Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Death
sorenbarrett said:
Death or sleep in this poem. A write of doom or nightmare. Written in rhyme and good meter it flows as a dark dream
September 26th, 2025 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Death or sleep in this poem. A write of doom or nightmare. Written in rhyme and good meter it flows as a dark dream
September 26th, 2025 04:56
My Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
Well put and nicely written this poem tells its story well. Nicely penned
September 25th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
Well put and nicely written this poem tells its story well. Nicely penned
September 25th, 2025 08:38
My Maiden
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one resounds with savage remembrance of Zeus and the gods in the rape of mortals and the creation of demigods. It has power and a sense of ownership that cries out with the sound of war drums. Lovely and a fave
September 24th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! this one resounds with savage remembrance of Zeus and the gods in the rape of mortals and the creation of demigods. It has power and a sense of ownership that cries out with the sound of war drums. Lovely and a fave
September 24th, 2025 08:18
Mountain Girls
sorenbarrett said:
It is the combination of rhyme, meter, flow and story that gets the fave this time. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
It is the combination of rhyme, meter, flow and story that gets the fave this time. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 07:55
Atheism
Doggerel Dave said:
\"what ever will be will be...\" Truth can be found in odd places sometimes....
September 22nd, 2025 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
\"what ever will be will be...\" Truth can be found in odd places sometimes....
September 22nd, 2025 16:53
Atheism
Paul Bell said:
Hate when that death is in the small print.
God is good, the sign tells me.
September 22nd, 2025 11:43
Paul Bell said:
Hate when that death is in the small print.
God is good, the sign tells me.
September 22nd, 2025 11:43
Atheism
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
non believers beware seems to be the message
September 22nd, 2025 11:19
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
non believers beware seems to be the message
September 22nd, 2025 11:19
Atheism
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the meter and flow of this poem nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the meter and flow of this poem nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:25
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
An incantation with biblical implications very nicely penned
September 21st, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
An incantation with biblical implications very nicely penned
September 21st, 2025 07:34
Extended version
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in the shape of a cross speaks loudly with strong words buried in a shadow. A fave my friend
September 20th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in the shape of a cross speaks loudly with strong words buried in a shadow. A fave my friend
September 20th, 2025 05:45
Beauty Rare
Bella Shepard said:
your poem evokes a state of bliss, like no other. It truly is a \"Rare Beauty\". Loved every line.
September 19th, 2025 09:17
Bella Shepard said:
your poem evokes a state of bliss, like no other. It truly is a \"Rare Beauty\". Loved every line.
September 19th, 2025 09:17
Beauty Rare
sorenbarrett said:
The meter and rhyme give this poem a feel of the beyond. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
The meter and rhyme give this poem a feel of the beyond. Nicely done
September 19th, 2025 05:58
The World
Bella Shepard said:
Your words ring true, we are capable of so much better. This food for thought is definitely good for us, thank you!
September 18th, 2025 08:38
Bella Shepard said:
Your words ring true, we are capable of so much better. This food for thought is definitely good for us, thank you!
September 18th, 2025 08:38
Untitled
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is tender, lyrical, and suffused with a sense of quiet longing and devotion. It blends classical phrasing “canst sway” with intimate, personal imagery, creating a romantic and almost ethereal atmosphere. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:57
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is tender, lyrical, and suffused with a sense of quiet longing and devotion. It blends classical phrasing “canst sway” with intimate, personal imagery, creating a romantic and almost ethereal atmosphere. Nicely written. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:57
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Truly poetic and most deserving of a fave this poem it truly beautiful in every way. Cadence, rhyme, flow and thought it has them all
September 17th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
Truly poetic and most deserving of a fave this poem it truly beautiful in every way. Cadence, rhyme, flow and thought it has them all
September 17th, 2025 06:19
Truist Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love cast in classical verse. Nicely rhymed it flows as a stream through a garden
September 16th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love cast in classical verse. Nicely rhymed it flows as a stream through a garden
September 16th, 2025 04:49
Time is Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to use dualities to express its meaning. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to use dualities to express its meaning. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 05:14
Frozen Lake
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow powerful but sad and beautifully written.
September 14th, 2025 22:25
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow powerful but sad and beautifully written.
September 14th, 2025 22:25
Frozen Lake
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor. Time past is irretrievable, and holds fast all that has been for better or worse. Beautiful!
September 14th, 2025 10:33
Bella Shepard said:
I love the metaphor. Time past is irretrievable, and holds fast all that has been for better or worse. Beautiful!
September 14th, 2025 10:33
Frozen Lake
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet beautiful it is a great metaphor with deep meaning couched in poetic images. A fave
September 14th, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet beautiful it is a great metaphor with deep meaning couched in poetic images. A fave
September 14th, 2025 07:33
Floatin Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
Clouds hold dreams and every once in a while they rain on us. A most lovely write
September 13th, 2025 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
Clouds hold dreams and every once in a while they rain on us. A most lovely write
September 13th, 2025 08:55
Hall of the Dead
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love the end rhyme\'s. Interesting poem.
September 12th, 2025 10:20
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Love the end rhyme\'s. Interesting poem.
September 12th, 2025 10:20
Hall of the Dead
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a certain lightness as it speaks of a relationship dear with a dearly departed. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a certain lightness as it speaks of a relationship dear with a dearly departed. Nicely done
September 12th, 2025 04:53
Passions of the dead.
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word usage in this poem leaves a powerful message in rhyme. A fave
September 11th, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
Clever word usage in this poem leaves a powerful message in rhyme. A fave
September 11th, 2025 10:07
Eyes Closed
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s often true: most people close their eyes to the injustices of others if they live a fine enough life.
September 10th, 2025 17:56
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s often true: most people close their eyes to the injustices of others if they live a fine enough life.
September 10th, 2025 17:56
Eyes Closed
Bella Shepard said:
Sad but true, this poetic commentary of the life we appear to accept. A very good write!
September 10th, 2025 08:52
Bella Shepard said:
Sad but true, this poetic commentary of the life we appear to accept. A very good write!
September 10th, 2025 08:52
Eyes Closed
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write where the rich get rich because they know the rules of the game and the poor do not. Justice closes its eyes to the rich not the poor for rules must be enforced whether known or not. A good read
September 10th, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write where the rich get rich because they know the rules of the game and the poor do not. Justice closes its eyes to the rich not the poor for rules must be enforced whether known or not. A good read
September 10th, 2025 07:04
Floating Strem
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is eerie and somewhat dark yet feels peaceful and serene. A lovely write
September 9th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is eerie and somewhat dark yet feels peaceful and serene. A lovely write
September 9th, 2025 06:26
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