be and just because we are supposed to have an amazing experience or we are expected to be able to feel a certain way , does not mean that we will ! this felt like a journey, i can\'t help but feel sorry for the lady who is disappointed and walks in silence , great write!:-)

January 20th, 2018 10:43

Chalk
Caring dove said:

really really beautiful :-) i especially love the first line , about her being like a rainbow nside a black and white tv , unique, and lovely, enjoyed this

January 20th, 2018 09:57

Half-love
Malayzia said:

I actually love this .!

January 19th, 2018 18:05

Half-love
FredPeyer said:

...and that half-love changes to full love! Like your poem, Aa!

January 19th, 2018 16:31

Gold is your soul
FredPeyer said:

Well penned, Aa!

January 18th, 2018 16:55

Gold is your soul
Aislinn Wilson said:

Great poem. Well done!

January 18th, 2018 11:32

Time is fading away
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 16th, 2018 09:48

Land
Accidental Poet said:

Both your poem and The Doors song are a masterpiece of work. And your poem relates well with the song. Indeed, what will we become?

January 14th, 2018 10:51

Land
Aislinn Wilson said:

I mean this as a compliment when I say that reading your poem feels like listening to The Doors for me.

January 14th, 2018 03:53

Quickly
FredPeyer said:

Yes, Aa, life is short and we have to make the best of it!

January 13th, 2018 22:38

A little respect
Fay Slimm. said:

A telling rhyme of how fickle some treat that gem called love - - thanks for sharing it AA

January 12th, 2018 10:56

A little respect
Thoff1 said:

Great work! I can relate

January 12th, 2018 09:17

Nothing hurts like love
Michael Edwards said:

This carries you along with - fine write Aa

January 11th, 2018 11:34

Romance isn\'t dead
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 9th, 2018 10:48

Looking to the future
Michael Edwards said:

Always look to the future but live for today - fine stuff Aa

January 8th, 2018 03:12

A no answer machine
FredPeyer said:

Sad, but true!

January 6th, 2018 15:34

A no answer machine
Shadowbox15 said:

😢

January 6th, 2018 13:33

New Year\'s night
RebeccaRose.x said:

Like it!

January 5th, 2018 17:26

New Year\'s night
Michael Edwards said:

Well written

January 5th, 2018 13:02

New Year\'s night
FredPeyer said:

Very nicely said, Aa! Starting the New Year with peace just might make it a better year.

January 5th, 2018 11:55

The book that never was
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 4th, 2018 09:42

Mothers shouldn\'t cry
Tony36 said:

Wonderful written tribute

January 3rd, 2018 13:10

Mothers shouldn\'t cry
Laura🌻 said:

I read your poem a few times!
Each time I read it, it evoked a different emotion within me.
I felt happy...
I felt sad...
I felt loved...
I felt lonely...
I did like reading it.
So poignant and very
Relatable!!

January 3rd, 2018 10:45

Mothers shouldn\'t cry
FredPeyer said:

A beautiful tribute to your mom!

January 3rd, 2018 04:39



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