Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
The Man in the White Coat
Cloie said:
This is hilarious! The ending made me chuckle. Great job!
March 7th, 2024 09:16
Cloie said:
This is hilarious! The ending made me chuckle. Great job!
March 7th, 2024 09:16
Out of Earshot
orchidee said:
That\'s sounds noisy - chattering, bells, laughing, whistling, etc! lol.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
orchidee said:
That\'s sounds noisy - chattering, bells, laughing, whistling, etc! lol.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
The Man in the White Coat
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tom, some people are like that.
Andy
March 7th, 2024 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tom, some people are like that.
Andy
March 7th, 2024 02:07
The Man in the White Coat
JulesBurnsit said:
Ah haha!! Perhaps the anorak was the cause of the rash that caused the visit to the doctor that caused the visit to the chemist that caused the... rain? Hmm? Your post made my day! Thanks!
March 6th, 2024 17:04
JulesBurnsit said:
Ah haha!! Perhaps the anorak was the cause of the rash that caused the visit to the doctor that caused the visit to the chemist that caused the... rain? Hmm? Your post made my day! Thanks!
March 6th, 2024 17:04
The Man in the White Coat
orchidee said:
Doh! Which is it to be - chemist or doctor first?
They say chemist can help with lesser ailments, and to try them first sometimes.
I shall do a one-liner poem of the same title, with the following words......came to take me away! lol.
So... if we want to know the weather, visit the chemist!
March 6th, 2024 11:07
orchidee said:
Doh! Which is it to be - chemist or doctor first?
They say chemist can help with lesser ailments, and to try them first sometimes.
I shall do a one-liner poem of the same title, with the following words......came to take me away! lol.
So... if we want to know the weather, visit the chemist!
March 6th, 2024 11:07
The Man in the White Coat
Neville said:
white coats used to be our compulsory uniform but are no longer required or necessary ..
I think it was all the jokes & jibes about the men in white coats that sealed the fate of em .. I don\'t even wear a suit to work these days ..
Anyway, this was great, a real fun filled poem that got me going no end ..
p.s.
Tom no p.s .. Neville 😎👍
March 6th, 2024 10:55
Neville said:
white coats used to be our compulsory uniform but are no longer required or necessary ..
I think it was all the jokes & jibes about the men in white coats that sealed the fate of em .. I don\'t even wear a suit to work these days ..
Anyway, this was great, a real fun filled poem that got me going no end ..
p.s.
Tom no p.s .. Neville 😎👍
March 6th, 2024 10:55
The Man in the White Coat
Accidental Poet said:
Doctors aren\'t supposed to put you off like that, your pharmacist is correct that your doctor should be a professional and prescribe medication that your pharmacist can help you with. If everyone does their job, your rash will be a rash of the past. 😉👍
March 6th, 2024 09:39
Accidental Poet said:
Doctors aren\'t supposed to put you off like that, your pharmacist is correct that your doctor should be a professional and prescribe medication that your pharmacist can help you with. If everyone does their job, your rash will be a rash of the past. 😉👍
March 6th, 2024 09:39
The Man in the White Coat
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 You win some and lose some. Just don\'t wear a brown anorak, those are for flashers. Hey I hope the rash cleared up! You do make me chuckle. 🌹
March 6th, 2024 09:22
Teddy.15 said:
lol 🤣 You win some and lose some. Just don\'t wear a brown anorak, those are for flashers. Hey I hope the rash cleared up! You do make me chuckle. 🌹
March 6th, 2024 09:22
The Man in the White Coat
Bella Shepard said:
This is delightful, I smiled all the way through, and was rewarded at the end with the chuckle of the day. Thank you dear friend, the sun is shining now all over!
March 6th, 2024 09:06
Bella Shepard said:
This is delightful, I smiled all the way through, and was rewarded at the end with the chuckle of the day. Thank you dear friend, the sun is shining now all over!
March 6th, 2024 09:06
The Man in the White Coat
Doggerel Dave said:
I too have those inconclusive debates from time to time, Tom. The question is just when to cut my losses and make a strategic retreat....
March 6th, 2024 06:40
Doggerel Dave said:
I too have those inconclusive debates from time to time, Tom. The question is just when to cut my losses and make a strategic retreat....
March 6th, 2024 06:40
Making A Night of It
Thomas W Case said:
I love Indian food, but waiting hours for it is out of the question. Superb write. I feel I was there.
March 5th, 2024 13:31
Thomas W Case said:
I love Indian food, but waiting hours for it is out of the question. Superb write. I feel I was there.
March 5th, 2024 13:31
Making A Night of It
Neville said:
sounds like your wife has got her head screwed on write .. I think I would have said the same thing ..
March 5th, 2024 13:17
Neville said:
sounds like your wife has got her head screwed on write .. I think I would have said the same thing ..
March 5th, 2024 13:17
Making A Night of It
Teddy.15 said:
Angry customers storm
to the bar, waving their
hands in frustration
saying they\'ve been sitting
at their table for an hour
and nobody had been
near to take their drinks order
Are you sure you weren\'t on Italy? lol 😆
March 5th, 2024 08:49
Teddy.15 said:
Angry customers storm
to the bar, waving their
hands in frustration
saying they\'ve been sitting
at their table for an hour
and nobody had been
near to take their drinks order
Are you sure you weren\'t on Italy? lol 😆
March 5th, 2024 08:49
Making A Night of It
Goldfinch60 said:
This can happen sometimes Tom but luckily not very often, Good words.
Andy
March 5th, 2024 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
This can happen sometimes Tom but luckily not very often, Good words.
Andy
March 5th, 2024 02:25
Making A Night of It
Cassie58 said:
My guess is their business won’t last much longer. Entertainment of a different kind. I think leaving was the best thing you could have done Tom. You penned a good read out of chaos.
March 5th, 2024 01:28
Cassie58 said:
My guess is their business won’t last much longer. Entertainment of a different kind. I think leaving was the best thing you could have done Tom. You penned a good read out of chaos.
March 5th, 2024 01:28
Making A Night of It
Doggerel Dave said:
Luckily (because it\'s the only one locally) my Indian is great - does wonderful vego dishes which suits me just fine.
However, your piece here made me laugh with recognition as I did experience a very similar joint while on holiday a couple of years back at the Taj Mahal* in a town I shan\'t name to protect the guilty.
*Not its real name
Good write, Tom - but I don\'t want to hear of it again.....
March 4th, 2024 21:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Luckily (because it\'s the only one locally) my Indian is great - does wonderful vego dishes which suits me just fine.
However, your piece here made me laugh with recognition as I did experience a very similar joint while on holiday a couple of years back at the Taj Mahal* in a town I shan\'t name to protect the guilty.
*Not its real name
Good write, Tom - but I don\'t want to hear of it again.....
March 4th, 2024 21:10
Making A Night of It
Summersounds68 said:
Tom, reminds me of some restaurants in the Treasure Valley of Idaho where I live.
~ Sonia
March 4th, 2024 11:52
Summersounds68 said:
Tom, reminds me of some restaurants in the Treasure Valley of Idaho where I live.
~ Sonia
March 4th, 2024 11:52
Making A Night of It
Accidental Poet said:
Your wife made a really good choice Tom. Hope you were able to find a nicer place to enjoy your evening dinner.
March 4th, 2024 11:00
Accidental Poet said:
Your wife made a really good choice Tom. Hope you were able to find a nicer place to enjoy your evening dinner.
March 4th, 2024 11:00
On Meeting the Poet Laureate
Cassie58 said:
Some people do not live up to expectation Tom. Plenty more poets in the sea. This one poemed was rude .
March 1st, 2024 11:10
Cassie58 said:
Some people do not live up to expectation Tom. Plenty more poets in the sea. This one poemed was rude .
March 1st, 2024 11:10
On Meeting the Poet Laureate
Neville said:
reminds me more than a tad of your poem you posted yesterday .. how rude .. or maybe he was having a bad day and was p\'d off ... You just played a blinder here Tom .. 10/10 at least .. Neville
March 1st, 2024 04:33
Neville said:
reminds me more than a tad of your poem you posted yesterday .. how rude .. or maybe he was having a bad day and was p\'d off ... You just played a blinder here Tom .. 10/10 at least .. Neville
March 1st, 2024 04:33
On Meeting the Poet Laureate
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tom, some people are just like that.
Andy
March 1st, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Tom, some people are just like that.
Andy
March 1st, 2024 02:23
On Meeting the Poet Laureate
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work Tom. You make the scene come alive.
February 29th, 2024 10:47
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work Tom. You make the scene come alive.
February 29th, 2024 10:47
On Meeting the Poet Laureate
orchidee said:
So you\'ve met me - a Poet Laureate! I\'m getting too big for me boots now. lol.
February 29th, 2024 08:07
orchidee said:
So you\'ve met me - a Poet Laureate! I\'m getting too big for me boots now. lol.
February 29th, 2024 08:07
On Meeting the Poet Laureate
orchidee said:
Do you know, some folk may be good in their writings, etc, but meet them in person and they are grouches.
Ooh, a bit of laureating from him - a grunt! lol.
February 29th, 2024 08:07
orchidee said:
Do you know, some folk may be good in their writings, etc, but meet them in person and they are grouches.
Ooh, a bit of laureating from him - a grunt! lol.
February 29th, 2024 08:07
It\'s Not Cool. It\'s Rude.
Hopeless/the problem said:
Its very true some people are just rude. And its hard. Well written
Lil
February 27th, 2024 06:41
Hopeless/the problem said:
Its very true some people are just rude. And its hard. Well written
Lil
February 27th, 2024 06:41
For My Teachers
rhmn_7 said:
Good or bad, you always learn something from your teachers, don\'t you?
February 27th, 2024 03:58
rhmn_7 said:
Good or bad, you always learn something from your teachers, don\'t you?
February 27th, 2024 03:58
It\'s Not Cool. It\'s Rude.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true with some people Tom.
Andy
February 27th, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true with some people Tom.
Andy
February 27th, 2024 02:20
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