Comments received on poems by RSM0812



Hearts That Break
Dan Williams said:

Whew. Lots here. \"For time has lost us in the wind,
And blown us back to dust,
My love, thou taught me near to sin,
Forget you though I must.\" is kind of the story of my life.
Thanks for this.

November 14th, 2024 00:34

Hearts That Break
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

November 13th, 2024 20:28

Albina
sorenbarrett said:

A statement of deep love and highest steam, as well as a pledge for the continuance of such. Nicely worded and stated.

November 13th, 2024 07:31

Poor and Forgotten
sorenbarrett said:

The most powerful message sent with most powerful words the use of metaphor enhances this poem and is brilliant in its usage. Masterfully done

November 13th, 2024 04:48

Chains and Hunger
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem covering meaningful metaphors. Very nicely written.

November 13th, 2024 04:45

A violent gun
sorenbarrett said:

Highly powerful with several great metaphors it shouts with defiance for him control or at least restraint. A beautiful and powerful write

November 13th, 2024 04:41

Hearts That Break
sorenbarrett said:

Plea of agony, pain, potential loss, love, and yearning so nicely written inverse with a very classical feel loved it

November 13th, 2024 04:35

A violent gun
jarcher54 said:

If only the last line were to come true... sigh

November 13th, 2024 00:53

Hearts That Break
jarcher54 said:

Very compelling reverie... full of fierce images and terse observations... at first this piece seemed unnecessarily stilted and sometimes unnatural in its phrasing. But as I read on it finds its rhythm and works on the reader\'s heart with its insistence and sincerity and courage. To face pain bravely only to find more pain is a bit of the human condition, no? Thanks for posting.

November 13th, 2024 00:51

My Love
Young Fella said:

Nicely written.

November 13th, 2024 00:46

Chains and Hunger
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 9th, 2024 07:20

Chains and Hunger
MR.apocalypse said:

not only is is great rhyme. but an even better metaphoric social commentary this is beautiful

November 8th, 2024 22:00

Poor and Forgotten
Thad Wilk said:

Wow! 😮
Powerful penning indeed!!
Poignant 😢 , evocative,
thought provoking and
my pleasure to read!! 💯
Best regards peace ✌️. Thad


November 7th, 2024 12:59

Albina
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 6th, 2024 07:29

Walking
Aloo Denish Obiero said:

I enjoyed reading this

November 5th, 2024 07:20

No Love
Tony36 said:

Excellent

November 4th, 2024 10:58

Storm
Cheeky Missy said:

Excellently rendered with a weighty poignancy and awesome imagery, the beauty of its voice exquisite. Thank you for sharing.

November 3rd, 2024 18:16

Purpose
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 29th, 2024 09:19

My Dragon
sorenbarrett said:

A fun and at the same time engaging very nice

October 25th, 2024 10:55

My Dragon
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 25th, 2024 09:38

Walking
sorenbarrett said:

Cryptic and intriguing it meanders along the way. Walking outside of disguise is being who you are. Nicely done

October 24th, 2024 10:08

Walking
Tony36 said:

Great write

October 24th, 2024 09:17

Songbird
sorenbarrett said:

Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow and feels like a call to all. A pleasure to read and deserves more readers

October 19th, 2024 09:27

My Love
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

October 19th, 2024 07:29

My Love
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful words in a setting of solid rhyme make a gem that any woman would long to wear. Nicely done

October 19th, 2024 06:33

Forest Fire
sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully written and on a subject dear to heart. Love your work

October 15th, 2024 05:23

A walk
sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully worded and with such good flow it holds a romantic feel and somehow holds the feel of a master work

October 15th, 2024 05:21

Angel Tears
sorenbarrett said:

Love this poem with its classical feel and absolutely marvelous rhyme scheme and meter. It flows so well off the tongue and captures a past century feel. A fav

October 15th, 2024 05:17

Rumors
Neilton said:

Excellent work here! My favorite line
\"Tell few the wants of the heart\"
I loved it

September 10th, 2024 00:33

The other side
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

September 6th, 2024 12:48

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