Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Water, then Fire
sorenbarrett said:
That sword of wisdom is not seen often these days. Very nicely written I particularly liked the last lines
August 16th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
That sword of wisdom is not seen often these days. Very nicely written I particularly liked the last lines
August 16th, 2024 05:23
Sun Ray
sorenbarrett said:
That is what the pharmaceutical companies have been putting out for years. It keeps their pockets full.
August 15th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
That is what the pharmaceutical companies have been putting out for years. It keeps their pockets full.
August 15th, 2024 04:48
Vampire Regurgitation Blues
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric it is a most interesting view that in many ways makes sense. A most evocative work
August 13th, 2024 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric it is a most interesting view that in many ways makes sense. A most evocative work
August 13th, 2024 08:31
Atonemental
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic lines that lead one to reread and puzzle over this poem. Nicely rhymed and with good flow. I felt it without understanding.
August 12th, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic lines that lead one to reread and puzzle over this poem. Nicely rhymed and with good flow. I felt it without understanding.
August 12th, 2024 05:40
Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
2781 said:
We might be pawns now, but hopefully we\'ll be transformed when we reach the other side.
August 9th, 2024 06:52
2781 said:
We might be pawns now, but hopefully we\'ll be transformed when we reach the other side.
August 9th, 2024 06:52
Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
sorenbarrett said:
The imagination of children is limitless and here is expressed some of it. Fun and nicely worded.
August 9th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
The imagination of children is limitless and here is expressed some of it. Fun and nicely worded.
August 9th, 2024 05:19
Garden of Edone
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge only creates a greater hunger. A fun read
August 8th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge only creates a greater hunger. A fun read
August 8th, 2024 06:48
Magic Potion
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of drugs as an entry to \"implanted beliefs\" Here the two so closely related blur one into the other
August 7th, 2024 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of drugs as an entry to \"implanted beliefs\" Here the two so closely related blur one into the other
August 7th, 2024 04:12
In the Furnace
sorenbarrett said:
Existence is the key
when you face eternity
Short and to the point with catchy rhyme.
July 31st, 2024 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Existence is the key
when you face eternity
Short and to the point with catchy rhyme.
July 31st, 2024 06:01
Futile Rearrangement of the Surface
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing more terrifying that the imagined. Nicely stated
July 29th, 2024 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing more terrifying that the imagined. Nicely stated
July 29th, 2024 10:05
Evidense
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful we have only 5 some say 6 senses and this is limiting. Reach out and be more.
July 28th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful we have only 5 some say 6 senses and this is limiting. Reach out and be more.
July 28th, 2024 05:44
Earth\'s Most Wanted
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the way that the idea of false beliefs was personified and spoke in the first person to the reader. A great message.
July 27th, 2024 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the way that the idea of false beliefs was personified and spoke in the first person to the reader. A great message.
July 27th, 2024 05:33
Transmigration Blues
Tom Dylan said:
Made me smile, Mutley. I read this several times. :-)
July 24th, 2024 10:17
Tom Dylan said:
Made me smile, Mutley. I read this several times. :-)
July 24th, 2024 10:17
Limitation
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read with a surprise ending. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
This was a fun read with a surprise ending. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:23
Midnight Rambler
Thad Wilk said:
A very captivating,
deep and evocative
poem, short and
succinct, great
rhyme scheme
and awesome
presentation!! đź‘Ť
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 18th, 2024 20:39
Thad Wilk said:
A very captivating,
deep and evocative
poem, short and
succinct, great
rhyme scheme
and awesome
presentation!! đź‘Ť
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 18th, 2024 20:39
Spiral Woodpecker
orchidee said:
Good write M.
I was The Birdman. I too headbutted a tree, but had no beak, so had a terrible headache after it! lol. It\'s true ya know. heehee.
July 9th, 2024 04:55
orchidee said:
Good write M.
I was The Birdman. I too headbutted a tree, but had no beak, so had a terrible headache after it! lol. It\'s true ya know. heehee.
July 9th, 2024 04:55
Spiral Woodpecker
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking poem. I read this in almost a Bob Dylan kind of tone.
July 9th, 2024 02:43
Tom Dylan said:
A cracking poem. I read this in almost a Bob Dylan kind of tone.
July 9th, 2024 02:43
2043
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Mental indeed......I heard Genetically modified rabbit doesn\'t taste as good. Lol good write Mutley, it has a nice flow.
July 7th, 2024 23:01
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Mental indeed......I heard Genetically modified rabbit doesn\'t taste as good. Lol good write Mutley, it has a nice flow.
July 7th, 2024 23:01
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