Comments received on poems by RSM0812



Behold a rose
Damaso said:

What beauty enjoyed it a lot. Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings!

July 1st, 2025 09:40

Behold a rose
sorenbarrett said:

Classically set in the form of a rose and with accompanying language it in metaphor speaks of love. Well done and so common a theme I too am writing a poem now of the same subject.

July 1st, 2025 09:02

Hungover
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely worded this poem flows like the wine itself

June 30th, 2025 10:35

Home
sorenbarrett said:

There is no place like home and although this poem seems literal in a sense it may be taken metaphorically as well. Nicely done

June 29th, 2025 11:12

A Favorite Song
RSM0812 said:

Thanks for the fav. Im glad u liked it.

June 28th, 2025 14:09

Natures Mind
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write, enjoyed the read

June 28th, 2025 13:03

A Favorite Song
sorenbarrett said:

Wistful, sad and beautiful! A fave

June 28th, 2025 11:39

A Spring Storm
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and winter\'s lingering echoes. The imagery of nature\'s rebirth and stormy memories feels vivid and heartfelt. A touching reflection on renewal and remembrance.

June 27th, 2025 15:01

A Spring Storm
sorenbarrett said:

Seasonal memories of days gone bye in this poem leave a wistful feeling. Very nice

June 27th, 2025 10:53

Natures Mind
sorenbarrett said:

Symbolic in its images this poem speaks in metaphor. Very nice

June 26th, 2025 11:05

From the Dragons Mouth
Poetic Licence said:

Enjoyed the read

June 24th, 2025 22:40

From the Dragons Mouth
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely worded and well written it seems a metaphor as well. Very nice

June 24th, 2025 08:48

Fields of Daffodils
NafisaSB said:

very tender and lyrical.. God bless you both
an enjoyable read

June 24th, 2025 01:26

Truth and Lies
sorenbarrett said:

A poem and a journey through mortality set in a biblical metaphor nicely rhymed and metered it speaks cynically of the cycle of life,. Very well penned.

June 23rd, 2025 04:47

The darkness
sorenbarrett said:

Some good lines in this poem I particularly liked (And drink your death when your not thirsty.) Nicely penned

June 22nd, 2025 03:50

Untitled
sorenbarrett said:

Men\'s atrocities buried under the dirt of time uncovered from time to time and viewed from a distance are swept back under the rug of faded memory but those still fresh stink and remind us of the carnage we wrack on our fellow man. A sad poem

June 20th, 2025 06:08

Untitled
arqios said:

The heart of this poem lies in the vivid, jarring remembrance of the Holocaust, presented here not to shock, but to underscore the inhumanity bred from unchecked hatred. “Like Jews to poison gasses…Thrown by thousands into a ditch.” These lines serve as witness to suffering but also as a moral reckoning. And brings a message of \'silence is complicity, and forgetfulness is dangerous.\' The poem closes with a chilling truth: “The lessons learnt upon the world / They’re still in class,” is a stark reminder that history doesn’t end but continues in perpetuity. 🙏🏻🕊️

June 20th, 2025 05:51

Swcond Chances
arqios said:

The title exemplifies the need for such a swcond (sic) chance 🕊🙏🏻

June 19th, 2025 14:26

Swcond Chances
Poetic Licence said:

Forgiveness in love is sometimes a hard thing to do, but if you can it makes all the difference, a lovely write, enjoyed the read

June 19th, 2025 10:19

Swcond Chances
sorenbarrett said:

Forgiveness and renewal in love seems the theme of this poem. A wonderful write

June 19th, 2025 09:32

Fields of Daffodils
rrodriguez said:

Excellent write... It\'s so rhythmic and musical. Loved it. Thank you for sharing it.

June 18th, 2025 19:42

Fields of Daffodils
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Your words paint love like golden light,
dancing with daffodils—pure delight.



June 18th, 2025 13:30

Fields of Daffodils
Soman Ragavan said:

There is a poem by Wordsworth (1770-1850) about daffodils. Those flowers had a marked influence on him.

June 18th, 2025 11:11

Fields of Daffodils
sorenbarrett said:

This had such a sense of romance from another era. It seems folk like and of times gone by. A wistful feel and a dreamlike quality. Nice

June 18th, 2025 08:13

Fields of Daffodils
Jerry Reynolds said:

Really good write, RSM. I enjoyed the read.

June 18th, 2025 07:43

One Day at a Time
Damaso said:

What more perfect and pure piece! It is stunned, I can\'t believe it. Thanks for sharing. Greetings

June 17th, 2025 09:15

One Day at a Time
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of encouragement that calls out tot he readers. Very nicely done

June 16th, 2025 10:43

Damn it
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ve done that before and it is most aggravating. Lucky I always have a spare.

June 15th, 2025 12:35

Damn it
Lorenz said:

Demar avatar !

June 15th, 2025 12:08

Untittled
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Your words weave darkness and light with haunting grace—
a raw, poetic dance that lingers in the mind\'s quiet space.

June 14th, 2025 13:05



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