Comments received on poems by RSM0812
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sorenbarrett said:
Dark fatalism pervades this poem and indeed it is true. Very nicely put
February 1st, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Dark fatalism pervades this poem and indeed it is true. Very nicely put
February 1st, 2025 09:02
Untitled
Poetic Licence said:
A mind drifting in to the unknown, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:39
Poetic Licence said:
A mind drifting in to the unknown, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:39
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A look into the vast beyond. Nicely framed in the night sky. Beautiful
January 31st, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
A look into the vast beyond. Nicely framed in the night sky. Beautiful
January 31st, 2025 09:07
Lovers Kiss
Cassie58 said:
Touching and so very sensual. Beautifully composed.
January 29th, 2025 14:47
Cassie58 said:
Touching and so very sensual. Beautifully composed.
January 29th, 2025 14:47
With Fingers Linked
sorenbarrett said:
There is the surface of this poem and then what lies beneath. In metaphor this poem speaks to me even if it was not intended
January 27th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is the surface of this poem and then what lies beneath. In metaphor this poem speaks to me even if it was not intended
January 27th, 2025 12:26
With Fingers Linked
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 11:33
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 11:33
With Fingers Linked
RSM0812 said:
Unwinding at the end should be unbinding. Stupid spell check.
January 27th, 2025 07:50
RSM0812 said:
Unwinding at the end should be unbinding. Stupid spell check.
January 27th, 2025 07:50
Field of flowers
Dan Williams said:
What a nice build up to a satisfying ending \"And lied in the flowers and stayed\". Nice.
January 27th, 2025 00:59
Dan Williams said:
What a nice build up to a satisfying ending \"And lied in the flowers and stayed\". Nice.
January 27th, 2025 00:59
Waiting for Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A poem fraught with fear of punishment for making wrong choices. It contains a darkness and a feel of anger. It is sad that people need to be motivated by fear and dread when love and peace are available.
January 26th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poem fraught with fear of punishment for making wrong choices. It contains a darkness and a feel of anger. It is sad that people need to be motivated by fear and dread when love and peace are available.
January 26th, 2025 06:26
Field of flowers
sorenbarrett said:
Angel trumpets in your pillow? A most wonderful read of a peaceful somewhat altered state.
January 25th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
Angel trumpets in your pillow? A most wonderful read of a peaceful somewhat altered state.
January 25th, 2025 11:38
Field of flowers
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery in your lines. Nicely composed. Thanks for sharing.
January 25th, 2025 11:08
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery in your lines. Nicely composed. Thanks for sharing.
January 25th, 2025 11:08
Storm and Storm
sorenbarrett said:
A farewell to winter in this poem. The meter is great and pulls the reader along and is aided by rhyme and near rhyme. It has the pacing of a limeric and sends its message well. Nicely done
January 25th, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A farewell to winter in this poem. The meter is great and pulls the reader along and is aided by rhyme and near rhyme. It has the pacing of a limeric and sends its message well. Nicely done
January 25th, 2025 07:51
Storm and Storm
Poetic Licence said:
It will soon be on it`s way, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:42
Poetic Licence said:
It will soon be on it`s way, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:42
To Pam
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt poem, written message to a love gone by, nicely and caringly worded
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt poem, written message to a love gone by, nicely and caringly worded
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
To Pam
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write to an old lover that time has separated it flows with hope.
January 23rd, 2025 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write to an old lover that time has separated it flows with hope.
January 23rd, 2025 07:21
Freezing
sorenbarrett said:
Frozen images play in this winter wonderland. Descriptive to say the least
January 21st, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Frozen images play in this winter wonderland. Descriptive to say the least
January 21st, 2025 08:42
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