Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
7pm wake up call
FredPeyer said:
That dream turned into a nice love story! Well done.
February 2nd, 2018 14:00
FredPeyer said:
That dream turned into a nice love story! Well done.
February 2nd, 2018 14:00
7pm wake up call
marsy said:
i love the imagery, and all the little details!! it really feels like falling in love, when you notice all the small things about people and remember bits and pieces of things but not the whole picture, its like a haze and you captured it well!!
February 1st, 2018 08:22
marsy said:
i love the imagery, and all the little details!! it really feels like falling in love, when you notice all the small things about people and remember bits and pieces of things but not the whole picture, its like a haze and you captured it well!!
February 1st, 2018 08:22
The Mighty Lion
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
brilliant! i love this ! you have really given this lion a voice.. a voice of strength , courage and pride ! love it :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:16
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
brilliant! i love this ! you have really given this lion a voice.. a voice of strength , courage and pride ! love it :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:16
A weep of fate
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
wow, this is a very touching piece of writing , they both were in pain but they both turned to each other, to try and help. however sad this was, you told it quite beautifully :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
wow, this is a very touching piece of writing , they both were in pain but they both turned to each other, to try and help. however sad this was, you told it quite beautifully :-)
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Looking to the future
Aa Harvey said:
This is not my favourite poem. I clicked on the star by accident (to see if it gave me any options) and now it says this is my favourite poem. I will remove my name from the people who have listed this poem as their favourite poems if I can work out how to do it. I\'m glad you like the poem though.
One of my poems I like the most is called \'Bite\'
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Aa Harvey said:
This is not my favourite poem. I clicked on the star by accident (to see if it gave me any options) and now it says this is my favourite poem. I will remove my name from the people who have listed this poem as their favourite poems if I can work out how to do it. I\'m glad you like the poem though.
One of my poems I like the most is called \'Bite\'
January 31st, 2018 05:11
Heart door
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
oh, very lovely ! i do love the reference to the tape over your heart shaped door ... sometimes we just don\'t want to let anybody else in , and when things are over , thats it , the door is suddenly closed . i love how you started this poem \'\'I\'ve been picking out thoughts like you pick out a dress.\'\' interesting nice start , made me want to read on ..
January 31st, 2018 05:04
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
oh, very lovely ! i do love the reference to the tape over your heart shaped door ... sometimes we just don\'t want to let anybody else in , and when things are over , thats it , the door is suddenly closed . i love how you started this poem \'\'I\'ve been picking out thoughts like you pick out a dress.\'\' interesting nice start , made me want to read on ..
January 31st, 2018 05:04
Beautiful eyes
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love your style of writing AA Harvey , another lovely and well thought out piece of writing , i like your questioning throughout this, making the reader ponder on , and think.. i doubt i would give my heart away to a mystery
January 31st, 2018 04:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love your style of writing AA Harvey , another lovely and well thought out piece of writing , i like your questioning throughout this, making the reader ponder on , and think.. i doubt i would give my heart away to a mystery
January 31st, 2018 04:59
The thought beetle
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
however the ladybird is the most beautiful out of them all , it sounds like she is always in a hurry and desperate to succeed!
January 31st, 2018 04:54
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
however the ladybird is the most beautiful out of them all , it sounds like she is always in a hurry and desperate to succeed!
January 31st, 2018 04:54
The thought beetle
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
lol, i love the idea of a \'\' beetle \'\' a ladybird \'\' and a \'\' worm \' inside of yoru head ... i think the \'\' thought beetle\' is the most helpful to you , he sounds like a smart beetle and this is certainly a clever and well thought out piece of writing , very unique
January 31st, 2018 04:52
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
lol, i love the idea of a \'\' beetle \'\' a ladybird \'\' and a \'\' worm \' inside of yoru head ... i think the \'\' thought beetle\' is the most helpful to you , he sounds like a smart beetle and this is certainly a clever and well thought out piece of writing , very unique
January 31st, 2018 04:52
Phoenix
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love this ! :-) nice work
January 31st, 2018 04:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love this ! :-) nice work
January 31st, 2018 04:47
Romance isn\'t dead
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i feel so sorry for the young boy who is hurting , and in pain..
January 31st, 2018 04:37
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i feel so sorry for the young boy who is hurting , and in pain..
January 31st, 2018 04:37
Romance isn\'t dead
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
brilliant piece of writing Harvey , i cannot help but love the repetition in this . and i especially love this line
\'\'Complete devotion, will let you down,
Because love steals your senses
And you crash to the ground.\'\' a strong expression of how love can hurt us .
January 31st, 2018 04:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
brilliant piece of writing Harvey , i cannot help but love the repetition in this . and i especially love this line
\'\'Complete devotion, will let you down,
Because love steals your senses
And you crash to the ground.\'\' a strong expression of how love can hurt us .
January 31st, 2018 04:36
A little respect
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
some people are inconsiderate towards our feelings despite love being involved ..... a well expressed piece of writing , not nice to be treated badly, it just hurts our feelings
January 31st, 2018 04:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
some people are inconsiderate towards our feelings despite love being involved ..... a well expressed piece of writing , not nice to be treated badly, it just hurts our feelings
January 31st, 2018 04:29
Looking to the future
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is truly lovely :-) the first line pulled me in .... a rainbow is so beautiful , why rush to the end of it , can we not focus on the beauty now. some people spend so much time thinking of the future , that they miss so much of the here and now , a great piece of writing aa harvey, truly enjoyed, and you speak some very true words
January 31st, 2018 04:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is truly lovely :-) the first line pulled me in .... a rainbow is so beautiful , why rush to the end of it , can we not focus on the beauty now. some people spend so much time thinking of the future , that they miss so much of the here and now , a great piece of writing aa harvey, truly enjoyed, and you speak some very true words
January 31st, 2018 04:18
New line
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
loved every line .. a strong piece of writing .. enjoyed :-)
January 31st, 2018 04:07
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
loved every line .. a strong piece of writing .. enjoyed :-)
January 31st, 2018 04:07
New world story
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is very lovely :-) enjoyed reading this ..
January 31st, 2018 04:06
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is very lovely :-) enjoyed reading this ..
January 31st, 2018 04:06
Full time dreamer
dusk arising said:
Your last verse is a stunner, feels like its words pulled from my heart.
Only too poignant today sadly.
Great writing.
January 30th, 2018 16:13
dusk arising said:
Your last verse is a stunner, feels like its words pulled from my heart.
Only too poignant today sadly.
Great writing.
January 30th, 2018 16:13
Full time dreamer
TrystanBehm said:
This resonates with me for so many reasons. Thanks for sharing. Needed this today!
January 30th, 2018 08:44
TrystanBehm said:
This resonates with me for so many reasons. Thanks for sharing. Needed this today!
January 30th, 2018 08:44
New line
Aislinn Wilson said:
Each line was surprisingly better than the last
January 29th, 2018 14:15
Aislinn Wilson said:
Each line was surprisingly better than the last
January 29th, 2018 14:15
New line
dusk arising said:
Let your poetry be your essence and a scent that fills the air with your life\'s wisdom around you. An aura.
Very uplifting poetry.
January 29th, 2018 12:32
dusk arising said:
Let your poetry be your essence and a scent that fills the air with your life\'s wisdom around you. An aura.
Very uplifting poetry.
January 29th, 2018 12:32
New line
FredPeyer said:
And every new line is filled with opportunity and wonder!
Well done, Aa!
January 29th, 2018 02:24
FredPeyer said:
And every new line is filled with opportunity and wonder!
Well done, Aa!
January 29th, 2018 02:24
Toast
FredPeyer said:
The boredom in the poem does come through perfectly! Ah well, what\'s done, is done! :-)
January 26th, 2018 11:27
FredPeyer said:
The boredom in the poem does come through perfectly! Ah well, what\'s done, is done! :-)
January 26th, 2018 11:27
Love-right
Louis Gibbs said:
Great advice, Aa, well expressed in this most enjoyable write!
January 25th, 2018 10:24
Louis Gibbs said:
Great advice, Aa, well expressed in this most enjoyable write!
January 25th, 2018 10:24
A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Alien
Michael Edwards said:
A little gem Aa - and by coincidence I\'ve just written a few love is pieces which I\'ll post later in the week.
January 22nd, 2018 01:15
Michael Edwards said:
A little gem Aa - and by coincidence I\'ve just written a few love is pieces which I\'ll post later in the week.
January 22nd, 2018 01:15
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