Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Black Man
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is urgent, intense, and politically charged, reflecting fear, persecution, and a call for unity. This poem powerfully captures fear, injustice, and the need for awareness and unity in the face of systemic violence. Nicely written
September 17th, 2025 15:52
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is urgent, intense, and politically charged, reflecting fear, persecution, and a call for unity. This poem powerfully captures fear, injustice, and the need for awareness and unity in the face of systemic violence. Nicely written
September 17th, 2025 15:52
Black Man
sorenbarrett said:
Those marked and labeled in the minority singled out as scape goats. Nature is this way in its pecking order eliminating the weak preserving the strong with no other value system. Black man here I take not just race or skin color but any different from the norm. A powerful write
September 17th, 2025 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
Those marked and labeled in the minority singled out as scape goats. Nature is this way in its pecking order eliminating the weak preserving the strong with no other value system. Black man here I take not just race or skin color but any different from the norm. A powerful write
September 17th, 2025 07:44
The Doughnut Donut Shop
sorenbarrett said:
Love the donut shop hate the lines. When you get to the counter better know what you want or the woman behind you will step on you heels. A good upbeat write.
September 16th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Love the donut shop hate the lines. When you get to the counter better know what you want or the woman behind you will step on you heels. A good upbeat write.
September 16th, 2025 09:41
Jail
Paul Bell said:
Three meals a day, a roof over your head, early release from overcrowding.
Put me down for it.
September 15th, 2025 17:15
Paul Bell said:
Three meals a day, a roof over your head, early release from overcrowding.
Put me down for it.
September 15th, 2025 17:15
Jail
sorenbarrett said:
Jail, death, deportation none of which is desirable
September 15th, 2025 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
Jail, death, deportation none of which is desirable
September 15th, 2025 11:54
Sorry To Tell You
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Nicely written rhythmic poem.
September 12th, 2025 11:08
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Nicely written rhythmic poem.
September 12th, 2025 11:08
Sorry To Tell You
sorenbarrett said:
Brutal and dark this poem speaks of getting even in a most unconventional way. Nicely rhymed and worded powerful.
September 12th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Brutal and dark this poem speaks of getting even in a most unconventional way. Nicely rhymed and worded powerful.
September 12th, 2025 09:27
Late Night Cries
sorenbarrett said:
Pain of the past awakens when the mind relaxes. nicely done
September 11th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Pain of the past awakens when the mind relaxes. nicely done
September 11th, 2025 03:56
Looking For A True Friend
sorenbarrett said:
Truth to reflect about (pun intended) A fine write
September 10th, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
Truth to reflect about (pun intended) A fine write
September 10th, 2025 08:09
Looking For A True Friend
2781 said:
It doesn\'t come with observation.....it\'s within you.
September 10th, 2025 07:54
2781 said:
It doesn\'t come with observation.....it\'s within you.
September 10th, 2025 07:54
Be Mine
sorenbarrett said:
A proposal in poetic form. A fun light hearted read
September 9th, 2025 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
A proposal in poetic form. A fun light hearted read
September 9th, 2025 16:04
The Hunter
sorenbarrett said:
One generally finds what one is looking for. A short poem with a powerful message. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
One generally finds what one is looking for. A short poem with a powerful message. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 05:09
Life
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now that is quite a riddle with more than one possible answer. Fun read
September 6th, 2025 17:10
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now that is quite a riddle with more than one possible answer. Fun read
September 6th, 2025 17:10
Love And Pain
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is sad, nicely written poem.
September 5th, 2025 09:20
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is sad, nicely written poem.
September 5th, 2025 09:20
Shower Tears
NinjaGirl said:
I love this! It\'s so relatable, nobody can see you cry if you have water streaming down your face. I love that it\'s so short yet still tells a whole story. This is really well done.
September 4th, 2025 11:06
NinjaGirl said:
I love this! It\'s so relatable, nobody can see you cry if you have water streaming down your face. I love that it\'s so short yet still tells a whole story. This is really well done.
September 4th, 2025 11:06
Shower Tears
sorenbarrett said:
Using the shower as a metaphor and symbolically washing away the unwanted elements of the day is a clever and most poetic manner of cleansing. Nicely said.
September 4th, 2025 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
Using the shower as a metaphor and symbolically washing away the unwanted elements of the day is a clever and most poetic manner of cleansing. Nicely said.
September 4th, 2025 08:01
O Love
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that speaks of life and death and the passion that goes with them. Nicely done
September 3rd, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that speaks of life and death and the passion that goes with them. Nicely done
September 3rd, 2025 07:55
Missing
sorenbarrett said:
Lost is what comes to mind. A feeling of loss and even lost in dreams. A mournful feeling accompanies this poem
September 2nd, 2025 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Lost is what comes to mind. A feeling of loss and even lost in dreams. A mournful feeling accompanies this poem
September 2nd, 2025 06:07
A Stormy Brain
sorenbarrett said:
The world itself is spinning is it any wonder that the brain is in turmoil. A fun but all too accurate state of affairs
August 31st, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
The world itself is spinning is it any wonder that the brain is in turmoil. A fun but all too accurate state of affairs
August 31st, 2025 04:30
The Pain
NinjaGirl said:
It makes us do things, say things we never would. Pain is so so complicated. Well-written poem, good work
August 30th, 2025 19:50
NinjaGirl said:
It makes us do things, say things we never would. Pain is so so complicated. Well-written poem, good work
August 30th, 2025 19:50
The Pain
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you the pills are worse than the pain. Prefer my pain plain. Even when burnt myself up or at least twenty five percent of me didn\'t take the pills. I empathize with you. and wish you well hoping the pain will subside
August 30th, 2025 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you the pills are worse than the pain. Prefer my pain plain. Even when burnt myself up or at least twenty five percent of me didn\'t take the pills. I empathize with you. and wish you well hoping the pain will subside
August 30th, 2025 10:41
What You Call That
sorenbarrett said:
I have seen both before and neither is anything I would want to go through. A lovely write
August 29th, 2025 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
I have seen both before and neither is anything I would want to go through. A lovely write
August 29th, 2025 14:03
Take A Moment
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the thought and message very powerful
August 28th, 2025 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the thought and message very powerful
August 28th, 2025 08:31
Just Shoot Me Bang Bang
sorenbarrett said:
Despair drips from this verse. Remember that the Phoenix raises from its own ashes to fly again. Powerfully written
August 27th, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Despair drips from this verse. Remember that the Phoenix raises from its own ashes to fly again. Powerfully written
August 27th, 2025 06:53
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