Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan



The All-Inclusive Breakfast
TobaniNataiella said:

Very Entertaining read, thank you

December 2nd, 2024 20:55

Friday Night Hockey
Kevin Hulme said:

I remember seeing a Fight and a Hockey Game broke out.
The only time I went to a Ice-Rink was to see Alice Cooper many Moons back.
Good Poem.

November 24th, 2024 15:54

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
Kevin Hulme said:

A Shed was good enough for Roald Dahl.

November 23rd, 2024 20:17

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
Goldfinch60 said:

This one has posted, I don\'t have a shed but as get up early I have a couple of hours to myself before the missus gets up, that is whne i write.

Andy

November 23rd, 2024 02:41

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
Doggerel Dave said:

I understand the need for your own small space, I have that now. My cupboard (read small self-contained bedsit) is all mine...

I cannot understand why you would be getting error messages, Tom. I just complete mine on Word then copy and paste. I can\'t think that there is any other way.

November 22nd, 2024 17:36

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
Cassie58 said:

You want your own man cave Tom, and why not? A little bit of your own space. Love a cup of Earl Grey by the way.

Hope you sort out the tech problems soon. Good to read you.

November 22nd, 2024 15:48

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
Thomas W Case said:

Technology can be such a pain in the ass. Good work.

November 22nd, 2024 13:12

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
sorenbarrett said:

Don’t know about you, Tom, but as for me if I just sit and think of a poem that doesn’t come, I have to be doing other things during the day. I hope you find your shed and love the poem.

November 22nd, 2024 12:52

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tom

November 22nd, 2024 10:39

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
orchidee said:

Oh no, Plan B, an alternative poems due to blips!

November 22nd, 2024 09:38

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
arqios said:

In this day and age it is quite a production to write the way it used to be done. I remember getting quite soiled re-inking the typewriter ribbon because the me4chants no longer stocked them. Oh but the feel is superb!

November 22nd, 2024 09:00

Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words)
Cheeky Missy said:

You\'ve successfully posted and I, for one, am VERY grateful. Wow! This beauty trips down the page like the idea is a waltzing jest preening itself for the limelight. Oh! But tis so romantic! \"Just a shed...\" and the charming notion unrolls like the red carpet for the gods. How delectable! Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. [My, I\'ve had an awful 12 hours and can\'t be thankful enough I chanced to drop in just now.] FYI, where I normally was always logged in to this site, for days now I\'ve been locked out every time I click the email link and forced to log in. Wonder what\'s afoot?

November 22nd, 2024 08:26

Getting To That Age
Cheeky Missy said:

You\'re downright hilarious! What a regular riot. I declare. This is too beautifully rendered with a weighty poignancy set against a healthy sense of good humor. When I began to apply the metaphor in my own case I forgot to recall how much my late father cherished old Mercedes. Thank you very much for sharing. Me loves.

November 21st, 2024 02:10

Getting To That Age
Kevin Hulme said:

Then don’t wear a Bonnet .
Enjoyable Poem.

November 20th, 2024 20:05

Getting To That Age
NafisaSB said:

only 50, and you notice this..i am way older and can relate to most of what you have written, but life is for living so am carrying on merrily, regardless..


November 20th, 2024 00:39

Getting To That Age
Neville said:



That\'s because you\'ll soon be all growed up .. and welcome to the real world Tom

November 19th, 2024 12:22

Getting To That Age
sorenbarrett said:

I hear you Tom been there for a few years and it only seems to get worse each coming year. I’m wondering when the ignition system won’t work anymore or when the battery will be dead and I’ll need a jump. The plugs are not all firing evenly and there’s a lot of stains on the interior upholstery as well as a few tears.

November 19th, 2024 11:59

Getting To That Age
Goldfinch60 said:

You are a mere youngster Tom I am now seventy six and the motor is certainly getting slower but at least it starts every morning. LOL

Andy

November 19th, 2024 02:18

Getting To That Age
Dan Williams said:

You must be reading my mail. Nicely done.

November 19th, 2024 01:15

Getting To That Age
Mutley Ravishes said:

Haha! Nice write, Tom.

Anyways
It doesn`t have to be that way
A sage saves
The waters of life
His body doesn`t go
Dry



November 18th, 2024 21:30

Getting To That Age
arqios said:

That’s how things are these days; creak, creak 👍🏻

November 18th, 2024 16:58

Getting To That Age
Doggerel Dave said:

Tell me about it....!

November 18th, 2024 16:25

Getting To That Age
Thomas W Case said:

I hear you. It\'s hell getting old. Great work.

November 18th, 2024 16:07

Getting To That Age
Cassie58 said:

Hi Tom, you are still a young un. By the time you reach my age you will need regular services and a yearly MOT. Yes, creaking, niggling, it gets worse lol. My solution is to drink more. Red vino in moderation is a fine medicine lol. A fun poem. Most entertaining.

November 18th, 2024 15:02

Getting To That Age
orchidee said:

Keep well hopefully. Depends if we\'re half-empty glass person I suppose. If so, we could become hypochondriacs!

November 18th, 2024 07:09

Words On Paper
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

November 15th, 2024 16:30

The Mingle Classes
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Tom, some people are like that but always treat all as equals.

Andy

November 14th, 2024 03:11

The Mingle Classes
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow! Too prettily rendered to effect, oh how delightfully this packs a smack! Excellent imagery and superb poignancy, I can\'t but adore this lovely number so winsomely rendered. Thank you very much for sharing!

November 14th, 2024 01:53

The Mingle Classes
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ve been to that club and didn\'t like it that much. Everything was overpriced. Did like the write though

November 13th, 2024 21:36

The Mingle Classes
Thomas W Case said:

Well done. You convey the feeling of being like a fish out of water. I relate.

November 13th, 2024 20:08

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