Comments received on poems by Malo J
Screaming at a God who Doesn\'t Listen
sorenbarrett said:
One must be one own God it is the only one that will listen. A poem full of pain highly evocative it screams out in agony to a deaf world. Most beautifully written
November 21st, 2024 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
One must be one own God it is the only one that will listen. A poem full of pain highly evocative it screams out in agony to a deaf world. Most beautifully written
November 21st, 2024 04:34
Screaming at a God who Doesn\'t Listen
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
He listens, He may not come when you want, but He\'s always on time.
November 21st, 2024 03:03
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
He listens, He may not come when you want, but He\'s always on time.
November 21st, 2024 03:03
Screaming at a God who Doesn\'t Listen
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Interesting title, what was the inspiration?
November 20th, 2024 17:24
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Interesting title, what was the inspiration?
November 20th, 2024 17:24
When I Kill Myself
sunshine777 said:
This is one of the deepest most real poems I have read on here. Appreciation. There is more then 1 way to die, never let them get your soul
July 28th, 2024 20:55
sunshine777 said:
This is one of the deepest most real poems I have read on here. Appreciation. There is more then 1 way to die, never let them get your soul
July 28th, 2024 20:55
Losing Her
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Transparent and honest. Great job.
November 22nd, 2023 21:09
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful. Transparent and honest. Great job.
November 22nd, 2023 21:09
Fat Girl
2781 said:
The world feeds us crap and them makes us feel like we are the problem. Beauty comes from within. My wife has struggled for years. No surprise being married to me!
November 15th, 2023 00:22
2781 said:
The world feeds us crap and them makes us feel like we are the problem. Beauty comes from within. My wife has struggled for years. No surprise being married to me!
November 15th, 2023 00:22
Fat Girl
Hey! said:
😢😭😭😭This is so so so so so great. But the funnier thing is at my school being skinny is bad. But I just love how you made the struggle of those come out so much more.
November 14th, 2023 18:38
Hey! said:
😢😭😭😭This is so so so so so great. But the funnier thing is at my school being skinny is bad. But I just love how you made the struggle of those come out so much more.
November 14th, 2023 18:38
What did you think?
Hey! said:
WOW just WOW I love this it is just so great.
November 12th, 2023 15:12
Hey! said:
WOW just WOW I love this it is just so great.
November 12th, 2023 15:12
I Love You
Thomas W Case said:
Happy b-day, the 10th was mine and my brother\'s is the 11th like yours. Scorpios rule. Great job.
November 12th, 2023 15:02
Thomas W Case said:
Happy b-day, the 10th was mine and my brother\'s is the 11th like yours. Scorpios rule. Great job.
November 12th, 2023 15:02
Where did Love go?
Thomas W Case said:
There is pain in love, but there is also beauty.
November 9th, 2023 10:02
Thomas W Case said:
There is pain in love, but there is also beauty.
November 9th, 2023 10:02
I Fell in Love With the Dark
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful poem. That\'s how the dark works. You nailed this one.
November 8th, 2023 20:46
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful poem. That\'s how the dark works. You nailed this one.
November 8th, 2023 20:46
What Hurts?
NinjaGirl said:
Stuff surely does hurt. Very beautiful expression, you are extremely talented.
November 6th, 2023 21:56
NinjaGirl said:
Stuff surely does hurt. Very beautiful expression, you are extremely talented.
November 6th, 2023 21:56
My I am From
Thomas W Case said:
You write very well from sadness, I would like to see how you write from joy, or a sense of wonder, or different emotions. I hope all is well for you. Nothing like art to cleanse the soul.
October 31st, 2023 16:40
Thomas W Case said:
You write very well from sadness, I would like to see how you write from joy, or a sense of wonder, or different emotions. I hope all is well for you. Nothing like art to cleanse the soul.
October 31st, 2023 16:40
My I am From
dtrusss said:
This is raw and rad. Good on you for leaving. Doing so is like dropping alcohol and coffee. You have to relearn associations of comfort that have become so standard. Keep on expressing and believing that the right change will come! Remember there was once a day before y\'all met where the thought of him was absent. There, you will return in time! Be well
October 31st, 2023 15:10
dtrusss said:
This is raw and rad. Good on you for leaving. Doing so is like dropping alcohol and coffee. You have to relearn associations of comfort that have become so standard. Keep on expressing and believing that the right change will come! Remember there was once a day before y\'all met where the thought of him was absent. There, you will return in time! Be well
October 31st, 2023 15:10
Father of Force
Thomas W Case said:
The level of vulnerability and transparency are very moving. Hang on little sparrow. It\'s always darkest before the dawn. Great write. Very brave. You aren\'t alone.
October 30th, 2023 17:02
Thomas W Case said:
The level of vulnerability and transparency are very moving. Hang on little sparrow. It\'s always darkest before the dawn. Great write. Very brave. You aren\'t alone.
October 30th, 2023 17:02
The Meeting With Someone I Once Loved
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. The theme is universal. And you put into words what others might not be able to do. Gritty and real. I love the honesty and transparency.
October 30th, 2023 16:54
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. The theme is universal. And you put into words what others might not be able to do. Gritty and real. I love the honesty and transparency.
October 30th, 2023 16:54
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