Comments received on poems by Madds
What Hurts?
NinjaGirl said:
Stuff surely does hurt. Very beautiful expression, you are extremely talented.
November 6th, 2023 21:56
NinjaGirl said:
Stuff surely does hurt. Very beautiful expression, you are extremely talented.
November 6th, 2023 21:56
My I am From
Thomas W Case said:
You write very well from sadness, I would like to see how you write from joy, or a sense of wonder, or different emotions. I hope all is well for you. Nothing like art to cleanse the soul.
October 31st, 2023 16:40
Thomas W Case said:
You write very well from sadness, I would like to see how you write from joy, or a sense of wonder, or different emotions. I hope all is well for you. Nothing like art to cleanse the soul.
October 31st, 2023 16:40
My I am From
dtrusss said:
This is raw and rad. Good on you for leaving. Doing so is like dropping alcohol and coffee. You have to relearn associations of comfort that have become so standard. Keep on expressing and believing that the right change will come! Remember there was once a day before y\'all met where the thought of him was absent. There, you will return in time! Be well
October 31st, 2023 15:10
dtrusss said:
This is raw and rad. Good on you for leaving. Doing so is like dropping alcohol and coffee. You have to relearn associations of comfort that have become so standard. Keep on expressing and believing that the right change will come! Remember there was once a day before y\'all met where the thought of him was absent. There, you will return in time! Be well
October 31st, 2023 15:10
Father of Force
Thomas W Case said:
The level of vulnerability and transparency are very moving. Hang on little sparrow. It\'s always darkest before the dawn. Great write. Very brave. You aren\'t alone.
October 30th, 2023 17:02
Thomas W Case said:
The level of vulnerability and transparency are very moving. Hang on little sparrow. It\'s always darkest before the dawn. Great write. Very brave. You aren\'t alone.
October 30th, 2023 17:02
The Meeting With Someone I Once Loved
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. The theme is universal. And you put into words what others might not be able to do. Gritty and real. I love the honesty and transparency.
October 30th, 2023 16:54
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. The theme is universal. And you put into words what others might not be able to do. Gritty and real. I love the honesty and transparency.
October 30th, 2023 16:54
The Meeting With Someone I Once Loved
David Wakeling said:
Who are you talking to and why would I feel comfortable eaves-dropping.This needs names to engage the reader
October 30th, 2023 15:37
David Wakeling said:
Who are you talking to and why would I feel comfortable eaves-dropping.This needs names to engage the reader
October 30th, 2023 15:37
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