Comments received on poems by Hanible
Trapped
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting how often is it difficult to distinguish the difference between reality and a dream. Good write
July 1st, 2025 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting how often is it difficult to distinguish the difference between reality and a dream. Good write
July 1st, 2025 13:14
Maze Runner
Poetic Licence said:
A write that I feel describes day to day life for many very accurately, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:31
Poetic Licence said:
A write that I feel describes day to day life for many very accurately, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 21:31
Maze Runner
sorenbarrett said:
Are we all just that? A great metaphor and equally fun as a literal poem. Very enjoyable
June 26th, 2025 14:31
sorenbarrett said:
Are we all just that? A great metaphor and equally fun as a literal poem. Very enjoyable
June 26th, 2025 14:31
Your Love
sorenbarrett said:
Unity until death in so many circumstances. A most lovely poem
June 20th, 2025 14:20
sorenbarrett said:
Unity until death in so many circumstances. A most lovely poem
June 20th, 2025 14:20
A Damaged Heart Mind Etc
Poetic Licence said:
The darkness of depression well expressed in this write, and the sense of hopelessness.
June 17th, 2025 16:23
Poetic Licence said:
The darkness of depression well expressed in this write, and the sense of hopelessness.
June 17th, 2025 16:23
A Damaged Heart Mind Etc
sorenbarrett said:
This poem depicts so well the aspect of depression and its bleakness well penned
June 17th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem depicts so well the aspect of depression and its bleakness well penned
June 17th, 2025 13:46
Me And My Pillows
Poetic Licence said:
What we cling onto in our hours of sadness, a strange comfort they give amongst the pain, nicely expressed and written read
June 15th, 2025 09:32
Poetic Licence said:
What we cling onto in our hours of sadness, a strange comfort they give amongst the pain, nicely expressed and written read
June 15th, 2025 09:32
Me And My Pillows
sorenbarrett said:
We hide many of our emotions under pillows. Nicely written this poem feels pleasant and comforting in its hidden refuge of pillows.
June 15th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
We hide many of our emotions under pillows. Nicely written this poem feels pleasant and comforting in its hidden refuge of pillows.
June 15th, 2025 07:09
It\'s Killing Me
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a plea for help in this poem of anguish and depression that is overwhelming and sad. It cries reach out there is help there are those that care there is meaning a very raw write of pain.
June 11th, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
I hear a plea for help in this poem of anguish and depression that is overwhelming and sad. It cries reach out there is help there are those that care there is meaning a very raw write of pain.
June 11th, 2025 08:09
The Shadow
sorenbarrett said:
A sense that no one feels or knows what you do. Like a child under the covers for safety and isolation with a flashlight and in that sense staying in the shadow. Very nice
June 9th, 2025 14:11
sorenbarrett said:
A sense that no one feels or knows what you do. Like a child under the covers for safety and isolation with a flashlight and in that sense staying in the shadow. Very nice
June 9th, 2025 14:11
Forcing Myself To Function
nephilim56 said:
so many of us fake it each day, enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 11:39
nephilim56 said:
so many of us fake it each day, enjoyed the read
June 9th, 2025 11:39
Forcing Myself To Function
sorenbarrett said:
There is a charm to this short piece and its pieces. Like the puzzle it\'s pieces spread out on the floor must be assembled. Well done
June 9th, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
There is a charm to this short piece and its pieces. Like the puzzle it\'s pieces spread out on the floor must be assembled. Well done
June 9th, 2025 05:01
The Alphabet
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem I take it for metaphor. Nicely done
June 7th, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this poem I take it for metaphor. Nicely done
June 7th, 2025 16:29
Having An Outbreak
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a most difficult time that took a toll and went into a hidden place Lovely
June 4th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a most difficult time that took a toll and went into a hidden place Lovely
June 4th, 2025 12:13
For Love
sorenbarrett said:
Love makes us do strange things and I am with the poem in that I would choose quality over quantity, a few moments of love instead of an eternity without it. Great poem
June 2nd, 2025 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
Love makes us do strange things and I am with the poem in that I would choose quality over quantity, a few moments of love instead of an eternity without it. Great poem
June 2nd, 2025 19:04
The One That Gets On My Nerves
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write covering both sides of a relationship, and the reality of it, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 02:26
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write covering both sides of a relationship, and the reality of it, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 02:26
The One That Gets On My Nerves
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of a relationship is shown in this poem. Usually poems speak to one side or the other and ignore the other . This poem represents the reality not the fantasy of relationships and reality is not what poetry usually is. A great and original type of poetry. Very nice
June 1st, 2025 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of a relationship is shown in this poem. Usually poems speak to one side or the other and ignore the other . This poem represents the reality not the fantasy of relationships and reality is not what poetry usually is. A great and original type of poetry. Very nice
June 1st, 2025 19:45
One Sided
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where one is the one and all. A very nicely crafted piece
May 26th, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where one is the one and all. A very nicely crafted piece
May 26th, 2025 14:57
Just Shoot Me
sorenbarrett said:
This seems scattered thoughts of a free association that takes one through the halls of a distracted mind. Well presented to leave the trail marked behind. Nicely written
May 24th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This seems scattered thoughts of a free association that takes one through the halls of a distracted mind. Well presented to leave the trail marked behind. Nicely written
May 24th, 2025 03:52
Tug Of War
sorenbarrett said:
Dark images in this poem leave feelings of insignificance and depression that are powerfully depicted in violent and empty scattered pieces. Powerful
May 23rd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Dark images in this poem leave feelings of insignificance and depression that are powerfully depicted in violent and empty scattered pieces. Powerful
May 23rd, 2025 04:43
Screaming All Alone
sorenbarrett said:
Such feeling of tension in this poem like a tire overfilled it expands and bursts in a scream releasing the pressure. Well written
May 20th, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Such feeling of tension in this poem like a tire overfilled it expands and bursts in a scream releasing the pressure. Well written
May 20th, 2025 06:28
Earthquake
sorenbarrett said:
A great run on words encapsulating the final word. I loved the flow of this poem as it literally came tumbling down. Well done
May 12th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A great run on words encapsulating the final word. I loved the flow of this poem as it literally came tumbling down. Well done
May 12th, 2025 04:45
I Take Medicine For That
sorenbarrett said:
I guess we all take medicines of one type or another for our demons some pharmaceutical some herbal some mental. Lovely
May 11th, 2025 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
I guess we all take medicines of one type or another for our demons some pharmaceutical some herbal some mental. Lovely
May 11th, 2025 07:13
Blood In My Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of frustration and desperation fill this poem for me. A society where confirming the diagnosis and prognosis is expected not only by the doctors and public but by the patient themself. Hard hitting
May 10th, 2025 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of frustration and desperation fill this poem for me. A society where confirming the diagnosis and prognosis is expected not only by the doctors and public but by the patient themself. Hard hitting
May 10th, 2025 13:07
Blood In My Eyes
Muse of Calliope said:
Far too often the people who are in a position to potentially help the most, actually care the least. Good write 🌹
May 10th, 2025 12:47
Muse of Calliope said:
Far too often the people who are in a position to potentially help the most, actually care the least. Good write 🌹
May 10th, 2025 12:47
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