Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Heart Attack
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard in its simplicity. It feels like a question we all quietly carry…how the heart becomes weighed down with illusions until the natural flow of life gets blocked. Short, sharp, and thought-provoking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me hard in its simplicity. It feels like a question we all quietly carry…how the heart becomes weighed down with illusions until the natural flow of life gets blocked. Short, sharp, and thought-provoking. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:47
Heart Attack
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one gave me pause to think. Nicely done
March 6th, 2026 19:06
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one gave me pause to think. Nicely done
March 6th, 2026 19:06
Grave Matters
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a quiet philosophical weight in these few lines…the concept of duality leads naturally to that realization about life and awareness. It reads almost like a distilled reflection or aphorism. The final line seals the thought: “Because I was dead.” Simple and reflective work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 5th, 2026 16:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a quiet philosophical weight in these few lines…the concept of duality leads naturally to that realization about life and awareness. It reads almost like a distilled reflection or aphorism. The final line seals the thought: “Because I was dead.” Simple and reflective work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 5th, 2026 16:03
Grave Matters
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Wow, great poem, but I do not believe in reincarnation; Alan Watts seem to be to be a nutjob LOL, it\'s very easy to repeat what the masses believe into a new language.
March 5th, 2026 07:54
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Wow, great poem, but I do not believe in reincarnation; Alan Watts seem to be to be a nutjob LOL, it\'s very easy to repeat what the masses believe into a new language.
March 5th, 2026 07:54
Grave Matters
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is there must be an opposite for there to be realization.
March 5th, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is there must be an opposite for there to be realization.
March 5th, 2026 05:35
Masterplan
Poetic Licence said:
I wish their was an unequivocal answer to this question that many ponder, nicely penned, pleasure to read
March 4th, 2026 07:36
Poetic Licence said:
I wish their was an unequivocal answer to this question that many ponder, nicely penned, pleasure to read
March 4th, 2026 07:36
OMG
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this made me smile…so simple and bold. “I’d like to tap / Your genius” feels playful, but also sincere. It’s short, but it carries admiration without overdoing it. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this made me smile…so simple and bold. “I’d like to tap / Your genius” feels playful, but also sincere. It’s short, but it carries admiration without overdoing it. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:32
OMG
sorenbarrett said:
Central concept in Ayurveda and a way of health. Thanks for educating me Mutley. Well done in so few words
March 1st, 2026 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Central concept in Ayurveda and a way of health. Thanks for educating me Mutley. Well done in so few words
March 1st, 2026 05:08
iBlock
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is deceptively simple…that fractured “spontaneity” visually becoming the blockage is clever and precise. The lowercase “i” sitting in the way says more than a full stanza could. Minimal, intentional, and effective. Next level right back atcha, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is deceptively simple…that fractured “spontaneity” visually becoming the blockage is clever and precise. The lowercase “i” sitting in the way says more than a full stanza could. Minimal, intentional, and effective. Next level right back atcha, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 28th, 2026 12:33
iBlock
sorenbarrett said:
I like your author\'s comment and the implication. This may be taken several ways with the i being a diminished look at one\'s self and how this impedes spontaneity or the i being the letter itself and how its usage and need in composing, being one of the more popular vowels impedes composing. I would guess the first. Nicely done
February 28th, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
I like your author\'s comment and the implication. This may be taken several ways with the i being a diminished look at one\'s self and how this impedes spontaneity or the i being the letter itself and how its usage and need in composing, being one of the more popular vowels impedes composing. I would guess the first. Nicely done
February 28th, 2026 06:12
Opossum Operations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and insightful at the same time. The opossum voice gives you freedom to poke at existential weight without heaviness. “remembrance / Of my impermanence” is clever, and that broken “la- / -zy so and so!” is a great comedic finish. Well done on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 10:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and insightful at the same time. The opossum voice gives you freedom to poke at existential weight without heaviness. “remembrance / Of my impermanence” is clever, and that broken “la- / -zy so and so!” is a great comedic finish. Well done on this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 27th, 2026 10:48
Opossum Operations
sorenbarrett said:
Quaint and cute it seems a southern tale or maybe tail which ever way you want to look at it. A fun read
February 26th, 2026 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
Quaint and cute it seems a southern tale or maybe tail which ever way you want to look at it. A fun read
February 26th, 2026 19:23
Apocalips Now
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is punchy and playful at the same time. The title alone sets the tone, and that closing line lands with a grin and a warning. It’s short, but it carries weight. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is punchy and playful at the same time. The title alone sets the tone, and that closing line lands with a grin and a warning. It’s short, but it carries weight. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 24th, 2026 08:11
Apocalips Now
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done unveil and face the hidden image. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 19:18
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done unveil and face the hidden image. Well done
February 23rd, 2026 19:18
Trickstar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me immediately…that sharp little jab lands hard. “Twistories” is clever, but it’s more than clever…there’s bite in it. Loki feels less like a myth and more like a mirror here. Short, sharp, and pointed. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me immediately…that sharp little jab lands hard. “Twistories” is clever, but it’s more than clever…there’s bite in it. Loki feels less like a myth and more like a mirror here. Short, sharp, and pointed. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 23rd, 2026 09:49
Trickstar
sorenbarrett said:
The little boy that called wolf found that not many believed him after a while. A good write about trust.
February 22nd, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
The little boy that called wolf found that not many believed him after a while. A good write about trust.
February 22nd, 2026 04:01
Where Would We Be Without.....?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and I love it. You build this almost cosmic meditation on existence… “Maybe the universe / Wouldn’t have even bothered / Giving birth / To us?” …and then you snap it back to “Without farts?” The contrast is the whole magic. Silly, existential, and fearless in its humor. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd and I love it. You build this almost cosmic meditation on existence… “Maybe the universe / Wouldn’t have even bothered / Giving birth / To us?” …and then you snap it back to “Without farts?” The contrast is the whole magic. Silly, existential, and fearless in its humor. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:55
Where Would We Be Without.....?
sorenbarrett said:
Methane lighting, is that the answer to the energy crisis? A fun read Mutely
February 21st, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Methane lighting, is that the answer to the energy crisis? A fun read Mutely
February 21st, 2026 05:16
There`s No Other Way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd theology at its finest…straight-faced cosmic design meeting pure bodily reality. I started dignified. I ended laughing way too hard. The mock-serious tone makes it land even harder. I am already wobbling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is absurd theology at its finest…straight-faced cosmic design meeting pure bodily reality. I started dignified. I ended laughing way too hard. The mock-serious tone makes it land even harder. I am already wobbling. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 11:14
There`s No Other Way
sorenbarrett said:
We are all full of hot air, some smell more than others. A light hearted read Mutley
February 20th, 2026 06:20
sorenbarrett said:
We are all full of hot air, some smell more than others. A light hearted read Mutley
February 20th, 2026 06:20
Rodent Resources
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and biting all at once. The smallness of the speaker amplifies the weight of the message, and the metaphor is immediate and accessible. It’s wry, unsettling, and strangely wise. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is clever and biting all at once. The smallness of the speaker amplifies the weight of the message, and the metaphor is immediate and accessible. It’s wry, unsettling, and strangely wise. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 20th, 2026 02:38
Rodent Resources
sorenbarrett said:
It is the threat that keeps people in line and this is how the law works. Well written
February 19th, 2026 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
It is the threat that keeps people in line and this is how the law works. Well written
February 19th, 2026 06:33
Green Mamba
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Sharp and concise! Love this my friend!
February 16th, 2026 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Sharp and concise! Love this my friend!
February 16th, 2026 08:25
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