Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Fire Water
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a vivid little burst, my friend. The movement feels wild, yet the central paradox brings it into a place of complete surrender. Brief, playful, and cleverly constructed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a vivid little burst, my friend. The movement feels wild, yet the central paradox brings it into a place of complete surrender. Brief, playful, and cleverly constructed. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2026 12:56
Fire Water
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn playful energy here, with the sun ray riding the “dragon wave” like a tiny piece of light catching something enormous. “Effort-less is more” gives the little poem its wink—it turns the image into a compact meditation on simply being alive.
August 23rd, 2026 07:33
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn playful energy here, with the sun ray riding the “dragon wave” like a tiny piece of light catching something enormous. “Effort-less is more” gives the little poem its wink—it turns the image into a compact meditation on simply being alive.
August 23rd, 2026 07:33
Fire Water
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve revised the original meaning? Back in the day it signified liquor.
August 23rd, 2026 07:23
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve revised the original meaning? Back in the day it signified liquor.
August 23rd, 2026 07:23
Fire Water
arqios said:
Love the split-union of meaning in effort- -less is more!
August 23rd, 2026 05:34
arqios said:
Love the split-union of meaning in effort- -less is more!
August 23rd, 2026 05:34
Fire Water
sorenbarrett said:
Images sparkle on this sea where waves are transparent and the deep is dark. Nice write
August 23rd, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Images sparkle on this sea where waves are transparent and the deep is dark. Nice write
August 23rd, 2026 04:28
Con-Fused
arqios said:
A mighty exploration in a short poem, of inner conflict, self-blame/self-defence, fracturing of identity, the chaos of trying to understand one\'s own mind, and the absurdity of arguing with self. The playful, chaotic portrait makes the pain bearable.
August 21st, 2026 20:12
arqios said:
A mighty exploration in a short poem, of inner conflict, self-blame/self-defence, fracturing of identity, the chaos of trying to understand one\'s own mind, and the absurdity of arguing with self. The playful, chaotic portrait makes the pain bearable.
August 21st, 2026 20:12
Con-Fused
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever little exchange, Mutley! The caller seeks protection from the very identities they cannot determine are self or other, while the dialogue keeps folding back upon itself. Funny, disorienting, and perfectly matched to the title. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a clever little exchange, Mutley! The caller seeks protection from the very identities they cannot determine are self or other, while the dialogue keeps folding back upon itself. Funny, disorienting, and perfectly matched to the title. Excellent work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:37
Con-Fused
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Mutely that feels in a way Lewis Carroll
August 21st, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Mutely that feels in a way Lewis Carroll
August 21st, 2026 04:40
Stagnations
RSM0812 said:
Words and actions of a leader will always effect those whom follow. I enjoyed this immensely
August 20th, 2026 06:56
RSM0812 said:
Words and actions of a leader will always effect those whom follow. I enjoyed this immensely
August 20th, 2026 06:56
Lustology
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one gave me a grin…sexual energy showing up on the road to infinity just to announce the death of identity is quite the encounter! Short, strange, and wonderfully existential, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one gave me a grin…sexual energy showing up on the road to infinity just to announce the death of identity is quite the encounter! Short, strange, and wonderfully existential, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2026 20:34
Lustology
sorenbarrett said:
It must have been male if it had stones. A most interesting read Mutley that provokes thought and maybe a smile.
August 11th, 2026 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
It must have been male if it had stones. A most interesting read Mutley that provokes thought and maybe a smile.
August 11th, 2026 05:24
Lustology
arqios said:
Sounds like the proper way of saying people are turned into basic animals by lust. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:09
arqios said:
Sounds like the proper way of saying people are turned into basic animals by lust. 🕊️🙏
August 11th, 2026 05:09
Diamonds are a Man\'s Best Friend
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL, Mutley...😂 Anatomy, yoga, inner fire, and Yogi Bear somehow sharing the same poetic universe. I stopped trying to predict where you were taking me and simply enjoyed the ride. Delightfully absurd stuff, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
LOL, Mutley...😂 Anatomy, yoga, inner fire, and Yogi Bear somehow sharing the same poetic universe. I stopped trying to predict where you were taking me and simply enjoyed the ride. Delightfully absurd stuff, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 7th, 2026 08:39
Diamonds are a Man\'s Best Friend
sorenbarrett said:
I seems you activated it. Cryptic and enough to make one think. Well done
August 7th, 2026 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
I seems you activated it. Cryptic and enough to make one think. Well done
August 7th, 2026 07:09
High Plains Drifter
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is delightfully bonkers! 😂 I love how the impossible is treated with complete seriousness while playful nonsense quietly opens into metaphysics. It took me somewhere I never expected to go...and I thoroughly enjoyed the journey, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is delightfully bonkers! 😂 I love how the impossible is treated with complete seriousness while playful nonsense quietly opens into metaphysics. It took me somewhere I never expected to go...and I thoroughly enjoyed the journey, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 30th, 2026 10:07
High Plains Drifter
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and fanciful read that in metaphor holds some reason. Nicely done
July 30th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and fanciful read that in metaphor holds some reason. Nicely done
July 30th, 2026 04:15
500 Million
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this gave me a good laugh! That sharp confrontation between consciousness and its own self-importance lands perfectly. Clever and wonderfully irreverent, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this gave me a good laugh! That sharp confrontation between consciousness and its own self-importance lands perfectly. Clever and wonderfully irreverent, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 28th, 2026 20:44
Stagnations
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
love this poem in so many ways relative to every day life.
July 26th, 2026 19:16
Iam1ItchyLizzard said:
love this poem in so many ways relative to every day life.
July 26th, 2026 19:16
SOjasS
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is gloriously unhinged! 🤣 A full-scale metaphysical crisis entrusted to two wily cartoon chipmunks...what could possibly go wrong? Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 18:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this is gloriously unhinged! 🤣 A full-scale metaphysical crisis entrusted to two wily cartoon chipmunks...what could possibly go wrong? Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2026 18:15
SOjasS
sorenbarrett said:
More honey I say and keep the loons away. A good read
July 26th, 2026 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
More honey I say and keep the loons away. A good read
July 26th, 2026 05:04
Stagnations
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That polite little conversation in the middle absolutely got me...as though this were merely an unfortunate roadside mishap! Hilarious, my friend! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That polite little conversation in the middle absolutely got me...as though this were merely an unfortunate roadside mishap! Hilarious, my friend! 🤣 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2026 09:21
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