Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Don\'t Be Surprised
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive take on the unexpected. Nicely done Anthony
October 11th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive take on the unexpected. Nicely done Anthony
October 11th, 2026 04:47
These Are Not Just Words
sorenbarrett said:
How often I write something down searching for the right word to express the feeling and not finding it. There must be words that are more than words and sometimes they are found but it is so rare. Those words move to tears and shake the earth. Nicely done
October 10th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
How often I write something down searching for the right word to express the feeling and not finding it. There must be words that are more than words and sometimes they are found but it is so rare. Those words move to tears and shake the earth. Nicely done
October 10th, 2026 04:03
Giving My All
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow of this poem caused by the cadence of the meter due to the rhyme and short lines. It marched on as if in a soldiers file. Well done as the poem itself said.
October 9th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow of this poem caused by the cadence of the meter due to the rhyme and short lines. It marched on as if in a soldiers file. Well done as the poem itself said.
October 9th, 2026 04:08
I Chicken Out
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one Anthony it put out there the feeling that many of us have about this world and its challenges where we chicken out sometimes at the last minute. Nicely written
October 8th, 2026 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one Anthony it put out there the feeling that many of us have about this world and its challenges where we chicken out sometimes at the last minute. Nicely written
October 8th, 2026 05:09
Burning Desire
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of desire seemed to burn bright in this poem Anthony. Nicely done
October 7th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of desire seemed to burn bright in this poem Anthony. Nicely done
October 7th, 2026 03:56
Why You Hit Me With A Lie
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for honesty. Sadness in cuts that hurt but one needs to know the reason for such injury to prevent future harm and be able to clean the wound so it can heal. Very nicely written
October 6th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for honesty. Sadness in cuts that hurt but one needs to know the reason for such injury to prevent future harm and be able to clean the wound so it can heal. Very nicely written
October 6th, 2026 05:06
You Dirty Rat
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this is the reverse of a woman scorned.
The gentle sex, don\'t believe it.
October 5th, 2026 05:04
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this is the reverse of a woman scorned.
The gentle sex, don\'t believe it.
October 5th, 2026 05:04
You Dirty Rat
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal runs strong in this poem where one trusted turns against. I feel the anger and disgust. I always wondered why rats caught the image of betrayal. Well done
October 5th, 2026 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Betrayal runs strong in this poem where one trusted turns against. I feel the anger and disgust. I always wondered why rats caught the image of betrayal. Well done
October 5th, 2026 04:59
Pull Me Up
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful message sent in this poem. A helping hand to those below goes a long way to setting the mood to do the same. Nicely done Anthony
October 4th, 2026 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful message sent in this poem. A helping hand to those below goes a long way to setting the mood to do the same. Nicely done Anthony
October 4th, 2026 05:31
The Sky Is On Fire
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Anthony with stunning images and the personification made it come to life. Nicely done I feel I have been there. A fave
October 3rd, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write Anthony with stunning images and the personification made it come to life. Nicely done I feel I have been there. A fave
October 3rd, 2026 05:03
Beautiful Mystery Love
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme scheme leaves a spiraling feel to it as it pulls the reader down into a hypnotic feel of attraction. Nicely done my friend
October 2nd, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme scheme leaves a spiraling feel to it as it pulls the reader down into a hypnotic feel of attraction. Nicely done my friend
October 2nd, 2026 04:20
Twilights Of Yesterday
sorenbarrett said:
So many memories revisited in this poem nice job Anthony
October 1st, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
So many memories revisited in this poem nice job Anthony
October 1st, 2026 04:17
The Pouring Rain
sorenbarrett said:
It is interesting how pain is often interpreted by the brain as gain when no such admission requires us to admit defeat. Nicely done Anthony
September 30th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
It is interesting how pain is often interpreted by the brain as gain when no such admission requires us to admit defeat. Nicely done Anthony
September 30th, 2026 03:58
Weβre Not Only Human
sorenbarrett said:
Elements of who we are and what we identify with in this poem that seems as well and evolution. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Elements of who we are and what we identify with in this poem that seems as well and evolution. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 04:43
Psychological Damage
sorenbarrett said:
In this cascade of damage we arrive at the conclusion is damaged or not we are all human and that basic truth gives value. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
In this cascade of damage we arrive at the conclusion is damaged or not we are all human and that basic truth gives value. Nicely written my friend
September 28th, 2026 04:35
House Vs Home
Caring dove said:
Nice writing .. home is a feeling .. true .
September 27th, 2026 07:11
Caring dove said:
Nice writing .. home is a feeling .. true .
September 27th, 2026 07:11
House Vs Home
sorenbarrett said:
Heart warming and well composed in good rhyme and meter it tell the difference between structure and relationship where on the one hand one is protected from rain and the elements and on the other from outside stress. Well done my friend
September 27th, 2026 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Heart warming and well composed in good rhyme and meter it tell the difference between structure and relationship where on the one hand one is protected from rain and the elements and on the other from outside stress. Well done my friend
September 27th, 2026 06:08
Stay In Your Lane
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this Anthony.
Well written π
- Syd π
September 26th, 2026 06:10
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this Anthony.
Well written π
- Syd π
September 26th, 2026 06:10
Stay In Your Lane
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor here from traffic to social situations and life in general. Nicely done Anthony
September 26th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A good metaphor here from traffic to social situations and life in general. Nicely done Anthony
September 26th, 2026 04:41
You Really Just Bit The Hand
sorenbarrett said:
Gifts become expected and then entitlements in this write. Nicely written Anthony
September 25th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Gifts become expected and then entitlements in this write. Nicely written Anthony
September 25th, 2026 05:06
Interrupt The Manipulation
sorenbarrett said:
There is a call to power in this poem where one is asked to gather one\'s nerve and rally one\'s confidence to establish and defend one\'s reputation. It reads well is calls out with strength. Loved it
September 24th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
There is a call to power in this poem where one is asked to gather one\'s nerve and rally one\'s confidence to establish and defend one\'s reputation. It reads well is calls out with strength. Loved it
September 24th, 2026 03:55
The Love Is Deep
sorenbarrett said:
Here many words are used to describe the different aspects of love from colors and stones to softness and light. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Here many words are used to describe the different aspects of love from colors and stones to softness and light. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2026 04:20
Touch With Love / Touch With Hate
sorenbarrett said:
There are many metaphors that build this poem. Nicely written Anthony
September 22nd, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
There are many metaphors that build this poem. Nicely written Anthony
September 22nd, 2026 04:04
Just Articulate Your Words
FrasMac said:
Oh now this is clever. Such skilful use of poetic devices. Good shape too.
September 21st, 2026 12:02
FrasMac said:
Oh now this is clever. Such skilful use of poetic devices. Good shape too.
September 21st, 2026 12:02
Just Articulate Your Words
sorenbarrett said:
What a write of alliteration each line filled a fun and lovely write but with meaning as well.
September 21st, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
What a write of alliteration each line filled a fun and lovely write but with meaning as well.
September 21st, 2026 04:27
Living In The Pain
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a strong motivator as is pain but survival wins out. A poem of carrying on. Well done my friend.
September 20th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Life is a strong motivator as is pain but survival wins out. A poem of carrying on. Well done my friend.
September 20th, 2026 04:16
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