Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Meeting Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love put off until such time. Nicely written it carries the reader on
April 4th, 2026 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love put off until such time. Nicely written it carries the reader on
April 4th, 2026 14:23
First Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
This is such a great poem that speaks of attraction, passion, romance and so well portrays it through a kiss. Very nicely done and a fave
April 2nd, 2026 18:35
sorenbarrett said:
This is such a great poem that speaks of attraction, passion, romance and so well portrays it through a kiss. Very nicely done and a fave
April 2nd, 2026 18:35
First Kiss
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the emotional experience of love, framed through imagery of nature, sorrow, and the interplay of innocence and experience. It reflects on the complexities of love, touching on loss, desire, and the sanctity found in intimate moments.
April 2nd, 2026 18:27
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the emotional experience of love, framed through imagery of nature, sorrow, and the interplay of innocence and experience. It reflects on the complexities of love, touching on loss, desire, and the sanctity found in intimate moments.
April 2nd, 2026 18:27
The Windows and Doors
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely rhymed and with good flow this poem riddle unravels line by line settling uneasily on the finality of it all. Nicely done
April 1st, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely rhymed and with good flow this poem riddle unravels line by line settling uneasily on the finality of it all. Nicely done
April 1st, 2026 03:42
Just one kiss
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic images painted in this write. It reads tender and soft with a lingering taste of a kiss. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic images painted in this write. It reads tender and soft with a lingering taste of a kiss. A lovely write
March 29th, 2026 05:36
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This to me is a metaphoric representation of life and its brevity. Well written my friend
March 27th, 2026 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
This to me is a metaphoric representation of life and its brevity. Well written my friend
March 27th, 2026 07:27
Peace
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write with a lovely thought I wish it were true. The rhyme is very nice and enhances the tone well done
March 26th, 2026 10:56
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write with a lovely thought I wish it were true. The rhyme is very nice and enhances the tone well done
March 26th, 2026 10:56
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of passion infatuation and being drawn to each other. Well written
March 26th, 2026 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of passion infatuation and being drawn to each other. Well written
March 26th, 2026 03:32
Death of a King
sorenbarrett said:
Total devastation in this poem of darkness. Even revolt does not bring back the past. Well written
March 24th, 2026 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Total devastation in this poem of darkness. Even revolt does not bring back the past. Well written
March 24th, 2026 07:33
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective held in the character here. Well written
March 22nd, 2026 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting perspective held in the character here. Well written
March 22nd, 2026 11:09
The Chains
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is cryptic and surreal it casts images and symbols that evoke emotions buried. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is cryptic and surreal it casts images and symbols that evoke emotions buried. Well done
March 21st, 2026 07:26
Heart of Fire
sorenbarrett said:
What I get from this poem is a call to make the best out of everything to stoke up the fire and go with a blaze. Carpe diam is the battle cry. Nicely written
March 20th, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
What I get from this poem is a call to make the best out of everything to stoke up the fire and go with a blaze. Carpe diam is the battle cry. Nicely written
March 20th, 2026 06:46
The Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
Similarities and differences this reminds me of the river Styx that erases memories. Nicely written in rhyme and good flow it wends its way through a journey to a desired end of love. Well done
March 19th, 2026 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Similarities and differences this reminds me of the river Styx that erases memories. Nicely written in rhyme and good flow it wends its way through a journey to a desired end of love. Well done
March 19th, 2026 07:00
Shadowed Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
This reworked version works well and reads smoother. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
This reworked version works well and reads smoother. Nicely done
March 17th, 2026 03:20
Scentd Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
Lust, desire, seduction, sensuality, sexual and arousing this poem is one of a siren\'s call a dream of passion. Nicely worded it offers satisfaction. Well done
March 16th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Lust, desire, seduction, sensuality, sexual and arousing this poem is one of a siren\'s call a dream of passion. Nicely worded it offers satisfaction. Well done
March 16th, 2026 08:37
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Such beauty in this verse it breaths with a most classical feel it oozes romance for nature and in metaphor for maybe another. A definite fave
March 15th, 2026 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Such beauty in this verse it breaths with a most classical feel it oozes romance for nature and in metaphor for maybe another. A definite fave
March 15th, 2026 05:20
Lover
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors and images well woven into a great poem. Lovely
March 14th, 2026 13:51
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphors and images well woven into a great poem. Lovely
March 14th, 2026 13:51
Money isnt everything
sorenbarrett said:
Those things that man values are not what nature values. A poem of man\'s placing of value on money. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2026 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
Those things that man values are not what nature values. A poem of man\'s placing of value on money. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2026 15:28
The middle
sorenbarrett said:
Near rhyme and rhyme punctuate this poem of flight and fall of desire and vision. Nicely done
March 11th, 2026 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Near rhyme and rhyme punctuate this poem of flight and fall of desire and vision. Nicely done
March 11th, 2026 08:26
My Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem with images of nature woven in. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem with images of nature woven in. Nicely done
March 10th, 2026 05:54
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that in the complexity of its lines speaks to the simplicity of wealth\'s lure. Lovely and a fave
March 9th, 2026 17:03
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that in the complexity of its lines speaks to the simplicity of wealth\'s lure. Lovely and a fave
March 9th, 2026 17:03
Angelic Verse
Friendship said:
Nicely written . Your poem explores the transient nature of life, the beauty of celestial beings, and the hope that comes from spiritual connection and prayer.
March 8th, 2026 07:50
Friendship said:
Nicely written . Your poem explores the transient nature of life, the beauty of celestial beings, and the hope that comes from spiritual connection and prayer.
March 8th, 2026 07:50
Angelic Verse
RSM0812 said:
I like your interpretation, however its more about an angelic war of the christian doctrine. Thanks again for reading and commenting .
March 8th, 2026 04:28
RSM0812 said:
I like your interpretation, however its more about an angelic war of the christian doctrine. Thanks again for reading and commenting .
March 8th, 2026 04:28
Angelic Verse
sorenbarrett said:
In rhyme this poem speaks of the fleeting nature of life and temporal nature. Nicely written
March 8th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
In rhyme this poem speaks of the fleeting nature of life and temporal nature. Nicely written
March 8th, 2026 03:53
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