Comments received on poems by RSM0812
The quiet
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I wrote it last night as I had someone close pass away suddenly yesterday of a heart attack. My mind was on the kiss of death I guess.
August 8th, 2024 07:27
RSM0812 said:
Thank you. I wrote it last night as I had someone close pass away suddenly yesterday of a heart attack. My mind was on the kiss of death I guess.
August 8th, 2024 07:27
The quiet
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautifully worded poem that paints a picture in metaphor\'s colors. From nothingness through birth to death. The internal rhyme worked so well to keep the emotion and pacing needed in this poem. Lovely certainly one of my favorites.
August 8th, 2024 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautifully worded poem that paints a picture in metaphor\'s colors. From nothingness through birth to death. The internal rhyme worked so well to keep the emotion and pacing needed in this poem. Lovely certainly one of my favorites.
August 8th, 2024 06:38
Bones
MLHnow said:
Wow and more wow
A poem for the ages of mankind
Reminds me of much poem wealth we humans have written for centuries!
June 20th, 2024 16:12
MLHnow said:
Wow and more wow
A poem for the ages of mankind
Reminds me of much poem wealth we humans have written for centuries!
June 20th, 2024 16:12
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