Comments received on poems by Mutley Ravishes
Appetite For Identification
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions below the surface. Nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions below the surface. Nicely done
January 20th, 2025 04:27
Appetite For Identification
Cheeky Missy said:
Do you like leaving me speechless?
January 19th, 2025 23:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Do you like leaving me speechless?
January 19th, 2025 23:35
Buffering
arqios said:
Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.
January 19th, 2025 03:05
arqios said:
Wow. Now this can apply to feelings and situations as well as a kitchen bench battlefield in the forming.
January 19th, 2025 03:05
Buffering
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it\'s a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 21:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a fun, playful verse. For me, the message is that physical and/or surface-level things are inadequate when deeper or spiritual needs are not met. That feeling of buffering...we all know it in terms of our tech...but it\'s a spiritual thing too! Love this poem. Very deep! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 21:59
Buffering
sorenbarrett said:
Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 20:37
sorenbarrett said:
Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 20:37
Gland Goes On A Rant
sorenbarrett said:
Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem and it points the way. I should have known the clue lays right in front of my eyes After all it says production, life force, and then of course sucking. Ok I get it now. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem and it points the way. I should have known the clue lays right in front of my eyes After all it says production, life force, and then of course sucking. Ok I get it now. A fun read
January 18th, 2025 04:34
Gland Goes On A Rant
arqios said:
Neglected and overworked; I would go on a rantage too!
January 17th, 2025 20:32
arqios said:
Neglected and overworked; I would go on a rantage too!
January 17th, 2025 20:32
Spazzm\'d
arqios said:
Here’s hoping that the allure matches the revelation in whatever the obsession or compulsions may be !
January 17th, 2025 07:56
arqios said:
Here’s hoping that the allure matches the revelation in whatever the obsession or compulsions may be !
January 17th, 2025 07:56
Spazzm\'d
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. This is direct enough to grab one\'s attention and cryptic enough to leave them lingering, searching for the inner meaning it speaks to them within. That, imho, is true art. Multiple interpretations fit this...for me, it spoke of addiction because that is something that has affected me personally. But that need not be what it is about. Again, that is the brilliance of this brief but extremely impactful poem. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 19:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. This is direct enough to grab one\'s attention and cryptic enough to leave them lingering, searching for the inner meaning it speaks to them within. That, imho, is true art. Multiple interpretations fit this...for me, it spoke of addiction because that is something that has affected me personally. But that need not be what it is about. Again, that is the brilliance of this brief but extremely impactful poem. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 16th, 2025 19:11
Hormoans
sorenbarrett said:
Didn\'t know that words played with themselves, being a homophone whoremones would be closely related but this is too much mental masterbation. A fun read that seduces the reader.
January 16th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Didn\'t know that words played with themselves, being a homophone whoremones would be closely related but this is too much mental masterbation. A fun read that seduces the reader.
January 16th, 2025 04:08
Blue Star
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct and
poignant too! 😢
A crying shame they
lost all their dew! 🙏
A great read indeed! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 14th, 2025 20:42
Thad Wilk said:
Short and succinct and
poignant too! 😢
A crying shame they
lost all their dew! 🙏
A great read indeed! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 14th, 2025 20:42
Blue Star
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This says so much in its brevity, Mutley. I see some references in your comments to the Simpsons. While I am familiar with the show I am missing the connection. Still, I find this poem relatable, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 14th, 2025 07:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This says so much in its brevity, Mutley. I see some references in your comments to the Simpsons. While I am familiar with the show I am missing the connection. Still, I find this poem relatable, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 14th, 2025 07:58
Blue Star
arqios said:
So good to experience introspection speckled with a dusting of melancholy in a star-blanketed city. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 14th, 2025 04:00
arqios said:
So good to experience introspection speckled with a dusting of melancholy in a star-blanketed city. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 14th, 2025 04:00
Blue Star
Cassie58 said:
A little brevity which leaves many different images and scenarios in my mind. Well penned MR.
January 14th, 2025 02:17
Cassie58 said:
A little brevity which leaves many different images and scenarios in my mind. Well penned MR.
January 14th, 2025 02:17
Blue Star
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Yet another tribute to the latest hot propaganda, is it? We congratulates thee on thy success. Excellently rendered with appropriate imagery and a delicate poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
January 13th, 2025 21:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Yet another tribute to the latest hot propaganda, is it? We congratulates thee on thy success. Excellently rendered with appropriate imagery and a delicate poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
January 13th, 2025 21:29
Blue Star
sorenbarrett said:
Now this was a short one that sent its message in just a few words. It can be taken in several ways but I like thinking of it as the milky way as the city of stars, Then again it could be Hollywood
January 13th, 2025 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
Now this was a short one that sent its message in just a few words. It can be taken in several ways but I like thinking of it as the milky way as the city of stars, Then again it could be Hollywood
January 13th, 2025 19:39
Aah-ree-man\'s Cylons
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
great brevity!!
Thanks for sharing
I totally agree!! 💯👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 12th, 2025 20:58
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
great brevity!!
Thanks for sharing
I totally agree!! 💯👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 12th, 2025 20:58
Aah-ree-man\'s Cylons
arqios said:
No hope. But you wouldn’t care either way for lack of imagination… ignorance is blisss… sss… would it be artificial ignorance then? there being no possibility of artificial imagination… slaves of the algorithm…
January 11th, 2025 18:44
arqios said:
No hope. But you wouldn’t care either way for lack of imagination… ignorance is blisss… sss… would it be artificial ignorance then? there being no possibility of artificial imagination… slaves of the algorithm…
January 11th, 2025 18:44
Aah-ree-man\'s Cylons
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A world without imagination...now that would be hell. A wonderful write my friend! 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A world without imagination...now that would be hell. A wonderful write my friend! 🌹👏
January 11th, 2025 12:17
Aah-ree-man\'s Cylons
Cheeky Missy said:
Lacking the imagination AI will only answer what is programmed, unless, of course, it\'s far, far worse than the seeming superficiality appears, you know? Rendered innocuously enough with a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 11th, 2025 08:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Lacking the imagination AI will only answer what is programmed, unless, of course, it\'s far, far worse than the seeming superficiality appears, you know? Rendered innocuously enough with a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 11th, 2025 08:13
Aah-ree-man\'s Cylons
sorenbarrett said:
Inspiring! Is there a heaven and hell for AI? If not why not? Great write
January 11th, 2025 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
Inspiring! Is there a heaven and hell for AI? If not why not? Great write
January 11th, 2025 07:36
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