Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
Under Pressure
Goldfinch60 said:
Well these words are fine Tom, just keep writing them.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Well these words are fine Tom, just keep writing them.
Andy
May 20th, 2025 01:23
The Return of Mrs Muse
NafisaSB said:
i hope she complies and throws away the binbags, and never leaves you - but stays with you forever
May 20th, 2025 01:09
NafisaSB said:
i hope she complies and throws away the binbags, and never leaves you - but stays with you forever
May 20th, 2025 01:09
Under Pressure
Mutley Ravishes said:
These days I see writer\'s block as a time of fermentation, not a block. Is anything truly original? Does it need to be?
The ending cracked me up! Great write, Tom.
May 19th, 2025 19:39
Mutley Ravishes said:
These days I see writer\'s block as a time of fermentation, not a block. Is anything truly original? Does it need to be?
The ending cracked me up! Great write, Tom.
May 19th, 2025 19:39
Under Pressure
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing that song. Argh! Put earplugs in. LOL.
May 19th, 2025 09:21
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna sing that song. Argh! Put earplugs in. LOL.
May 19th, 2025 09:21
Under Pressure
Cheeky Missy said:
We\'ve apparently reached the age where the ancient poets opined they missed childhood, and I\'m missing my parents and home more than anything nowadays. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a charming, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Me likes.
May 19th, 2025 09:05
Cheeky Missy said:
We\'ve apparently reached the age where the ancient poets opined they missed childhood, and I\'m missing my parents and home more than anything nowadays. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a charming, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Me likes.
May 19th, 2025 09:05
Under Pressure
sorenbarrett said:
Writers block so identifiable to anyone that writes. A fun read that also makes sense. Oh by the way titles are often the hardest part of the poem. Loved it
May 19th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Writers block so identifiable to anyone that writes. A fun read that also makes sense. Oh by the way titles are often the hardest part of the poem. Loved it
May 19th, 2025 08:37
Under Pressure
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Love the angst and symbolic nature of the writer\'s plight.
May 19th, 2025 08:33
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Love the angst and symbolic nature of the writer\'s plight.
May 19th, 2025 08:33
Under Pressure
arqios said:
But oh not as repetitious as the song...it\'s now playing in my head... As for the name of a cocktail drink- brilliant! Here\'s wishing you wellποΈππ»
May 19th, 2025 08:32
arqios said:
But oh not as repetitious as the song...it\'s now playing in my head... As for the name of a cocktail drink- brilliant! Here\'s wishing you wellποΈππ»
May 19th, 2025 08:32
The Return of Mrs Muse
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'ve missed you something dreadful. Since poetry is always at your elbow, please don\'t ignore her. Beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 19th, 2025 04:40
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'ve missed you something dreadful. Since poetry is always at your elbow, please don\'t ignore her. Beautifully rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 19th, 2025 04:40
The Return of Mrs Muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe her too! Keep rockin\' your writes! Love this one, my friend! πΉπ
May 16th, 2025 20:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I believe her too! Keep rockin\' your writes! Love this one, my friend! πΉπ
May 16th, 2025 20:20
The Return of Mrs Muse
Kevin Hulme said:
A muse is like the Cycle of the Moon: She\'s here then gone.
And you have to wait until She comes around again. Lovely Poem.
May 16th, 2025 19:36
Kevin Hulme said:
A muse is like the Cycle of the Moon: She\'s here then gone.
And you have to wait until She comes around again. Lovely Poem.
May 16th, 2025 19:36
The Return of Mrs Muse
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful metaphor. Right on and write on.
May 16th, 2025 12:00
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful metaphor. Right on and write on.
May 16th, 2025 12:00
The Return of Mrs Muse
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on Tom - more insights and observations of life and folks please. Poetry is only the medium - I want the messageπ
May 16th, 2025 06:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on Tom - more insights and observations of life and folks please. Poetry is only the medium - I want the messageπ
May 16th, 2025 06:07
The Return of Mrs Muse
sorenbarrett said:
I have had that visit as well and well we are still waiting to see the outcome. Good poem Tom
May 16th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
I have had that visit as well and well we are still waiting to see the outcome. Good poem Tom
May 16th, 2025 04:57
The Return of Mrs Muse
arqios said:
Good to have you back, Tom; or should we roll out the red carpet for the Muse!ποΈππ»
May 16th, 2025 04:44
arqios said:
Good to have you back, Tom; or should we roll out the red carpet for the Muse!ποΈππ»
May 16th, 2025 04:44
The Return of Mrs Muse
Victor Bolshov said:
Very nice, Tom! She\'s light-o\'-love, though, I believe I saw her disappearing through my window while I was packing my laptop this morning. Only a note left on my pillow - \"maybe you\'ll see me again\"
May 16th, 2025 02:35
Victor Bolshov said:
Very nice, Tom! She\'s light-o\'-love, though, I believe I saw her disappearing through my window while I was packing my laptop this morning. Only a note left on my pillow - \"maybe you\'ll see me again\"
May 16th, 2025 02:35
The Return of Mrs Muse
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I hope she is around for a long time, enjoyed the read
May 16th, 2025 02:14
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, I hope she is around for a long time, enjoyed the read
May 16th, 2025 02:14
On a bright cold Sunday morning
rrodriguez said:
Not similar, but a disaster brought havoc. A power plant broke down in Puerto Rico and we were without electricity for several days.. I got my generator out, not without hurting my back. Thanks for sharing; I enjoyed its flow and details.
April 19th, 2025 08:59
rrodriguez said:
Not similar, but a disaster brought havoc. A power plant broke down in Puerto Rico and we were without electricity for several days.. I got my generator out, not without hurting my back. Thanks for sharing; I enjoyed its flow and details.
April 19th, 2025 08:59
Poetry isn\'t for me
gatiuski said:
A message that resonates with me. Poetry is for everyone!
April 7th, 2025 17:31
gatiuski said:
A message that resonates with me. Poetry is for everyone!
April 7th, 2025 17:31
On a bright cold Sunday morning
NafisaSB said:
it\'s so well described can almost visualize you walking out - hope the day went well thereafter...
April 6th, 2025 02:45
NafisaSB said:
it\'s so well described can almost visualize you walking out - hope the day went well thereafter...
April 6th, 2025 02:45
WIP (Work In Progress)
Kevin Hulme said:
I hope my lifes W.I .P. is Written by P G Wodehouse and not Stephen King.
Nice one.
April 1st, 2025 20:38
Kevin Hulme said:
I hope my lifes W.I .P. is Written by P G Wodehouse and not Stephen King.
Nice one.
April 1st, 2025 20:38
WIP (Work In Progress)
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tom, we are all work in progress throughout our lives.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Tom, we are all work in progress throughout our lives.
Andy
April 1st, 2025 01:50
WIP (Work In Progress)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Indeed, I have two works in progress, longer pieces that I am not even quite sure what I am going to do with it once I finish. One is a narrative poem that is currently 13 1/3 pages long and 5,767 words. It\'s almost finished...but yeah. π³ I cannot even begin to pretend to know how many hours spent working on it. Anyway, this is very true and well expressed my friend. It gets a fave from me. πΉπ
March 31st, 2025 12:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Indeed, I have two works in progress, longer pieces that I am not even quite sure what I am going to do with it once I finish. One is a narrative poem that is currently 13 1/3 pages long and 5,767 words. It\'s almost finished...but yeah. π³ I cannot even begin to pretend to know how many hours spent working on it. Anyway, this is very true and well expressed my friend. It gets a fave from me. πΉπ
March 31st, 2025 12:34
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