Comments received on poems by Malo J
Ode to Old Souls
sorenbarrett said:
Growing up too quick has its drawbacks, this poem speaks of them. Nicely written
July 23rd, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Growing up too quick has its drawbacks, this poem speaks of them. Nicely written
July 23rd, 2025 04:09
Existential Crisis
Poetic Licence said:
Many raw and honest question resulting from a abusive life and traumatic circumstances, a real write nicely expressed
July 22nd, 2025 01:18
Poetic Licence said:
Many raw and honest question resulting from a abusive life and traumatic circumstances, a real write nicely expressed
July 22nd, 2025 01:18
Existential Crisis
sorenbarrett said:
Raw question from a traumatic life put to poem. Nicely written
July 21st, 2025 20:57
sorenbarrett said:
Raw question from a traumatic life put to poem. Nicely written
July 21st, 2025 20:57
Things I Had to Give Up to Survive
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic poem of sadness and hurt. It leaves a feeling of pain that needs help and help that was never received. Well written
July 20th, 2025 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic poem of sadness and hurt. It leaves a feeling of pain that needs help and help that was never received. Well written
July 20th, 2025 13:05
I Got my Childhood Back
Priya Tomar said:
Often past seems very awesome...
Very lovely poem
July 19th, 2025 10:17
Priya Tomar said:
Often past seems very awesome...
Very lovely poem
July 19th, 2025 10:17
I Got my Childhood Back
Poetic Licence said:
An understanding of we cannot change the past, learning to and how to overcome that pain allows the healing to start, allowing for a much brighter future, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 10:05
Poetic Licence said:
An understanding of we cannot change the past, learning to and how to overcome that pain allows the healing to start, allowing for a much brighter future, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 10:05
I Got my Childhood Back
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition that one can not return to the past nor can it be relived or done but that learning can help us overcome problems from the past. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition that one can not return to the past nor can it be relived or done but that learning can help us overcome problems from the past. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2025 09:21
Mindfully Eating
Poetic Licence said:
I can\'t say I know first hand the difficulties you are facing, but I can sense the problems mentally and physiologically in the write, it\'s a brave and honest and I wish you all the best
July 18th, 2025 12:12
Poetic Licence said:
I can\'t say I know first hand the difficulties you are facing, but I can sense the problems mentally and physiologically in the write, it\'s a brave and honest and I wish you all the best
July 18th, 2025 12:12
Mindfully Eating
sorenbarrett said:
Logic and wisdom in a short story and poem. Nicely stated
July 18th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Logic and wisdom in a short story and poem. Nicely stated
July 18th, 2025 11:49
The Day After I Relapsed
Priya Tomar said:
Displaying of tragic time...
Very nice
July 18th, 2025 02:59
Priya Tomar said:
Displaying of tragic time...
Very nice
July 18th, 2025 02:59
The Day After I Relapsed
MatPie said:
A powerful poem full of raw emotions, I could taste the blood on my hands. It was a rush of unending regret. Sentimentally well written!
July 18th, 2025 02:44
MatPie said:
A powerful poem full of raw emotions, I could taste the blood on my hands. It was a rush of unending regret. Sentimentally well written!
July 18th, 2025 02:44
The Day After I Relapsed
Poetic Licence said:
A honest and raw write of the difficult times having endured and now has a little chink of hope, they might make it, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 00:49
Poetic Licence said:
A honest and raw write of the difficult times having endured and now has a little chink of hope, they might make it, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 00:49
The Day After I Relapsed
sorenbarrett said:
Rough and raw this write is a reviewal of the horrors of the past and a glimpse of light at the end of the tunnel and a bit of hope. Nicely written
July 17th, 2025 16:50
sorenbarrett said:
Rough and raw this write is a reviewal of the horrors of the past and a glimpse of light at the end of the tunnel and a bit of hope. Nicely written
July 17th, 2025 16:50
Girlhood
Poetic Licence said:
A very heartfelt and honest write of pain and suffering occuring over many years about many things, and the sadness of the effect it has on someone when there is no one to turn to, brave and very well written write, wish you all the best
July 16th, 2025 18:23
Poetic Licence said:
A very heartfelt and honest write of pain and suffering occuring over many years about many things, and the sadness of the effect it has on someone when there is no one to turn to, brave and very well written write, wish you all the best
July 16th, 2025 18:23
Girlhood
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and suffering. A long history of hurt that never had any intervention. Sad and tragic. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 17:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of pain and suffering. A long history of hurt that never had any intervention. Sad and tragic. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 17:42
Reflecting on the Past
Poetic Licence said:
This is wonderful heartfelt write, it touches nerves on so many levels, very well written and expressed
June 13th, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
This is wonderful heartfelt write, it touches nerves on so many levels, very well written and expressed
June 13th, 2025 05:13
Reflecting on the Past
sorenbarrett said:
It was the writing in this poem that captured me. The use of the background offered at first in the flag and its meaning and followed up at the end to tie it together, the first person and the use of soliloquy type speech as if talking to oneself that pulled me as the reader along. The continual use of questions to emphasize points brought power to the meaning and the topic itself of abuse and its darkness and the question of where blame lies was a strong topic. On top of this the use of strong images (being drug by the ankle) (under a blanket) while blows rain down add to the power of this piece. It is not flashy, or flamboyant but speaks with the power of the powerless and the strength of the strong. A fave
June 13th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
It was the writing in this poem that captured me. The use of the background offered at first in the flag and its meaning and followed up at the end to tie it together, the first person and the use of soliloquy type speech as if talking to oneself that pulled me as the reader along. The continual use of questions to emphasize points brought power to the meaning and the topic itself of abuse and its darkness and the question of where blame lies was a strong topic. On top of this the use of strong images (being drug by the ankle) (under a blanket) while blows rain down add to the power of this piece. It is not flashy, or flamboyant but speaks with the power of the powerless and the strength of the strong. A fave
June 13th, 2025 04:27
Burning
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the pain from the past in this poem. It screams out to the listener of past injury and unhealed sores. There is a feeling of protectiveness and wanting to shield a child from the world. A sad poem of regret and hurt. Nicely written
April 1st, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the pain from the past in this poem. It screams out to the listener of past injury and unhealed sores. There is a feeling of protectiveness and wanting to shield a child from the world. A sad poem of regret and hurt. Nicely written
April 1st, 2025 04:38
Burning
Poetic Licence said:
A sad, touching and emotional write looking back to clearly a difficult and distressing childhood, I can relate to this and many others will, well expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 02:29
Poetic Licence said:
A sad, touching and emotional write looking back to clearly a difficult and distressing childhood, I can relate to this and many others will, well expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 02:29
Chained
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very haunting write of anguish, pain and suffering inside, expressed very well the feeling of being completely overwhelmed by life. I hope it improves. well written piece of poetry.
February 10th, 2025 03:43
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very haunting write of anguish, pain and suffering inside, expressed very well the feeling of being completely overwhelmed by life. I hope it improves. well written piece of poetry.
February 10th, 2025 03:43
Empty Promises
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and emotional write of someone low on self confidence and self worth, with a lot of pain and hurt inside, well expressed in the writing.
February 6th, 2025 17:16
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and emotional write of someone low on self confidence and self worth, with a lot of pain and hurt inside, well expressed in the writing.
February 6th, 2025 17:16
The After
Poetic Licence said:
Quite haunting and emotional read, self harming is a desperate and very damaging thing, hope fully writing out how you feel will ease the pain a little, take care
January 27th, 2025 03:06
Poetic Licence said:
Quite haunting and emotional read, self harming is a desperate and very damaging thing, hope fully writing out how you feel will ease the pain a little, take care
January 27th, 2025 03:06
Hope
Poetic Licence said:
A feeling of at times giving up but then inspired to try and make it work by all the beauty around them, well worded
January 1st, 2025 04:10
Poetic Licence said:
A feeling of at times giving up but then inspired to try and make it work by all the beauty around them, well worded
January 1st, 2025 04:10
combination
Bragee said:
If not for the ppl in your life who would you be. Nothing wrong with showing them respect.
December 28th, 2024 18:08
Bragee said:
If not for the ppl in your life who would you be. Nothing wrong with showing them respect.
December 28th, 2024 18:08
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