Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Someone needs to love you
dusk arising said:
So so many love songs are written and we relate to them so easily for, just as you write, we need love.
Yours is not \'just another love song\' though because i can feel the emotion with which you wrote it and its quite beautiful. It\'s going to have to become one of my favourites.
February 7th, 2018 15:08
dusk arising said:
So so many love songs are written and we relate to them so easily for, just as you write, we need love.
Yours is not \'just another love song\' though because i can feel the emotion with which you wrote it and its quite beautiful. It\'s going to have to become one of my favourites.
February 7th, 2018 15:08
Someone needs to love you
Laura🌻 said:
Aa,
I agree with Lorna! It’s a beautiful write that would make a beautiful song to be sung!
“My love light in the dark”...
love these closing words!
~Laura~
February 7th, 2018 08:06
Laura🌻 said:
Aa,
I agree with Lorna! It’s a beautiful write that would make a beautiful song to be sung!
“My love light in the dark”...
love these closing words!
~Laura~
February 7th, 2018 08:06
Someone needs to love you
Caring dove said:
lovely :-) i especially love the ending .. with the healing of the heart .. healing with love.. lovely
February 7th, 2018 07:35
Caring dove said:
lovely :-) i especially love the ending .. with the healing of the heart .. healing with love.. lovely
February 7th, 2018 07:35
My words
Accidental Poet said:
I hear and see inspiration whenever I come here. Thanks for sharing Aa.
February 4th, 2018 09:04
Accidental Poet said:
I hear and see inspiration whenever I come here. Thanks for sharing Aa.
February 4th, 2018 09:04
7pm wake up call
FredPeyer said:
That dream turned into a nice love story! Well done.
February 2nd, 2018 14:00
FredPeyer said:
That dream turned into a nice love story! Well done.
February 2nd, 2018 14:00
7pm wake up call
marsy said:
i love the imagery, and all the little details!! it really feels like falling in love, when you notice all the small things about people and remember bits and pieces of things but not the whole picture, its like a haze and you captured it well!!
February 1st, 2018 08:22
marsy said:
i love the imagery, and all the little details!! it really feels like falling in love, when you notice all the small things about people and remember bits and pieces of things but not the whole picture, its like a haze and you captured it well!!
February 1st, 2018 08:22
The Mighty Lion
Caring dove said:
brilliant! i love this ! you have really given this lion a voice.. a voice of strength , courage and pride ! love it :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:16
Caring dove said:
brilliant! i love this ! you have really given this lion a voice.. a voice of strength , courage and pride ! love it :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:16
A weep of fate
Caring dove said:
wow, this is a very touching piece of writing , they both were in pain but they both turned to each other, to try and help. however sad this was, you told it quite beautifully :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Caring dove said:
wow, this is a very touching piece of writing , they both were in pain but they both turned to each other, to try and help. however sad this was, you told it quite beautifully :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Looking to the future
Aa Harvey said:
This is not my favourite poem. I clicked on the star by accident (to see if it gave me any options) and now it says this is my favourite poem. I will remove my name from the people who have listed this poem as their favourite poems if I can work out how to do it. I\'m glad you like the poem though.
One of my poems I like the most is called \'Bite\'
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Aa Harvey said:
This is not my favourite poem. I clicked on the star by accident (to see if it gave me any options) and now it says this is my favourite poem. I will remove my name from the people who have listed this poem as their favourite poems if I can work out how to do it. I\'m glad you like the poem though.
One of my poems I like the most is called \'Bite\'
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Heart door
Caring dove said:
oh, very lovely ! i do love the reference to the tape over your heart shaped door ... sometimes we just don\'t want to let anybody else in , and when things are over , thats it , the door is suddenly closed . i love how you started this poem \'\'I\'ve been picking out thoughts like you pick out a dress.\'\' interesting nice start , made me want to read on ..
January 31st, 2018 05:04
Caring dove said:
oh, very lovely ! i do love the reference to the tape over your heart shaped door ... sometimes we just don\'t want to let anybody else in , and when things are over , thats it , the door is suddenly closed . i love how you started this poem \'\'I\'ve been picking out thoughts like you pick out a dress.\'\' interesting nice start , made me want to read on ..
January 31st, 2018 05:04
Beautiful eyes
Caring dove said:
i love your style of writing AA Harvey , another lovely and well thought out piece of writing , i like your questioning throughout this, making the reader ponder on , and think.. i doubt i would give my heart away to a mystery
January 31st, 2018 04:59
Caring dove said:
i love your style of writing AA Harvey , another lovely and well thought out piece of writing , i like your questioning throughout this, making the reader ponder on , and think.. i doubt i would give my heart away to a mystery
January 31st, 2018 04:59
The thought beetle
Caring dove said:
however the ladybird is the most beautiful out of them all , it sounds like she is always in a hurry and desperate to succeed!
January 31st, 2018 04:54
Caring dove said:
however the ladybird is the most beautiful out of them all , it sounds like she is always in a hurry and desperate to succeed!
January 31st, 2018 04:54
The thought beetle
Caring dove said:
lol, i love the idea of a \'\' beetle \'\' a ladybird \'\' and a \'\' worm \' inside of yoru head ... i think the \'\' thought beetle\' is the most helpful to you , he sounds like a smart beetle and this is certainly a clever and well thought out piece of writing , very unique
January 31st, 2018 04:52
Caring dove said:
lol, i love the idea of a \'\' beetle \'\' a ladybird \'\' and a \'\' worm \' inside of yoru head ... i think the \'\' thought beetle\' is the most helpful to you , he sounds like a smart beetle and this is certainly a clever and well thought out piece of writing , very unique
January 31st, 2018 04:52
Romance isn\'t dead
Caring dove said:
i feel so sorry for the young boy who is hurting , and in pain..
January 31st, 2018 04:37
Caring dove said:
i feel so sorry for the young boy who is hurting , and in pain..
January 31st, 2018 04:37
Romance isn\'t dead
Caring dove said:
brilliant piece of writing Harvey , i cannot help but love the repetition in this . and i especially love this line
\'\'Complete devotion, will let you down,
Because love steals your senses
And you crash to the ground.\'\' a strong expression of how love can hurt us .
January 31st, 2018 04:36
Caring dove said:
brilliant piece of writing Harvey , i cannot help but love the repetition in this . and i especially love this line
\'\'Complete devotion, will let you down,
Because love steals your senses
And you crash to the ground.\'\' a strong expression of how love can hurt us .
January 31st, 2018 04:36
A little respect
Caring dove said:
some people are inconsiderate towards our feelings despite love being involved ..... a well expressed piece of writing , not nice to be treated badly, it just hurts our feelings
January 31st, 2018 04:29
Caring dove said:
some people are inconsiderate towards our feelings despite love being involved ..... a well expressed piece of writing , not nice to be treated badly, it just hurts our feelings
January 31st, 2018 04:29
Looking to the future
Caring dove said:
this is truly lovely :-) the first line pulled me in .... a rainbow is so beautiful , why rush to the end of it , can we not focus on the beauty now. some people spend so much time thinking of the future , that they miss so much of the here and now , a great piece of writing aa harvey, truly enjoyed, and you speak some very true words
January 31st, 2018 04:18
Caring dove said:
this is truly lovely :-) the first line pulled me in .... a rainbow is so beautiful , why rush to the end of it , can we not focus on the beauty now. some people spend so much time thinking of the future , that they miss so much of the here and now , a great piece of writing aa harvey, truly enjoyed, and you speak some very true words
January 31st, 2018 04:18
New line
Caring dove said:
loved every line .. a strong piece of writing .. enjoyed :-)
January 31st, 2018 04:07
Caring dove said:
loved every line .. a strong piece of writing .. enjoyed :-)
January 31st, 2018 04:07
New world story
Caring dove said:
this is very lovely :-) enjoyed reading this ..
January 31st, 2018 04:06
Caring dove said:
this is very lovely :-) enjoyed reading this ..
January 31st, 2018 04:06
Full time dreamer
dusk arising said:
Your last verse is a stunner, feels like its words pulled from my heart.
Only too poignant today sadly.
Great writing.
January 30th, 2018 16:13
dusk arising said:
Your last verse is a stunner, feels like its words pulled from my heart.
Only too poignant today sadly.
Great writing.
January 30th, 2018 16:13
Full time dreamer
TrystanBehm said:
This resonates with me for so many reasons. Thanks for sharing. Needed this today!
January 30th, 2018 08:44
TrystanBehm said:
This resonates with me for so many reasons. Thanks for sharing. Needed this today!
January 30th, 2018 08:44
New line
Aislinn Wilson said:
Each line was surprisingly better than the last
January 29th, 2018 14:15
Aislinn Wilson said:
Each line was surprisingly better than the last
January 29th, 2018 14:15
New line
dusk arising said:
Let your poetry be your essence and a scent that fills the air with your life\'s wisdom around you. An aura.
Very uplifting poetry.
January 29th, 2018 12:32
dusk arising said:
Let your poetry be your essence and a scent that fills the air with your life\'s wisdom around you. An aura.
Very uplifting poetry.
January 29th, 2018 12:32
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