Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in wonderful rhyme and good flow. A love poem well written
May 3rd, 2025 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in wonderful rhyme and good flow. A love poem well written
May 3rd, 2025 05:55
My Love is a Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image, that of a butterfly. A great metaphor of love or of one loved. Colorful and seemingly carefree yet so vulnerable, they do no harm, bring beauty in their flight of color and pollinate flowers of beauty. Peaceful thy make no sound. A wonderful write.
May 2nd, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image, that of a butterfly. A great metaphor of love or of one loved. Colorful and seemingly carefree yet so vulnerable, they do no harm, bring beauty in their flight of color and pollinate flowers of beauty. Peaceful thy make no sound. A wonderful write.
May 2nd, 2025 08:04
A Single Tear
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of loneliness and sadness pervade this poem. Feelings of isolation and a coldness. Well written
May 1st, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of loneliness and sadness pervade this poem. Feelings of isolation and a coldness. Well written
May 1st, 2025 05:07
Tu es l\'amour de ma mine
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice love poem with great images and phrasing that lets the poem flow. Very nice
April 30th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice love poem with great images and phrasing that lets the poem flow. Very nice
April 30th, 2025 08:59
A Gift
sorenbarrett said:
When in love mementos can be most important as continual reminders of the one not there. Loved the creative memento.
April 29th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
When in love mementos can be most important as continual reminders of the one not there. Loved the creative memento.
April 29th, 2025 05:00
A Gift
Victor Bolshov said:
Very romantic. Looks like someone is in love, as a true poet should be.
April 29th, 2025 04:26
Victor Bolshov said:
Very romantic. Looks like someone is in love, as a true poet should be.
April 29th, 2025 04:26
AI
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a novel idea. I love the idea of man and AI as actors on a stage and who is the writer of this play? What is their motivation and what is the outcome of the play? A poem that provokes many questions.
April 28th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a novel idea. I love the idea of man and AI as actors on a stage and who is the writer of this play? What is their motivation and what is the outcome of the play? A poem that provokes many questions.
April 28th, 2025 04:18
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This poem revives buried emotions of what values in childhood instilled have corroded in the years of maturity. A political statement of fairness discarded. Lovely and a fave
April 27th, 2025 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
This poem revives buried emotions of what values in childhood instilled have corroded in the years of maturity. A political statement of fairness discarded. Lovely and a fave
April 27th, 2025 05:54
Have You Heard
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get pulled into the scam seems to be the message. Good write
April 26th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t get pulled into the scam seems to be the message. Good write
April 26th, 2025 05:40
Home
sorenbarrett said:
This one has a rock\'n rhyme to it. The rhythm pulls you along. Nicely done
April 25th, 2025 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
This one has a rock\'n rhyme to it. The rhythm pulls you along. Nicely done
April 25th, 2025 06:10
Lost Paradise
sorenbarrett said:
This has biblical as well as more astronomical references and is very nicely written in few words. Life and creation seem to fall within this poem of paradise of an earthly nature.
April 23rd, 2025 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
This has biblical as well as more astronomical references and is very nicely written in few words. Life and creation seem to fall within this poem of paradise of an earthly nature.
April 23rd, 2025 07:14
The Pond
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely word combination leads to deeper meaning in this poem. The flow carries the reader on this journey a lovely ride.
April 22nd, 2025 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely word combination leads to deeper meaning in this poem. The flow carries the reader on this journey a lovely ride.
April 22nd, 2025 05:51
My Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely sonnet to someone loved and appreciated
April 21st, 2025 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely sonnet to someone loved and appreciated
April 21st, 2025 14:30
Slippery Slopes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me reflects the temporal nature of love and its fleeting pleasure. Well written in verse it has good rhyme and flow of meter. Very nicely done
April 20th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem to me reflects the temporal nature of love and its fleeting pleasure. Well written in verse it has good rhyme and flow of meter. Very nicely done
April 20th, 2025 08:59
I Wait
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Within this poem speaks the voice of nature, of connectivity and the cyclic tide of all things. Much enjoyed the read
April 19th, 2025 13:10
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Within this poem speaks the voice of nature, of connectivity and the cyclic tide of all things. Much enjoyed the read
April 19th, 2025 13:10
I Wait
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful incorporation of nature with one\'s heartbeat. A most lovely thought and feeling. Well written
April 19th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful incorporation of nature with one\'s heartbeat. A most lovely thought and feeling. Well written
April 19th, 2025 10:38
Wife of Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines here
(A shadow we\'d become.
Forever painted in the stone,
Our love, ne\'er to be undone.)
A most inspired write with deep metaphorical meaning
April 17th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines here
(A shadow we\'d become.
Forever painted in the stone,
Our love, ne\'er to be undone.)
A most inspired write with deep metaphorical meaning
April 17th, 2025 06:21
Positive Side
sorenbarrett said:
Find yourself and stay true to what you are I hear in this poem. Very nicely stated
April 16th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
Find yourself and stay true to what you are I hear in this poem. Very nicely stated
April 16th, 2025 13:28
Golden Rose
NafisaSB said:
the words flow out so beautifully, and touch the heart with its simplicity, and yet lovely imagery
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2025 00:00
NafisaSB said:
the words flow out so beautifully, and touch the heart with its simplicity, and yet lovely imagery
thanks for sharing
April 15th, 2025 00:00
Howling Wolf
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor and well written images that sends the message Nicely written
April 13th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor and well written images that sends the message Nicely written
April 13th, 2025 10:48
The Calm
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes us through the storm to the calm on the other side. Very nicely done
April 11th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes us through the storm to the calm on the other side. Very nicely done
April 11th, 2025 09:25
My Love Taps with the Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this piece carries a longing and desire for the moon and the sea. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this piece carries a longing and desire for the moon and the sea. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 07:21
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