Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Field of flowers
sorenbarrett said:
Angel trumpets in your pillow? A most wonderful read of a peaceful somewhat altered state.
January 25th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
Angel trumpets in your pillow? A most wonderful read of a peaceful somewhat altered state.
January 25th, 2025 11:38
Field of flowers
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery in your lines. Nicely composed. Thanks for sharing.
January 25th, 2025 11:08
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery in your lines. Nicely composed. Thanks for sharing.
January 25th, 2025 11:08
Storm and Storm
sorenbarrett said:
A farewell to winter in this poem. The meter is great and pulls the reader along and is aided by rhyme and near rhyme. It has the pacing of a limeric and sends its message well. Nicely done
January 25th, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A farewell to winter in this poem. The meter is great and pulls the reader along and is aided by rhyme and near rhyme. It has the pacing of a limeric and sends its message well. Nicely done
January 25th, 2025 07:51
Storm and Storm
Poetic Licence said:
It will soon be on it`s way, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:42
Poetic Licence said:
It will soon be on it`s way, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:42
To Pam
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt poem, written message to a love gone by, nicely and caringly worded
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt poem, written message to a love gone by, nicely and caringly worded
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
To Pam
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write to an old lover that time has separated it flows with hope.
January 23rd, 2025 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write to an old lover that time has separated it flows with hope.
January 23rd, 2025 07:21
Freezing
sorenbarrett said:
Frozen images play in this winter wonderland. Descriptive to say the least
January 21st, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Frozen images play in this winter wonderland. Descriptive to say the least
January 21st, 2025 08:42
The Calm
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme, near rhyme and irregular internal patterns of rhyme in this poem lend to the flow and beauty of this piece. The message is deep as well and the poem is the perfect length for the message. Very nice it was most enjoyable to read
January 19th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme, near rhyme and irregular internal patterns of rhyme in this poem lend to the flow and beauty of this piece. The message is deep as well and the poem is the perfect length for the message. Very nice it was most enjoyable to read
January 19th, 2025 05:00
Morning Stillness
sorenbarrett said:
Senual and by metaphor sexual it speaks to the seduction of the night. Lovely
January 17th, 2025 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
Senual and by metaphor sexual it speaks to the seduction of the night. Lovely
January 17th, 2025 12:37
Lovers Fate
sorenbarrett said:
A very warm and sensual poem that is heartwarming through its protectiveness. Well worded and with good flow.
January 15th, 2025 13:44
sorenbarrett said:
A very warm and sensual poem that is heartwarming through its protectiveness. Well worded and with good flow.
January 15th, 2025 13:44
The right
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well with great rhyme and flow as well as a thought provoking meaning
January 14th, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reads well with great rhyme and flow as well as a thought provoking meaning
January 14th, 2025 09:15
Worm
sorenbarrett said:
You have a most interesting way of pairing opposite dualities in each line. Nice
January 13th, 2025 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
You have a most interesting way of pairing opposite dualities in each line. Nice
January 13th, 2025 19:42
Truth and lies
sorenbarrett said:
Unique wording in this poem kept me guessing. A fun read
January 13th, 2025 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
Unique wording in this poem kept me guessing. A fun read
January 13th, 2025 19:35
Truth and lies
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write and i am imagining, enjoyed the read
January 13th, 2025 12:17
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write and i am imagining, enjoyed the read
January 13th, 2025 12:17
Angel tears
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and beautiful piece of being guided to the right way, enjoyed the read
January 10th, 2025 23:02
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and beautiful piece of being guided to the right way, enjoyed the read
January 10th, 2025 23:02
Locked in a kiss
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful rhyme locked in a kiss indeed, love all the Imagery 🌹
January 9th, 2025 14:52
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful rhyme locked in a kiss indeed, love all the Imagery 🌹
January 9th, 2025 14:52
Locked in a kiss
Poetic Licence said:
Quite a haunting read but beautifully written, enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 12:00
Poetic Licence said:
Quite a haunting read but beautifully written, enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 12:00
Bones
Poetic Licence said:
I found it a interesting and thought provoking read, which i enjoyed reading.
January 8th, 2025 10:12
Poetic Licence said:
I found it a interesting and thought provoking read, which i enjoyed reading.
January 8th, 2025 10:12
Bones
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful meaning in this poem disguised under a thin layer of metaphor it flows in great rhyme and meter.
January 8th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful meaning in this poem disguised under a thin layer of metaphor it flows in great rhyme and meter.
January 8th, 2025 09:45
Winds of time
Poetic Licence said:
Nature free to do as it pleases, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 08:30
Poetic Licence said:
Nature free to do as it pleases, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 08:30
Winds of time
arqios said:
The winds of time don’t hibernate or migrate in the winter- a revelatory thought courtesy of your engaging poem! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 05:55
arqios said:
The winds of time don’t hibernate or migrate in the winter- a revelatory thought courtesy of your engaging poem! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 05:55
My love
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a heart felt loving dedication to their loved one, enjoyed the read.
January 6th, 2025 11:37
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a heart felt loving dedication to their loved one, enjoyed the read.
January 6th, 2025 11:37
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