Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Alien Visitations
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing as the universe conducts itself. Nice write.
July 18th, 2025 07:24
RSM0812 said:
This poem is intriguing as the universe conducts itself. Nice write.
July 18th, 2025 07:24
Alien Visitations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like signal in the dark—brief, cryptic, and oddly comforting. Grace as a visitor…or maybe as something we keep mistaking for alien light. Love the sparseness here, Mutley. 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 15th, 2025 14:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This feels like signal in the dark—brief, cryptic, and oddly comforting. Grace as a visitor…or maybe as something we keep mistaking for alien light. Love the sparseness here, Mutley. 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 15th, 2025 14:08
Alien Visitations
sorenbarrett said:
Love this one it is a great play on words and a mind twister.
July 15th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Love this one it is a great play on words and a mind twister.
July 15th, 2025 04:46
Handing Over the Reins
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! This hits like a spark begging for ignition. The sheer scale of that “thirty seven trillion cell rabble” line collapses science and soul into a single, shivering breath. This poem rocks, my friend. 🔥 Beautifully done, Mutley. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 20:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes!!! This hits like a spark begging for ignition. The sheer scale of that “thirty seven trillion cell rabble” line collapses science and soul into a single, shivering breath. This poem rocks, my friend. 🔥 Beautifully done, Mutley. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 20:56
Handing Over the Reins
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing the power of imagination and how thought can move bulk. Well written and for the thought itself a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
Amazing the power of imagination and how thought can move bulk. Well written and for the thought itself a fave
July 14th, 2025 04:49
Breath Hold
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Don\'t hold your breath now--!!!\" My, my, my, will you forever mystify me? Charming. We thanks thee for sharing.
July 8th, 2025 09:21
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Don\'t hold your breath now--!!!\" My, my, my, will you forever mystify me? Charming. We thanks thee for sharing.
July 8th, 2025 09:21
Breath Hold
arqios said:
That is so scary and so descriptive of not only the physical perils of diving, which I have had some experience of and other such related misadventures where we can find ourselves out of our depth 🕊️🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 06:44
arqios said:
That is so scary and so descriptive of not only the physical perils of diving, which I have had some experience of and other such related misadventures where we can find ourselves out of our depth 🕊️🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 06:44
Breath Hold
Poetic Licence said:
Throw the bullet\'s in the air so they don\'t see the bomb coming, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:07
Poetic Licence said:
Throw the bullet\'s in the air so they don\'t see the bomb coming, enjoyed the read
July 8th, 2025 05:07
Breath Hold
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and too true, some speak without end in intellectual ramblings and explanations that run continually from one divergence to another until the original topic is forgotten. Very nicely written
July 8th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and too true, some speak without end in intellectual ramblings and explanations that run continually from one divergence to another until the original topic is forgotten. Very nicely written
July 8th, 2025 04:20
Earth Shaking
NafisaSB said:
question is how will you know until you try
you have posed a good riddle...what\'s your answer btw
July 7th, 2025 23:17
NafisaSB said:
question is how will you know until you try
you have posed a good riddle...what\'s your answer btw
July 7th, 2025 23:17
Earth Shaking
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this and totally relate! Well done! A fave! 🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 14:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this and totally relate! Well done! A fave! 🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 14:12
Earth Shaking
sorenbarrett said:
I feel that tremor Mutley a battle between intellectual and emotional and each with merit but which is stronger? Nice loved it and a fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
I feel that tremor Mutley a battle between intellectual and emotional and each with merit but which is stronger? Nice loved it and a fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:49
Earth Shaking
Poetic Licence said:
You have got these down to a tee, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:24
Poetic Licence said:
You have got these down to a tee, enjoyed the read
July 3rd, 2025 05:24
Earth Shaking
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, then we\'ll...collapse?! You rascal, you\'re still a riot.
July 3rd, 2025 02:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, then we\'ll...collapse?! You rascal, you\'re still a riot.
July 3rd, 2025 02:15
July
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s a little bit risky stepping outside any where at the moment!, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:58
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s a little bit risky stepping outside any where at the moment!, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:58
The Shining
NafisaSB said:
looking - and the dazzling light is surely blinding
enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 01:33
NafisaSB said:
looking - and the dazzling light is surely blinding
enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 01:33
The 9 o\'clock News
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this is one way to put it! Excellent use of absurdism to make your point. Point well made. A fave for me, friend! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 09:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, this is one way to put it! Excellent use of absurdism to make your point. Point well made. A fave for me, friend! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 09:29
The 9 o\'clock News
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way of illustrating today\'s current issues, nicely done
June 23rd, 2025 06:19
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way of illustrating today\'s current issues, nicely done
June 23rd, 2025 06:19
The 9 o\'clock News
sorenbarrett said:
Using an absurd threat and numbers to emphasize a more serious issue sucks the reader into what otherwise might be a neglected issue. Well presented and nicely done with dry humor. Lovely
June 23rd, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Using an absurd threat and numbers to emphasize a more serious issue sucks the reader into what otherwise might be a neglected issue. Well presented and nicely done with dry humor. Lovely
June 23rd, 2025 05:07
The 9 o\'clock News
arqios said:
This poem\'s got a deadpan charm—absurdity delivered with the calm detachment of a news anchor, which makes the potential chaos oddly believable. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 23rd, 2025 03:00
arqios said:
This poem\'s got a deadpan charm—absurdity delivered with the calm detachment of a news anchor, which makes the potential chaos oddly believable. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 23rd, 2025 03:00
Hawaii Five-Flow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the word play in the title. This brief poem packs a powerful punch and says more than what appears on the screen. Excellent question to close it too! Me thinks so! Well done, friend. 👏🌹
June 21st, 2025 06:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the word play in the title. This brief poem packs a powerful punch and says more than what appears on the screen. Excellent question to close it too! Me thinks so! Well done, friend. 👏🌹
June 21st, 2025 06:54
Hawaii Five-Flow
Poetic Licence said:
I feel it is about to erupt, enjoyed the read
June 21st, 2025 04:16
Poetic Licence said:
I feel it is about to erupt, enjoyed the read
June 21st, 2025 04:16
Hawaii Five-Flow
sorenbarrett said:
Now this can be taken more than one way and I love the clever title. I remember that series. Is it volcanic eruption or something more? Nicely written.
June 21st, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Now this can be taken more than one way and I love the clever title. I remember that series. Is it volcanic eruption or something more? Nicely written.
June 21st, 2025 04:06
The Shining
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Helios approves of this message! 🌞🤣 Well done, my friend! 👏🌹
June 17th, 2025 08:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Helios approves of this message! 🌞🤣 Well done, my friend! 👏🌹
June 17th, 2025 08:01
The Shining
Poetic Licence said:
I am a sun worshiper and today is great, loved the read
June 17th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
I am a sun worshiper and today is great, loved the read
June 17th, 2025 05:09
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