Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible



Nothing
sorenbarrett said:

A poem reminiscent of Lao Tzu and the Tao. Nothing is what gives meaning to what is. It is the empty space that holds water in a vase. A very nicely and philosophical write.

August 11th, 2025 09:23

Nothing
Demar Desu said:

yet everything… great poem

August 11th, 2025 09:21

To Die From Your Love
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting combination where death is depicted as a relief and interconnected to love. Nicely done

August 8th, 2025 18:46

You\'re Hurting Me
V1RU$ said:

A straightforward and gets to the point. I hope you\'re ok and humans are cruel. Nowadays they revolve around selfishness and electronics when they don\'t realize LIFE. It hurts knowing the truth and other\'s feelings, but push through. We are all flesh, yet some of us feel superior.


August 7th, 2025 23:09

You\'re Hurting Me
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of pain and a challenge to one that says they love when they inflict pain. Well written

August 7th, 2025 18:32

Swimming In Gasoline
rrodriguez said:

Now, that\'s dangerous... swimming in gasoline, nah, not a chance. Excellent write!

August 6th, 2025 17:26

Follow The Clock
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 6th, 2025 16:22

Follow The Clock
sorenbarrett said:

The hands on a clock clap 24 times in a day and so I feel reassured. Clever and well written

August 6th, 2025 15:03

From The Heart
sorenbarrett said:

The right moment where timing is everything. A poem that may have diverse interpretations. Nicely done

August 5th, 2025 08:35

A Heart Part 2 The Entanglement
sorenbarrett said:

Each emotion has its other side and down side. A lovely write with an unexpected twist just like barbed wire. Well done

August 4th, 2025 05:03

A Heart Part 1 The Damaged One
sorenbarrett said:

Interesting images that make for a mechanical life. Today\'s world does tend to be a bit automated.

August 3rd, 2025 15:22

She\'s A Killer
Poetic Licence said:

Abusive control over someone is deadly for all concerned, and those often on the recieving end do wish they were dead, strong and raw write

August 2nd, 2025 08:52

She\'s A Killer
sorenbarrett said:

Control in a relationship is lethal and here it is displayed in poetic form

August 2nd, 2025 08:09

Thief
Poetic Licence said:

The theft of a heart from right under their nose, nicely written and very relatable to many

August 1st, 2025 08:10

Thief
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of one stolen by passion a most frequent occurrence. Nicely written

August 1st, 2025 07:00

Melting
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely written with a twist, is the end stated because the chase is over, enjoyed the read

July 31st, 2025 05:40

Melting
sorenbarrett said:

Clever a romantic poem with a surprise ending that fits too honestly into today\'s society and can be taken literally with separation, or just taking off or emotionally with distancing and withdrawal. Very nice a fave

July 31st, 2025 04:09

The Kindness Of Hearts
sorenbarrett said:

Passivity and continued abuse is not always the right policy. A good write of one way to deal with conflict. Nicely written

July 30th, 2025 10:57

The Kindness Of Hearts
Poetic Licence said:

Those who are mistreated hide the pain the best, and often cry in silence, nicely expressed and written write

July 30th, 2025 10:46

The Kindness Of Hearts
Soman Ragavan said:

\"Crying yourself an ocean\" is a very poetic way of depicting crying for a long time. \"The mistreated ones hide their pain\" : our ego prevents us from spelling out our pain.

July 30th, 2025 05:44

The Bottom Of A Bottle
Keeter C said:

So true….

July 29th, 2025 09:02

Pretty Please
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that on the surface sounds masochistic but one must ask is that the real meaning? Nicely written

July 29th, 2025 04:51

In A Box
sorenbarrett said:

Well set this poem with metaphor tells of being imprisoned waiting for some one to reach out and embrace them. Lovely

July 28th, 2025 16:22

In A Box
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 28th, 2025 12:15

In A Box
Poetic Licence said:

Hiding away in the darkness hoping someone will come along who cares, and enable that box to be opened, nicely expressed and written

July 28th, 2025 08:34

The Bottom Of A Bottle
Poetic Licence said:

A poignant write of alcoholism and the continued drinking till nothing\'s left, nicely expressed

July 28th, 2025 01:33

The Bottom Of A Bottle
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

July 27th, 2025 20:47

The Bottom Of A Bottle
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of drinking to the end of the bottle A most interesting read.

July 27th, 2025 19:57

Love Me
sorenbarrett said:

Short and a clear message sent. Nicely done

July 26th, 2025 16:05

The World
sorenbarrett said:

An interesting approach in this poem. Nicely done

July 25th, 2025 15:06

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