Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Lonely Star
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a roller coaster of falling darkness with its dips and climbs with rhyme and beating meter. Nicely said
February 15th, 2026 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that is a roller coaster of falling darkness with its dips and climbs with rhyme and beating meter. Nicely said
February 15th, 2026 14:48
Lonely Star
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
impossible mission to clearly decipher as what appeared as amorphous, yet in a way that worded chaos perhaps analogous to how the universe came into once, twice, thrice...but even if way off the mark regarding my interpretation, i did relish rhyming pattern and lengthy mental exercise though as iterated above the vagueness possibly metaphorical for just the random entropy within which the cosmos thrives.
February 15th, 2026 13:45
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
impossible mission to clearly decipher as what appeared as amorphous, yet in a way that worded chaos perhaps analogous to how the universe came into once, twice, thrice...but even if way off the mark regarding my interpretation, i did relish rhyming pattern and lengthy mental exercise though as iterated above the vagueness possibly metaphorical for just the random entropy within which the cosmos thrives.
February 15th, 2026 13:45
Tortourous Hell
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, surreal, dark and angry this poem casts a shadow that darkens turning black as coal. Although the conscience may burn and torment worse than physical pain from past cankers of acts and though one may pick these emotional scabs the devil is in the details and is usually oneself. Good write
February 14th, 2026 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, surreal, dark and angry this poem casts a shadow that darkens turning black as coal. Although the conscience may burn and torment worse than physical pain from past cankers of acts and though one may pick these emotional scabs the devil is in the details and is usually oneself. Good write
February 14th, 2026 06:18
Sifting Universe
sorenbarrett said:
Replete with biblical references this poem speaks to me of good and evil and as the last line reveals that evil may be stronger.
February 13th, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Replete with biblical references this poem speaks to me of good and evil and as the last line reveals that evil may be stronger.
February 13th, 2026 11:25
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem about love it speaks of it as eternal. Nicely worded.
February 12th, 2026 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem about love it speaks of it as eternal. Nicely worded.
February 12th, 2026 15:05
Kiss from an Angel
sorenbarrett said:
A utopian vision presented in this poem of heaven. Nicely written
February 11th, 2026 15:29
sorenbarrett said:
A utopian vision presented in this poem of heaven. Nicely written
February 11th, 2026 15:29
The apple Tree
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem delves into themes of inner conflict, the struggle between moral righteousness and personal suffering, and the quest for understanding and redemption amidst chaos.
February 10th, 2026 07:57
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem delves into themes of inner conflict, the struggle between moral righteousness and personal suffering, and the quest for understanding and redemption amidst chaos.
February 10th, 2026 07:57
The apple Tree
sorenbarrett said:
You wording in this poem combines with rhyme and meter to flow in power and grace and deserves a fave
February 9th, 2026 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
You wording in this poem combines with rhyme and meter to flow in power and grace and deserves a fave
February 9th, 2026 06:43
Silver Spoon
sorenbarrett said:
A piece of peace, silver to gold as star to sun traded nargentum. So nicely written with meaning and rhyme in good meter it is a fave
February 8th, 2026 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A piece of peace, silver to gold as star to sun traded nargentum. So nicely written with meaning and rhyme in good meter it is a fave
February 8th, 2026 05:05
Begotten Time
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time and that of relationships as well in this poem nicely done
February 7th, 2026 10:27
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time and that of relationships as well in this poem nicely done
February 7th, 2026 10:27
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
There is a calming sense to this poem that speaks of home and peace. Nicely written
February 6th, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
There is a calming sense to this poem that speaks of home and peace. Nicely written
February 6th, 2026 06:53
Watery Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of recognitions and love. Nicely done
February 5th, 2026 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of recognitions and love. Nicely done
February 5th, 2026 10:07
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Light and dark both needed or the other could not exist and so it is with love as well. Nicely done
February 4th, 2026 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
Light and dark both needed or the other could not exist and so it is with love as well. Nicely done
February 4th, 2026 07:12
The Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
The mingling of love, death and a kiss seems romantic in a storybook way yet it is dark and with a realism that gives a warning to all that have the courage to enter into love. Nicely written
February 3rd, 2026 10:28
sorenbarrett said:
The mingling of love, death and a kiss seems romantic in a storybook way yet it is dark and with a realism that gives a warning to all that have the courage to enter into love. Nicely written
February 3rd, 2026 10:28
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Strength in unity, well written this poem speaks of love. Nicely done
February 2nd, 2026 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
Strength in unity, well written this poem speaks of love. Nicely done
February 2nd, 2026 09:05
Lightning storm
Thomas W Case said:
This snaps and sparks like lightning over worn streets—images striking, jagged, and alive.
The rhythm jolts the reader, and the sense of inevitable turn carries a quiet, elemental weight.
February 1st, 2026 07:42
Thomas W Case said:
This snaps and sparks like lightning over worn streets—images striking, jagged, and alive.
The rhythm jolts the reader, and the sense of inevitable turn carries a quiet, elemental weight.
February 1st, 2026 07:42
Lightning storm
sorenbarrett said:
Do I hear a threat in this poem? It sounds menacing and a bit dark. Well written
February 1st, 2026 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Do I hear a threat in this poem? It sounds menacing and a bit dark. Well written
February 1st, 2026 06:26
Lasting Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of love holds a tension up to the end. Nicely written
January 31st, 2026 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
This poem of love holds a tension up to the end. Nicely written
January 31st, 2026 11:27
Good of kind
sorenbarrett said:
So classical in the feel of its meter and rhyme this poem sends its message to all. Well done
January 30th, 2026 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
So classical in the feel of its meter and rhyme this poem sends its message to all. Well done
January 30th, 2026 10:22
The Pilgrimage
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem encompasses themes of pilgrimage, longing for peace, the struggles of life, and the idea that true wealth is not monetary but rather found in spiritual fulfillment and communal harmony.
January 29th, 2026 08:10
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem encompasses themes of pilgrimage, longing for peace, the struggles of life, and the idea that true wealth is not monetary but rather found in spiritual fulfillment and communal harmony.
January 29th, 2026 08:10
The Pilgrimage
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded with a great meter. Loved it
January 29th, 2026 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well worded with a great meter. Loved it
January 29th, 2026 07:58
Forezt Fire
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of nature and renewal very nicely worded
January 29th, 2026 03:01
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of nature and renewal very nicely worded
January 29th, 2026 03:01
No more tears
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of prediction with wonderful images throughout. Nicely done
January 25th, 2026 20:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of prediction with wonderful images throughout. Nicely done
January 25th, 2026 20:09
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed emotion bitter sweet, hot and cold. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed emotion bitter sweet, hot and cold. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 14:38
Happiness
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a poem of deceit and one all too true. Well written it speaks for itself and is a fave
January 19th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a poem of deceit and one all too true. Well written it speaks for itself and is a fave
January 19th, 2026 13:03
Happiness
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexities of love, loyalty, and the struggle between internal emotions and external challenges. It emphasizes the enduring nature of love amidst adversity and the importance of protecting one’s feelings and words.
January 19th, 2026 12:35
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexities of love, loyalty, and the struggle between internal emotions and external challenges. It emphasizes the enduring nature of love amidst adversity and the importance of protecting one’s feelings and words.
January 19th, 2026 12:35
The Dance
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of love, juxtaposing chaotic emotions with moments of tenderness and nostalgia. It reflects on the highs and lows of romantic relationships, capturing both the joyous and sorrowful aspects of love. lovely written.
January 18th, 2026 18:13
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of love, juxtaposing chaotic emotions with moments of tenderness and nostalgia. It reflects on the highs and lows of romantic relationships, capturing both the joyous and sorrowful aspects of love. lovely written.
January 18th, 2026 18:13
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