Comments received on poems by Madds



What Hurts?
NinjaGirl said:

Stuff surely does hurt. Very beautiful expression, you are extremely talented.

November 6th, 2023 21:56

What\'s Left of Us
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

November 5th, 2023 19:31

The Way I Broke
ella said:

It was very touching!

November 5th, 2023 05:07

Those Brown Eyes
Thomas W Case said:

Lovely write.

November 3rd, 2023 16:57

I Fear my Scars
aDarkerMind said:

a very touching tale
beautifully written.

November 1st, 2023 15:31

My I am From
Thomas W Case said:

You write very well from sadness, I would like to see how you write from joy, or a sense of wonder, or different emotions. I hope all is well for you. Nothing like art to cleanse the soul.

October 31st, 2023 16:40

My I am From
dtrusss said:

This is raw and rad. Good on you for leaving. Doing so is like dropping alcohol and coffee. You have to relearn associations of comfort that have become so standard. Keep on expressing and believing that the right change will come! Remember there was once a day before y\'all met where the thought of him was absent. There, you will return in time! Be well

October 31st, 2023 15:10

Father of Force
Thomas W Case said:

The level of vulnerability and transparency are very moving. Hang on little sparrow. It\'s always darkest before the dawn. Great write. Very brave. You aren\'t alone.

October 30th, 2023 17:02

The Meeting With Someone I Once Loved
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant. The theme is universal. And you put into words what others might not be able to do. Gritty and real. I love the honesty and transparency.

October 30th, 2023 16:54

The Meeting With Someone I Once Loved
David Wakeling said:

Who are you talking to and why would I feel comfortable eaves-dropping.This needs names to engage the reader

October 30th, 2023 15:37

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