Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Sol Attacked from the Region of Cygnus?
arqios said:
A young soul being symbolised by a baby phoenix chooses how much divine light to carry while fearing that the world\'s beauty may vanish before it fully awakens.
September 30th, 2026 06:31
arqios said:
A young soul being symbolised by a baby phoenix chooses how much divine light to carry while fearing that the world\'s beauty may vanish before it fully awakens.
September 30th, 2026 06:31
Sol Attacked from the Region of Cygnus?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a strange tenderness in this one. The blue sky, the leaves, the sea…and underneath it all, that fear of losing the view. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2026 20:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, there’s a strange tenderness in this one. The blue sky, the leaves, the sea…and underneath it all, that fear of losing the view. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 29th, 2026 20:12
Sol Attacked from the Region of Cygnus?
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Mutley for don\'t we all find ourselves wondering how long we have to enjoy the marvels and beauty of this existence. Nicely done my friend
September 29th, 2026 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Mutley for don\'t we all find ourselves wondering how long we have to enjoy the marvels and beauty of this existence. Nicely done my friend
September 29th, 2026 06:28
Top Seecret
Durdica Porobija said:
That prayer-song seems like the first step out of uselessness and boredom. I wish so many people would pray like that.
September 28th, 2026 02:38
Durdica Porobija said:
That prayer-song seems like the first step out of uselessness and boredom. I wish so many people would pray like that.
September 28th, 2026 02:38
Top Seecret
arqios said:
This seems a common ailment these days... not much of a utopia out there!
September 26th, 2026 06:33
arqios said:
This seems a common ailment these days... not much of a utopia out there!
September 26th, 2026 06:33
Birth, Sickness, Old-Aged, Dead
arqios said:
We try, we cry, we fry or fly, then we die... 😃👍🏻
September 26th, 2026 06:32
arqios said:
We try, we cry, we fry or fly, then we die... 😃👍🏻
September 26th, 2026 06:32
Birth, Sickness, Old-Aged, Dead
sorenbarrett said:
It is the complexity of verbal definition combined with physics added to rhyme that has tied my mind in a knot and left a fave behind. Well done
September 26th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
It is the complexity of verbal definition combined with physics added to rhyme that has tied my mind in a knot and left a fave behind. Well done
September 26th, 2026 04:10
Top Seecret
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha…that is a brutally efficient diagnosis. 😂 Ninety-seven percent occupied by boredom and futility feels suspiciously plausible some days. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha…that is a brutally efficient diagnosis. 😂 Ninety-seven percent occupied by boredom and futility feels suspiciously plausible some days. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:32
Top Seecret
sorenbarrett said:
This one cries of age. I too am old but seldom bored. Futility that\'s another issue.
September 25th, 2026 20:50
sorenbarrett said:
This one cries of age. I too am old but seldom bored. Futility that\'s another issue.
September 25th, 2026 20:50
Chimney Sweep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley Ravishes, this is wonderfully strange...I laughed, then wondered whether I should be worried about Mr. Chambers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2026 20:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley Ravishes, this is wonderfully strange...I laughed, then wondered whether I should be worried about Mr. Chambers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 21st, 2026 20:14
Chimney Sweep
sorenbarrett said:
A little word play here lightens the days. Good one
September 21st, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A little word play here lightens the days. Good one
September 21st, 2026 04:28
Solar Tech
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, I find this oddly comforting. The sun just gets on with being the sun while we humans run around making everything complicated. That totes tracks! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, I find this oddly comforting. The sun just gets on with being the sun while we humans run around making everything complicated. That totes tracks! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 14:46
Solar Tech
sorenbarrett said:
An eternity to us is the sun\'s life. Nicely written in such a brief poem.
September 19th, 2026 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
An eternity to us is the sun\'s life. Nicely written in such a brief poem.
September 19th, 2026 05:42
Golden Seers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever philosophical piece, Mutley. The broken language mirrors a broken world, then turns inward and challenges each person to become the beginning of something better. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2026 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever philosophical piece, Mutley. The broken language mirrors a broken world, then turns inward and challenges each person to become the beginning of something better. Strong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2026 09:23
XO-Dus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one wild philosophical ride! The Monkey King becomes a master not merely of movement, but of imagination itself…traveling beyond confinement toward whatever might still be possible. Clever and wonderfully surreal, Mutley! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2026 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is one wild philosophical ride! The Monkey King becomes a master not merely of movement, but of imagination itself…traveling beyond confinement toward whatever might still be possible. Clever and wonderfully surreal, Mutley! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2026 09:19
XO-Dus
sorenbarrett said:
And here we sit all seeking and exodus to what we feel is freedom. Nicely written
September 12th, 2026 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
And here we sit all seeking and exodus to what we feel is freedom. Nicely written
September 12th, 2026 05:56
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love a tiny poem that makes me stop, reread, and start inventing possibilities. You’ve left my mind doing half the mischief here...and I believe I have arrived! Excellent riddle and poem! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I love a tiny poem that makes me stop, reread, and start inventing possibilities. You’ve left my mind doing half the mischief here...and I believe I have arrived! Excellent riddle and poem! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 08:21
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sorenbarrett said:
One has to think about this one for a moment before it dawns on the brain the meaning. Well done
September 9th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
One has to think about this one for a moment before it dawns on the brain the meaning. Well done
September 9th, 2026 05:03
Ring Of Power
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fantastic poem, Mutley Ravishes! You fuse cosmic imagery, bodily motion, and mischievous wordplay into one strange little universe. I love when a poem trusts its own logic this completely...really inventive work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fantastic poem, Mutley Ravishes! You fuse cosmic imagery, bodily motion, and mischievous wordplay into one strange little universe. I love when a poem trusts its own logic this completely...really inventive work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 8th, 2026 08:54
Ring Of Power
sorenbarrett said:
This one I think I got muddled it has a fun and bright feel. It is friendly and full of brightness and has an oh well feel even to the end where it got muddied. I pictured a drink in hand. Well done
September 8th, 2026 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
This one I think I got muddled it has a fun and bright feel. It is friendly and full of brightness and has an oh well feel even to the end where it got muddied. I pictured a drink in hand. Well done
September 8th, 2026 06:07
Fire Water
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a vivid little burst, my friend. The movement feels wild, yet the central paradox brings it into a place of complete surrender. Brief, playful, and cleverly constructed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a vivid little burst, my friend. The movement feels wild, yet the central paradox brings it into a place of complete surrender. Brief, playful, and cleverly constructed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:56
Fire Water
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn playful energy here, with the sun ray riding the “dragon wave” like a tiny piece of light catching something enormous. “Effort-less is more” gives the little poem its wink—it turns the image into a compact meditation on simply being alive.
August 23rd, 2026 07:33
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn playful energy here, with the sun ray riding the “dragon wave” like a tiny piece of light catching something enormous. “Effort-less is more” gives the little poem its wink—it turns the image into a compact meditation on simply being alive.
August 23rd, 2026 07:33
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