Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Going Against the Grain
arqios said:
The idea of \"going against the grain\" could be suggestive of questioning the ease with which one might assume their desires are readily fulfilled—a challenge to perceive beyond surface simplicity. 🙏🏻🕊
March 23rd, 2025 04:03
arqios said:
The idea of \"going against the grain\" could be suggestive of questioning the ease with which one might assume their desires are readily fulfilled—a challenge to perceive beyond surface simplicity. 🙏🏻🕊
March 23rd, 2025 04:03
Going Against the Grain
Poetic Licence said:
A thought provoking write, a little inward thinking needed, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
A thought provoking write, a little inward thinking needed, enjoyed the read
March 22nd, 2025 10:46
Going Against the Grain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. I am presuming by \"Atavaric\", you are meaning atavistic, defined as primitive, instinctual, or innate? Or I have a new word to learn...and I do love neologisms . 🤣 Either way, the question asked is profoundly thought-provoking and soul searching! Brilliant work. And paired with the title. 🤯 A fave from me, my friend! 🙏🖤🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2025 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem. I am presuming by \"Atavaric\", you are meaning atavistic, defined as primitive, instinctual, or innate? Or I have a new word to learn...and I do love neologisms . 🤣 Either way, the question asked is profoundly thought-provoking and soul searching! Brilliant work. And paired with the title. 🤯 A fave from me, my friend! 🙏🖤🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2025 09:17
Going Against the Grain
sorenbarrett said:
This poem poses the question of foreseeing the unseen. Only with unbiased eyes that are lovingly sensitive to all stimuli could this be. An Avatar but the word Atavaric became a cloud obscuring my vision. Wisdom in a few lines that still remains obscure. Very nice S.A.
March 22nd, 2025 07:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem poses the question of foreseeing the unseen. Only with unbiased eyes that are lovingly sensitive to all stimuli could this be. An Avatar but the word Atavaric became a cloud obscuring my vision. Wisdom in a few lines that still remains obscure. Very nice S.A.
March 22nd, 2025 07:04
Bacterial Warfare
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write and a profoundly important topic. I am familiar with Dr. Shinichiro Akizuki\'s work and, actually, I am quite the fan of Miso! Meesa love miso as a matter of fact. Okay, bad Jar Jar Binks joke. 😂🤷♂️ Well done, my friend! Our diet is vital! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write and a profoundly important topic. I am familiar with Dr. Shinichiro Akizuki\'s work and, actually, I am quite the fan of Miso! Meesa love miso as a matter of fact. Okay, bad Jar Jar Binks joke. 😂🤷♂️ Well done, my friend! Our diet is vital! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 08:56
Bacterial Warfare
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read with a serious point, lets hope it never again comes to that, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 04:53
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read with a serious point, lets hope it never again comes to that, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 04:53
Bacterial Warfare
sorenbarrett said:
I heard that it is now a war crime and outlawed by the Geneva convention. A fun read about a seldom talked of topic.
March 20th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
I heard that it is now a war crime and outlawed by the Geneva convention. A fun read about a seldom talked of topic.
March 20th, 2025 04:21
Bacterial Warfare
arqios said:
Well, that\'s one way to make an entrance! Fermented soybeans with a flair for the dramatic—sounds like a recipe for chaos and creativity or biological warfare. 🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 01:28
arqios said:
Well, that\'s one way to make an entrance! Fermented soybeans with a flair for the dramatic—sounds like a recipe for chaos and creativity or biological warfare. 🙏🏻🕊
March 20th, 2025 01:28
Winner Takes All
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved word play and here it is at its best. A marvelous weaving of spelling word meaning and follow up lines to create great fun a fave
March 18th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved word play and here it is at its best. A marvelous weaving of spelling word meaning and follow up lines to create great fun a fave
March 18th, 2025 04:21
My Car, Ma
Poetic Licence said:
A very funny entertaining read reminding us of the old bangers we have all had, but also we are all guilty of making to many assumptions, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
A very funny entertaining read reminding us of the old bangers we have all had, but also we are all guilty of making to many assumptions, enjoyed the read
March 17th, 2025 04:51
My Car, Ma
arqios said:
Karma, it’s been said, is a b-—-h🙏🏻🕊sentimental journey to days before power steering! 🚙
March 17th, 2025 02:41
arqios said:
Karma, it’s been said, is a b-—-h🙏🏻🕊sentimental journey to days before power steering! 🚙
March 17th, 2025 02:41
My Car, Ma
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and brings back memories of some old cars I had. Loved it
March 16th, 2025 20:44
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read and brings back memories of some old cars I had. Loved it
March 16th, 2025 20:44
My Car, Ma
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you, thank you for literally making me laugh. You\'re a regular riot and way too fun. Awesome! I love it!!!
March 16th, 2025 20:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you, thank you for literally making me laugh. You\'re a regular riot and way too fun. Awesome! I love it!!!
March 16th, 2025 20:05
Fartology
Poetic Licence said:
Something\'s are better out in the open then within, enjoyed the read
March 14th, 2025 03:03
Poetic Licence said:
Something\'s are better out in the open then within, enjoyed the read
March 14th, 2025 03:03
Fartology
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well...some wisdom goes without saying! 🤣 This made me laugh...hard...my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 20:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well...some wisdom goes without saying! 🤣 This made me laugh...hard...my friend! Well done! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 20:01
Assumpchumps
NafisaSB said:
that is a truly powerful message, but alas, not many understand it, and keep assuming
March 12th, 2025 23:40
NafisaSB said:
that is a truly powerful message, but alas, not many understand it, and keep assuming
March 12th, 2025 23:40
Returns
arqios said:
The seeds asleep/awakening dynamic is so mystifying and engaging! 🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 05:54
arqios said:
The seeds asleep/awakening dynamic is so mystifying and engaging! 🙏🏻🕊
March 12th, 2025 05:54
Returns
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess you\'re having fun. Seriously?! I\'ll beg to differ and leave it at that. Thank you for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 22:37
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess you\'re having fun. Seriously?! I\'ll beg to differ and leave it at that. Thank you for sharing.
March 11th, 2025 22:37
Armored Vehicle
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. We thanks thee for sharing thy enlightened cogitations.
March 11th, 2025 22:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. We thanks thee for sharing thy enlightened cogitations.
March 11th, 2025 22:35
Returns
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are often best or at least better than reality. Mastery often only occurs in dreams although dreams can come true if one plans and works hard enough. A good read.
March 11th, 2025 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams are often best or at least better than reality. Mastery often only occurs in dreams although dreams can come true if one plans and works hard enough. A good read.
March 11th, 2025 19:54
Returns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent. This poem speaks to the human experience, it questions our mastery of anything, our opportunities for growth, and the choices we make in the face of repeated chances for change or awakening. I loved the reference to the Avitchi. Well done on this friend...and yay to being the first to comment! 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 19:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent. This poem speaks to the human experience, it questions our mastery of anything, our opportunities for growth, and the choices we make in the face of repeated chances for change or awakening. I loved the reference to the Avitchi. Well done on this friend...and yay to being the first to comment! 🌹👏
March 11th, 2025 19:28
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