Comments received on poems by Malo J
I Lied About That One Too
sorenbarrett said:
Life is full of contradictions. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 18:50
sorenbarrett said:
Life is full of contradictions. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 18:50
Self Reflection
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write that sends its message in strong words and images
August 21st, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write that sends its message in strong words and images
August 21st, 2025 14:42
Begging for Release
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and memories of a difficult past that bled out of pain and desire to be something else that society demanded. A raw and hard read of hopefully a time past and grown beyond. Well written
August 19th, 2025 14:56
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts and memories of a difficult past that bled out of pain and desire to be something else that society demanded. A raw and hard read of hopefully a time past and grown beyond. Well written
August 19th, 2025 14:56
What Makes me Woman
Poetic Licence said:
This is incredibly powerful, honest and raw in its content, anger, rage, disgust, pain, sadness about a subject many find difficult to read about, let alone talk about. I have no understanding why men commit these heinous crimes, but there is no excuse in the world that justifies them. It is the worst crime a woman or girl can have happen to them, it is a life time sentance. Nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 00:25
Poetic Licence said:
This is incredibly powerful, honest and raw in its content, anger, rage, disgust, pain, sadness about a subject many find difficult to read about, let alone talk about. I have no understanding why men commit these heinous crimes, but there is no excuse in the world that justifies them. It is the worst crime a woman or girl can have happen to them, it is a life time sentance. Nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 00:25
What Makes me Woman
Demar Desu said:
Yet to write like this makes you human…. Great poem
August 17th, 2025 19:30
Demar Desu said:
Yet to write like this makes you human…. Great poem
August 17th, 2025 19:30
What Makes me Woman
sorenbarrett said:
Anger, disgust, regret, pain, in your face all in this poem. A tough and hard read about a tough and hard subject.
August 17th, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
Anger, disgust, regret, pain, in your face all in this poem. A tough and hard read about a tough and hard subject.
August 17th, 2025 19:29
I Can\'t Sleep But I Think I\'m Okay With That This Time
sorenbarrett said:
This poem may be taken in more than one way there is the inner small girl that remains in her own happy child innocent world and then there is the outer self that can not accept the world as it is in its harshness. A well written piece
August 17th, 2025 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
This poem may be taken in more than one way there is the inner small girl that remains in her own happy child innocent world and then there is the outer self that can not accept the world as it is in its harshness. A well written piece
August 17th, 2025 04:24
I Can\'t Sleep But I Think I\'m Okay With That This Time
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of past abuse and all those memories that have stayed , over the years the little girl has stayed inside living the nightmare, nicely expressed and written
August 17th, 2025 00:24
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of past abuse and all those memories that have stayed , over the years the little girl has stayed inside living the nightmare, nicely expressed and written
August 17th, 2025 00:24
Grief Made a Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings that look for acknowledgement and recognition in this poem that is emotive. Lovely
August 4th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings that look for acknowledgement and recognition in this poem that is emotive. Lovely
August 4th, 2025 12:15
Ode to Old Souls
sorenbarrett said:
Growing up too quick has its drawbacks, this poem speaks of them. Nicely written
July 23rd, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Growing up too quick has its drawbacks, this poem speaks of them. Nicely written
July 23rd, 2025 04:09
Existential Crisis
Poetic Licence said:
Many raw and honest question resulting from a abusive life and traumatic circumstances, a real write nicely expressed
July 22nd, 2025 01:18
Poetic Licence said:
Many raw and honest question resulting from a abusive life and traumatic circumstances, a real write nicely expressed
July 22nd, 2025 01:18
Existential Crisis
sorenbarrett said:
Raw question from a traumatic life put to poem. Nicely written
July 21st, 2025 20:57
sorenbarrett said:
Raw question from a traumatic life put to poem. Nicely written
July 21st, 2025 20:57
Things I Had to Give Up to Survive
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic poem of sadness and hurt. It leaves a feeling of pain that needs help and help that was never received. Well written
July 20th, 2025 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic poem of sadness and hurt. It leaves a feeling of pain that needs help and help that was never received. Well written
July 20th, 2025 13:05
I Got my Childhood Back
Priya Tomar said:
Often past seems very awesome...
Very lovely poem
July 19th, 2025 10:17
Priya Tomar said:
Often past seems very awesome...
Very lovely poem
July 19th, 2025 10:17
I Got my Childhood Back
Poetic Licence said:
An understanding of we cannot change the past, learning to and how to overcome that pain allows the healing to start, allowing for a much brighter future, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 10:05
Poetic Licence said:
An understanding of we cannot change the past, learning to and how to overcome that pain allows the healing to start, allowing for a much brighter future, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 10:05
I Got my Childhood Back
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition that one can not return to the past nor can it be relived or done but that learning can help us overcome problems from the past. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition that one can not return to the past nor can it be relived or done but that learning can help us overcome problems from the past. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2025 09:21
Mindfully Eating
Poetic Licence said:
I can\'t say I know first hand the difficulties you are facing, but I can sense the problems mentally and physiologically in the write, it\'s a brave and honest and I wish you all the best
July 18th, 2025 12:12
Poetic Licence said:
I can\'t say I know first hand the difficulties you are facing, but I can sense the problems mentally and physiologically in the write, it\'s a brave and honest and I wish you all the best
July 18th, 2025 12:12
Mindfully Eating
sorenbarrett said:
Logic and wisdom in a short story and poem. Nicely stated
July 18th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Logic and wisdom in a short story and poem. Nicely stated
July 18th, 2025 11:49
The Day After I Relapsed
Priya Tomar said:
Displaying of tragic time...
Very nice
July 18th, 2025 02:59
Priya Tomar said:
Displaying of tragic time...
Very nice
July 18th, 2025 02:59
The Day After I Relapsed
MatPie said:
A powerful poem full of raw emotions, I could taste the blood on my hands. It was a rush of unending regret. Sentimentally well written!
July 18th, 2025 02:44
MatPie said:
A powerful poem full of raw emotions, I could taste the blood on my hands. It was a rush of unending regret. Sentimentally well written!
July 18th, 2025 02:44
The Day After I Relapsed
Poetic Licence said:
A honest and raw write of the difficult times having endured and now has a little chink of hope, they might make it, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 00:49
Poetic Licence said:
A honest and raw write of the difficult times having endured and now has a little chink of hope, they might make it, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 00:49
The Day After I Relapsed
sorenbarrett said:
Rough and raw this write is a reviewal of the horrors of the past and a glimpse of light at the end of the tunnel and a bit of hope. Nicely written
July 17th, 2025 16:50
sorenbarrett said:
Rough and raw this write is a reviewal of the horrors of the past and a glimpse of light at the end of the tunnel and a bit of hope. Nicely written
July 17th, 2025 16:50
Girlhood
Poetic Licence said:
A very heartfelt and honest write of pain and suffering occuring over many years about many things, and the sadness of the effect it has on someone when there is no one to turn to, brave and very well written write, wish you all the best
July 16th, 2025 18:23
Poetic Licence said:
A very heartfelt and honest write of pain and suffering occuring over many years about many things, and the sadness of the effect it has on someone when there is no one to turn to, brave and very well written write, wish you all the best
July 16th, 2025 18:23
Girlhood
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and suffering. A long history of hurt that never had any intervention. Sad and tragic. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 17:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and suffering. A long history of hurt that never had any intervention. Sad and tragic. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 17:42
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