Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Tartan Army`s Arts of War
NafisaSB said:
barbed humour with a good message - enjoyed..
June 30th, 2026 06:10
NafisaSB said:
barbed humour with a good message - enjoyed..
June 30th, 2026 06:10
Shamanic Technologies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a thought-provoking piece. The contrast between mechanistic living and shamanic freedom is conveyed with remarkable economy, and it leaves plenty of room for the reader to enter the poem with their own experience. Sometimes the shortest poems open the biggest doors. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, what a thought-provoking piece. The contrast between mechanistic living and shamanic freedom is conveyed with remarkable economy, and it leaves plenty of room for the reader to enter the poem with their own experience. Sometimes the shortest poems open the biggest doors. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 27th, 2026 10:50
Shamanic Technologies
arqios said:
This is what I gleaned from reading your poem: before life turns you into someone who just goes through the motions, reconnect with the playful, free part of yourself that you had as a child. 🕊️🙏
June 27th, 2026 07:39
arqios said:
This is what I gleaned from reading your poem: before life turns you into someone who just goes through the motions, reconnect with the playful, free part of yourself that you had as a child. 🕊️🙏
June 27th, 2026 07:39
Shamanic Technologies
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting combination of learning and age passage leading to conditioning and establishment of culture and expectations. Well done
June 27th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting combination of learning and age passage leading to conditioning and establishment of culture and expectations. Well done
June 27th, 2026 05:10
Tartan Army`s Arts of War
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha, this one carries some bite! 🤣 The frustration comes through loud and clear, but so does the humor. I found myself chuckling while shaking my head at the situation being described. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, haha, this one carries some bite! 🤣 The frustration comes through loud and clear, but so does the humor. I found myself chuckling while shaking my head at the situation being described. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:34
Tartan Army`s Arts of War
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism at work in the USA so deeply ingrained as a sacred shrine that no one dares challenge it. Nicely written
June 23rd, 2026 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
Capitalism at work in the USA so deeply ingrained as a sacred shrine that no one dares challenge it. Nicely written
June 23rd, 2026 06:36
Tartan Army`s Arts of War
arqios said:
Sometimes we end up scratching our heads at the process of things.🙏🕊️
June 23rd, 2026 05:40
arqios said:
Sometimes we end up scratching our heads at the process of things.🙏🕊️
June 23rd, 2026 05:40
Bold As Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one grabbed me immediately. Few words, huge question. I love when a poem opens a door and then simply stands aside…letting the reader wander through it. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this one grabbed me immediately. Few words, huge question. I love when a poem opens a door and then simply stands aside…letting the reader wander through it. Thought-provoking write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 19th, 2026 22:23
Bold As Love
arqios said:
They speak another language which we’ve only begun to learn🕊️🙏🏻
June 19th, 2026 08:07
arqios said:
They speak another language which we’ve only begun to learn🕊️🙏🏻
June 19th, 2026 08:07
Bold As Love
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, mankinds arrogance sets him apart
June 19th, 2026 07:54
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write, mankinds arrogance sets him apart
June 19th, 2026 07:54
Bold As Love
sorenbarrett said:
A deep and most philosophical write. With all the microorganisms and limitless galaxies both going in different directions we have to ask ourselves where we fit and where does everything else fit in us.
June 19th, 2026 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
A deep and most philosophical write. With all the microorganisms and limitless galaxies both going in different directions we have to ask ourselves where we fit and where does everything else fit in us.
June 19th, 2026 07:22
Razed Right
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me as both cosmic and intimate at the same time. The movement from sunlight to the vast constellation within the human body gives it a sense of wonder that I really enjoyed. There is something quietly uplifting about this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this hit me as both cosmic and intimate at the same time. The movement from sunlight to the vast constellation within the human body gives it a sense of wonder that I really enjoyed. There is something quietly uplifting about this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 4th, 2026 13:08
Razed Right
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent is the grandeur of the skies it is in waves that light and beauty come. Even heat is waves and so are we all. Well written
June 3rd, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent is the grandeur of the skies it is in waves that light and beauty come. Even heat is waves and so are we all. Well written
June 3rd, 2026 06:27
Axiomagic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really got me thinking. In just a handful of lines, you manage to hold a tension between limitation and possibility. The idea that our highest ideals may only fully exist in imagination is both inspiring and a little melancholy. Powerful reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 1st, 2026 17:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really got me thinking. In just a handful of lines, you manage to hold a tension between limitation and possibility. The idea that our highest ideals may only fully exist in imagination is both inspiring and a little melancholy. Powerful reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 1st, 2026 17:58
Light-Hearted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really hit me. There’s something refreshing about stripping everything back to a simple truth. We spend so much time chasing what matters most, and here you point to something so fundamental that we barely notice it anymore. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, this really hit me. There’s something refreshing about stripping everything back to a simple truth. We spend so much time chasing what matters most, and here you point to something so fundamental that we barely notice it anymore. Nicely done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 31st, 2026 10:37
Light-Hearted
rhmn_7 said:
Light not only for the body but also necessary for our souls as well..
May 31st, 2026 02:02
rhmn_7 said:
Light not only for the body but also necessary for our souls as well..
May 31st, 2026 02:02
Light-Hearted
arqios said:
And now everything we use to live by and make a living depends on electricity!
What are we in for!? Sorry for the tangent. It\'s one of those days 🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 00:57
arqios said:
And now everything we use to live by and make a living depends on electricity!
What are we in for!? Sorry for the tangent. It\'s one of those days 🕊️🙏
May 31st, 2026 00:57
Light-Hearted
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and so true light and water the two principle things necessary for life.
May 30th, 2026 17:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and so true light and water the two principle things necessary for life.
May 30th, 2026 17:54
Springboard
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem successfully relies on the paradox on the path to happiness.
May 30th, 2026 06:55
Durdica Porobija said:
The poem successfully relies on the paradox on the path to happiness.
May 30th, 2026 06:55
Reflectionz
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many people carry this exact quiet wish inside themselves...to find someone before whom they no longer have to perform, explain, or conceal parts of who they are. The simplicity of that longing is what makes the poem feel so real and human to me. Really moving work, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think many people carry this exact quiet wish inside themselves...to find someone before whom they no longer have to perform, explain, or conceal parts of who they are. The simplicity of that longing is what makes the poem feel so real and human to me. Really moving work, Friendship. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:43
Reflectionz
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, the way you break “dense- / -ly / De-elevated” apart visually is what stayed with me most. It physically slows the fall of the poem downward...like language itself losing altitude. Pairing this with Gravediggaz makes total sense tonally too. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mutley, the way you break “dense- / -ly / De-elevated” apart visually is what stayed with me most. It physically slows the fall of the poem downward...like language itself losing altitude. Pairing this with Gravediggaz makes total sense tonally too. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:14
Featherweight Champion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, what a quietly masterful poem this is. The atmosphere feels tangible from the opening lines...cold latch, muttering radio, metal-grey yard...and then the Vermeer turn deepens everything beautifully. By the end, the room itself feels alive again through light and memory. “Light, remembers waking” is such a soft but profound closing image. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 13:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rik, what a quietly masterful poem this is. The atmosphere feels tangible from the opening lines...cold latch, muttering radio, metal-grey yard...and then the Vermeer turn deepens everything beautifully. By the end, the room itself feels alive again through light and memory. “Light, remembers waking” is such a soft but profound closing image. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 13:31
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