Comments received on poems by kaychee
Warriors
Aa Harvey said:
Good poem. Love is hard to find, but it is worth the search.
January 21st, 2017 10:08
Aa Harvey said:
Good poem. Love is hard to find, but it is worth the search.
January 21st, 2017 10:08
A Short Trip
Anthony woodard said:
And thoe the world surrounds me
I\'m overwhelmed by loneliness
Powerful line
January 16th, 2017 07:41
Anthony woodard said:
And thoe the world surrounds me
I\'m overwhelmed by loneliness
Powerful line
January 16th, 2017 07:41
I Met A Man
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing KAYCHEE ~ Love is in the Air. From time to time a SUPERMAN (or in my case a SUPERWOMAN !) crosses our path ! When they are equally enamored with us and promise \"Unfading Love\" ~ life is perfect. Yours BRIAN
January 15th, 2017 03:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing KAYCHEE ~ Love is in the Air. From time to time a SUPERMAN (or in my case a SUPERWOMAN !) crosses our path ! When they are equally enamored with us and promise \"Unfading Love\" ~ life is perfect. Yours BRIAN
January 15th, 2017 03:18
Last Teardrop
Aa Harvey said:
A very interesting story and beautifully written poem. Water is my eye, most faithful mirror...
November 23rd, 2016 09:31
Aa Harvey said:
A very interesting story and beautifully written poem. Water is my eye, most faithful mirror...
November 23rd, 2016 09:31
ART
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KAY ~ Wonderful poem and a wonderful picture. I have had a few Black Girl Friends and they were wonderful tactile and loving and always loved me for being me and i loved them for being them ! Their scent and taste was always wonderful and they enjoyed to explore my white body as i theirs. In my experience there are no real barriers to interracial love ~ for me it is just love and be loved as you sensuous poem suggests ! Please check my poems # Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 12th, 2016 06:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KAY ~ Wonderful poem and a wonderful picture. I have had a few Black Girl Friends and they were wonderful tactile and loving and always loved me for being me and i loved them for being them ! Their scent and taste was always wonderful and they enjoyed to explore my white body as i theirs. In my experience there are no real barriers to interracial love ~ for me it is just love and be loved as you sensuous poem suggests ! Please check my poems # Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
November 12th, 2016 06:56
Thoughts from a cereal bowl
Christina8 said:
Very deep freestyle. I like it! Great job!
October 28th, 2016 06:47
Christina8 said:
Very deep freestyle. I like it! Great job!
October 28th, 2016 06:47
ART
willyweed said:
This is wonderful art you pen.
your poem is very good and was a joy to read! ww
August 22nd, 2016 19:09
willyweed said:
This is wonderful art you pen.
your poem is very good and was a joy to read! ww
August 22nd, 2016 19:09
Last Teardrop
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are so so Beautiful KAYCHEE in your picture and in your painting. You are so so Proud in your picture (YES ~ Black is Perfection) but in your painting you are exposed and crying ! BUT ~ IT IS YOUR LAST TEARDROP. Some idiot has snatched your brushes but he cannot snatch your SPIRIT ! That lives on ~ and on the canvas of your life "Your imperfection will will be made perfect !" Nobody can diminish you ~ no one can make you cry again ! Thanks for sharing your heart ~ THERE WILL BE NO MORE TEARS ~ Love BRIAN.
August 15th, 2016 18:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
You are so so Beautiful KAYCHEE in your picture and in your painting. You are so so Proud in your picture (YES ~ Black is Perfection) but in your painting you are exposed and crying ! BUT ~ IT IS YOUR LAST TEARDROP. Some idiot has snatched your brushes but he cannot snatch your SPIRIT ! That lives on ~ and on the canvas of your life "Your imperfection will will be made perfect !" Nobody can diminish you ~ no one can make you cry again ! Thanks for sharing your heart ~ THERE WILL BE NO MORE TEARS ~ Love BRIAN.
August 15th, 2016 18:04
BLACK LIVES MATTER
PerpetualFlowers said:
I'm sorry that you are forced to still write poems such as this in 2016. It's deplorable that true equality is still not granted to all humans. I would like to speak on behalf of my race and apologize for all WE have put you through. I'm so sorry.
July 8th, 2016 09:39
PerpetualFlowers said:
I'm sorry that you are forced to still write poems such as this in 2016. It's deplorable that true equality is still not granted to all humans. I would like to speak on behalf of my race and apologize for all WE have put you through. I'm so sorry.
July 8th, 2016 09:39
BLACK LIVES MATTER
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KAYCHEE ~ BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL ~ and in God's sight you are equally important and special as me ~ even though we are a different gender and a different colour. What happened in the USA is deplorable especially as it is over 50 years since MLK had a dream (1963) and eight years into Obama's presidency ! I agree BLACK LIVES DO MATTER and (thank GOD) there is much less racial tension in the UK than the USA and the Police don't carry a piece ! Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2016 08:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KAYCHEE ~ BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL ~ and in God's sight you are equally important and special as me ~ even though we are a different gender and a different colour. What happened in the USA is deplorable especially as it is over 50 years since MLK had a dream (1963) and eight years into Obama's presidency ! I agree BLACK LIVES DO MATTER and (thank GOD) there is much less racial tension in the UK than the USA and the Police don't carry a piece ! Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN
July 8th, 2016 08:18
BLACK LIVES MATTER
inink said:
With all the things that have happened as of late I cant help but feel every word you say. Black lives matter just as all lives matter. However the most lethal killer of blacks are blacks them selves. I love everyone equally I don't see a reason to have a preference in color its stupid but lets be real when a black person is killed its all over the media, anyone else dies and it suppressed. I am still with you though especially with the most recent one.
July 8th, 2016 08:13
inink said:
With all the things that have happened as of late I cant help but feel every word you say. Black lives matter just as all lives matter. However the most lethal killer of blacks are blacks them selves. I love everyone equally I don't see a reason to have a preference in color its stupid but lets be real when a black person is killed its all over the media, anyone else dies and it suppressed. I am still with you though especially with the most recent one.
July 8th, 2016 08:13
CONQUERORS
samishere said:
Such an elegant poem. You can really sense the frustration and emotion escalate as the poem progresses. You are very talented, keep at it!
June 13th, 2016 09:03
samishere said:
Such an elegant poem. You can really sense the frustration and emotion escalate as the poem progresses. You are very talented, keep at it!
June 13th, 2016 09:03
LIBERATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI KAY - LOVE the visual and love the imagery in this poem and the structure and Rhyme & Rhythm of it ! 1000 feet ! I managed a 30ft Diving Board (with trepidation) and this is poetic licence. To dive from that height is "sky diving sans 'chute" and the depth of the water infinite. The "underwater world" is always breathtaking - the hydrosphere another Planet ! But we can't stay submerged forever and when we reemerge into the atmosphere it is LIBERATION. Thanks for sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 12th, 2016 10:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI KAY - LOVE the visual and love the imagery in this poem and the structure and Rhyme & Rhythm of it ! 1000 feet ! I managed a 30ft Diving Board (with trepidation) and this is poetic licence. To dive from that height is "sky diving sans 'chute" and the depth of the water infinite. The "underwater world" is always breathtaking - the hydrosphere another Planet ! But we can't stay submerged forever and when we reemerge into the atmosphere it is LIBERATION. Thanks for sharing - Yours BRIAN
June 12th, 2016 10:51
Letter to my Lover\'s Sidechick
almostdead said:
My prayers go out to you as well, nice poem u created something beautiful so u have beauty in you, don't let it waste with sorrow.
April 27th, 2016 12:55
almostdead said:
My prayers go out to you as well, nice poem u created something beautiful so u have beauty in you, don't let it waste with sorrow.
April 27th, 2016 12:55
Letter to my Lover\'s Sidechick
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharin' an' carin' KAYCHEE. Beautifully written poem but O so so sad. Men are idiots and this should not happen to someone as lovely as you are. You are strong in your poem but your weakness is LOVE. I'm prayin' that you will find happiness (in love) again and very soon ! Yours BRIAN
April 27th, 2016 05:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharin' an' carin' KAYCHEE. Beautifully written poem but O so so sad. Men are idiots and this should not happen to someone as lovely as you are. You are strong in your poem but your weakness is LOVE. I'm prayin' that you will find happiness (in love) again and very soon ! Yours BRIAN
April 27th, 2016 05:31
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