Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Living In A Coffin
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting choice of metaphor in this poem and its potential meaning. Nicely written it speaks of isolation and withdrawal but also symbolic death. Very nicely done
January 4th, 2026 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting choice of metaphor in this poem and its potential meaning. Nicely written it speaks of isolation and withdrawal but also symbolic death. Very nicely done
January 4th, 2026 03:57
A Cry
sorenbarrett said:
This seems involuntary like a sneeze or a cough that is autonomic in nature a thought that surges in from nowhere without control. A lovely write
January 3rd, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
This seems involuntary like a sneeze or a cough that is autonomic in nature a thought that surges in from nowhere without control. A lovely write
January 3rd, 2026 06:12
Depressing Screaming
Friendship said:
Well worded. Your poem revolves around the experience of chronic emotional fatigue and the struggle to maintain a façade of normalcy despite internal turmoil. The poet conveys a sense of exhaustion that transcends physical tiredness, highlighting the relentless pressure of unacknowledged feelings.
January 2nd, 2026 07:19
Friendship said:
Well worded. Your poem revolves around the experience of chronic emotional fatigue and the struggle to maintain a façade of normalcy despite internal turmoil. The poet conveys a sense of exhaustion that transcends physical tiredness, highlighting the relentless pressure of unacknowledged feelings.
January 2nd, 2026 07:19
Depressing Screaming
sorenbarrett said:
Depression a difficult disease that persists and torments. Well done
January 2nd, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Depression a difficult disease that persists and torments. Well done
January 2nd, 2026 04:58
Leave It In 2025
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Let\'s hope for New Beginnings, but I\'m sure I\'ll have some of last years junk still in my pocket. A fine Poem.
January 1st, 2026 20:30
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Let\'s hope for New Beginnings, but I\'m sure I\'ll have some of last years junk still in my pocket. A fine Poem.
January 1st, 2026 20:30
Leave It In 2025
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely set of metaphors fill this poem of a new year. Well said and a Happy New Year to you as well
January 1st, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely set of metaphors fill this poem of a new year. Well said and a Happy New Year to you as well
January 1st, 2026 04:54
Walls Around My Heart
Katie B. said:
Lovely and tender. Well written. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
December 31st, 2025 02:15
Katie B. said:
Lovely and tender. Well written. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
December 31st, 2025 02:15
A Funeral For Our Bed
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of memories encapsulated in an object. Well written it speaks to me. I wrote a poem some time ago about the same thing. You might want to look at it called (Bed). Enjoyed the write
December 30th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of memories encapsulated in an object. Well written it speaks to me. I wrote a poem some time ago about the same thing. You might want to look at it called (Bed). Enjoyed the write
December 30th, 2025 11:41
There’s a Bullet in My Brain
sorenbarrett said:
Memories can be bullets and do more damage than one. A good write
December 29th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
Memories can be bullets and do more damage than one. A good write
December 29th, 2025 17:11
There’s a Bullet in My Brain
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the concept of trauma and the enduring impact of painful memories or experiences. The metaphor of a \"bullet\" in the brain symbolizes a deep-seated thought or trauma that is difficult to expunge, yet the speaker learns to navigate life around it, suggesting resilience and the ability to find light and meaning despite suffering.
December 29th, 2025 14:17
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the concept of trauma and the enduring impact of painful memories or experiences. The metaphor of a \"bullet\" in the brain symbolizes a deep-seated thought or trauma that is difficult to expunge, yet the speaker learns to navigate life around it, suggesting resilience and the ability to find light and meaning despite suffering.
December 29th, 2025 14:17
Where My Heart Refused To Whisper
Soman Ragavan said:
The heart is a most mysterious part of our body. Through it we experience pain, joy, doubt, etc. Perhaps our greatest protector is the heart. It senses that which other parts of our body do not detect. It warns us of dangers that remain unseen. The ways of the heart are mysterious, but most of the time they work for our own benefit, for our safety.
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December 29th, 2025 07:00
Soman Ragavan said:
The heart is a most mysterious part of our body. Through it we experience pain, joy, doubt, etc. Perhaps our greatest protector is the heart. It senses that which other parts of our body do not detect. It warns us of dangers that remain unseen. The ways of the heart are mysterious, but most of the time they work for our own benefit, for our safety.
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December 29th, 2025 07:00
Where My Heart Refused To Whisper
sorenbarrett said:
I love the counter current of this poem and the wording itself, Nicely done
December 28th, 2025 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
I love the counter current of this poem and the wording itself, Nicely done
December 28th, 2025 19:35
Dozen Of Roses
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the color does matter. A good read.
December 26th, 2025 18:52
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the color does matter. A good read.
December 26th, 2025 18:52
I Don\'t Sleep In My Bed
NafisaSB said:
Wishing that you get to sleep in your bed soonest in a relaxed frame of mind
stay happy - and pls leave the couch...
December 25th, 2025 02:14
NafisaSB said:
Wishing that you get to sleep in your bed soonest in a relaxed frame of mind
stay happy - and pls leave the couch...
December 25th, 2025 02:14
It\'s The Truth
Katie B. said:
Deep, heavy and sad. Dealing with loss is the hardest of all.
December 24th, 2025 06:26
Katie B. said:
Deep, heavy and sad. Dealing with loss is the hardest of all.
December 24th, 2025 06:26
It\'s The Truth
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of missing someone and that loss. Well written one can hear the sadness. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of missing someone and that loss. Well written one can hear the sadness. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:13
I Love You
sorenbarrett said:
It is a distinction I have made with my children from time to time and I feel it. Nicely said in poetic form
December 22nd, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
It is a distinction I have made with my children from time to time and I feel it. Nicely said in poetic form
December 22nd, 2025 03:54
Too The Knife I Pulled Out Of My Back
sorenbarrett said:
I take this dramatic poem as a warning and a statement. Well written and a fave
December 19th, 2025 19:26
sorenbarrett said:
I take this dramatic poem as a warning and a statement. Well written and a fave
December 19th, 2025 19:26
That One Last Cry
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of finalization. Emotional and directly stated. Well done
December 18th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of finalization. Emotional and directly stated. Well done
December 18th, 2025 08:13
Please Don\'t
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks from the darkness and in darkness one can not see who kicks and trips over or steps on one. A plea for others to be careful. Well done
December 17th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks from the darkness and in darkness one can not see who kicks and trips over or steps on one. A plea for others to be careful. Well done
December 17th, 2025 08:48
I Don\'t Sleep In My Bed
Demar Desu said:
Shikibuton might be better than a couch, great poem.
December 17th, 2025 00:23
Demar Desu said:
Shikibuton might be better than a couch, great poem.
December 17th, 2025 00:23
I Don\'t Sleep In My Bed
sorenbarrett said:
We grow accustomed to certain things even in their discomfort and then again there are times that others angry at us force us from a place of comfort to much less comfortable place. Metaphor or literal a good write all the same
December 16th, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
We grow accustomed to certain things even in their discomfort and then again there are times that others angry at us force us from a place of comfort to much less comfortable place. Metaphor or literal a good write all the same
December 16th, 2025 03:40
Facts Pt3
sorenbarrett said:
And with that thin line one can be bound. A good read
December 14th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
And with that thin line one can be bound. A good read
December 14th, 2025 13:39
My Shower
sorenbarrett said:
I got the feeling and have been there. Sometimes one just would rather not get out of the shower especially when the room temperature is forty degrees fahrenheit. Well written
December 13th, 2025 18:43
sorenbarrett said:
I got the feeling and have been there. Sometimes one just would rather not get out of the shower especially when the room temperature is forty degrees fahrenheit. Well written
December 13th, 2025 18:43
Scream
sorenbarrett said:
Shake the bottle or Cham pain it will explode. A good write with feeling
December 12th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
Shake the bottle or Cham pain it will explode. A good write with feeling
December 12th, 2025 14:08
Scream
NinjaGirl said:
I need to find somewhere I can scream without alarming someone into calling authorities!
December 12th, 2025 14:01
NinjaGirl said:
I need to find somewhere I can scream without alarming someone into calling authorities!
December 12th, 2025 14:01
Too Mister And Miss Downer
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! a powerful poem that leaves the reader afraid to remark. Well done
December 11th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! a powerful poem that leaves the reader afraid to remark. Well done
December 11th, 2025 08:15
Be Ready
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about the ending of the year, self and world. Well said
December 10th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about the ending of the year, self and world. Well said
December 10th, 2025 03:46
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