Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
A weep of fate
Caring dove said:
wow, this is a very touching piece of writing , they both were in pain but they both turned to each other, to try and help. however sad this was, you told it quite beautifully :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Caring dove said:
wow, this is a very touching piece of writing , they both were in pain but they both turned to each other, to try and help. however sad this was, you told it quite beautifully :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Looking to the future
Aa Harvey said:
This is not my favourite poem. I clicked on the star by accident (to see if it gave me any options) and now it says this is my favourite poem. I will remove my name from the people who have listed this poem as their favourite poems if I can work out how to do it. I\'m glad you like the poem though.
One of my poems I like the most is called \'Bite\'
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Aa Harvey said:
This is not my favourite poem. I clicked on the star by accident (to see if it gave me any options) and now it says this is my favourite poem. I will remove my name from the people who have listed this poem as their favourite poems if I can work out how to do it. I\'m glad you like the poem though.
One of my poems I like the most is called \'Bite\'
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Heart door
Caring dove said:
oh, very lovely ! i do love the reference to the tape over your heart shaped door ... sometimes we just don\'t want to let anybody else in , and when things are over , thats it , the door is suddenly closed . i love how you started this poem \'\'I\'ve been picking out thoughts like you pick out a dress.\'\' interesting nice start , made me want to read on ..
January 31st, 2018 05:04
Caring dove said:
oh, very lovely ! i do love the reference to the tape over your heart shaped door ... sometimes we just don\'t want to let anybody else in , and when things are over , thats it , the door is suddenly closed . i love how you started this poem \'\'I\'ve been picking out thoughts like you pick out a dress.\'\' interesting nice start , made me want to read on ..
January 31st, 2018 05:04
Beautiful eyes
Caring dove said:
i love your style of writing AA Harvey , another lovely and well thought out piece of writing , i like your questioning throughout this, making the reader ponder on , and think.. i doubt i would give my heart away to a mystery
January 31st, 2018 04:59
Caring dove said:
i love your style of writing AA Harvey , another lovely and well thought out piece of writing , i like your questioning throughout this, making the reader ponder on , and think.. i doubt i would give my heart away to a mystery
January 31st, 2018 04:59
The thought beetle
Caring dove said:
however the ladybird is the most beautiful out of them all , it sounds like she is always in a hurry and desperate to succeed!
January 31st, 2018 04:54
Caring dove said:
however the ladybird is the most beautiful out of them all , it sounds like she is always in a hurry and desperate to succeed!
January 31st, 2018 04:54
The thought beetle
Caring dove said:
lol, i love the idea of a \'\' beetle \'\' a ladybird \'\' and a \'\' worm \' inside of yoru head ... i think the \'\' thought beetle\' is the most helpful to you , he sounds like a smart beetle and this is certainly a clever and well thought out piece of writing , very unique
January 31st, 2018 04:52
Caring dove said:
lol, i love the idea of a \'\' beetle \'\' a ladybird \'\' and a \'\' worm \' inside of yoru head ... i think the \'\' thought beetle\' is the most helpful to you , he sounds like a smart beetle and this is certainly a clever and well thought out piece of writing , very unique
January 31st, 2018 04:52
Romance isn\'t dead
Caring dove said:
i feel so sorry for the young boy who is hurting , and in pain..
January 31st, 2018 04:37
Caring dove said:
i feel so sorry for the young boy who is hurting , and in pain..
January 31st, 2018 04:37
Romance isn\'t dead
Caring dove said:
brilliant piece of writing Harvey , i cannot help but love the repetition in this . and i especially love this line
\'\'Complete devotion, will let you down,
Because love steals your senses
And you crash to the ground.\'\' a strong expression of how love can hurt us .
January 31st, 2018 04:36
Caring dove said:
brilliant piece of writing Harvey , i cannot help but love the repetition in this . and i especially love this line
\'\'Complete devotion, will let you down,
Because love steals your senses
And you crash to the ground.\'\' a strong expression of how love can hurt us .
January 31st, 2018 04:36
A little respect
Caring dove said:
some people are inconsiderate towards our feelings despite love being involved ..... a well expressed piece of writing , not nice to be treated badly, it just hurts our feelings
January 31st, 2018 04:29
Caring dove said:
some people are inconsiderate towards our feelings despite love being involved ..... a well expressed piece of writing , not nice to be treated badly, it just hurts our feelings
January 31st, 2018 04:29
Looking to the future
Caring dove said:
this is truly lovely :-) the first line pulled me in .... a rainbow is so beautiful , why rush to the end of it , can we not focus on the beauty now. some people spend so much time thinking of the future , that they miss so much of the here and now , a great piece of writing aa harvey, truly enjoyed, and you speak some very true words
January 31st, 2018 04:18
Caring dove said:
this is truly lovely :-) the first line pulled me in .... a rainbow is so beautiful , why rush to the end of it , can we not focus on the beauty now. some people spend so much time thinking of the future , that they miss so much of the here and now , a great piece of writing aa harvey, truly enjoyed, and you speak some very true words
January 31st, 2018 04:18
New line
Caring dove said:
loved every line .. a strong piece of writing .. enjoyed :-)
January 31st, 2018 04:07
Caring dove said:
loved every line .. a strong piece of writing .. enjoyed :-)
January 31st, 2018 04:07
New world story
Caring dove said:
this is very lovely :-) enjoyed reading this ..
January 31st, 2018 04:06
Caring dove said:
this is very lovely :-) enjoyed reading this ..
January 31st, 2018 04:06
Full time dreamer
dusk arising said:
Your last verse is a stunner, feels like its words pulled from my heart.
Only too poignant today sadly.
Great writing.
January 30th, 2018 16:13
dusk arising said:
Your last verse is a stunner, feels like its words pulled from my heart.
Only too poignant today sadly.
Great writing.
January 30th, 2018 16:13
Full time dreamer
TrystanBehm said:
This resonates with me for so many reasons. Thanks for sharing. Needed this today!
January 30th, 2018 08:44
TrystanBehm said:
This resonates with me for so many reasons. Thanks for sharing. Needed this today!
January 30th, 2018 08:44
New line
Aislinn Wilson said:
Each line was surprisingly better than the last
January 29th, 2018 14:15
Aislinn Wilson said:
Each line was surprisingly better than the last
January 29th, 2018 14:15
New line
dusk arising said:
Let your poetry be your essence and a scent that fills the air with your life\'s wisdom around you. An aura.
Very uplifting poetry.
January 29th, 2018 12:32
dusk arising said:
Let your poetry be your essence and a scent that fills the air with your life\'s wisdom around you. An aura.
Very uplifting poetry.
January 29th, 2018 12:32
New line
FredPeyer said:
And every new line is filled with opportunity and wonder!
Well done, Aa!
January 29th, 2018 02:24
FredPeyer said:
And every new line is filled with opportunity and wonder!
Well done, Aa!
January 29th, 2018 02:24
Toast
FredPeyer said:
The boredom in the poem does come through perfectly! Ah well, what\'s done, is done! :-)
January 26th, 2018 11:27
FredPeyer said:
The boredom in the poem does come through perfectly! Ah well, what\'s done, is done! :-)
January 26th, 2018 11:27
Love-right
Louis Gibbs said:
Great advice, Aa, well expressed in this most enjoyable write!
January 25th, 2018 10:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Great advice, Aa, well expressed in this most enjoyable write!
January 25th, 2018 10:24
A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Alien
Michael Edwards said:
A little gem Aa - and by coincidence I\'ve just written a few love is pieces which I\'ll post later in the week.
January 22nd, 2018 01:15
Michael Edwards said:
A little gem Aa - and by coincidence I\'ve just written a few love is pieces which I\'ll post later in the week.
January 22nd, 2018 01:15
Gold is your soul
Caring dove said:
hello aa harvey .. so nice to be able to read this :-) really , i read this several times , its just such an amazing and interesting piece of writing , very engaging and kept my attention from line to line . this is seriously well written , you seem ever so talented ! reading this , just makes me think of how our expectations can let us down , things are not always as we expect them to be and just because we are supposed to have an amazing experience or we are expected to be able to feel a certain way , does not mean that we will ! this felt like a journey, i can\'t help but feel sorry for the lady who is disappointed and walks in silence , great write!:-)
January 20th, 2018 10:43
Caring dove said:
hello aa harvey .. so nice to be able to read this :-) really , i read this several times , its just such an amazing and interesting piece of writing , very engaging and kept my attention from line to line . this is seriously well written , you seem ever so talented ! reading this , just makes me think of how our expectations can let us down , things are not always as we expect them to be and just because we are supposed to have an amazing experience or we are expected to be able to feel a certain way , does not mean that we will ! this felt like a journey, i can\'t help but feel sorry for the lady who is disappointed and walks in silence , great write!:-)
January 20th, 2018 10:43
Chalk
Caring dove said:
really really beautiful :-) i especially love the first line , about her being like a rainbow nside a black and white tv , unique, and lovely, enjoyed this
January 20th, 2018 09:57
Caring dove said:
really really beautiful :-) i especially love the first line , about her being like a rainbow nside a black and white tv , unique, and lovely, enjoyed this
January 20th, 2018 09:57
Half-love
FredPeyer said:
...and that half-love changes to full love! Like your poem, Aa!
January 19th, 2018 16:31
FredPeyer said:
...and that half-love changes to full love! Like your poem, Aa!
January 19th, 2018 16:31
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