Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Then Comes The Boom
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of birth in this poem of life. Nicely done
November 6th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
The beauty of birth in this poem of life. Nicely done
November 6th, 2026 03:40
Against What Simon Says
sorenbarrett said:
In the game of Simon says there is a sense of rebellion. Nicely worded Anthony
November 5th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
In the game of Simon says there is a sense of rebellion. Nicely worded Anthony
November 5th, 2026 04:17
This Must Be A Crime
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Anthony this deserves to be a song, I can feel it and almost hear it as I read it. Clever and catchy it just needs the right tune. A fave
November 4th, 2026 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Anthony this deserves to be a song, I can feel it and almost hear it as I read it. Clever and catchy it just needs the right tune. A fave
November 4th, 2026 04:22
Don\'t Lie
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of truth and its value nicely composed
November 3rd, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of truth and its value nicely composed
November 3rd, 2026 04:48
Question For Tomorrow
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questioning. There is an uncertainty that carries on this poem. It starts in darkness and moves toward dawn with a sense of hopefulness. Nicely written Anthony
November 2nd, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of questioning. There is an uncertainty that carries on this poem. It starts in darkness and moves toward dawn with a sense of hopefulness. Nicely written Anthony
November 2nd, 2026 04:40
Stop Trying To Play Me
sorenbarrett said:
A game of cards, bluff a lie, luck of the draw, never show your cards, poker face, no trust. Nicely done
November 1st, 2026 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
A game of cards, bluff a lie, luck of the draw, never show your cards, poker face, no trust. Nicely done
November 1st, 2026 07:57
Do You Really Care
sorenbarrett said:
How strong is the bond is asked in this poem. Is it really a feeling or just talk and will it be backed up when the chips are down. Nicely voiced
October 31st, 2026 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
How strong is the bond is asked in this poem. Is it really a feeling or just talk and will it be backed up when the chips are down. Nicely voiced
October 31st, 2026 06:17
Do You Really Care
ginny jayne said:
Thank you for such a beautiful poem, I love it.
October 31st, 2026 06:16
ginny jayne said:
Thank you for such a beautiful poem, I love it.
October 31st, 2026 06:16
My Last Magic Trick
sorenbarrett said:
Held back by applause. Oh vanity such a sweet sin. Good write
October 30th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Held back by applause. Oh vanity such a sweet sin. Good write
October 30th, 2026 04:11
What Do I Mean Something Or Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Anthony and those memories after a while turn to ghosts as well but ghosts are spirits that haunt and that may be enough. Good write my friend
October 29th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Anthony and those memories after a while turn to ghosts as well but ghosts are spirits that haunt and that may be enough. Good write my friend
October 29th, 2026 04:56
I Lost My Glasses
Jabberwocky said:
Ha ha, as a fellow glasses loser...and house keys misplacer... and careless hat placer...I can empathise. Really nice write. Cheers
October 28th, 2026 08:19
Jabberwocky said:
Ha ha, as a fellow glasses loser...and house keys misplacer... and careless hat placer...I can empathise. Really nice write. Cheers
October 28th, 2026 08:19
I Lost My Glasses
sorenbarrett said:
A fun search Anthony where I expected you to find them on your head not bed. Loved it. It flowed well with the short lines and rhyme.
October 28th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
A fun search Anthony where I expected you to find them on your head not bed. Loved it. It flowed well with the short lines and rhyme.
October 28th, 2026 04:24
Thank You God For Another Year
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and thanksgiving to a higher power. Nicely written Anthony
October 27th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and thanksgiving to a higher power. Nicely written Anthony
October 27th, 2026 04:31
The Day Before
Novaselic said:
“The wind blew hard
Across the yard
Without regard
Leaving scars
Up climbed hope
Down slipped rope
Hard to cope
When dreams don\'t float”
This is one of my favorite stanza from the poem. Wonderful poem 😊
October 26th, 2026 10:22
Novaselic said:
“The wind blew hard
Across the yard
Without regard
Leaving scars
Up climbed hope
Down slipped rope
Hard to cope
When dreams don\'t float”
This is one of my favorite stanza from the poem. Wonderful poem 😊
October 26th, 2026 10:22
The Day Before
sorenbarrett said:
In sequential mono rhyme this poem unfolded a story that ends in what I felt the most catching segment in the last stanza:
\"Morning waited
Quiet and still
While the world stood
On the hill\"
Nicely done Anthony
October 26th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
In sequential mono rhyme this poem unfolded a story that ends in what I felt the most catching segment in the last stanza:
\"Morning waited
Quiet and still
While the world stood
On the hill\"
Nicely done Anthony
October 26th, 2026 04:15
The Attack On My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Anthony and nicely executed. All heart attacks don\'t need to be bad.
October 25th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Anthony and nicely executed. All heart attacks don\'t need to be bad.
October 25th, 2026 04:11
Just Forget It
sorenbarrett said:
I love the flow and the downward spiral of letting something go to be told at the end not to forget. Well done Anthony
October 24th, 2026 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
I love the flow and the downward spiral of letting something go to be told at the end not to forget. Well done Anthony
October 24th, 2026 05:34
It\'s Me Not AI
sorenbarrett said:
There was a different but most definite beat and meter to this poem and its claim to be oneself not false or fake made it most meaningful. I loved it a fave Anthony
October 23rd, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
There was a different but most definite beat and meter to this poem and its claim to be oneself not false or fake made it most meaningful. I loved it a fave Anthony
October 23rd, 2026 04:47
Warning Spaces
sorenbarrett said:
I love the slippery rhyme that pulls one along this narrow path (short lines). It creates its own rhythm that feels like a water slide slick and smooth all the way to the end. Very nice
October 22nd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
I love the slippery rhyme that pulls one along this narrow path (short lines). It creates its own rhythm that feels like a water slide slick and smooth all the way to the end. Very nice
October 22nd, 2026 04:25
Love Forever
sorenbarrett said:
There is a charm in the sound of the rhyme in this poem stanzas like:
\"No chain can drain
No tide divide
No grave can hide
What lives inside\"
Make more sense to the ear than the brain and whole last portion of this poem with its weaving of rhyme is hypnotic and enchanting. Nicely done Anthony
October 21st, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
There is a charm in the sound of the rhyme in this poem stanzas like:
\"No chain can drain
No tide divide
No grave can hide
What lives inside\"
Make more sense to the ear than the brain and whole last portion of this poem with its weaving of rhyme is hypnotic and enchanting. Nicely done Anthony
October 21st, 2026 04:01
A Good Title A Bad Title
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree Anthony a title can make or break a poem, story or film. Nicely written my friend
October 20th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree Anthony a title can make or break a poem, story or film. Nicely written my friend
October 20th, 2026 05:10
My Heart Is Blind
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful message put poetically my friend. Lovely a fave
October 19th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful message put poetically my friend. Lovely a fave
October 19th, 2026 04:16
There\'s Always A Reason
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Anthony now read twice and understood better. Every thing knows its place and purpose. Well done and a fave
October 17th, 2026 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Anthony now read twice and understood better. Every thing knows its place and purpose. Well done and a fave
October 17th, 2026 13:24
Learn The Rules
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly constructed this poem preaches a marvelous message of wisdom. Knowing the law and understanding its purpose allows for breaking the rules when called for. Every artist knows this as should every judge. Well written
October 16th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly constructed this poem preaches a marvelous message of wisdom. Knowing the law and understanding its purpose allows for breaking the rules when called for. Every artist knows this as should every judge. Well written
October 16th, 2026 04:10
If You Ever Wonder
sorenbarrett said:
With lemons making lemonade so to speak this poem turns adversity into an exercise of strength. Nicely worded my friend.
October 15th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
With lemons making lemonade so to speak this poem turns adversity into an exercise of strength. Nicely worded my friend.
October 15th, 2026 04:29
Life No Rewinding Or Fast Forwarding
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Anthony about life itself and its continual march forward
October 14th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Anthony about life itself and its continual march forward
October 14th, 2026 04:51
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