Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Farewell Winter
Poetic Licence said:
At last the sun has ended its vacation, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 14:58
Poetic Licence said:
At last the sun has ended its vacation, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 14:58
Farewell Winter
arqios said:
So reminds me of my wife and myself! Now I’m melting like Olaf ( ⛄️ from Frozen fame) 🙏🏻🕊️
March 2nd, 2025 12:38
arqios said:
So reminds me of my wife and myself! Now I’m melting like Olaf ( ⛄️ from Frozen fame) 🙏🏻🕊️
March 2nd, 2025 12:38
Scam
sorenbarrett said:
Open to many interpretations this one I took as each or our own meat sacks that are only on rent. Lovely
March 1st, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Open to many interpretations this one I took as each or our own meat sacks that are only on rent. Lovely
March 1st, 2025 11:33
She
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed and layered write i enjoyed reading
February 26th, 2025 12:52
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed and layered write i enjoyed reading
February 26th, 2025 12:52
She
sorenbarrett said:
Dramatic this poem that could be taken as a metaphor as well. Very nicely done.
February 26th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Dramatic this poem that could be taken as a metaphor as well. Very nicely done.
February 26th, 2025 09:40
Our Song
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece which feels smooth as you read through, yet has a dark undercurrent, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:50
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece which feels smooth as you read through, yet has a dark undercurrent, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:50
Our Song
sorenbarrett said:
Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the meaning is deep and rather heavy. A absolutely wonderful piece that I wish I had written. A definite fave
February 25th, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the meaning is deep and rather heavy. A absolutely wonderful piece that I wish I had written. A definite fave
February 25th, 2025 03:32
Oh Tender Tongue
NafisaSB said:
your ecstasy shines out - all the best for much more
February 24th, 2025 00:24
NafisaSB said:
your ecstasy shines out - all the best for much more
February 24th, 2025 00:24
Oh Tender Tongue
arqios said:
A stirring expression and poetic rendition. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 14:35
arqios said:
A stirring expression and poetic rendition. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 14:35
Oh Tender Tongue
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with good rhyme and underlying meaning. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with good rhyme and underlying meaning. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 11:42
Tick Tock
sorenbarrett said:
Apocalyptic in nature is the feel that I get from this poem. The passage of time is emphasized and it seems dark. Nicely expressed.
February 22nd, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
Apocalyptic in nature is the feel that I get from this poem. The passage of time is emphasized and it seems dark. Nicely expressed.
February 22nd, 2025 13:30
Tinkering with Control
Poetic Licence said:
Greed the creator of monsters, the tool of destruction, the illness in today\'s world, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 12:52
Poetic Licence said:
Greed the creator of monsters, the tool of destruction, the illness in today\'s world, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 12:52
Tinkering with Control
sorenbarrett said:
Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and breaks society. Good write
February 19th, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and breaks society. Good write
February 19th, 2025 11:30
Toungue twister
sorenbarrett said:
Great internal rhyme in this piece that helps in the flow. Very nice.
February 18th, 2025 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
Great internal rhyme in this piece that helps in the flow. Very nice.
February 18th, 2025 14:23
My dreams
arqios said:
Like how you positioned strength and gentleness in one seamless movement, that speaks heaps and heaps🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:39
arqios said:
Like how you positioned strength and gentleness in one seamless movement, that speaks heaps and heaps🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:39
My dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Many live their dreams as their reality. A wonderful write
February 17th, 2025 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Many live their dreams as their reality. A wonderful write
February 17th, 2025 11:14
Do or Dare
Poetic Licence said:
How far will we push the boundaries, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 16:22
Poetic Licence said:
How far will we push the boundaries, enjoyed the read
February 16th, 2025 16:22
Do or Dare
sorenbarrett said:
A provocative write and the question remains how far do we go on a dare? Loved it
February 16th, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
A provocative write and the question remains how far do we go on a dare? Loved it
February 16th, 2025 14:22
Eternal emotions
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that strikes at the heart. A strong write
February 15th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write that strikes at the heart. A strong write
February 15th, 2025 13:28
Mountains Candle
sorenbarrett said:
Careful wording and images give the feeling of past places one has been and this is well blended with the sense of togetherness until the end of time. Very nice and emotional
February 13th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Careful wording and images give the feeling of past places one has been and this is well blended with the sense of togetherness until the end of time. Very nice and emotional
February 13th, 2025 10:54
Any Man
Poetic Licence said:
I get the feel of loneliness and isolation, someone who could do with a bit of company. Well written
February 12th, 2025 10:16
Poetic Licence said:
I get the feel of loneliness and isolation, someone who could do with a bit of company. Well written
February 12th, 2025 10:16
Any Man
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and isolation pervade this poem. It carries the reader down this street to its inevitable dead end. Nicely written
February 12th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and isolation pervade this poem. It carries the reader down this street to its inevitable dead end. Nicely written
February 12th, 2025 09:13
Dead Kings
sorenbarrett said:
A message here for people of today. Kings or presidents all one and the same. A timely read
February 11th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
A message here for people of today. Kings or presidents all one and the same. A timely read
February 11th, 2025 08:14
The Train to North Durham
David Wakeling said:
Women? ya can\'t live with em and ya can\'t shoot em. A lively tale of the girl that got away.Don\'t they all.Enjoyed this well constructed poem
February 10th, 2025 15:05
David Wakeling said:
Women? ya can\'t live with em and ya can\'t shoot em. A lively tale of the girl that got away.Don\'t they all.Enjoyed this well constructed poem
February 10th, 2025 15:05
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