Comments received on poems by Hanible
They\'re Waiting For Me To
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have taken. A last line solution. In short lines fragments of thoughts are expressed. This tends to add tot the agitation and despair in the work. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have taken. A last line solution. In short lines fragments of thoughts are expressed. This tends to add tot the agitation and despair in the work. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 09:22
The Gun Against My Head
sorenbarrett said:
Apparent suicide a crime that used to carry the death penalty. A dark write but in metaphoric terms most all of us have committed it many times. A great tale withe metaphoric implications.
April 9th, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Apparent suicide a crime that used to carry the death penalty. A dark write but in metaphoric terms most all of us have committed it many times. A great tale withe metaphoric implications.
April 9th, 2025 08:44
Read Carefully
Poetic Licence said:
Alot of anger leading to thoughts of violence,a very emotional write, nicely expressed
April 9th, 2025 02:13
Poetic Licence said:
Alot of anger leading to thoughts of violence,a very emotional write, nicely expressed
April 9th, 2025 02:13
Read Carefully
sorenbarrett said:
Much violence fills these lines and where there is violence there is anger. Emotions felt in this poem that speaks with power. Well said
April 8th, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
Much violence fills these lines and where there is violence there is anger. Emotions felt in this poem that speaks with power. Well said
April 8th, 2025 16:29
Suicide Meetings
NafisaSB said:
omg - that was really scary to read and know.. hope no one wants to use these though...
April 8th, 2025 07:08
NafisaSB said:
omg - that was really scary to read and know.. hope no one wants to use these though...
April 8th, 2025 07:08
Acceptance
sorenbarrett said:
An analogy of class and school put into real life. Nicely written it speaks to me.
April 6th, 2025 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
An analogy of class and school put into real life. Nicely written it speaks to me.
April 6th, 2025 13:33
O Cut Me O Bruise Me
sorenbarrett said:
Incredibly powerful in its darkness it paints the picture of abuse in black eyes and broken bones, graphic and real it turns upon itself and finishes with the inevitable. Well written A fave
April 5th, 2025 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Incredibly powerful in its darkness it paints the picture of abuse in black eyes and broken bones, graphic and real it turns upon itself and finishes with the inevitable. Well written A fave
April 5th, 2025 05:52
Under The Bus
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor. We all feel we have been thrown under that proverbial bus from one time to another. A good write
April 4th, 2025 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor. We all feel we have been thrown under that proverbial bus from one time to another. A good write
April 4th, 2025 11:11
Stop Staring Crazy Mind To Get In To
Poetic Licence said:
Panic and fear racing through the distressed mind, making it impossible to think clearly as there are a thousand thoughts all at the same time, well expressed and written
April 2nd, 2025 06:46
Poetic Licence said:
Panic and fear racing through the distressed mind, making it impossible to think clearly as there are a thousand thoughts all at the same time, well expressed and written
April 2nd, 2025 06:46
Stop Staring Crazy Mind To Get In To
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety and racing thought came first to mind. Loosely connected and fragmented as thoughts are in desperation they fly like scattered birds. A powerful write.
April 2nd, 2025 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety and racing thought came first to mind. Loosely connected and fragmented as thoughts are in desperation they fly like scattered birds. A powerful write.
April 2nd, 2025 06:40
Suicide Meetings
Poetic Licence said:
My experience in those at most risk of going through with this are those who don\'t talk they just do it, the others are crying out for help and hopefully they get it , nicely expressed write
April 1st, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
My experience in those at most risk of going through with this are those who don\'t talk they just do it, the others are crying out for help and hopefully they get it , nicely expressed write
April 1st, 2025 06:27
Suicide Meetings
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message that I learned long ago. There are two types those that want help and to be heard and those that are determined. The first need an ear the second a coffin. Nicely said.
April 1st, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message that I learned long ago. There are two types those that want help and to be heard and those that are determined. The first need an ear the second a coffin. Nicely said.
April 1st, 2025 05:04
I\'m Fragile
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of easily being damaged and not always able to repair that damage, nicely written and expressed
April 1st, 2025 02:11
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of easily being damaged and not always able to repair that damage, nicely written and expressed
April 1st, 2025 02:11
I\'m Fragile
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of being easily damaged and not repairable. a fragile commodity. Well said
March 31st, 2025 16:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of being easily damaged and not repairable. a fragile commodity. Well said
March 31st, 2025 16:42
Stormy Land
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love that is building on a firm foundation
March 30th, 2025 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of love that is building on a firm foundation
March 30th, 2025 18:59
Dead Men Do Talk
Soman Ragavan said:
The final chat of the cadaver is unplugged, raw, unfiltered. It is something over which no one has control. Cadavers tell full stories. As the poem says, the final unspoken chats are generally unknown to the family.
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March 30th, 2025 04:44
Soman Ragavan said:
The final chat of the cadaver is unplugged, raw, unfiltered. It is something over which no one has control. Cadavers tell full stories. As the poem says, the final unspoken chats are generally unknown to the family.
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March 30th, 2025 04:44
Dead Men Do Talk
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery to family. Some donate organs without family knowing. A thing that many in the family would feel upset about. Nicely written
March 29th, 2025 18:22
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery to family. Some donate organs without family knowing. A thing that many in the family would feel upset about. Nicely written
March 29th, 2025 18:22
Sleepy Sleep Sleeping
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll take this as metaphoric and indeed with such emotional injury one goes blank just like physical shock. But to what infirmary do we go for such wounds. A lovely write
March 28th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll take this as metaphoric and indeed with such emotional injury one goes blank just like physical shock. But to what infirmary do we go for such wounds. A lovely write
March 28th, 2025 11:42
Please Call The Crisis Center
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening moment, I have had to deal with so many over the years and am always afraid to loose one. Hope you are fine.
March 27th, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening moment, I have had to deal with so many over the years and am always afraid to loose one. Hope you are fine.
March 27th, 2025 11:55
Please Make It Stop
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts of the end passed on in poetic form. A dark read. Nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 18:12
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts of the end passed on in poetic form. A dark read. Nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 18:12
Serial Heart Killer
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and great metaphor personifying an action. Loved it.
March 24th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and great metaphor personifying an action. Loved it.
March 24th, 2025 04:27
Door Mat
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being disposable and not valued except for what one can provide. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being disposable and not valued except for what one can provide. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 16:23
Lost Without Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that provokes thought. Powerful in its message. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that provokes thought. Powerful in its message. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 16:46
I\'m Dead
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and dark this poem speaks as if the dead can reflect upon their own death. Nicely written in the first person.
March 20th, 2025 17:03
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and dark this poem speaks as if the dead can reflect upon their own death. Nicely written in the first person.
March 20th, 2025 17:03
Cement Blocks
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write and I feel it is the view from a coffin, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 03:12
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write and I feel it is the view from a coffin, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 03:12
Cement Blocks
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow the box seems to be a coffin. It gives me feelings of Poe\'s Tell tail heart. A most interesting read.
March 18th, 2025 18:21
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow the box seems to be a coffin. It gives me feelings of Poe\'s Tell tail heart. A most interesting read.
March 18th, 2025 18:21
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