Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan



National Poetry Day 2025
NafisaSB said:

so true - for me too the muse strikes at odd times, and when needed - it takes a holiday...


October 7th, 2025 03:04

Point Taken
rebellion_in_sanity said:

I felt it was a sly tongue in cheek satirical take on friendship ( or whatever is cliamed within its ambit). Advanced apologies- I have the wonderful habit of flying off on a wrong tangent.

October 3rd, 2025 09:32

National Poetry Day 2025
Goldfinch60 said:

Well you found the words Tom.

Andy

October 3rd, 2025 01:48

National Poetry Day 2025
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Happy National Poetry Day, Tom! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 2nd, 2025 16:51

National Poetry Day 2025
orchidee said:

Now you\'ve said it! lol.

October 2nd, 2025 10:11

National Poetry Day 2025
arqios said:

A play of words will suffice, methinks🕊️🙏🏻

October 2nd, 2025 06:04

National Poetry Day 2025
sorenbarrett said:

Thank you for the announcement in such poetic form. Set in rhyme this poem falls poignantly in time for those who have not composed something to do so. A fun read although I have no poem on the theme of play.

October 2nd, 2025 04:03

Point Taken
Cheeky Missy said:

I guess you remind me of my late mother\'s wise note that true friends are rare and few, the majority not worth the trouble we take and misery we endure. On the other hand those latter are likewise whom despise us when we ask a favour. I\'ve been so disgusted with myself for trusting them. Beautifully rendered and charming with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. This pretty number should resonate with countless.

October 1st, 2025 12:56

Point Taken
Goldfinch60 said:

I would have helped you Tom.

Andy

October 1st, 2025 01:05

Point Taken
arqios said:

Hope your fortnight goes well, Tom. Will be here at the ‘side when you get back. 🕊🙏🏻

September 30th, 2025 18:59

Point Taken
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Tom, this is quietly powerful...the denied pound turning into a mirror of friendship’s imbalance. Honest, wounded, and clear. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛ Whatever is pulling you away the next couple of weeks, will miss you mate! See you on the other side!

September 30th, 2025 17:45

Point Taken
sorenbarrett said:

Words and actions not always the same. A facade friend just for appearances or a faux friend for decoration. Lovely

September 30th, 2025 03:59

Bad Week Breakdown
Thomas W Case said:

Lol. Fantastic work.

September 29th, 2025 08:32

Bad Week Breakdown
Goldfinch60 said:

Fun words Tom, we all have our weaknesses.

Andy

September 27th, 2025 01:00

Bad Week Breakdown
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Tom, this is comic timing at its finest. The bad week, the shame, the tension building…and then the twist with wrestling hits perfectly. Relatable, funny, and so well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 26th, 2025 09:12

Bad Week Breakdown
sorenbarrett said:

We all have a child in us even when we have grown up. Nothing wrong with a child inside or out. A fun read Tom

September 26th, 2025 08:08

Bad Week Breakdown
Doggerel Dave said:

Mud wrestling?😜

September 26th, 2025 06:49

But Sleep Won\'t Come
Thomas W Case said:

Boom. Powerful work.

September 24th, 2025 20:21

But Sleep Won\'t Come
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a true story Tom, it is amazing how many things can go through your mind when trying to get to sleep.

I don\'t need to worry about my passport though, the last one I had was back in 1966. LOL

Andy

September 24th, 2025 01:44

But Sleep Won\'t Come
orchidee said:

Yes, sometimes we\'re ready to sleep about an hour before it\'s time to get up! I\'m retired now, though been semi-retired for some years anyway, with redundancy from my last job. I could get up any time now, I suppose, but like to get up early-ish!

September 23rd, 2025 10:50

But Sleep Won\'t Come
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Tom, this captures the restless mind so vividly, my friend. It feels like insomnia itself is narrating...relentless, frustrating, and all too human. The humor keeps it sharp, but the exhaustion is real. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 23rd, 2025 07:47

But Sleep Won\'t Come
Doggerel Dave said:

Yeh...last night... can\'t stand another night like that...Forget the sauce (was HP actually) check: don\'t need the passport now ... ain\'t got a dog (couldn\'t find one).. shouldn\'t have any trouble... Only got one front door - had to check - locked ....two am it must a been.....Yeh woke at six, no need of an alarm..Tom, believe me, you ain\'t the only one....

September 23rd, 2025 06:27

But Sleep Won\'t Come
sorenbarrett said:

All those things that go through the mind after one lays down. Then there is the reticence to get back up to check anything and the grinding irritation that comes with laying there not being able to let it go. Well written and identifiable

September 23rd, 2025 06:05

The Unheard Spoken Word
NafisaSB said:

i agree with you completely - somehow i feel these gatherings are just an avenue for some narcissists to boast about their creations, and ignore the lovely work floating around - maybe that is why i avoid such meetings, and prefer to just post my work in selected forums

September 22nd, 2025 23:51

The Unheard Spoken Word
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent wok, Tom.

September 20th, 2025 23:07

The Unheard Spoken Word
Zephyrschild said:

I\'ve had the same unfortunate experience with a zoom poetry group. All the physical poets chatted amongst themselves, barely giving the poet a passing nod.

September 20th, 2025 17:58

The Unheard Spoken Word
2781 said:

I thought it was all about me!

September 18th, 2025 02:16

The Unheard Spoken Word
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Tom, many just do not listen to many things.

Andy

September 18th, 2025 01:41

The Unheard Spoken Word
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:

Amused in the narrator’s wry reflection on the experience. Nicely written.

September 17th, 2025 14:01

The Unheard Spoken Word
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Tom, this lingers…the sting of being unheard, the chatty crowd, that one neighbor dismissing with “I wasn’t really listening.” You captured the disillusionment perfectly...the excitement turned to lesson learned. Honest, sharp, and true. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 17th, 2025 11:04

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