Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
Prolific
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful metaphor. Writing is a bit like cooking.
August 7th, 2024 10:31
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful metaphor. Writing is a bit like cooking.
August 7th, 2024 10:31
Prolific
Doggerel Dave said:
Just don\'t bewail your state here when inspiration (muse?) deserts you - I\'ve done it, many here have too. Just got to relax, and keep that notebook plus writing implement by the bed....
You do just fine to me, Tom
August 7th, 2024 08:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Just don\'t bewail your state here when inspiration (muse?) deserts you - I\'ve done it, many here have too. Just got to relax, and keep that notebook plus writing implement by the bed....
You do just fine to me, Tom
August 7th, 2024 08:36
Prolific
orchidee said:
No use keep going up church spires all the time - aspiring! lol. I suppose we have to get round to the actual doing/writing of it! lol.
August 7th, 2024 08:20
orchidee said:
No use keep going up church spires all the time - aspiring! lol. I suppose we have to get round to the actual doing/writing of it! lol.
August 7th, 2024 08:20
Prolific
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice. The more you write the more practice you will get and the more people that will read and the greater the chance that many of those will be great. Nicely stated
August 7th, 2024 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice. The more you write the more practice you will get and the more people that will read and the greater the chance that many of those will be great. Nicely stated
August 7th, 2024 06:32
On Hearing the Sea Gulls
Thomas W Case said:
Great work. It is amazing how certain sounds take us back in time.
August 2nd, 2024 17:32
Thomas W Case said:
Great work. It is amazing how certain sounds take us back in time.
August 2nd, 2024 17:32
On Hearing the Sea Gulls
Neville said:
I remember those day and so well .. thanks for bringing them back to me Tom .. this is really smashing ..
August 2nd, 2024 07:38
Neville said:
I remember those day and so well .. thanks for bringing them back to me Tom .. this is really smashing ..
August 2nd, 2024 07:38
On Hearing the Sea Gulls
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom, hearing seagulls in the city can take you back to times at the seaside.
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom, hearing seagulls in the city can take you back to times at the seaside.
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:40
On Hearing the Sea Gulls
Dan Williams said:
Great imagery, which is the heart of poetry. Nice work.
August 2nd, 2024 00:20
Dan Williams said:
Great imagery, which is the heart of poetry. Nice work.
August 2nd, 2024 00:20
On Hearing the Sea Gulls
Cassie58 said:
I enjoyed the sea side nostalgia here Tom and the wonderful imagery your words offered. Sea gulls can be both a menace and beautiful. I love to watch them in flight. Happy Thursday.
August 1st, 2024 11:51
Cassie58 said:
I enjoyed the sea side nostalgia here Tom and the wonderful imagery your words offered. Sea gulls can be both a menace and beautiful. I love to watch them in flight. Happy Thursday.
August 1st, 2024 11:51
On Hearing the Sea Gulls
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic in its feeling and yet upbeat. Wonderful memories of the past create the present joy. Nicely written with great images.
August 1st, 2024 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic in its feeling and yet upbeat. Wonderful memories of the past create the present joy. Nicely written with great images.
August 1st, 2024 07:38
The Seat by the Fire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your poem! It really captures that cozy feeling of being alone in a pub, which I can totally relate to. The imagery of a pint of ale and a good book creates such a warm and inviting atmosphere.Thanks for sharing your perspective—there\'s something special about finding joy in those simple moments. Keep up the great work!
July 31st, 2024 18:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your poem! It really captures that cozy feeling of being alone in a pub, which I can totally relate to. The imagery of a pint of ale and a good book creates such a warm and inviting atmosphere.Thanks for sharing your perspective—there\'s something special about finding joy in those simple moments. Keep up the great work!
July 31st, 2024 18:15
A Genuine Fake
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people can be very persuasive Dylan, oops, sorry Tom\' LOL
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Some people can be very persuasive Dylan, oops, sorry Tom\' LOL
Andy
July 31st, 2024 01:51
A Genuine Fake
orchidee said:
A fine write Tom.
My ditty is more sinister - and daft:
This guy comes up to me in the pub
An aggressive guy - I didn\'t know he was
I said \'Hello\'.
He said \'What do you mean \'Hello?\', and punched me on the nose! (lol).
There\'s no talking to some people. Doh!
July 30th, 2024 08:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Tom.
My ditty is more sinister - and daft:
This guy comes up to me in the pub
An aggressive guy - I didn\'t know he was
I said \'Hello\'.
He said \'What do you mean \'Hello?\', and punched me on the nose! (lol).
There\'s no talking to some people. Doh!
July 30th, 2024 08:53
A Genuine Fake
Doggerel Dave said:
The smart and sophisticated may well say “caveat emptor”, while yer mates in ’t pub may well say “hees dun it agen”,
Good fun, even though I don’t believe a word of it, Tom.
July 30th, 2024 07:56
Doggerel Dave said:
The smart and sophisticated may well say “caveat emptor”, while yer mates in ’t pub may well say “hees dun it agen”,
Good fun, even though I don’t believe a word of it, Tom.
July 30th, 2024 07:56
A Genuine Fake
Cassie58 said:
A fun write Tom. Much enjoyed. A genuine Tom Dylan suits me. Happy Tuesday.
July 30th, 2024 07:18
Cassie58 said:
A fun write Tom. Much enjoyed. A genuine Tom Dylan suits me. Happy Tuesday.
July 30th, 2024 07:18
A Genuine Fake
sorenbarrett said:
It reminds me or the guy that tried to sell me my father\'s stolen watch. A run read.
July 30th, 2024 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
It reminds me or the guy that tried to sell me my father\'s stolen watch. A run read.
July 30th, 2024 06:37
A Genuine Fake
Neville said:
I just knew you would be famous one day soon mate .. bravo .. N :)
July 30th, 2024 06:08
Neville said:
I just knew you would be famous one day soon mate .. bravo .. N :)
July 30th, 2024 06:08
The Seat by the Fire
Goldfinch60 said:
In the past I have seen many like that and occasionally it would have been me. Good words Tom.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
In the past I have seen many like that and occasionally it would have been me. Good words Tom.
Andy
July 26th, 2024 01:12
The Seat by the Fire
orchidee said:
Fido, me talking and reading dog, pinches the seat by the fire, while he reads poems and barks at anyone not marking poems 18+ where they should be! Then barks at me if I try to turf him out of the chair. lol
He\'s friendly really - bark worse than his non-existent bite.
July 25th, 2024 14:18
orchidee said:
Fido, me talking and reading dog, pinches the seat by the fire, while he reads poems and barks at anyone not marking poems 18+ where they should be! Then barks at me if I try to turf him out of the chair. lol
He\'s friendly really - bark worse than his non-existent bite.
July 25th, 2024 14:18
The Seat by the Fire
Neville said:
I can not rate this highly enough Tom .. you sound like a man of my own heart sir ..
One of your best to date, cheers .. Neville
July 25th, 2024 13:00
Neville said:
I can not rate this highly enough Tom .. you sound like a man of my own heart sir ..
One of your best to date, cheers .. Neville
July 25th, 2024 13:00
The Seat by the Fire
Bella Shepard said:
There is something very special about being on your own in a favorite spot, I really get that. You convey the feeling beautifully!
July 25th, 2024 08:21
Bella Shepard said:
There is something very special about being on your own in a favorite spot, I really get that. You convey the feeling beautifully!
July 25th, 2024 08:21
The Seat by the Fire
Doggerel Dave said:
How did you know, Tom? That time - The Chancer\'s Arms (I think), pint of real ale (founding member of CAMRA) and that book.....ah...memories (the fire, even).
July 25th, 2024 07:48
Doggerel Dave said:
How did you know, Tom? That time - The Chancer\'s Arms (I think), pint of real ale (founding member of CAMRA) and that book.....ah...memories (the fire, even).
July 25th, 2024 07:48
The Seat by the Fire
sorenbarrett said:
We all need our own space and even though a bar may be packed you can always find some space there for yourself. Nice
July 25th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
We all need our own space and even though a bar may be packed you can always find some space there for yourself. Nice
July 25th, 2024 05:33
The Best Medicine
Neville said:
Excellent Tom, I wasn\'t expecting such a cracking punchline .. made me chuckle and truly .. Neville
July 24th, 2024 10:43
Neville said:
Excellent Tom, I wasn\'t expecting such a cracking punchline .. made me chuckle and truly .. Neville
July 24th, 2024 10:43
The Best Medicine
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tom, I hope she got you the book.
Andy
July 24th, 2024 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Tom, I hope she got you the book.
Andy
July 24th, 2024 01:55
The Best Medicine
2781 said:
The spirit of a man will sustain his infirmity; but a wounded spirit who can bear?
July 23rd, 2024 21:12
2781 said:
The spirit of a man will sustain his infirmity; but a wounded spirit who can bear?
July 23rd, 2024 21:12
The Best Medicine
Bella Shepard said:
A good dose of poetry goes a long way to cure the ill, or at least to make it bearable. Such a fun write to read, couldn\'t help but smile all the way through to that perfect punchline.
July 23rd, 2024 12:52
Bella Shepard said:
A good dose of poetry goes a long way to cure the ill, or at least to make it bearable. Such a fun write to read, couldn\'t help but smile all the way through to that perfect punchline.
July 23rd, 2024 12:52
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