Comments received on poems by RSM0812
The break up
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great sense of both sadness and anger in this poem. Although there are breaks in the clouds the day remains gray and there is the threat of impending rain. Its rhyme takes one in a dizzying spiral toward a drain that one knows they will be swept down in that whirl pool of loss. Nicely written
December 18th, 2024 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great sense of both sadness and anger in this poem. Although there are breaks in the clouds the day remains gray and there is the threat of impending rain. Its rhyme takes one in a dizzying spiral toward a drain that one knows they will be swept down in that whirl pool of loss. Nicely written
December 18th, 2024 13:46
First Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
This had in many ways a very classic feel to it. Lovely enamored sensual and amorous.
December 17th, 2024 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This had in many ways a very classic feel to it. Lovely enamored sensual and amorous.
December 17th, 2024 04:11
Winds of Change
Poetic Licence said:
We have to have hope the world will get better, if we run out of hope, it`s over, Enjoyed the read
December 14th, 2024 01:10
Poetic Licence said:
We have to have hope the world will get better, if we run out of hope, it`s over, Enjoyed the read
December 14th, 2024 01:10
Winds of Change
sorenbarrett said:
We can only hope for change from dark days to ones brighter. Gilded history peels with age revealing the corrosion underneath
December 13th, 2024 17:53
sorenbarrett said:
We can only hope for change from dark days to ones brighter. Gilded history peels with age revealing the corrosion underneath
December 13th, 2024 17:53
The blizzard
Poetic Licence said:
You can picture it as you read the poem, Enjoyable read.
December 12th, 2024 23:52
Poetic Licence said:
You can picture it as you read the poem, Enjoyable read.
December 12th, 2024 23:52
The blizzard
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about the changes in nature
December 12th, 2024 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about the changes in nature
December 12th, 2024 13:23
Love is Pain
sorenbarrett said:
Your words tell me that your thoughts pursue poetic and philisophical lines similar to mine. Your use of opposites to make a point is one example. Very nice
December 10th, 2024 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Your words tell me that your thoughts pursue poetic and philisophical lines similar to mine. Your use of opposites to make a point is one example. Very nice
December 10th, 2024 04:11
The Lonely Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor with so many good lines. You have a natural poetic knack for wording and imaging. Very enjoyable I\'m keeping my eye out for your poetry
December 10th, 2024 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor with so many good lines. You have a natural poetic knack for wording and imaging. Very enjoyable I\'m keeping my eye out for your poetry
December 10th, 2024 04:07
Sunrise in an Empty Field
NafisaSB said:
lovely imagery, and well expressed thoughts from the heart
good one
December 3rd, 2024 00:57
NafisaSB said:
lovely imagery, and well expressed thoughts from the heart
good one
December 3rd, 2024 00:57
Sunrise in an Empty Field
Dan Williams said:
So nice. Clear and eloquent. \"mother nature’s simplicity \" says volumes.
November 27th, 2024 00:55
Dan Williams said:
So nice. Clear and eloquent. \"mother nature’s simplicity \" says volumes.
November 27th, 2024 00:55
Sunrise in an Empty Field
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful images in this poem, and the metaphors are well placed, and quite deep. This is a lovely poem, conveys the splendor of nature.
November 26th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful images in this poem, and the metaphors are well placed, and quite deep. This is a lovely poem, conveys the splendor of nature.
November 26th, 2024 06:13
Sunrise in an Empty Field
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poetic expression. Mother Nature is a gift to us and the sun can be both a healer and soother. Love your posted image RSM.
November 26th, 2024 01:22
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poetic expression. Mother Nature is a gift to us and the sun can be both a healer and soother. Love your posted image RSM.
November 26th, 2024 01:22
My love is a Rose
sorenbarrett said:
The most beautifully worded poem it is filled with beautiful images so nicely done
November 23rd, 2024 19:16
sorenbarrett said:
The most beautifully worded poem it is filled with beautiful images so nicely done
November 23rd, 2024 19:16
Waiting for Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
You paint a strict dichotomy in this poem of black and white heaven in hell. A good deal of graphic imagery portrays hell has a painful place. Well written and evocative.
November 21st, 2024 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
You paint a strict dichotomy in this poem of black and white heaven in hell. A good deal of graphic imagery portrays hell has a painful place. Well written and evocative.
November 21st, 2024 04:09
Tick Tock
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a feel of antiquity. It takes one back through time, but mentions that time keeps going on. There is a sense of urgency with it as well. Nicely written.
November 20th, 2024 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a feel of antiquity. It takes one back through time, but mentions that time keeps going on. There is a sense of urgency with it as well. Nicely written.
November 20th, 2024 06:18
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely last line to ponder. Many of us talk of gradations when in fact, it is not necessary. It is the due or do not like or not like that counts. Very nicely expressed.
November 19th, 2024 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely last line to ponder. Many of us talk of gradations when in fact, it is not necessary. It is the due or do not like or not like that counts. Very nicely expressed.
November 19th, 2024 14:13
Stigma
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliantly written in paradox this poem calls out for understanding. It reads as almost a prophecy.
November 18th, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliantly written in paradox this poem calls out for understanding. It reads as almost a prophecy.
November 18th, 2024 05:48
Failing Hearts
sorenbarrett said:
A most clever usage of internal rhyme to enhance the feeling that this poem emits. Nicely done
November 17th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A most clever usage of internal rhyme to enhance the feeling that this poem emits. Nicely done
November 17th, 2024 05:29
Failing Hearts
sorenbarrett said:
I’m most interesting poem with interesting wording nicely done
November 16th, 2024 19:59
sorenbarrett said:
I’m most interesting poem with interesting wording nicely done
November 16th, 2024 19:59
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