Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Phoe-Nix
peto said:
I looked up Phoenix 138
Took me to panini cards and minecraft game
So I\'m as wise as ever
Got us all thinking again mutley
Good to have you home
October 31st, 2025 09:08
peto said:
I looked up Phoenix 138
Took me to panini cards and minecraft game
So I\'m as wise as ever
Got us all thinking again mutley
Good to have you home
October 31st, 2025 09:08
Phoe-Nix
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a short burst of cosmic wonder...cryptic, rhythmic, and deeply alive! You remind us that mystery itself is the motion behind the gears. Very well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a short burst of cosmic wonder...cryptic, rhythmic, and deeply alive! You remind us that mystery itself is the motion behind the gears. Very well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 31st, 2025 08:07
Phoe-Nix
arqios said:
I like how this one feels like a cosmic riddle: Phoenix, Pyramid, and then suddenly the whole galaxy. It’s like the poem starts small and personal (“grabbed me by the ears”) and then zooms out to the biggest question of all: who’s actually turning the gears of existence? Short, sharp, and it leaves you hanging in that wonder. 🕊️🙏
October 31st, 2025 07:59
arqios said:
I like how this one feels like a cosmic riddle: Phoenix, Pyramid, and then suddenly the whole galaxy. It’s like the poem starts small and personal (“grabbed me by the ears”) and then zooms out to the biggest question of all: who’s actually turning the gears of existence? Short, sharp, and it leaves you hanging in that wonder. 🕊️🙏
October 31st, 2025 07:59
Phoe-Nix
sorenbarrett said:
The numbers give meaning to this poem in its rhyme and flow. Well done
October 31st, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
The numbers give meaning to this poem in its rhyme and flow. Well done
October 31st, 2025 03:57
Solar Wrexus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is wild brilliance…the dragon as both myth and metaphor for self-destruction. You twist humor and despair together so sharply it sings. Very well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is wild brilliance…the dragon as both myth and metaphor for self-destruction. You twist humor and despair together so sharply it sings. Very well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 09:21
Solar Wrexus
sorenbarrett said:
I guess dragons are not that much different than people, too bad for dragons. A fun poem of metaphor and fantasy well done.
October 29th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
I guess dragons are not that much different than people, too bad for dragons. A fun poem of metaphor and fantasy well done.
October 29th, 2025 04:10
The Drake Havens 2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one crackles with that trademark mischief of yours…heat, humor, and a touch of the surreal. Short, sharp, and perfectly unhinged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one crackles with that trademark mischief of yours…heat, humor, and a touch of the surreal. Short, sharp, and perfectly unhinged. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:53
The Drake Havens
arqios said:
Here is a poem that feels like a fragment of pure energy. It\'s broken words and charged imagery make it feel unstable but alive, like it’s pulling the reader into some hidden dimension. Really intriguing use of paradox and tension! Muchly enjoyed. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:31
arqios said:
Here is a poem that feels like a fragment of pure energy. It\'s broken words and charged imagery make it feel unstable but alive, like it’s pulling the reader into some hidden dimension. Really intriguing use of paradox and tension! Muchly enjoyed. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:31
The Drake Havens 2
arqios said:
This poem feels like a pressure cooker! It\'s volcanic imagery and clipped lines really capture that sense of restless buildup. The sudden shift into the stoned voice makes it raw and unsettled, like a fragment of life overheard mid‑eruption. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:17
arqios said:
This poem feels like a pressure cooker! It\'s volcanic imagery and clipped lines really capture that sense of restless buildup. The sudden shift into the stoned voice makes it raw and unsettled, like a fragment of life overheard mid‑eruption. 🕊️🙏
October 17th, 2025 08:17
The Drake Havens 2
sorenbarrett said:
Pumice a lava stone and the only way to satisfy some emotions is to stay stoned.
October 17th, 2025 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Pumice a lava stone and the only way to satisfy some emotions is to stay stoned.
October 17th, 2025 07:03
The Drake Havens
sorenbarrett said:
Short and concise but never thought of finding another dimension through dragons. Most interesting.
October 16th, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Short and concise but never thought of finding another dimension through dragons. Most interesting.
October 16th, 2025 04:51
New World Slaughter
arqios said:
Steel in my stance
Fire in my eyes
One clean hit
Your crown flies
August 21st, 2025 18:32
arqios said:
Steel in my stance
Fire in my eyes
One clean hit
Your crown flies
August 21st, 2025 18:32
New World Slaughter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really like how you framed the left and right as the winning combo, Mutley. Simple, direct, and it carries all the weight of a KO. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 21st, 2025 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I really like how you framed the left and right as the winning combo, Mutley. Simple, direct, and it carries all the weight of a KO. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 21st, 2025 08:04
New World Slaughter
sorenbarrett said:
This brings the image of a boxer before a fight in front of the news media making his statement. A fun read
August 21st, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
This brings the image of a boxer before a fight in front of the news media making his statement. A fun read
August 21st, 2025 04:23
New World Slaughter
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! Now, is that only two limbs or four, Sir?
August 20th, 2025 23:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha! Now, is that only two limbs or four, Sir?
August 20th, 2025 23:54
Alien Visitations
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing as the universe conducts itself. Nice write.
July 18th, 2025 07:24
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing as the universe conducts itself. Nice write.
July 18th, 2025 07:24
Alien Visitations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like signal in the dark—brief, cryptic, and oddly comforting. Grace as a visitor…or maybe as something we keep mistaking for alien light. Love the sparseness here, Mutley. 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 15th, 2025 14:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like signal in the dark—brief, cryptic, and oddly comforting. Grace as a visitor…or maybe as something we keep mistaking for alien light. Love the sparseness here, Mutley. 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 15th, 2025 14:08
Alien Visitations
sorenbarrett said:
Love this one it is a great play on words and a mind twister.
July 15th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Love this one it is a great play on words and a mind twister.
July 15th, 2025 04:46
Handing Over the Reins
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! This hits like a spark begging for ignition. The sheer scale of that “thirty seven trillion cell rabble” line collapses science and soul into a single, shivering breath. This poem rocks, my friend. 🔥 Beautifully done, Mutley. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 20:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! This hits like a spark begging for ignition. The sheer scale of that “thirty seven trillion cell rabble” line collapses science and soul into a single, shivering breath. This poem rocks, my friend. 🔥 Beautifully done, Mutley. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 20:56
Handing Over the Reins
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing the power of imagination and how thought can move bulk. Well written and for the thought itself a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing the power of imagination and how thought can move bulk. Well written and for the thought itself a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:49
Breath Hold
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Don\'t hold your breath now--!!!\" My, my, my, will you forever mystify me? Charming. We thanks thee for sharing.
July 8th, 2025 09:21
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Don\'t hold your breath now--!!!\" My, my, my, will you forever mystify me? Charming. We thanks thee for sharing.
July 8th, 2025 09:21
Breath Hold
arqios said:
That is so scary and so descriptive of not only the physical perils of diving, which I have had some experience of and other such related misadventures where we can find ourselves out of our depth 🕊️🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 06:44
arqios said:
That is so scary and so descriptive of not only the physical perils of diving, which I have had some experience of and other such related misadventures where we can find ourselves out of our depth 🕊️🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 06:44
Breath Hold
Poetic Licence said:
Throw the bullet\'s in the air so they don\'t see the bomb coming, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:07
Poetic Licence said:
Throw the bullet\'s in the air so they don\'t see the bomb coming, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:07
Breath Hold
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and too true, some speak without end in intellectual ramblings and explanations that run continually from one divergence to another until the original topic is forgotten. Very nicely written
July 8th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and too true, some speak without end in intellectual ramblings and explanations that run continually from one divergence to another until the original topic is forgotten. Very nicely written
July 8th, 2025 04:20
Earth Shaking
NafisaSB said:
question is how will you know until you try
you have posed a good riddle...what\'s your answer btw
July 7th, 2025 23:17
NafisaSB said:
question is how will you know until you try
you have posed a good riddle...what\'s your answer btw
July 7th, 2025 23:17
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