Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Bones
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful meaning in this poem disguised under a thin layer of metaphor it flows in great rhyme and meter.
January 8th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful meaning in this poem disguised under a thin layer of metaphor it flows in great rhyme and meter.
January 8th, 2025 09:45
Winds of time
Poetic Licence said:
Nature free to do as it pleases, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 08:30
Poetic Licence said:
Nature free to do as it pleases, enjoyed the read
January 7th, 2025 08:30
Winds of time
arqios said:
The winds of time don’t hibernate or migrate in the winter- a revelatory thought courtesy of your engaging poem! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 05:55
arqios said:
The winds of time don’t hibernate or migrate in the winter- a revelatory thought courtesy of your engaging poem! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 7th, 2025 05:55
My love
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a heart felt loving dedication to their loved one, enjoyed the read.
January 6th, 2025 11:37
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like a heart felt loving dedication to their loved one, enjoyed the read.
January 6th, 2025 11:37
Natures Taunt
sorenbarrett said:
Nature vs nature and natuer vs man great metaphors
January 5th, 2025 15:44
sorenbarrett said:
Nature vs nature and natuer vs man great metaphors
January 5th, 2025 15:44
Natures Taunt
Poetic Licence said:
Nature tells us it is the master and without it, we are nothing, Really enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 15:43
Poetic Licence said:
Nature tells us it is the master and without it, we are nothing, Really enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 15:43
My love comes with the moon
sorenbarrett said:
Selene, Artemis, Cherridwen, Isis all the moon a most beautiful poem of the moons siren call and the personification of romance, mystery and love. Wonderful
December 31st, 2024 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Selene, Artemis, Cherridwen, Isis all the moon a most beautiful poem of the moons siren call and the personification of romance, mystery and love. Wonderful
December 31st, 2024 06:53
The Second Pandemic
Poetic Licence said:
Let`s hope we do not have another one, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:18
Poetic Licence said:
Let`s hope we do not have another one, enjoyed the read
December 28th, 2024 12:18
It\'s Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with the feel of the season and the joy and closeness it brings. A fun read and it was good to know that it was a joint effort making it more special
December 24th, 2024 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with the feel of the season and the joy and closeness it brings. A fun read and it was good to know that it was a joint effort making it more special
December 24th, 2024 03:53
It\'s Christmas
Poetic Licence said:
And she has done a very nice job, enjoyed the read
December 24th, 2024 02:28
Poetic Licence said:
And she has done a very nice job, enjoyed the read
December 24th, 2024 02:28
It\'s Christmas
rin said:
Turkey is destined to be eaten for happiness.
``Tenderness to You\'\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 00:52
rin said:
Turkey is destined to be eaten for happiness.
``Tenderness to You\'\' After reading this, I want you to post these words in the comments of other poems and spread them around like chain mail.
December 24th, 2024 00:52
Christmas
Poetic Licence said:
Be nice to each other the time, enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 10:34
Poetic Licence said:
Be nice to each other the time, enjoyed the read
December 21st, 2024 10:34
Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
So loved the addition of giving all the year. It is not only on Christmas that giving is important. Nicely done
December 21st, 2024 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
So loved the addition of giving all the year. It is not only on Christmas that giving is important. Nicely done
December 21st, 2024 09:24
Heaven Waits
sorenbarrett said:
So poetically worded it cries out. So many good lines of metaphor in images that shine. Absolutly lovely
December 19th, 2024 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
So poetically worded it cries out. So many good lines of metaphor in images that shine. Absolutly lovely
December 19th, 2024 07:04
Heaven Waits
arqios said:
This poem beautifully captures the themes of life, death, and redemption with poignant imagery. The contrast between sin and redemption is powerful, and the promise of heaven adds a hopeful note. Thank you for sharing this evocative piece.
December 19th, 2024 04:46
arqios said:
This poem beautifully captures the themes of life, death, and redemption with poignant imagery. The contrast between sin and redemption is powerful, and the promise of heaven adds a hopeful note. Thank you for sharing this evocative piece.
December 19th, 2024 04:46
Heaven Waits
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written tender poem, enjoyed the read, Thank you
December 19th, 2024 04:11
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written tender poem, enjoyed the read, Thank you
December 19th, 2024 04:11
The break up
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great sense of both sadness and anger in this poem. Although there are breaks in the clouds the day remains gray and there is the threat of impending rain. Its rhyme takes one in a dizzying spiral toward a drain that one knows they will be swept down in that whirl pool of loss. Nicely written
December 18th, 2024 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great sense of both sadness and anger in this poem. Although there are breaks in the clouds the day remains gray and there is the threat of impending rain. Its rhyme takes one in a dizzying spiral toward a drain that one knows they will be swept down in that whirl pool of loss. Nicely written
December 18th, 2024 13:46
First Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
This had in many ways a very classic feel to it. Lovely enamored sensual and amorous.
December 17th, 2024 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This had in many ways a very classic feel to it. Lovely enamored sensual and amorous.
December 17th, 2024 04:11
Winds of Change
Poetic Licence said:
We have to have hope the world will get better, if we run out of hope, it`s over, Enjoyed the read
December 14th, 2024 01:10
Poetic Licence said:
We have to have hope the world will get better, if we run out of hope, it`s over, Enjoyed the read
December 14th, 2024 01:10
Winds of Change
sorenbarrett said:
We can only hope for change from dark days to ones brighter. Gilded history peels with age revealing the corrosion underneath
December 13th, 2024 17:53
sorenbarrett said:
We can only hope for change from dark days to ones brighter. Gilded history peels with age revealing the corrosion underneath
December 13th, 2024 17:53
The blizzard
Poetic Licence said:
You can picture it as you read the poem, Enjoyable read.
December 12th, 2024 23:52
Poetic Licence said:
You can picture it as you read the poem, Enjoyable read.
December 12th, 2024 23:52
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