Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Razed Right
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me as both cosmic and intimate at the same time. The movement from sunlight to the vast constellation within the human body gives it a sense of wonder that I really enjoyed. There is something quietly uplifting about this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me as both cosmic and intimate at the same time. The movement from sunlight to the vast constellation within the human body gives it a sense of wonder that I really enjoyed. There is something quietly uplifting about this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:08
Razed Right
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent is the grandeur of the skies it is in waves that light and beauty come. Even heat is waves and so are we all. Well written
June 3rd, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent is the grandeur of the skies it is in waves that light and beauty come. Even heat is waves and so are we all. Well written
June 3rd, 2026 06:27
Axiomagic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really got me thinking. In just a handful of lines, you manage to hold a tension between limitation and possibility. The idea that our highest ideals may only fully exist in imagination is both inspiring and a little melancholy. Powerful reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 1st, 2026 17:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really got me thinking. In just a handful of lines, you manage to hold a tension between limitation and possibility. The idea that our highest ideals may only fully exist in imagination is both inspiring and a little melancholy. Powerful reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 1st, 2026 17:58
Light-Hearted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really hit me. There’s something refreshing about stripping everything back to a simple truth. We spend so much time chasing what matters most, and here you point to something so fundamental that we barely notice it anymore. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really hit me. There’s something refreshing about stripping everything back to a simple truth. We spend so much time chasing what matters most, and here you point to something so fundamental that we barely notice it anymore. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:37
Light-Hearted
rhmn_7 said:
Light not only for the body but also necessary for our souls as well..
May 31st, 2026 02:02
rhmn_7 said:
Light not only for the body but also necessary for our souls as well..
May 31st, 2026 02:02
Light-Hearted
arqios said:
And now everything we use to live by and make a living depends on electricity!
What are we in for!? Sorry for the tangent. It\'s one of those days 🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 00:57
arqios said:
And now everything we use to live by and make a living depends on electricity!
What are we in for!? Sorry for the tangent. It\'s one of those days 🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 00:57
Light-Hearted
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and so true light and water the two principle things necessary for life.
May 30th, 2026 17:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and so true light and water the two principle things necessary for life.
May 30th, 2026 17:54
Springboard
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem successfully relies on the paradox on the path to happiness.
May 30th, 2026 06:55
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem successfully relies on the paradox on the path to happiness.
May 30th, 2026 06:55
Reflectionz
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many people carry this exact quiet wish inside themselves...to find someone before whom they no longer have to perform, explain, or conceal parts of who they are. The simplicity of that longing is what makes the poem feel so real and human to me. Really moving work, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many people carry this exact quiet wish inside themselves...to find someone before whom they no longer have to perform, explain, or conceal parts of who they are. The simplicity of that longing is what makes the poem feel so real and human to me. Really moving work, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:43
Reflectionz
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, the way you break “dense- / -ly / De-elevated” apart visually is what stayed with me most. It physically slows the fall of the poem downward...like language itself losing altitude. Pairing this with Gravediggaz makes total sense tonally too. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, the way you break “dense- / -ly / De-elevated” apart visually is what stayed with me most. It physically slows the fall of the poem downward...like language itself losing altitude. Pairing this with Gravediggaz makes total sense tonally too. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:14
Featherweight Champion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, what a quietly masterful poem this is. The atmosphere feels tangible from the opening lines...cold latch, muttering radio, metal-grey yard...and then the Vermeer turn deepens everything beautifully. By the end, the room itself feels alive again through light and memory. “Light, remembers waking” is such a soft but profound closing image. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 13:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, what a quietly masterful poem this is. The atmosphere feels tangible from the opening lines...cold latch, muttering radio, metal-grey yard...and then the Vermeer turn deepens everything beautifully. By the end, the room itself feels alive again through light and memory. “Light, remembers waking” is such a soft but profound closing image. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 13:31
Featherweight Champion
sorenbarrett said:
Short but it speaks in metaphor of incongruities resolved and of power from above. Well written
May 20th, 2026 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Short but it speaks in metaphor of incongruities resolved and of power from above. Well written
May 20th, 2026 05:56
In The Rare Old Times
arqios said:
Now there is a real friend, quite useful too, in time of need 🙃🤩🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:53
arqios said:
Now there is a real friend, quite useful too, in time of need 🙃🤩🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:53
In The Rare Old Times
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, “Your tension headaches / Be slain / By me” really landed for me. There’s something almost incantational in the phrasing…like effortlessness speaking as both relief and conqueror at once. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, “Your tension headaches / Be slain / By me” really landed for me. There’s something almost incantational in the phrasing…like effortlessness speaking as both relief and conqueror at once. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:57
In The Rare Old Times
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully written this poem speaks truth about the stress of life and letting it go. Well done and a fave
May 9th, 2026 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderfully written this poem speaks truth about the stress of life and letting it go. Well done and a fave
May 9th, 2026 07:20
Red Star Sunblock Cream
arqios said:
arggh... there ye be, Mutley! Nothing dust-y about this at all. An excellent read from your pen...again. 🕊️🤩✒️🙏
May 5th, 2026 19:13
arqios said:
arggh... there ye be, Mutley! Nothing dust-y about this at all. An excellent read from your pen...again. 🕊️🤩✒️🙏
May 5th, 2026 19:13
Red Star Sunblock Cream
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really hit me…the way it stretches between surface distraction and everything deeper still in motion. It feels expansive but grounded at the same time. And yeah…pairing this with Superunknown…that album lives in that exact space for me. Absolutely love it. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really hit me…the way it stretches between surface distraction and everything deeper still in motion. It feels expansive but grounded at the same time. And yeah…pairing this with Superunknown…that album lives in that exact space for me. Absolutely love it. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 5th, 2026 10:31
Red Star Sunblock Cream
sorenbarrett said:
This is deeper than skin deep and x runs along the land
May 5th, 2026 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
This is deeper than skin deep and x runs along the land
May 5th, 2026 06:45
Springboard
NafisaSB said:
this is sometimes quite true - only after sinking into the depths of despair does one realize the true value of release; and soar upwards
May 4th, 2026 23:50
NafisaSB said:
this is sometimes quite true - only after sinking into the depths of despair does one realize the true value of release; and soar upwards
May 4th, 2026 23:50
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