Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Psychological Damage
sorenbarrett said:
In this cascade of damage we arrive at the conclusion is damaged or not we are all human and that basic truth gives value. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
In this cascade of damage we arrive at the conclusion is damaged or not we are all human and that basic truth gives value. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 04:35
House Vs Home
Caring dove said:
Nice writing .. home is a feeling .. true .
September 27th, 2026 07:11
Caring dove said:
Nice writing .. home is a feeling .. true .
September 27th, 2026 07:11
House Vs Home
sorenbarrett said:
Heart warming and well composed in good rhyme and meter it tell the difference between structure and relationship where on the one hand one is protected from rain and the elements and on the other from outside stress. Well done my friend
September 27th, 2026 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Heart warming and well composed in good rhyme and meter it tell the difference between structure and relationship where on the one hand one is protected from rain and the elements and on the other from outside stress. Well done my friend
September 27th, 2026 06:08
Stay In Your Lane
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this Anthony.
Well written đź‘Ź
- Syd 🍄
September 26th, 2026 06:10
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this Anthony.
Well written đź‘Ź
- Syd 🍄
September 26th, 2026 06:10
Stay In Your Lane
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor here from traffic to social situations and life in general. Nicely done Anthony
September 26th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor here from traffic to social situations and life in general. Nicely done Anthony
September 26th, 2026 04:41
You Really Just Bit The Hand
sorenbarrett said:
Gifts become expected and then entitlements in this write. Nicely written Anthony
September 25th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Gifts become expected and then entitlements in this write. Nicely written Anthony
September 25th, 2026 05:06
Interrupt The Manipulation
sorenbarrett said:
There is a call to power in this poem where one is asked to gather one\'s nerve and rally one\'s confidence to establish and defend one\'s reputation. It reads well is calls out with strength. Loved it
September 24th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
There is a call to power in this poem where one is asked to gather one\'s nerve and rally one\'s confidence to establish and defend one\'s reputation. It reads well is calls out with strength. Loved it
September 24th, 2026 03:55
The Love Is Deep
sorenbarrett said:
Here many words are used to describe the different aspects of love from colors and stones to softness and light. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Here many words are used to describe the different aspects of love from colors and stones to softness and light. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2026 04:20
Touch With Love / Touch With Hate
sorenbarrett said:
There are many metaphors that build this poem. Nicely written Anthony
September 22nd, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
There are many metaphors that build this poem. Nicely written Anthony
September 22nd, 2026 04:04
Just Articulate Your Words
FrasMac said:
Oh now this is clever. Such skilful use of poetic devices. Good shape too.
September 21st, 2026 12:02
FrasMac said:
Oh now this is clever. Such skilful use of poetic devices. Good shape too.
September 21st, 2026 12:02
Just Articulate Your Words
sorenbarrett said:
What a write of alliteration each line filled a fun and lovely write but with meaning as well.
September 21st, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
What a write of alliteration each line filled a fun and lovely write but with meaning as well.
September 21st, 2026 04:27
Living In The Pain
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a strong motivator as is pain but survival wins out. A poem of carrying on. Well done my friend.
September 20th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a strong motivator as is pain but survival wins out. A poem of carrying on. Well done my friend.
September 20th, 2026 04:16
The Poem
sorenbarrett said:
Rhythm and rhyme create the beat of this poem that carries it to its end. Nicely done Anthony
September 19th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Rhythm and rhyme create the beat of this poem that carries it to its end. Nicely done Anthony
September 19th, 2026 04:29
A Shadow In The Midnight Sun
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t know whether I like more the rhythm of the meter or the wording creating images in this one Anthony it is a fave
September 18th, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t know whether I like more the rhythm of the meter or the wording creating images in this one Anthony it is a fave
September 18th, 2026 04:37
Act In VS Act Out
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing rhyme scheme presented in this poem that draws one along until the end. Well done
September 17th, 2026 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
A most intriguing rhyme scheme presented in this poem that draws one along until the end. Well done
September 17th, 2026 04:50
Sorry The Mailbox Is Full
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor here. Nicely written in often single word or at least very short lines it has an urgency to it that seems to be purposely delayed and postponed as one does in clearing one\'s messages. Well done my friend
September 16th, 2026 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor here. Nicely written in often single word or at least very short lines it has an urgency to it that seems to be purposely delayed and postponed as one does in clearing one\'s messages. Well done my friend
September 16th, 2026 05:22
Moments You’ll Never Forget
sorenbarrett said:
There are things that one never forgets some good and some bad. Immortalized in this poem. Well done
September 15th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
There are things that one never forgets some good and some bad. Immortalized in this poem. Well done
September 15th, 2026 05:01
The Only Way I Know
sorenbarrett said:
Not easy to fill so many lines with the same A rhyme scheme. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Not easy to fill so many lines with the same A rhyme scheme. Nicely done
September 14th, 2026 04:04
No Hard Feelings
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Liked it. An appropriate way to part.
September 13th, 2026 14:34
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes . Liked it. An appropriate way to part.
September 13th, 2026 14:34
No Hard Feelings
sorenbarrett said:
How often this happens as life molds two people into different shapes. Well written Anthony
September 13th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
How often this happens as life molds two people into different shapes. Well written Anthony
September 13th, 2026 04:30
My Handler
sorenbarrett said:
The concept of a handler is an interesting one for a human. Even in personification it has meaning. Nicely written Anthony
September 12th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
The concept of a handler is an interesting one for a human. Even in personification it has meaning. Nicely written Anthony
September 12th, 2026 04:15
No Box Cake
sorenbarrett said:
\"mix the nights in shattered jars\" a great line. The rhyme pattern and meter make this poem giving it shape and form to its meaning. Nicely done my friend.
September 11th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
\"mix the nights in shattered jars\" a great line. The rhyme pattern and meter make this poem giving it shape and form to its meaning. Nicely done my friend.
September 11th, 2026 04:34
Finally Married
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with analogies well drawn and message sent. Well done
September 10th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written with analogies well drawn and message sent. Well done
September 10th, 2026 04:14
The Investigation Of Your Love
sorenbarrett said:
This short few word lines creates a beat that drives the poem onward and takes the reader to the end in a rhythm well constructed. Nicely done Anthony
September 9th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
This short few word lines creates a beat that drives the poem onward and takes the reader to the end in a rhythm well constructed. Nicely done Anthony
September 9th, 2026 05:02
Memory Care
sorenbarrett said:
Time and distance does not diminish the love expressed. Nicely done
September 8th, 2026 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Time and distance does not diminish the love expressed. Nicely done
September 8th, 2026 06:09
Please Don’t Give Me A Hard Time
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying don\'t kick a man while he is down seems to apply here. A good write asking for time and the right to get back on one\'s feet. Well written my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
The old saying don\'t kick a man while he is down seems to apply here. A good write asking for time and the right to get back on one\'s feet. Well written my friend.
September 7th, 2026 04:15
Pull The Fire Alarm
sorenbarrett said:
The use of repetitive line end rhyme emphasizes the ongoing process as one steams ahead in a world obstacles persisting to the end and being redeemed by one\'s own effort. Well done my friend
September 6th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
The use of repetitive line end rhyme emphasizes the ongoing process as one steams ahead in a world obstacles persisting to the end and being redeemed by one\'s own effort. Well done my friend
September 6th, 2026 04:51
Sorry It Was a Long Day
sorenbarrett said:
I have had many of those and hope they are in the past. Nicely written Anthony
September 5th, 2026 14:19
sorenbarrett said:
I have had many of those and hope they are in the past. Nicely written Anthony
September 5th, 2026 14:19
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