Comments received on poems by RSM0812
First Steps
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing like a baby or child to brighten the day and lift spirits. There is something so sincere in their responses. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing like a baby or child to brighten the day and lift spirits. There is something so sincere in their responses. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:52
Behold a Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded with a timeless metaphor. Your word choice made all the difference. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 10:24
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded with a timeless metaphor. Your word choice made all the difference. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 10:24
Everything in Between
Poetic Licence said:
Many questions asked and so many possible answers, a nice write around what to believe and what not to, really enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 14:51
Poetic Licence said:
Many questions asked and so many possible answers, a nice write around what to believe and what not to, really enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 14:51
Everything in Between
sorenbarrett said:
What can you believe and what can\'t you believe? Hard to say. A good write that gets this point across.
February 4th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
What can you believe and what can\'t you believe? Hard to say. A good write that gets this point across.
February 4th, 2025 12:56
I love you
sorenbarrett said:
I xould feel this one the words were magical and that is enough for me to be poetry. Deserves a fave
February 3rd, 2025 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
I xould feel this one the words were magical and that is enough for me to be poetry. Deserves a fave
February 3rd, 2025 07:07
Civil War
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful piece, last line a classic, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 02:44
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful piece, last line a classic, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 02:44
Civil War
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully penned and delivered. The final line is hard to swallow.
February 2nd, 2025 11:47
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully penned and delivered. The final line is hard to swallow.
February 2nd, 2025 11:47
Civil War
sorenbarrett said:
Sad enough to shead a tear. Moving and powerful
February 2nd, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
Sad enough to shead a tear. Moving and powerful
February 2nd, 2025 08:54
End
sorenbarrett said:
Dark fatalism pervades this poem and indeed it is true. Very nicely put
February 1st, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Dark fatalism pervades this poem and indeed it is true. Very nicely put
February 1st, 2025 09:02
Untitled
Poetic Licence said:
A mind drifting in to the unknown, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:39
Poetic Licence said:
A mind drifting in to the unknown, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:39
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A look into the vast beyond. Nicely framed in the night sky. Beautiful
January 31st, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
A look into the vast beyond. Nicely framed in the night sky. Beautiful
January 31st, 2025 09:07
Lovers Kiss
Cassie58 said:
Touching and so very sensual. Beautifully composed.
January 29th, 2025 14:47
Cassie58 said:
Touching and so very sensual. Beautifully composed.
January 29th, 2025 14:47
With Fingers Linked
sorenbarrett said:
There is the surface of this poem and then what lies beneath. In metaphor this poem speaks to me even if it was not intended
January 27th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is the surface of this poem and then what lies beneath. In metaphor this poem speaks to me even if it was not intended
January 27th, 2025 12:26
With Fingers Linked
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 11:33
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 11:33
With Fingers Linked
RSM0812 said:
Unwinding at the end should be unbinding. Stupid spell check.
January 27th, 2025 07:50
RSM0812 said:
Unwinding at the end should be unbinding. Stupid spell check.
January 27th, 2025 07:50
Field of flowers
Dan Williams said:
What a nice build up to a satisfying ending \"And lied in the flowers and stayed\". Nice.
January 27th, 2025 00:59
Dan Williams said:
What a nice build up to a satisfying ending \"And lied in the flowers and stayed\". Nice.
January 27th, 2025 00:59
Waiting for Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A poem fraught with fear of punishment for making wrong choices. It contains a darkness and a feel of anger. It is sad that people need to be motivated by fear and dread when love and peace are available.
January 26th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poem fraught with fear of punishment for making wrong choices. It contains a darkness and a feel of anger. It is sad that people need to be motivated by fear and dread when love and peace are available.
January 26th, 2025 06:26
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