Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Untitled
arqios said:
The heart of this poem lies in the vivid, jarring remembrance of the Holocaust, presented here not to shock, but to underscore the inhumanity bred from unchecked hatred. “Like Jews to poison gasses…Thrown by thousands into a ditch.” These lines serve as witness to suffering but also as a moral reckoning. And brings a message of \'silence is complicity, and forgetfulness is dangerous.\' The poem closes with a chilling truth: “The lessons learnt upon the world / They’re still in class,” is a stark reminder that history doesn’t end but continues in perpetuity. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2025 05:51
arqios said:
The heart of this poem lies in the vivid, jarring remembrance of the Holocaust, presented here not to shock, but to underscore the inhumanity bred from unchecked hatred. “Like Jews to poison gasses…Thrown by thousands into a ditch.” These lines serve as witness to suffering but also as a moral reckoning. And brings a message of \'silence is complicity, and forgetfulness is dangerous.\' The poem closes with a chilling truth: “The lessons learnt upon the world / They’re still in class,” is a stark reminder that history doesn’t end but continues in perpetuity. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 20th, 2025 05:51
Swcond Chances
arqios said:
The title exemplifies the need for such a swcond (sic) chance 🕊🙏🏻
June 19th, 2025 14:26
arqios said:
The title exemplifies the need for such a swcond (sic) chance 🕊🙏🏻
June 19th, 2025 14:26
Swcond Chances
Poetic Licence said:
Forgiveness in love is sometimes a hard thing to do, but if you can it makes all the difference, a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 10:19
Poetic Licence said:
Forgiveness in love is sometimes a hard thing to do, but if you can it makes all the difference, a lovely write, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 10:19
Swcond Chances
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness and renewal in love seems the theme of this poem. A wonderful write
June 19th, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Forgiveness and renewal in love seems the theme of this poem. A wonderful write
June 19th, 2025 09:32
Fields of Daffodils
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... It\'s so rhythmic and musical. Loved it. Thank you for sharing it.
June 18th, 2025 19:42
rrodriguez said:
Excellent write... It\'s so rhythmic and musical. Loved it. Thank you for sharing it.
June 18th, 2025 19:42
Fields of Daffodils
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint love like golden light,
dancing with daffodils—pure delight.
June 18th, 2025 13:30
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint love like golden light,
dancing with daffodils—pure delight.
June 18th, 2025 13:30
Fields of Daffodils
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a poem by Wordsworth (1770-1850) about daffodils. Those flowers had a marked influence on him.
June 18th, 2025 11:11
Soman Ragavan said:
There is a poem by Wordsworth (1770-1850) about daffodils. Those flowers had a marked influence on him.
June 18th, 2025 11:11
Fields of Daffodils
sorenbarrett said:
This had such a sense of romance from another era. It seems folk like and of times gone by. A wistful feel and a dreamlike quality. Nice
June 18th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
This had such a sense of romance from another era. It seems folk like and of times gone by. A wistful feel and a dreamlike quality. Nice
June 18th, 2025 08:13
Fields of Daffodils
Jerry Reynolds said:
Really good write, RSM. I enjoyed the read.
June 18th, 2025 07:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
Really good write, RSM. I enjoyed the read.
June 18th, 2025 07:43
One Day at a Time
Damaso said:
What more perfect and pure piece! It is stunned, I can\'t believe it. Thanks for sharing. Greetings
June 17th, 2025 09:15
Damaso said:
What more perfect and pure piece! It is stunned, I can\'t believe it. Thanks for sharing. Greetings
June 17th, 2025 09:15
One Day at a Time
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement that calls out tot he readers. Very nicely done
June 16th, 2025 10:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement that calls out tot he readers. Very nicely done
June 16th, 2025 10:43
Damn it
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve done that before and it is most aggravating. Lucky I always have a spare.
June 15th, 2025 12:35
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve done that before and it is most aggravating. Lucky I always have a spare.
June 15th, 2025 12:35
Untittled
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave darkness and light with haunting grace—
a raw, poetic dance that lingers in the mind\'s quiet space.
June 14th, 2025 13:05
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words weave darkness and light with haunting grace—
a raw, poetic dance that lingers in the mind\'s quiet space.
June 14th, 2025 13:05
Untittled
Poetic Licence said:
A call to a higher poem to stop the pretence and come clean with the truth, nicely expressed
June 14th, 2025 10:54
Poetic Licence said:
A call to a higher poem to stop the pretence and come clean with the truth, nicely expressed
June 14th, 2025 10:54
Untittled
sorenbarrett said:
Here a poem of a relationship whether real of internal or with a higher power it asks for clarity and a dropping of masks. Lovely
June 14th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Here a poem of a relationship whether real of internal or with a higher power it asks for clarity and a dropping of masks. Lovely
June 14th, 2025 08:26
The belligerent
sorenbarrett said:
The poem itself is surreal and take one on a journey through the dark streets of mind\'s mist. A haunting and lovely write
June 13th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
The poem itself is surreal and take one on a journey through the dark streets of mind\'s mist. A haunting and lovely write
June 13th, 2025 08:22
On the Beating Heart
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be unity in this poem of chained togetherness. Nice
June 12th, 2025 07:50
sorenbarrett said:
There seems to be unity in this poem of chained togetherness. Nice
June 12th, 2025 07:50
Morning walk at the Mall
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of thoughts cast as an angel took you away. A most creative write
June 11th, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of thoughts cast as an angel took you away. A most creative write
June 11th, 2025 09:35
On the Soul
Poetic Licence said:
I found this an interesting and well written write and made me think, it probably could relate to a relationship but I got the sense of it relating to the soul of mother nature, enjoyed the read
June 10th, 2025 23:53
Poetic Licence said:
I found this an interesting and well written write and made me think, it probably could relate to a relationship but I got the sense of it relating to the soul of mother nature, enjoyed the read
June 10th, 2025 23:53
On the Soul
sorenbarrett said:
One description after another that image this person well. Nicely said
June 10th, 2025 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
One description after another that image this person well. Nicely said
June 10th, 2025 16:38
Hearts that Break
sorenbarrett said:
A trail of metaphors lead one to the end of this poem. Love carries on. Very nice.
June 9th, 2025 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
A trail of metaphors lead one to the end of this poem. Love carries on. Very nice.
June 9th, 2025 17:05
The Heart Has a Cost
Poetic Licence said:
The write offers hope that through the pain and hurt of love and loss, the sun will shine again, enjoyed the read
June 8th, 2025 19:44
Poetic Licence said:
The write offers hope that through the pain and hurt of love and loss, the sun will shine again, enjoyed the read
June 8th, 2025 19:44
The Heart Has a Cost
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that not only with love there is pain but also that pain is in the brain even though it is felt in the body. Nicely written
June 8th, 2025 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that not only with love there is pain but also that pain is in the brain even though it is felt in the body. Nicely written
June 8th, 2025 09:57
The Heart Has a Cost
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the bittersweet dance of love and loss, with hope shining through like sunlight after rain. The imagery of hawks and clouds paints a moving picture of resilience and renewal.
June 8th, 2025 09:35
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the bittersweet dance of love and loss, with hope shining through like sunlight after rain. The imagery of hawks and clouds paints a moving picture of resilience and renewal.
June 8th, 2025 09:35
Winds that Chime
David Wakeling said:
A very haunting piece that creates powerful images.An enjoyable clever poem
June 7th, 2025 16:47
David Wakeling said:
A very haunting piece that creates powerful images.An enjoyable clever poem
June 7th, 2025 16:47
Winds that Chime
sorenbarrett said:
A work of words that speak of time in wonderful imagery. Painted well in ink.
June 7th, 2025 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
A work of words that speak of time in wonderful imagery. Painted well in ink.
June 7th, 2025 09:03
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