Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Our Song
sorenbarrett said:
Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the meaning is deep and rather heavy. A absolutely wonderful piece that I wish I had written. A definite fave
February 25th, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the meaning is deep and rather heavy. A absolutely wonderful piece that I wish I had written. A definite fave
February 25th, 2025 03:32
Oh Tender Tongue
NafisaSB said:
your ecstasy shines out - all the best for much more
February 24th, 2025 00:24
NafisaSB said:
your ecstasy shines out - all the best for much more
February 24th, 2025 00:24
Oh Tender Tongue
arqios said:
A stirring expression and poetic rendition. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 14:35
arqios said:
A stirring expression and poetic rendition. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 14:35
Oh Tender Tongue
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with good rhyme and underlying meaning. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with good rhyme and underlying meaning. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 11:42
Tick Tock
sorenbarrett said:
Apocalyptic in nature is the feel that I get from this poem. The passage of time is emphasized and it seems dark. Nicely expressed.
February 22nd, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
Apocalyptic in nature is the feel that I get from this poem. The passage of time is emphasized and it seems dark. Nicely expressed.
February 22nd, 2025 13:30
Tinkering with Control
Poetic Licence said:
Greed the creator of monsters, the tool of destruction, the illness in today\'s world, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 12:52
Poetic Licence said:
Greed the creator of monsters, the tool of destruction, the illness in today\'s world, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 12:52
Tinkering with Control
sorenbarrett said:
Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and breaks society. Good write
February 19th, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and breaks society. Good write
February 19th, 2025 11:30
Toungue twister
sorenbarrett said:
Great internal rhyme in this piece that helps in the flow. Very nice.
February 18th, 2025 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
Great internal rhyme in this piece that helps in the flow. Very nice.
February 18th, 2025 14:23
My dreams
arqios said:
Like how you positioned strength and gentleness in one seamless movement, that speaks heaps and heaps🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:39
arqios said:
Like how you positioned strength and gentleness in one seamless movement, that speaks heaps and heaps🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:39
My dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Many live their dreams as their reality. A wonderful write
February 17th, 2025 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Many live their dreams as their reality. A wonderful write
February 17th, 2025 11:14
Do or Dare
Poetic Licence said:
How far will we push the boundaries, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 16:22
Poetic Licence said:
How far will we push the boundaries, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 16:22
Do or Dare
sorenbarrett said:
A provocative write and the question remains how far do we go on a dare? Loved it
February 16th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
A provocative write and the question remains how far do we go on a dare? Loved it
February 16th, 2025 14:22
Eternal emotions
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that strikes at the heart. A strong write
February 15th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that strikes at the heart. A strong write
February 15th, 2025 13:28
Mountains Candle
sorenbarrett said:
Careful wording and images give the feeling of past places one has been and this is well blended with the sense of togetherness until the end of time. Very nice and emotional
February 13th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Careful wording and images give the feeling of past places one has been and this is well blended with the sense of togetherness until the end of time. Very nice and emotional
February 13th, 2025 10:54
Any Man
Poetic Licence said:
I get the feel of loneliness and isolation, someone who could do with a bit of company. Well written
February 12th, 2025 10:16
Poetic Licence said:
I get the feel of loneliness and isolation, someone who could do with a bit of company. Well written
February 12th, 2025 10:16
Any Man
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and isolation pervade this poem. It carries the reader down this street to its inevitable dead end. Nicely written
February 12th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and isolation pervade this poem. It carries the reader down this street to its inevitable dead end. Nicely written
February 12th, 2025 09:13
Dead Kings
sorenbarrett said:
A message here for people of today. Kings or presidents all one and the same. A timely read
February 11th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
A message here for people of today. Kings or presidents all one and the same. A timely read
February 11th, 2025 08:14
The Train to North Durham
David Wakeling said:
Women? ya can\'t live with em and ya can\'t shoot em. A lively tale of the girl that got away.Don\'t they all.Enjoyed this well constructed poem
February 10th, 2025 15:05
David Wakeling said:
Women? ya can\'t live with em and ya can\'t shoot em. A lively tale of the girl that got away.Don\'t they all.Enjoyed this well constructed poem
February 10th, 2025 15:05
The Train to North Durham
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain faces, bodies, people that strike us with bolt of passion, it is not love at first sight but lust at first sight. Some may be lukey to strike it off on such occasions but for most of us we lay smitten with an unfulfilled dream for the rest of our lives and no matter how great the love we find or the encouters we philander nothing will ever come close to fulfilling that dream left unfulfilled. A wonderful psychological write
February 10th, 2025 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain faces, bodies, people that strike us with bolt of passion, it is not love at first sight but lust at first sight. Some may be lukey to strike it off on such occasions but for most of us we lay smitten with an unfulfilled dream for the rest of our lives and no matter how great the love we find or the encouters we philander nothing will ever come close to fulfilling that dream left unfulfilled. A wonderful psychological write
February 10th, 2025 11:46
I Vacationed in Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a continuation of The Divine Comedy and the upward climb into heaven. Nicely written with great imagery
February 9th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a continuation of The Divine Comedy and the upward climb into heaven. Nicely written with great imagery
February 9th, 2025 04:49
I Vacationed in Heaven
arqios said:
Working out the correlation of “vacation” in your two latest poems, an interesting journey of thought and feeling. 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:30
arqios said:
Working out the correlation of “vacation” in your two latest poems, an interesting journey of thought and feeling. 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:30
When i vacationed in Hell
Mutley Ravishes said:
I took myself into hell once upon a time. I don\'t want to go back. Or, should I say, when I go back, I\'d like to be ready. The serpent patiently waits.....to be uplifted!
Great write.
February 8th, 2025 18:54
Mutley Ravishes said:
I took myself into hell once upon a time. I don\'t want to go back. Or, should I say, when I go back, I\'d like to be ready. The serpent patiently waits.....to be uplifted!
Great write.
February 8th, 2025 18:54
When i vacationed in Hell
Neville said:
Hell, this is epic, almost a complete treatise on its namesake .. Congratulations on hitting the ton too sir .. Neville 😎👍
February 8th, 2025 12:26
Neville said:
Hell, this is epic, almost a complete treatise on its namesake .. Congratulations on hitting the ton too sir .. Neville 😎👍
February 8th, 2025 12:26
When i vacationed in Hell
sorenbarrett said:
The darkest hell is the one in our mind and from that one we don\'t come back. With our conscience being our Satan it is mercilous and brutal we give it our heart but to no avail. There are many great lines in this piece and it seems like Dante\'s decent into hell in his devine comedy but instead of observing others it is oneself being tortured but almost as an observer as well. This seperation of mind from body in pain is an emphasis of the how one without conscionce focuses on physical pain while a conscience when felt is a far greater pain than the physical. Given a second chance by a conscience or Saten that has learned compassion. A most lovely write heart felt. No my friend I am on several other sites but have not published any of my works feel free to look at any of my past works, some are worth a look most of my early works as for most of us are writings of learning with a few rants.
February 8th, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
The darkest hell is the one in our mind and from that one we don\'t come back. With our conscience being our Satan it is mercilous and brutal we give it our heart but to no avail. There are many great lines in this piece and it seems like Dante\'s decent into hell in his devine comedy but instead of observing others it is oneself being tortured but almost as an observer as well. This seperation of mind from body in pain is an emphasis of the how one without conscionce focuses on physical pain while a conscience when felt is a far greater pain than the physical. Given a second chance by a conscience or Saten that has learned compassion. A most lovely write heart felt. No my friend I am on several other sites but have not published any of my works feel free to look at any of my past works, some are worth a look most of my early works as for most of us are writings of learning with a few rants.
February 8th, 2025 10:01
When i vacationed in Hell
Poetic Licence said:
That is quite a comprehensive guide through how most people view hell, a great piece of writing
February 8th, 2025 08:33
Poetic Licence said:
That is quite a comprehensive guide through how most people view hell, a great piece of writing
February 8th, 2025 08:33
First Steps
Poetic Licence said:
A baby or young child easily lifts your spirits and day, because all their responses are genuine, honest or funny, lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:58
Poetic Licence said:
A baby or young child easily lifts your spirits and day, because all their responses are genuine, honest or funny, lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:58
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