Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Springs Song
arqios said:
If we listened more and looked more about us and breathe... our Spring ears will also atune.
July 17th, 2025 07:27
arqios said:
If we listened more and looked more about us and breathe... our Spring ears will also atune.
July 17th, 2025 07:27
Oh Wind
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful stormy tale. To watch as the wind blows, trees swaying and bending to its will, its sometimes destructive nature all speak to the wonder of mother nature. Great write!
July 16th, 2025 11:33
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful stormy tale. To watch as the wind blows, trees swaying and bending to its will, its sometimes destructive nature all speak to the wonder of mother nature. Great write!
July 16th, 2025 11:33
Oh Wind
sorenbarrett said:
This poem could well be a blessing said over food. I just await the amen. Nicely done
July 16th, 2025 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
This poem could well be a blessing said over food. I just await the amen. Nicely done
July 16th, 2025 07:07
The Tigress and the Eclipse
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I was recomended to change the first line and i didnt. Lol. Thanks for your read and comment.
July 15th, 2025 10:59
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I was recomended to change the first line and i didnt. Lol. Thanks for your read and comment.
July 15th, 2025 10:59
The Tigress and the Eclipse
Damaso said:
Wow, it\'s a spectacle from start to finish. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 09:33
Damaso said:
Wow, it\'s a spectacle from start to finish. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 09:33
The Tigress and the Eclipse
sorenbarrett said:
The first stanza although cryptic is my favorite it sets the ground for the rest. A wonderful splash of poetic color.
July 15th, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
The first stanza although cryptic is my favorite it sets the ground for the rest. A wonderful splash of poetic color.
July 15th, 2025 07:34
Waiting in Love
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem without doubt. It speaks in poetic terms of a deep love. Nicely done
July 14th, 2025 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem without doubt. It speaks in poetic terms of a deep love. Nicely done
July 14th, 2025 08:07
The hustle
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s good to win, isn\'t it? Perhaps I\'m a little envious, but you\'ve left me smiling.
July 13th, 2025 14:10
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s good to win, isn\'t it? Perhaps I\'m a little envious, but you\'ve left me smiling.
July 13th, 2025 14:10
The hustle
sorenbarrett said:
Great confidence in this poem that speaks with power. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Great confidence in this poem that speaks with power. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 09:31
Untitled
gray0328 said:
Sorry for your loss. My dad is 87 and I thank God every day.
July 13th, 2025 07:36
gray0328 said:
Sorry for your loss. My dad is 87 and I thank God every day.
July 13th, 2025 07:36
Untitled
Bella Shepard said:
I am so sorry for your loss. Your words speak of one who must have been your wonderful life model in every way. Wishing you and your father peace and comfort.
July 12th, 2025 08:59
Bella Shepard said:
I am so sorry for your loss. Your words speak of one who must have been your wonderful life model in every way. Wishing you and your father peace and comfort.
July 12th, 2025 08:59
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
So sorry to hear that my condolences to you. A beautiful write it is.
July 12th, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
So sorry to hear that my condolences to you. A beautiful write it is.
July 12th, 2025 08:36
Lingering Love
sorenbarrett said:
Sonnet with rhyme and and message not necessarily of love.
July 11th, 2025 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
Sonnet with rhyme and and message not necessarily of love.
July 11th, 2025 12:17
Springs Stir
Damaso said:
Wow, how intense the transition from one image to another. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:05
Damaso said:
Wow, how intense the transition from one image to another. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:05
Springs Stir
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that rocks back and forth with its flow. Short but nicely done
July 10th, 2025 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that rocks back and forth with its flow. Short but nicely done
July 10th, 2025 06:22
Fields of Daffodils
𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 said:
so sweet and soft, and a tad playful. hey lovely, indeed.
July 9th, 2025 11:14
𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 said:
so sweet and soft, and a tad playful. hey lovely, indeed.
July 9th, 2025 11:14
Mercy of Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and without hope is the initial feel Control and betrayal lead to a lack of trust which all seem pretty typical in today\'s
July 9th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and without hope is the initial feel Control and betrayal lead to a lack of trust which all seem pretty typical in today\'s
July 9th, 2025 09:33
Mercy of Mind
Bella Shepard said:
We can hope for mercy in a world turned upside down, unlike anything we\'ve ever known. You capture the feeling of disillusionment that seems to be pervasive. Well thought out, and very well written!
July 9th, 2025 09:23
Bella Shepard said:
We can hope for mercy in a world turned upside down, unlike anything we\'ve ever known. You capture the feeling of disillusionment that seems to be pervasive. Well thought out, and very well written!
July 9th, 2025 09:23
Heaven Waits
Bella Shepard said:
I love to read poetry aloud, and this poem possesses a beautiful lyrical quality as it takes us through the trials of life. Well done!
July 8th, 2025 15:43
Bella Shepard said:
I love to read poetry aloud, and this poem possesses a beautiful lyrical quality as it takes us through the trials of life. Well done!
July 8th, 2025 15:43
Heaven Waits
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is well written with great rhyme and images and is a fave
July 8th, 2025 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is well written with great rhyme and images and is a fave
July 8th, 2025 12:46
Untitled
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, some lovely lines, nice flow as you read creating nice images, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 07:27
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, some lovely lines, nice flow as you read creating nice images, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 07:27
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Love inspires images not otherwise seen. A beautiful poem of great depth and wonderful scenes that melt into metaphor. Very nicely done with rhyme
July 7th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Love inspires images not otherwise seen. A beautiful poem of great depth and wonderful scenes that melt into metaphor. Very nicely done with rhyme
July 7th, 2025 07:00
The Women at the Eclipse
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting tale of seductive love and its redeeming force. Very nicely written
July 6th, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting tale of seductive love and its redeeming force. Very nicely written
July 6th, 2025 15:24
Julys Purple Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A holiday celebration with a flower. A beautiful image cast of this purple flower. The Larkspur a beautiful flower representing love and joy. Nicely done
July 4th, 2025 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
A holiday celebration with a flower. A beautiful image cast of this purple flower. The Larkspur a beautiful flower representing love and joy. Nicely done
July 4th, 2025 10:40
The Boiled Black Sea
sorenbarrett said:
A world where might makes right, survival of the fittest is natures way yet we as humans feel a need to impose our values of love, compassion, fairness into the equation makes it a sad world where we are pitted against the forces of nature in a no win battle. Man has always been cruel by nature. A most emotional and well written poem of a powerful nature. Lovely
July 3rd, 2025 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
A world where might makes right, survival of the fittest is natures way yet we as humans feel a need to impose our values of love, compassion, fairness into the equation makes it a sad world where we are pitted against the forces of nature in a no win battle. Man has always been cruel by nature. A most emotional and well written poem of a powerful nature. Lovely
July 3rd, 2025 06:15
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