Comments received on poems by Hanible
Self Beating
rrodriguez said:
The poem is nicely written, but its message is sad. Thank you for sharing. Stay in touch.
April 17th, 2025 21:02
rrodriguez said:
The poem is nicely written, but its message is sad. Thank you for sharing. Stay in touch.
April 17th, 2025 21:02
Self Beating
Poetic Licence said:
A dark but powerful and raw write of self harming, whether this be physically or mentally, well expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 14:26
Poetic Licence said:
A dark but powerful and raw write of self harming, whether this be physically or mentally, well expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 14:26
Self Beating
sorenbarrett said:
This is a hard read. We all self abuse in some ways mentally, or even verbally. A powerful and dark read
April 17th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
This is a hard read. We all self abuse in some ways mentally, or even verbally. A powerful and dark read
April 17th, 2025 13:13
I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
eugene290390 said:
So, my name is Eugene S (not a pseudonym)...are you channeling me, lol? You got some of the details right...I\'m older, discovered Ren a little over 2 years ago...on April 1, 2023 after repeatedly ignoring youtube enticements ...and I also write poetry at times (but, like Franz K, much of it has been destroyed or forgotten). I participate in some Ren fan groups (and run the main one on reddit r/ren...so people have been thinking that \"I am you, you are me, you are I, I am we\", to coin a phrase...
April 16th, 2025 00:31
eugene290390 said:
So, my name is Eugene S (not a pseudonym)...are you channeling me, lol? You got some of the details right...I\'m older, discovered Ren a little over 2 years ago...on April 1, 2023 after repeatedly ignoring youtube enticements ...and I also write poetry at times (but, like Franz K, much of it has been destroyed or forgotten). I participate in some Ren fan groups (and run the main one on reddit r/ren...so people have been thinking that \"I am you, you are me, you are I, I am we\", to coin a phrase...
April 16th, 2025 00:31
A Dark Place
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety climbed into panic in this poem that is as tense as the E string on a violin. Well worded it conveys its message well
April 15th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety climbed into panic in this poem that is as tense as the E string on a violin. Well worded it conveys its message well
April 15th, 2025 04:14
A Dark Place
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Sometimes it is not easy to be in the dark or in a dark period of our life, a haunting tale
April 15th, 2025 02:34
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Sometimes it is not easy to be in the dark or in a dark period of our life, a haunting tale
April 15th, 2025 02:34
Burning In The Wind
sorenbarrett said:
Thought fragments come like sparks off of a fire quickly burning out to be replaced by another. A thought provoking, interesting read
April 14th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Thought fragments come like sparks off of a fire quickly burning out to be replaced by another. A thought provoking, interesting read
April 14th, 2025 04:02
Burning In The Wind
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There was a dark melancholic echo while reading this poem, a reflective piece
April 14th, 2025 01:13
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There was a dark melancholic echo while reading this poem, a reflective piece
April 14th, 2025 01:13
Tears Of A Cold Heart
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes things get so bad there is no choice left but to suck it up and laugh at it, even though inside your crying, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 09:35
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes things get so bad there is no choice left but to suck it up and laugh at it, even though inside your crying, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 09:35
Tears Of A Cold Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Go for it is the message I get and don\'t worry about the consequences. A fun write
April 12th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Go for it is the message I get and don\'t worry about the consequences. A fun write
April 12th, 2025 07:55
I am Cursed
sorenbarrett said:
A curse, a spell, Voodoo, witchcraft what ever it seems that more than the obvious there is a metaphor here Nicely written
April 11th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
A curse, a spell, Voodoo, witchcraft what ever it seems that more than the obvious there is a metaphor here Nicely written
April 11th, 2025 09:21
They\'re Waiting For Me To
Poetic Licence said:
The extreme end of dealing with some problems although to the person encountering those problems it will appear the easiest, nicely written and expressed
April 10th, 2025 11:51
Poetic Licence said:
The extreme end of dealing with some problems although to the person encountering those problems it will appear the easiest, nicely written and expressed
April 10th, 2025 11:51
They\'re Waiting For Me To
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have taken. A last line solution. In short lines fragments of thoughts are expressed. This tends to add tot the agitation and despair in the work. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have taken. A last line solution. In short lines fragments of thoughts are expressed. This tends to add tot the agitation and despair in the work. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 09:22
The Gun Against My Head
sorenbarrett said:
Apparent suicide a crime that used to carry the death penalty. A dark write but in metaphoric terms most all of us have committed it many times. A great tale withe metaphoric implications.
April 9th, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Apparent suicide a crime that used to carry the death penalty. A dark write but in metaphoric terms most all of us have committed it many times. A great tale withe metaphoric implications.
April 9th, 2025 08:44
Read Carefully
Poetic Licence said:
Alot of anger leading to thoughts of violence,a very emotional write, nicely expressed
April 9th, 2025 02:13
Poetic Licence said:
Alot of anger leading to thoughts of violence,a very emotional write, nicely expressed
April 9th, 2025 02:13
Read Carefully
sorenbarrett said:
Much violence fills these lines and where there is violence there is anger. Emotions felt in this poem that speaks with power. Well said
April 8th, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
Much violence fills these lines and where there is violence there is anger. Emotions felt in this poem that speaks with power. Well said
April 8th, 2025 16:29
Suicide Meetings
NafisaSB said:
omg - that was really scary to read and know.. hope no one wants to use these though...
April 8th, 2025 07:08
NafisaSB said:
omg - that was really scary to read and know.. hope no one wants to use these though...
April 8th, 2025 07:08
Acceptance
sorenbarrett said:
An analogy of class and school put into real life. Nicely written it speaks to me.
April 6th, 2025 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
An analogy of class and school put into real life. Nicely written it speaks to me.
April 6th, 2025 13:33
O Cut Me O Bruise Me
sorenbarrett said:
Incredibly powerful in its darkness it paints the picture of abuse in black eyes and broken bones, graphic and real it turns upon itself and finishes with the inevitable. Well written A fave
April 5th, 2025 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Incredibly powerful in its darkness it paints the picture of abuse in black eyes and broken bones, graphic and real it turns upon itself and finishes with the inevitable. Well written A fave
April 5th, 2025 05:52
Under The Bus
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor. We all feel we have been thrown under that proverbial bus from one time to another. A good write
April 4th, 2025 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor. We all feel we have been thrown under that proverbial bus from one time to another. A good write
April 4th, 2025 11:11
Stop Staring Crazy Mind To Get In To
Poetic Licence said:
Panic and fear racing through the distressed mind, making it impossible to think clearly as there are a thousand thoughts all at the same time, well expressed and written
April 2nd, 2025 06:46
Poetic Licence said:
Panic and fear racing through the distressed mind, making it impossible to think clearly as there are a thousand thoughts all at the same time, well expressed and written
April 2nd, 2025 06:46
Stop Staring Crazy Mind To Get In To
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety and racing thought came first to mind. Loosely connected and fragmented as thoughts are in desperation they fly like scattered birds. A powerful write.
April 2nd, 2025 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety and racing thought came first to mind. Loosely connected and fragmented as thoughts are in desperation they fly like scattered birds. A powerful write.
April 2nd, 2025 06:40
Suicide Meetings
Poetic Licence said:
My experience in those at most risk of going through with this are those who don\'t talk they just do it, the others are crying out for help and hopefully they get it , nicely expressed write
April 1st, 2025 06:27
Poetic Licence said:
My experience in those at most risk of going through with this are those who don\'t talk they just do it, the others are crying out for help and hopefully they get it , nicely expressed write
April 1st, 2025 06:27
Suicide Meetings
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message that I learned long ago. There are two types those that want help and to be heard and those that are determined. The first need an ear the second a coffin. Nicely said.
April 1st, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message that I learned long ago. There are two types those that want help and to be heard and those that are determined. The first need an ear the second a coffin. Nicely said.
April 1st, 2025 05:04
I\'m Fragile
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of easily being damaged and not always able to repair that damage, nicely written and expressed
April 1st, 2025 02:11
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of easily being damaged and not always able to repair that damage, nicely written and expressed
April 1st, 2025 02:11
I\'m Fragile
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of being easily damaged and not repairable. a fragile commodity. Well said
March 31st, 2025 16:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that speaks of being easily damaged and not repairable. a fragile commodity. Well said
March 31st, 2025 16:42
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