Comments received on poems by Hanible
My Mighty 13
Poetic Licence said:
That is written in such a simple format it is brilliant, the last line say\'s it all, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 08:51
Poetic Licence said:
That is written in such a simple format it is brilliant, the last line say\'s it all, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 08:51
My Mighty 13
sorenbarrett said:
Whether neologisms , skating or rap it all comes to the same fun and poetry. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Whether neologisms , skating or rap it all comes to the same fun and poetry. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 08:49
My Mighty 13
Cassie58 said:
Lucky 13. I love you says so much. That is poetry in its simplest form. Nice.
February 19th, 2025 07:58
Cassie58 said:
Lucky 13. I love you says so much. That is poetry in its simplest form. Nice.
February 19th, 2025 07:58
Staying Alone
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of the ghostly here and the last line is haunting. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of the ghostly here and the last line is haunting. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 05:50
Staying Alone
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of numbness and emptiness inside, well expressed write
February 18th, 2025 05:18
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of numbness and emptiness inside, well expressed write
February 18th, 2025 05:18
The Love
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of unity in soul and love. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of unity in soul and love. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 13:49
Deep In The Heart
Poetic Licence said:
dark and haunting write which i feel goes deeper than love and questions what we think is love, well expressed
February 16th, 2025 14:51
Poetic Licence said:
dark and haunting write which i feel goes deeper than love and questions what we think is love, well expressed
February 16th, 2025 14:51
Deep In The Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Although metaphor many are dependent enough on love to do these things and call it love but love of what I ask? A deeper write than it appears on the surface it strikes at the heart of what some call love. Beautiful
February 16th, 2025 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
Although metaphor many are dependent enough on love to do these things and call it love but love of what I ask? A deeper write than it appears on the surface it strikes at the heart of what some call love. Beautiful
February 16th, 2025 14:17
Yes I\'m So Depressed Chapter 5 The Suicide Letter
sorenbarrett said:
A most serious pledge to write in blood. Strong message in this poem
February 15th, 2025 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
A most serious pledge to write in blood. Strong message in this poem
February 15th, 2025 16:19
Yes I\'m So Depressed Chapter 4 Don\'t Call My Doctor
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguous as to whether this needle spoken of is drugs or medication (maybe one and the same) wild behaviors tamed and caused by the same. I feel the lack of control a raw expression of emotion.
February 14th, 2025 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
Ambiguous as to whether this needle spoken of is drugs or medication (maybe one and the same) wild behaviors tamed and caused by the same. I feel the lack of control a raw expression of emotion.
February 14th, 2025 13:02
Yes I\'m So Depressed Chapter 3 The Hiding
Poetic Licence said:
When feeling that way we can get very sensitive, thinking all we do is wrong and people are always telling us that and that is not always the case. When in the dark we feel safer being left alone, yet it is never the right way to deal with it in the end. A poignant and emotional write
February 13th, 2025 12:33
Poetic Licence said:
When feeling that way we can get very sensitive, thinking all we do is wrong and people are always telling us that and that is not always the case. When in the dark we feel safer being left alone, yet it is never the right way to deal with it in the end. A poignant and emotional write
February 13th, 2025 12:33
Yes I\'m So Depressed
NinjaGirl said:
So felt...I often feel like I\'m trapped in my body, sucked into the way it is, and the ways it will never be. Depression is a funny thing, tries to make us feel so alone when so many people deal with it.
February 13th, 2025 09:35
NinjaGirl said:
So felt...I often feel like I\'m trapped in my body, sucked into the way it is, and the ways it will never be. Depression is a funny thing, tries to make us feel so alone when so many people deal with it.
February 13th, 2025 09:35
Yes I\'m So Depressed Chapter 2 I\'m Done
RSM0812 said:
Suicidal tendancies are still tendancies i guess. I think it\'s probably better to be suicidal then dead. Lol
February 13th, 2025 09:30
RSM0812 said:
Suicidal tendancies are still tendancies i guess. I think it\'s probably better to be suicidal then dead. Lol
February 13th, 2025 09:30
Yes I\'m So Depressed Chapter 2 I\'m Done
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling it is all to much and that is the only way out, but it`s not, just sometimes we cannot see it. Powerful and dark read, well expressed
February 12th, 2025 11:46
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling it is all to much and that is the only way out, but it`s not, just sometimes we cannot see it. Powerful and dark read, well expressed
February 12th, 2025 11:46
Yes I\'m So Depressed Chapter 2 I\'m Done
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes things don\'t go as planned and one has to face the music. A rather dark read it runs smoothly and carries the reader along
February 12th, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes things don\'t go as planned and one has to face the music. A rather dark read it runs smoothly and carries the reader along
February 12th, 2025 10:01
Yes I\'m So Depressed
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of isolation whether self imposed or by rejection there is a sadness to it. Well done
February 12th, 2025 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of isolation whether self imposed or by rejection there is a sadness to it. Well done
February 12th, 2025 07:40
Yes I\'m So Depressed
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed poem of the struggles of depression and the consuming power it has, Great write
February 12th, 2025 05:41
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed poem of the struggles of depression and the consuming power it has, Great write
February 12th, 2025 05:41
Yes I\'m So Depressed
teardrop said:
Depression sucks and rears it head often. Love ypur words and especually your tears putting out the lighted candles, I fel there is more to this story and you mention the new and old you. Great write thank you for sharing.
February 12th, 2025 00:59
teardrop said:
Depression sucks and rears it head often. Love ypur words and especually your tears putting out the lighted candles, I fel there is more to this story and you mention the new and old you. Great write thank you for sharing.
February 12th, 2025 00:59
How Can I Explain
Poetic Licence said:
A quite poignant write of some one who is struggling with their inner self, take care
January 8th, 2025 10:07
Poetic Licence said:
A quite poignant write of some one who is struggling with their inner self, take care
January 8th, 2025 10:07
I Always Think I Need A Title
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting piece of struggles with the inner demons, hope things get on the Up
December 31st, 2024 11:26
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting piece of struggles with the inner demons, hope things get on the Up
December 31st, 2024 11:26
Hi I\'m Some-One-Sun
Poetic Licence said:
It was a enjoyable read of a nicely written poem
December 15th, 2024 01:49
Poetic Licence said:
It was a enjoyable read of a nicely written poem
December 15th, 2024 01:49
Talking And Walking Obituary
Poetic Licence said:
Clever piece of poetry and i echo the sentiment, enjoyed the read
December 10th, 2024 13:47
Poetic Licence said:
Clever piece of poetry and i echo the sentiment, enjoyed the read
December 10th, 2024 13:47
Sun Up Sun Down
Poetic Licence said:
A sad poem poem of confusion and confliction, nicely written
December 9th, 2024 11:34
Poetic Licence said:
A sad poem poem of confusion and confliction, nicely written
December 9th, 2024 11:34
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