Comments received on poems by kaychee



A Dance with the Devil
TheiaAlex said:

Nice! Love the metaphors used in there ♥️

June 17th, 2023 13:56

A Dance with the Devil
Paul Bell said:

Well put, it\'s easy to dig a hole and drag people into it, harder to climb a mountain like yourself.

December 12th, 2021 12:23

MY BAGGAGE
L. B. Mek said:

kinda awesome, how diverse a reading experience Poetry can offer..
really like your positive message, thanks for sharing

May 7th, 2021 06:19

MY BAGGAGE
Goldfinch60 said:

That love will be within you and your life will be wonderful Kaychee.

Andy

May 7th, 2021 00:53

MY BAGGAGE
Accidental Poet said:

You have to love yourself in order to feel loved. Well penned kachee. ; ) AP.

May 6th, 2021 18:34

It’s called RAPE
TheBalladofMebo said:

The society will only change if Men (male gender) change their views on women. If not, no matter how much money you will have, no matter how much education or influence you may get as a woman, You still have a high probability of being a victim of rape. It is so sad how men make us feel Insecure and the world was meant for both genders to survive. This is a war, And all women regardless should put on an armor cause its time.

August 22nd, 2020 10:51

It’s called RAPE
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE ~ HI KAYCHEE (nice name !) Thanks for a very Frank but harrowing well penned Poem on RAPE ! As a recently married Lady (4 months) Im pleased my Sisiters are fighting back ! I am a Church Youth Leader and I tell all My Girls that their VIRGINITY (PRIDE) is the most precious thing they posess NOT to be stolen in RAPE but to be shared in a TRUE LOVE relationship ! My MAMA warned me that Men of all ages would want to steal it - and that is true. Fortunately I am quite strong & never did drugs or got drunk - so in compromising situations (I was 17 when I first had to resist) so when I said NO NO NO they took notice. Technically I was still a VIRGIN (no penile penetration) when I married BRIAN (@ 32 four Months ago). He is a GENTLEMAN and resects all of My Body like it was the Holy Grail. There are Men like Brian out there - Im prayin* you will find one !

Every Blessing - Love - Joy & Peace
Your Loving Sister ~ ANGELA 💛💛💛
Please check our Site & Fusion ~ Thanks.

August 21st, 2020 06:24

It’s called RAPE
L. B. Mek said:

there shall never be enough regret or apology in the world to heal some of the atrocities - we, of humanity commit upon each other,
there is never a darkness - so complete, that a glow of defiance and self-owned pride cannot Phoenix into shards of hope\'s guiding light,
its never too late, to share, to vent and hopefully, eventually - recapture that part of you those with evil intent - attempt, to entrap within those: victim\'s isles, of society\'s ignorant eyes
more power to you sister! sing loud, sing proud and sing your truth: till all our ears bleed, with the empathy of true humanity

August 21st, 2020 05:06

GOD IN SIN CITY
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true, God is always with you.

October 2nd, 2018 00:51

I’D PLAY YOU
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI KAY ~ Love the Poem. I play Classical Guitar so i know how my Instrument feels when its body is caressed and its strings plucked to produce harp~like melodies & harmonies. If you played my instrument ~ I would only produce your tune and if played yours ~ you would produce mine ! Two harps in harmony ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN 🧡

September 27th, 2018 18:23

MY REALITY
Goldfinch60 said:

The simplicity in life is the most wonderful way to lead it.
Good write kaychee.

March 28th, 2018 00:37

MY REALITY
blessednloved said:

This is beautiful! The fall sucks but the peace your able to find when you get back up is well worth it! I enjoyed reading this! Great write

March 27th, 2018 12:30

DON\'T
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

August 17th, 2017 01:43

DON\'T
burning-embers said:

Written for someone who disgusts you? Strong stuff.

August 16th, 2017 23:18

DON\'T
FredPeyer said:

Well penned with a (very) clear message!

August 16th, 2017 21:42

LETTERS TO MY UNIVERSE
Louis Gibbs said:

So few words and such an impactful message conveyed. A work of poetic art, KCO!

July 29th, 2017 07:40

LETTERS TO MY UNIVERSE
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write and I agree with what you have asked.

July 29th, 2017 01:22

LETTERS TO MY UNIVERSE
Michael Edwards said:

What a simple yet effective work - love it.

July 29th, 2017 01:19

SELF REMINDER
kevin browne said:

you forget to mention how good a poet you are. I love this lots x

July 26th, 2017 18:40

SELF REMINDER
charlesbarrett said:

Beautiful piece. I liked the line “I make mistakes”. I’ve felt that same sentiment quite often. I like how you positioned that line right before the closing 2. Thanks for sharing.

July 26th, 2017 17:52

ALL TOO FAMILIAR
Louis Gibbs said:

Pain is a basic part of living . Self inflicted? Not so much. Good poem, Kay!

June 27th, 2017 16:06

ALL TOO FAMILIAR
FredPeyer said:

One of the best descriptions of emotional pain, very well written!

June 27th, 2017 13:18

REAL TALK
Confused kid said:

Maybe I misunderstood this poem but I find it very positive, like someone who broke out of chains. Like someone who has gotten tired of validation and accepted to have failed, who won\'t care anymore of what they think and will do things their way from now on.

May 28th, 2017 20:42

REAL TALK
jt said:

One day you will realize that the failure you\'re feeling is temporary. Let time takes its course and you will find happiness. My poems are all about a girlI have been hung up on for 2 years, the most beautiful girl you will ever see. I wont stop fighting until shes mine. Never stop fighting

April 13th, 2017 23:53

REAL TALK
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 13th, 2017 15:28

ROSES ARE RED
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 13th, 2017 17:16

ROSES ARE RED
willyweed said:

nice write

March 13th, 2017 14:25

ROSES ARE RED
JJCooke said:

Love it.

March 13th, 2017 14:12

TOGETHERNESS
Augustus said:

Great message.😊

March 8th, 2017 17:49

TOGETHERNESS
Goldfinch60 said:

A very good message. If only everybody could always love one another the world would be a much better place.

March 8th, 2017 03:42

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