Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Rest
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for peace and raises questions of how peace is obtained. Cleanly written and with good meter and thought provoking
March 29th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for peace and raises questions of how peace is obtained. Cleanly written and with good meter and thought provoking
March 29th, 2025 08:25
Oh Robin
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image but I feel that there is a metaphor here as well. So nicely stated
March 28th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image but I feel that there is a metaphor here as well. So nicely stated
March 28th, 2025 09:02
Greed
Poetic Licence said:
Well written write that flows really nicely as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:47
Poetic Licence said:
Well written write that flows really nicely as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:47
Greed
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and internal rhyme that carry this poem and give it more power. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and internal rhyme that carry this poem and give it more power. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:36
Prayer
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly poetic in its form and symbolism with good meter and organization and well deserves a fave
March 26th, 2025 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly poetic in its form and symbolism with good meter and organization and well deserves a fave
March 26th, 2025 08:50
Fiery Hall
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write although the images are haunting and sad they convey the story nicely, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 05:44
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write although the images are haunting and sad they convey the story nicely, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 05:44
Fiery Hall
sorenbarrett said:
This has happened before and whether this poem is a tribute or a ,metaphor it matters not. It is ghostly and haunts the reader. Nicely worded with great images and vivid powerful words.
March 25th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This has happened before and whether this poem is a tribute or a ,metaphor it matters not. It is ghostly and haunts the reader. Nicely worded with great images and vivid powerful words.
March 25th, 2025 04:17
Tapestyr
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem full of wonderful images and as a metaphor it works so well. Absolutely lovely
March 24th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem full of wonderful images and as a metaphor it works so well. Absolutely lovely
March 24th, 2025 06:19
Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Been there in that storm both literally in hurricanes and emotionally. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Been there in that storm both literally in hurricanes and emotionally. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 11:55
The Will
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful intricate piece of writing, which will, will win, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 08:56
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful intricate piece of writing, which will, will win, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 08:56
A Moment
RSM0812 said:
Thanks. I\'m delighted that you liked it. Thanks for the fav too!!
March 23rd, 2025 07:06
RSM0812 said:
Thanks. I\'m delighted that you liked it. Thanks for the fav too!!
March 23rd, 2025 07:06
The Will
sorenbarrett said:
Here a great message is sent in most intriguing rhyme scheme a puzzle to be unwound in poetic words found. Brilliant!
March 23rd, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
Here a great message is sent in most intriguing rhyme scheme a puzzle to be unwound in poetic words found. Brilliant!
March 23rd, 2025 05:49
A Moment
MR.apocalypse said:
this might be the best poem ive seen today.
the way i could easily understand your rhythm and rhyme.
the unique words give it a new an refreshing taste.
this is a phenomenal poem in my opinion
March 23rd, 2025 01:55
MR.apocalypse said:
this might be the best poem ive seen today.
the way i could easily understand your rhythm and rhyme.
the unique words give it a new an refreshing taste.
this is a phenomenal poem in my opinion
March 23rd, 2025 01:55
A Moment
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of puzzle that like the inner psyche develops and breeds thoughts. Well written with internal and end rhyme it echoes in the mind. Very nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of puzzle that like the inner psyche develops and breeds thoughts. Well written with internal and end rhyme it echoes in the mind. Very nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 06:44
My Rose
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of one enamored and of passion that lies in new love. A great painting and metaphor and well said
March 21st, 2025 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of one enamored and of passion that lies in new love. A great painting and metaphor and well said
March 21st, 2025 06:44
Speeches Freedoms
Poetic Licence said:
Freedom of speech is a fading thing and thus progress in humanity will be halted, well crafted write with a positive message, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:00
Poetic Licence said:
Freedom of speech is a fading thing and thus progress in humanity will be halted, well crafted write with a positive message, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 05:00
Speeches Freedoms
sorenbarrett said:
Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the greatest in speaking wisdom and still none listen. A well composed poem with good flow and rhyme. Lovely
March 20th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the greatest in speaking wisdom and still none listen. A well composed poem with good flow and rhyme. Lovely
March 20th, 2025 04:29
Winters Kiss
Neville said:
I wanted to see exactly where you were coming from RSM & having trawled back thus far, I am delighted to say that I have not yet been disappointed .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:16
Neville said:
I wanted to see exactly where you were coming from RSM & having trawled back thus far, I am delighted to say that I have not yet been disappointed .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:16
Fake
Neville said:
I used to think I could spot a fake a mile off .. but today is more frightening than yesterday ever was .. and there are those who have turned falsehood & lies into both an art and a science .. and sadly the most adept at these things are those who hold high office .. and let\'s not even go near AI .. anyway, rant over, I get where you are coming from & enjoyed my all too brief visit here today .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:12
Neville said:
I used to think I could spot a fake a mile off .. but today is more frightening than yesterday ever was .. and there are those who have turned falsehood & lies into both an art and a science .. and sadly the most adept at these things are those who hold high office .. and let\'s not even go near AI .. anyway, rant over, I get where you are coming from & enjoyed my all too brief visit here today .. Neville
March 20th, 2025 03:12
Fake
Poetic Licence said:
How we have become to blind to distinguish fake or real anymore, not enough people question when they should, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 12:08
Poetic Licence said:
How we have become to blind to distinguish fake or real anymore, not enough people question when they should, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 12:08
Fake
sorenbarrett said:
A bite cryptic this poem speaks to falseness and our inability to see it. Nicely worded
March 19th, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
A bite cryptic this poem speaks to falseness and our inability to see it. Nicely worded
March 19th, 2025 11:04
A women or a flower
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of how both are similar and blossom into beauty, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 12:58
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of how both are similar and blossom into beauty, enjoyed the read
March 18th, 2025 12:58
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