Comments received on poems by RSM0812



Empty
Poetic Licence said:

That is touching with sadness, sense of pain and loss as you read, nicely expressed

March 11th, 2025 12:46

Empty
Tony36 said:

Powerful

March 11th, 2025 12:26

Empty
sorenbarrett said:

Some powerful lines with vivid images in this poem that smacks of pain and hurt. Lovely

March 11th, 2025 09:50

Hell is a Rollorcoaster
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 10th, 2025 09:04

Hell is a Rollorcoaster
Poetic Licence said:

A dark and interesting write, I think the way the world is going hell might be nearly full, enjoyed the read

March 10th, 2025 07:49

Hell is a Rollorcoaster
sorenbarrett said:

A rather grim thought even for a dark poem. Well written but hopefully not a reality. Very nice.

March 10th, 2025 06:53

Memories Sake
Poetic Licence said:

A creative write allowing you to imagine some wonderful images as you read through, enjoyed the read

March 10th, 2025 03:18

Memories Sake
sorenbarrett said:

A myriad of images and metaphor that winds its way through a maze of the universe to arrive at its end

March 9th, 2025 16:30

The Bench
Cassie58 said:

Well penned. The mask dropped. How poignant this piece was. Lovely write.

March 9th, 2025 15:59

The Bench
Poetic Licence said:

The truth behind our mask, enjoyed the read

March 9th, 2025 03:04

The Bench
sorenbarrett said:

The truth lies beneath the surface. We all put on faces only to drop the mask on occasion. A metaphor as deep as the soul. I loved this poem and am giving it a fave.

March 8th, 2025 13:31

Look the other way
Poetic Licence said:

All too often people close their eyes and ears, rather than acting on what they see and hear, enjoyed the read

March 7th, 2025 13:47

Look the other way
sorenbarrett said:

Closing one\'s eyes can be so easy. A read with deeper meaning

March 7th, 2025 11:15

The Lonely Rose
Poetic Licence said:

This simply a wonderful piece of writing,loved it

March 5th, 2025 14:06

The Lonely Rose
sorenbarrett said:

Wow!! Brilliant! Every once in a while on this site I read something that is truly great. This poem worthy of any book is so classical in form but the message drives deep. A true masterpiece I congratulate you and am envious.

March 5th, 2025 11:41

My love, My Pulse
NinjaGirl said:

Beautifully written!

March 4th, 2025 12:57

My love, My Pulse
Tony36 said:

Love it

March 4th, 2025 10:35

My love, My Pulse
sorenbarrett said:

The unity of all is encompassed in this poem, interrelationships, symbiosis and how everything fits. Lovely

March 4th, 2025 09:25

Farewell Winter
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful painting of aged winter personified and spring as well a younger wife beautiful in her blooming. Very nice

March 2nd, 2025 15:05

Farewell Winter
Poetic Licence said:

At last the sun has ended its vacation, enjoyed the read

March 2nd, 2025 14:58

Farewell Winter
arqios said:

So reminds me of my wife and myself! Now I’m melting like Olaf ( ā›„ļø from Frozen fame) šŸ™šŸ»šŸ•Šļø

March 2nd, 2025 12:38

Scam
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s a make you think write, very enjoyable

March 1st, 2025 13:06

Behold a Rose
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice One RSM
Sweet Rhythms

March 1st, 2025 12:40

Scam
sorenbarrett said:

Open to many interpretations this one I took as each or our own meat sacks that are only on rent. Lovely

March 1st, 2025 11:33

She
Poetic Licence said:

Well expressed and layered write i enjoyed reading

February 26th, 2025 12:52

She
sorenbarrett said:

Dramatic this poem that could be taken as a metaphor as well. Very nicely done.

February 26th, 2025 09:40

Our Song
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

February 25th, 2025 08:16

Our Song
Poetic Licence said:

A beautifully written piece which feels smooth as you read through, yet has a dark undercurrent, enjoyed the read

February 25th, 2025 05:50

Our Song
sorenbarrett said:

Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the meaning is deep and rather heavy. A absolutely wonderful piece that I wish I had written. A definite fave

February 25th, 2025 03:32

Oh Tender Tongue
NafisaSB said:

your ecstasy shines out - all the best for much more

February 24th, 2025 00:24



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