Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
O Love Save Me
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tender this seems the plea of a child, maybe the child in all of us, asking for someone to understand and be there. Very nicely written it calls out for affiliation.
March 29th, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tender this seems the plea of a child, maybe the child in all of us, asking for someone to understand and be there. Very nicely written it calls out for affiliation.
March 29th, 2026 05:16
Angels And Butterflies
Vipassana said:
When an angel passes
The air folds into a hush
When a butterfly lifts
The hush becomes a blessing
My screen name might suggest how much I value that hush, that silence.
March 29th, 2026 04:08
Vipassana said:
When an angel passes
The air folds into a hush
When a butterfly lifts
The hush becomes a blessing
My screen name might suggest how much I value that hush, that silence.
March 29th, 2026 04:08
If I Cry
Vipassana said:
It will be because something inside me
Finally stopped pretending
It was stone
Even mountains erode
When no one is watching
very nice.
March 29th, 2026 03:43
Vipassana said:
It will be because something inside me
Finally stopped pretending
It was stone
Even mountains erode
When no one is watching
very nice.
March 29th, 2026 03:43
An Online Poet Me
Vipassana said:
love the poem.
I write in the blue hush
Of a screen that hums like prayer
Sending small lanterns of language
Into the endless dark
really nice.
March 29th, 2026 03:36
Vipassana said:
love the poem.
I write in the blue hush
Of a screen that hums like prayer
Sending small lanterns of language
Into the endless dark
really nice.
March 29th, 2026 03:36
Phases Of The Moon
Vipassana said:
love the imagery, like this passage, for instance
A blade hung high
Cutting the night
Into keep
And release
Waxing
A white wound
Opening wider
Spilling its light
March 29th, 2026 03:30
Vipassana said:
love the imagery, like this passage, for instance
A blade hung high
Cutting the night
Into keep
And release
Waxing
A white wound
Opening wider
Spilling its light
March 29th, 2026 03:30
Fixing Broken Pieces
Vipassana said:
very nice. especially like
Until the shape of me
Starts to look less like a warning
And more like a beginning
March 29th, 2026 03:25
Vipassana said:
very nice. especially like
Until the shape of me
Starts to look less like a warning
And more like a beginning
March 29th, 2026 03:25
Packing My Bags
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic feel to this poem that goes beyond the images and words. It feels poetic and sounds poetic. Its meaning is melancholic and lingers. Nicely written it is a fave
March 28th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic feel to this poem that goes beyond the images and words. It feels poetic and sounds poetic. Its meaning is melancholic and lingers. Nicely written it is a fave
March 28th, 2026 04:26
1800 Help
sorenbarrett said:
Hesitation is reflected in this poem and one has to ask when does hesitation become procrastination. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Hesitation is reflected in this poem and one has to ask when does hesitation become procrastination. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:27
The Baker Of The Doughnut Donut Shop
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful poem of creation. The baker god who hands out treats to those that can pay and maybe once in a while to one who can\'t. Loved the story and metaphor Anthony
March 26th, 2026 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful poem of creation. The baker god who hands out treats to those that can pay and maybe once in a while to one who can\'t. Loved the story and metaphor Anthony
March 26th, 2026 06:42
Running Mind
sorenbarrett said:
This feels mechanical and sterile a cold and heartless world where everything is matter of fact. It brings images of the book 1984 and maybe Huxley\'s Brave New World. It is metallic. Well done
March 25th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This feels mechanical and sterile a cold and heartless world where everything is matter of fact. It brings images of the book 1984 and maybe Huxley\'s Brave New World. It is metallic. Well done
March 25th, 2026 04:08
Ahhh! Is The New Woo Sah
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poetic manner to express this message. So nicely said
March 24th, 2026 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poetic manner to express this message. So nicely said
March 24th, 2026 06:04
Life As We Know It
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that reminds us of how we are all etched in that stone how our footprints blown away by the wind and eroded by rain still remain in some way. A lovely write my friend.
March 23rd, 2026 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that reminds us of how we are all etched in that stone how our footprints blown away by the wind and eroded by rain still remain in some way. A lovely write my friend.
March 23rd, 2026 06:02
I Have Been Up For Days Weeks Months
2781 said:
There\'s a lot going on. I\'ve suffered sleeplessness over the years, from both anxiety and drug abuse.
Now I sleep like a log.
I hope you find your piece.
March 22nd, 2026 04:57
2781 said:
There\'s a lot going on. I\'ve suffered sleeplessness over the years, from both anxiety and drug abuse.
Now I sleep like a log.
I hope you find your piece.
March 22nd, 2026 04:57
I Have Been Up For Days Weeks Months
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of persistence in the face of life continuing in this poem. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of persistence in the face of life continuing in this poem. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:31
The Kidnapping Of My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic poem of a heart shanghaied a sailor impressed into the service of one adored. Lovely metaphor
March 21st, 2026 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic poem of a heart shanghaied a sailor impressed into the service of one adored. Lovely metaphor
March 21st, 2026 07:37
Hug’s And Kisses
sorenbarrett said:
Loving gestures that let us know that someone near cares and is there for us. Romantic and sensual it sings of support and tenderness. Well done
March 20th, 2026 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Loving gestures that let us know that someone near cares and is there for us. Romantic and sensual it sings of support and tenderness. Well done
March 20th, 2026 05:20
A Poet Superhero
sorenbarrett said:
With each line I had memories of the beginning of the superman series as it described the man of steel. Here each line described the man of ink. A lovely write that had overtones of nostalgia and super heroes
March 19th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
With each line I had memories of the beginning of the superman series as it described the man of steel. Here each line described the man of ink. A lovely write that had overtones of nostalgia and super heroes
March 19th, 2026 04:45
Mommy And Daddy Is Fighting Again
sorenbarrett said:
Is it no wonder that when a child learns that love is expressed like this that they too do the same with those they love. A powerful write
March 18th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Is it no wonder that when a child learns that love is expressed like this that they too do the same with those they love. A powerful write
March 18th, 2026 07:15
Are You Listening
Carmen Luca said:
\"Your silence grows antlers\" I loved that. Beautiful poem.
March 17th, 2026 04:25
Carmen Luca said:
\"Your silence grows antlers\" I loved that. Beautiful poem.
March 17th, 2026 04:25
Are You Listening
sorenbarrett said:
There are several good lines here but it is the last phrase that captured my mind. Mistaking warmth for the weather struck me. Well done
March 17th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
There are several good lines here but it is the last phrase that captured my mind. Mistaking warmth for the weather struck me. Well done
March 17th, 2026 04:23
A Poet In A Psychological State
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor electric a storm lightning all forming creation. Nicely done
March 16th, 2026 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor electric a storm lightning all forming creation. Nicely done
March 16th, 2026 03:17
If I Cry
Katie B. said:
You are quite the poet, this is exceptional!
Blessings to you, Katie
March 15th, 2026 13:19
Katie B. said:
You are quite the poet, this is exceptional!
Blessings to you, Katie
March 15th, 2026 13:19
If I Cry
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents crying as a sign of weakness perceived but acknowledged and possible. Very nice
March 15th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem presents crying as a sign of weakness perceived but acknowledged and possible. Very nice
March 15th, 2026 03:55
If I Cry
Caring dove said:
When I was younger there were times where I just couldn’t cry at all .. I just felt empty and numb . But now I do sometimes . There’s nothing wrong with crying ..
March 15th, 2026 03:30
Caring dove said:
When I was younger there were times where I just couldn’t cry at all .. I just felt empty and numb . But now I do sometimes . There’s nothing wrong with crying ..
March 15th, 2026 03:30
I’m Sorry I Had To Take My Medicine
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! such a raw and personal confession of where one is and what is happening at a moment in time stated in first person it has power.
March 14th, 2026 11:27
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! such a raw and personal confession of where one is and what is happening at a moment in time stated in first person it has power.
March 14th, 2026 11:27
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