Comments received on poems by RSM0812
A women or a flower
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of similes and great comparisons of women and flowers. Nicely done
March 18th, 2025 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of similes and great comparisons of women and flowers. Nicely done
March 18th, 2025 12:08
700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words this poem is powerfully stated. It speaks to injustice and to a problem that we have pushed down the road until it has created a traffic jam.
March 16th, 2025 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words this poem is powerfully stated. It speaks to injustice and to a problem that we have pushed down the road until it has created a traffic jam.
March 16th, 2025 07:13
700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and well expressed write,raising a increasingly serious ongoing issue, nice write
March 16th, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and well expressed write,raising a increasingly serious ongoing issue, nice write
March 16th, 2025 05:25
Relationship
Poetic Licence said:
The good and the bad come together, for a relationship to work we have to except both, nicely expressed
March 15th, 2025 11:56
Poetic Licence said:
The good and the bad come together, for a relationship to work we have to except both, nicely expressed
March 15th, 2025 11:56
Relationship
sorenbarrett said:
The good and the bad together make up life. If one can not accept it that way then one ends up with a death of the relationship. Well written
March 15th, 2025 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
The good and the bad together make up life. If one can not accept it that way then one ends up with a death of the relationship. Well written
March 15th, 2025 07:43
Chained
Poetic Licence said:
That is a interesting and thoughtful provoking write, one to get the cogs turning, enjoyed the read
March 13th, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
That is a interesting and thoughtful provoking write, one to get the cogs turning, enjoyed the read
March 13th, 2025 13:35
Clock of time
sorenbarrett said:
Images pour though this poem as if it were a dream. The line (And horizons in a landscape of half slept dreams.) is marvelous One metaphor on the heels of another keep the reader on his toes. A lovely write.
March 12th, 2025 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
Images pour though this poem as if it were a dream. The line (And horizons in a landscape of half slept dreams.) is marvelous One metaphor on the heels of another keep the reader on his toes. A lovely write.
March 12th, 2025 12:21
Empty
Poetic Licence said:
That is touching with sadness, sense of pain and loss as you read, nicely expressed
March 11th, 2025 12:46
Poetic Licence said:
That is touching with sadness, sense of pain and loss as you read, nicely expressed
March 11th, 2025 12:46
Empty
sorenbarrett said:
Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and hurt. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and hurt. Lovely
March 11th, 2025 09:50
Hell is a Rollorcoaster
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and interesting write, I think the way the world is going hell might be nearly full, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:49
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and interesting write, I think the way the world is going hell might be nearly full, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 07:49
Hell is a Rollorcoaster
sorenbarrett said:
A rather grim thought even for a dark poem. Well written but hopefully not a reality. Very nice.
March 10th, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A rather grim thought even for a dark poem. Well written but hopefully not a reality. Very nice.
March 10th, 2025 06:53
Memories Sake
Poetic Licence said:
A creative write allowing you to imagine some wonderful images as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:18
Poetic Licence said:
A creative write allowing you to imagine some wonderful images as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 10th, 2025 03:18
Memories Sake
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of images and metaphor that winds its way through a maze of the universe to arrive at its end
March 9th, 2025 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of images and metaphor that winds its way through a maze of the universe to arrive at its end
March 9th, 2025 16:30
The Bench
Cassie58 said:
Well penned. The mask dropped. How poignant this piece was. Lovely write.
March 9th, 2025 15:59
Cassie58 said:
Well penned. The mask dropped. How poignant this piece was. Lovely write.
March 9th, 2025 15:59
The Bench
sorenbarrett said:
The truth lies beneath the surface. We all put on faces only to drop the mask on occasion. A metaphor as deep as the soul. I loved this poem and am giving it a fave.
March 8th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
The truth lies beneath the surface. We all put on faces only to drop the mask on occasion. A metaphor as deep as the soul. I loved this poem and am giving it a fave.
March 8th, 2025 13:31
Look the other way
Poetic Licence said:
All too often people close their eyes and ears, rather than acting on what they see and hear, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 13:47
Poetic Licence said:
All too often people close their eyes and ears, rather than acting on what they see and hear, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 13:47
Look the other way
sorenbarrett said:
Closing one\'s eyes can be so easy. A read with deeper meaning
March 7th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
Closing one\'s eyes can be so easy. A read with deeper meaning
March 7th, 2025 11:15
The Lonely Rose
Poetic Licence said:
This simply a wonderful piece of writing,loved it
March 5th, 2025 14:06
Poetic Licence said:
This simply a wonderful piece of writing,loved it
March 5th, 2025 14:06
The Lonely Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Brilliant! Every once in a while on this site I read something that is truly great. This poem worthy of any book is so classical in form but the message drives deep. A true masterpiece I congratulate you and am envious.
March 5th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Brilliant! Every once in a while on this site I read something that is truly great. This poem worthy of any book is so classical in form but the message drives deep. A true masterpiece I congratulate you and am envious.
March 5th, 2025 11:41
My love, My Pulse
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of all is encompassed in this poem, interrelationships, symbiosis and how everything fits. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of all is encompassed in this poem, interrelationships, symbiosis and how everything fits. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 09:25
Farewell Winter
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful painting of aged winter personified and spring as well a younger wife beautiful in her blooming. Very nice
March 2nd, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful painting of aged winter personified and spring as well a younger wife beautiful in her blooming. Very nice
March 2nd, 2025 15:05
Farewell Winter
Poetic Licence said:
At last the sun has ended its vacation, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 14:58
Poetic Licence said:
At last the sun has ended its vacation, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 14:58
Farewell Winter
arqios said:
So reminds me of my wife and myself! Now Iām melting like Olaf ( āļø from Frozen fame) šš»šļø
March 2nd, 2025 12:38
arqios said:
So reminds me of my wife and myself! Now Iām melting like Olaf ( āļø from Frozen fame) šš»šļø
March 2nd, 2025 12:38
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