Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Living In The Pain
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a strong motivator as is pain but survival wins out. A poem of carrying on. Well done my friend.
September 20th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a strong motivator as is pain but survival wins out. A poem of carrying on. Well done my friend.
September 20th, 2026 04:16
The Poem
sorenbarrett said:
Rhythm and rhyme create the beat of this poem that carries it to its end. Nicely done Anthony
September 19th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Rhythm and rhyme create the beat of this poem that carries it to its end. Nicely done Anthony
September 19th, 2026 04:29
A Shadow In The Midnight Sun
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t know whether I like more the rhythm of the meter or the wording creating images in this one Anthony it is a fave
September 18th, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t know whether I like more the rhythm of the meter or the wording creating images in this one Anthony it is a fave
September 18th, 2026 04:37
Act In VS Act Out
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing rhyme scheme presented in this poem that draws one along until the end. Well done
September 17th, 2026 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing rhyme scheme presented in this poem that draws one along until the end. Well done
September 17th, 2026 04:50
Sorry The Mailbox Is Full
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor here. Nicely written in often single word or at least very short lines it has an urgency to it that seems to be purposely delayed and postponed as one does in clearing one\'s messages. Well done my friend
September 16th, 2026 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor here. Nicely written in often single word or at least very short lines it has an urgency to it that seems to be purposely delayed and postponed as one does in clearing one\'s messages. Well done my friend
September 16th, 2026 05:22
Moments You’ll Never Forget
sorenbarrett said:
There are things that one never forgets some good and some bad. Immortalized in this poem. Well done
September 15th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
There are things that one never forgets some good and some bad. Immortalized in this poem. Well done
September 15th, 2026 05:01
The Only Way I Know
sorenbarrett said:
Not easy to fill so many lines with the same A rhyme scheme. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Not easy to fill so many lines with the same A rhyme scheme. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 04:04
No Hard Feelings
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Liked it. An appropriate way to part.
September 13th, 2026 14:34
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Liked it. An appropriate way to part.
September 13th, 2026 14:34
No Hard Feelings
sorenbarrett said:
How often this happens as life molds two people into different shapes. Well written Anthony
September 13th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
How often this happens as life molds two people into different shapes. Well written Anthony
September 13th, 2026 04:30
My Handler
sorenbarrett said:
The concept of a handler is an interesting one for a human. Even in personification it has meaning. Nicely written Anthony
September 12th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
The concept of a handler is an interesting one for a human. Even in personification it has meaning. Nicely written Anthony
September 12th, 2026 04:15
No Box Cake
sorenbarrett said:
\"mix the nights in shattered jars\" a great line. The rhyme pattern and meter make this poem giving it shape and form to its meaning. Nicely done my friend.
September 11th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
\"mix the nights in shattered jars\" a great line. The rhyme pattern and meter make this poem giving it shape and form to its meaning. Nicely done my friend.
September 11th, 2026 04:34
Finally Married
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with analogies well drawn and message sent. Well done
September 10th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with analogies well drawn and message sent. Well done
September 10th, 2026 04:14
The Investigation Of Your Love
sorenbarrett said:
This short few word lines creates a beat that drives the poem onward and takes the reader to the end in a rhythm well constructed. Nicely done Anthony
September 9th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
This short few word lines creates a beat that drives the poem onward and takes the reader to the end in a rhythm well constructed. Nicely done Anthony
September 9th, 2026 05:02
Memory Care
sorenbarrett said:
Time and distance does not diminish the love expressed. Nicely done
September 8th, 2026 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Time and distance does not diminish the love expressed. Nicely done
September 8th, 2026 06:09
Please Don’t Give Me A Hard Time
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying don\'t kick a man while he is down seems to apply here. A good write asking for time and the right to get back on one\'s feet. Well written my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying don\'t kick a man while he is down seems to apply here. A good write asking for time and the right to get back on one\'s feet. Well written my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:15
Pull The Fire Alarm
sorenbarrett said:
The use of repetitive line end rhyme emphasizes the ongoing process as one steams ahead in a world obstacles persisting to the end and being redeemed by one\'s own effort. Well done my friend
September 6th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
The use of repetitive line end rhyme emphasizes the ongoing process as one steams ahead in a world obstacles persisting to the end and being redeemed by one\'s own effort. Well done my friend
September 6th, 2026 04:51
Sorry It Was a Long Day
sorenbarrett said:
I have had many of those and hope they are in the past. Nicely written Anthony
September 5th, 2026 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
I have had many of those and hope they are in the past. Nicely written Anthony
September 5th, 2026 14:19
My Big Sis
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beat in this meter combined with the rhyme and short lines that drive this poem forward with a beat. A lovely and positive feel to this tribute Anthony and a fave
September 4th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beat in this meter combined with the rhyme and short lines that drive this poem forward with a beat. A lovely and positive feel to this tribute Anthony and a fave
September 4th, 2026 03:48
Drop The Act
NafisaSB said:
agree with you here - prefer the straightforward always, even if it\'s a bitter pill to swallow
September 4th, 2026 02:38
NafisaSB said:
agree with you here - prefer the straightforward always, even if it\'s a bitter pill to swallow
September 4th, 2026 02:38
Let’s Have Brunch
sorenbarrett said:
Food always an offering of peace, friendship and love it becomes seductive and even sexual. Here it is a companion of love and memories with one that is loved. Nicely written Anthony
September 3rd, 2026 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Food always an offering of peace, friendship and love it becomes seductive and even sexual. Here it is a companion of love and memories with one that is loved. Nicely written Anthony
September 3rd, 2026 05:22
Good Morning Good Night
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a floating feel that soars and drifts through the ears. Nicely done
September 2nd, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a floating feel that soars and drifts through the ears. Nicely done
September 2nd, 2026 04:21
The Hidden Math Behind Being Alive
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like this a lot - interesting analogy of Life calculating each moment that sums up our existence and balances our actions.
September 1st, 2026 06:36
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like this a lot - interesting analogy of Life calculating each moment that sums up our existence and balances our actions.
September 1st, 2026 06:36
Love Hard
sorenbarrett said:
All in or stay out seems the message of this poem. Give it your all and hang on for the ride. Nicely written Anthony. My father believed in tough love.
September 1st, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
All in or stay out seems the message of this poem. Give it your all and hang on for the ride. Nicely written Anthony. My father believed in tough love.
September 1st, 2026 04:02
The Hidden Math Behind Being Alive
sorenbarrett said:
Calculated and very Newtonian even quantum chances could be calculated. A most interesting write that in its cold lack of romanticism remains poetic
August 31st, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Calculated and very Newtonian even quantum chances could be calculated. A most interesting write that in its cold lack of romanticism remains poetic
August 31st, 2026 04:51
The Door To My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme carries one through this poem as if a never ending beating heart. Well written my friend
August 30th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme carries one through this poem as if a never ending beating heart. Well written my friend
August 30th, 2026 06:30
Emotional On Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Like building flames the continual rhyme in this poem burns through it. Nicely done
August 29th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Like building flames the continual rhyme in this poem burns through it. Nicely done
August 29th, 2026 04:07
I’m Titled All Out
sorenbarrett said:
There is quite the string of rhyme in this write that flows as free thought from beginning to end. Lovely
August 28th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
There is quite the string of rhyme in this write that flows as free thought from beginning to end. Lovely
August 28th, 2026 04:32
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