Comments received on poems by RSM0812
The Calm
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme, near rhyme and irregular internal patterns of rhyme in this poem lend to the flow and beauty of this piece. The message is deep as well and the poem is the perfect length for the message. Very nice it was most enjoyable to read
January 19th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme, near rhyme and irregular internal patterns of rhyme in this poem lend to the flow and beauty of this piece. The message is deep as well and the poem is the perfect length for the message. Very nice it was most enjoyable to read
January 19th, 2025 05:00
Morning Stillness
sorenbarrett said:
Senual and by metaphor sexual it speaks to the seduction of the night. Lovely
January 17th, 2025 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
Senual and by metaphor sexual it speaks to the seduction of the night. Lovely
January 17th, 2025 12:37
Lovers Fate
sorenbarrett said:
A very warm and sensual poem that is heartwarming through its protectiveness. Well worded and with good flow.
January 15th, 2025 13:44
sorenbarrett said:
A very warm and sensual poem that is heartwarming through its protectiveness. Well worded and with good flow.
January 15th, 2025 13:44
The right
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well with great rhyme and flow as well as a thought provoking meaning
January 14th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well with great rhyme and flow as well as a thought provoking meaning
January 14th, 2025 09:15
Worm
sorenbarrett said:
You have a most interesting way of pairing opposite dualities in each line. Nice
January 13th, 2025 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
You have a most interesting way of pairing opposite dualities in each line. Nice
January 13th, 2025 19:42
Truth and lies
sorenbarrett said:
Unique wording in this poem kept me guessing. A fun read
January 13th, 2025 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
Unique wording in this poem kept me guessing. A fun read
January 13th, 2025 19:35
Truth and lies
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write and i am imagining, enjoyed the read
January 13th, 2025 12:17
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write and i am imagining, enjoyed the read
January 13th, 2025 12:17
Angel tears
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and beautiful piece of being guided to the right way, enjoyed the read
January 10th, 2025 23:02
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and beautiful piece of being guided to the right way, enjoyed the read
January 10th, 2025 23:02
Locked in a kiss
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful rhyme locked in a kiss indeed, love all the Imagery 🌹
January 9th, 2025 14:52
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful rhyme locked in a kiss indeed, love all the Imagery 🌹
January 9th, 2025 14:52
Locked in a kiss
Poetic Licence said:
Quite a haunting read but beautifully written, enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 12:00
Poetic Licence said:
Quite a haunting read but beautifully written, enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 12:00
Bones
Poetic Licence said:
I found it a interesting and thought provoking read, which i enjoyed reading.
January 8th, 2025 10:12
Poetic Licence said:
I found it a interesting and thought provoking read, which i enjoyed reading.
January 8th, 2025 10:12
Bones
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful meaning in this poem disguised under a thin layer of metaphor it flows in great rhyme and meter.
January 8th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful meaning in this poem disguised under a thin layer of metaphor it flows in great rhyme and meter.
January 8th, 2025 09:45
Winds of time
Poetic Licence said:
Nature free to do as it pleases, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 08:30
Poetic Licence said:
Nature free to do as it pleases, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 08:30
Winds of time
arqios said:
The winds of time don’t hibernate or migrate in the winter- a revelatory thought courtesy of your engaging poem! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 05:55
arqios said:
The winds of time don’t hibernate or migrate in the winter- a revelatory thought courtesy of your engaging poem! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 05:55
My love
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a heart felt loving dedication to their loved one, enjoyed the read.
January 6th, 2025 11:37
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a heart felt loving dedication to their loved one, enjoyed the read.
January 6th, 2025 11:37
Natures Taunt
sorenbarrett said:
Nature vs nature and natuer vs man great metaphors
January 5th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Nature vs nature and natuer vs man great metaphors
January 5th, 2025 15:44
Natures Taunt
Poetic Licence said:
Nature tells us it is the master and without it, we are nothing, Really enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 15:43
Poetic Licence said:
Nature tells us it is the master and without it, we are nothing, Really enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 15:43
My love comes with the moon
sorenbarrett said:
Selene, Artemis, Cherridwen, Isis all the moon a most beautiful poem of the moons siren call and the personification of romance, mystery and love. Wonderful
December 31st, 2024 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Selene, Artemis, Cherridwen, Isis all the moon a most beautiful poem of the moons siren call and the personification of romance, mystery and love. Wonderful
December 31st, 2024 06:53
The Second Pandemic
Poetic Licence said:
Let`s hope we do not have another one, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:18
Poetic Licence said:
Let`s hope we do not have another one, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:18
It\'s Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with the feel of the season and the joy and closeness it brings. A fun read and it was good to know that it was a joint effort making it more special
December 24th, 2024 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with the feel of the season and the joy and closeness it brings. A fun read and it was good to know that it was a joint effort making it more special
December 24th, 2024 03:53
It\'s Christmas
Poetic Licence said:
And she has done a very nice job, enjoyed the read
December 24th, 2024 02:28
Poetic Licence said:
And she has done a very nice job, enjoyed the read
December 24th, 2024 02:28
It\'s Christmas
rin said:
Turkey is destined to be eaten for happiness.
``Tenderness to You\'\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 00:52
rin said:
Turkey is destined to be eaten for happiness.
``Tenderness to You\'\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 00:52
Christmas
Poetic Licence said:
Be nice to each other the time, enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 10:34
Poetic Licence said:
Be nice to each other the time, enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 10:34
Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
So loved the addition of giving all the year. It is not only on Christmas that giving is important. Nicely done
December 21st, 2024 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
So loved the addition of giving all the year. It is not only on Christmas that giving is important. Nicely done
December 21st, 2024 09:24
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