Comments received on poems by Hanible
Stormy Land
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love that is building on a firm foundation
March 30th, 2025 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love that is building on a firm foundation
March 30th, 2025 18:59
Dead Men Do Talk
Soman Ragavan said:
The final chat of the cadaver is unplugged, raw, unfiltered. It is something over which no one has control. Cadavers tell full stories. As the poem says, the final unspoken chats are generally unknown to the family.
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March 30th, 2025 04:44
Soman Ragavan said:
The final chat of the cadaver is unplugged, raw, unfiltered. It is something over which no one has control. Cadavers tell full stories. As the poem says, the final unspoken chats are generally unknown to the family.
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March 30th, 2025 04:44
Dead Men Do Talk
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery to family. Some donate organs without family knowing. A thing that many in the family would feel upset about. Nicely written
March 29th, 2025 18:22
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery to family. Some donate organs without family knowing. A thing that many in the family would feel upset about. Nicely written
March 29th, 2025 18:22
Sleepy Sleep Sleeping
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll take this as metaphoric and indeed with such emotional injury one goes blank just like physical shock. But to what infirmary do we go for such wounds. A lovely write
March 28th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll take this as metaphoric and indeed with such emotional injury one goes blank just like physical shock. But to what infirmary do we go for such wounds. A lovely write
March 28th, 2025 11:42
Please Call The Crisis Center
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening moment, I have had to deal with so many over the years and am always afraid to loose one. Hope you are fine.
March 27th, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening moment, I have had to deal with so many over the years and am always afraid to loose one. Hope you are fine.
March 27th, 2025 11:55
Please Make It Stop
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts of the end passed on in poetic form. A dark read. Nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 18:12
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts of the end passed on in poetic form. A dark read. Nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 18:12
Serial Heart Killer
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and great metaphor personifying an action. Loved it.
March 24th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and great metaphor personifying an action. Loved it.
March 24th, 2025 04:27
Door Mat
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being disposable and not valued except for what one can provide. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being disposable and not valued except for what one can provide. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 16:23
Lost Without Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that provokes thought. Powerful in its message. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that provokes thought. Powerful in its message. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 16:46
I\'m Dead
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and dark this poem speaks as if the dead can reflect upon their own death. Nicely written in the first person.
March 20th, 2025 17:03
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and dark this poem speaks as if the dead can reflect upon their own death. Nicely written in the first person.
March 20th, 2025 17:03
Cement Blocks
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write and I feel it is the view from a coffin, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 03:12
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write and I feel it is the view from a coffin, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 03:12
Cement Blocks
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow the box seems to be a coffin. It gives me feelings of Poe\'s Tell tail heart. A most interesting read.
March 18th, 2025 18:21
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow the box seems to be a coffin. It gives me feelings of Poe\'s Tell tail heart. A most interesting read.
March 18th, 2025 18:21
Love Love Love
sorenbarrett said:
The wording is wonderful in this poem with multiple possibilities. Love the ending it is so true the treasure lies within
March 17th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
The wording is wonderful in this poem with multiple possibilities. Love the ending it is so true the treasure lies within
March 17th, 2025 10:49
Bang Bang Boom
sorenbarrett said:
Death and destruction in this poem. Quite to the point
March 15th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Death and destruction in this poem. Quite to the point
March 15th, 2025 11:42
A Dead Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling dead and destroyed. A most interesting write
March 14th, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling dead and destroyed. A most interesting write
March 14th, 2025 19:00
Set Free
Poetic Licence said:
A huge shout out of hurt and pain in every pore of the body, powerful write
March 13th, 2025 07:11
Poetic Licence said:
A huge shout out of hurt and pain in every pore of the body, powerful write
March 13th, 2025 07:11
Set Free
sorenbarrett said:
Lashing out in pain this poem tells of being wounded in love. It calls out in anguish.
March 13th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Lashing out in pain this poem tells of being wounded in love. It calls out in anguish.
March 13th, 2025 06:41
I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title
Poetic Licence said:
I like the style of your writing, accurate bullet points, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
I like the style of your writing, accurate bullet points, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 02:57
I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation and enough emotion bottled up to fizz over the top. Well done
March 10th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation and enough emotion bottled up to fizz over the top. Well done
March 10th, 2025 13:46
I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
arqios said:
Very powerful but subtle as well🙏🏻🕊
March 9th, 2025 07:06
arqios said:
Very powerful but subtle as well🙏🏻🕊
March 9th, 2025 07:06
I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor for a relationship gone off the tracks or at least on hold. Short but to the point and disturbing to the passengers. Well spoken
March 9th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor for a relationship gone off the tracks or at least on hold. Short but to the point and disturbing to the passengers. Well spoken
March 9th, 2025 04:11
Her Puppet His Puppet
Poetic Licence said:
Being under emotional control being denied their own freedom, a powerful form of abuse but very hard to break away from, well written piece
March 7th, 2025 14:00
Poetic Licence said:
Being under emotional control being denied their own freedom, a powerful form of abuse but very hard to break away from, well written piece
March 7th, 2025 14:00
Her Puppet His Puppet
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of control and manipulation that leaves one without independence or freedom. It speaks of even subtle control in relationships. Well done
March 7th, 2025 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of control and manipulation that leaves one without independence or freedom. It speaks of even subtle control in relationships. Well done
March 7th, 2025 12:03
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