Comments received on poems by Hanible
Please Make It Stop
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts of the end passed on in poetic form. A dark read. Nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 18:12
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts of the end passed on in poetic form. A dark read. Nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 18:12
Serial Heart Killer
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and great metaphor personifying an action. Loved it.
March 24th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and great metaphor personifying an action. Loved it.
March 24th, 2025 04:27
Door Mat
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being disposable and not valued except for what one can provide. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 16:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being disposable and not valued except for what one can provide. Well written
March 23rd, 2025 16:23
Lost Without Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that provokes thought. Powerful in its message. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that provokes thought. Powerful in its message. Nicely done
March 22nd, 2025 16:46
I\'m Dead
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and dark this poem speaks as if the dead can reflect upon their own death. Nicely written in the first person.
March 20th, 2025 17:03
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic and dark this poem speaks as if the dead can reflect upon their own death. Nicely written in the first person.
March 20th, 2025 17:03
Cement Blocks
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write and I feel it is the view from a coffin, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 03:12
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write and I feel it is the view from a coffin, enjoyed the read
March 19th, 2025 03:12
Cement Blocks
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow the box seems to be a coffin. It gives me feelings of Poe\'s Tell tail heart. A most interesting read.
March 18th, 2025 18:21
sorenbarrett said:
Somehow the box seems to be a coffin. It gives me feelings of Poe\'s Tell tail heart. A most interesting read.
March 18th, 2025 18:21
Love Love Love
sorenbarrett said:
The wording is wonderful in this poem with multiple possibilities. Love the ending it is so true the treasure lies within
March 17th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
The wording is wonderful in this poem with multiple possibilities. Love the ending it is so true the treasure lies within
March 17th, 2025 10:49
Bang Bang Boom
sorenbarrett said:
Death and destruction in this poem. Quite to the point
March 15th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Death and destruction in this poem. Quite to the point
March 15th, 2025 11:42
A Dead Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling dead and destroyed. A most interesting write
March 14th, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling dead and destroyed. A most interesting write
March 14th, 2025 19:00
Set Free
Poetic Licence said:
A huge shout out of hurt and pain in every pore of the body, powerful write
March 13th, 2025 07:11
Poetic Licence said:
A huge shout out of hurt and pain in every pore of the body, powerful write
March 13th, 2025 07:11
Set Free
sorenbarrett said:
Lashing out in pain this poem tells of being wounded in love. It calls out in anguish.
March 13th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Lashing out in pain this poem tells of being wounded in love. It calls out in anguish.
March 13th, 2025 06:41
I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title
Poetic Licence said:
I like the style of your writing, accurate bullet points, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
I like the style of your writing, accurate bullet points, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 02:57
I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation and enough emotion bottled up to fizz over the top. Well done
March 10th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation and enough emotion bottled up to fizz over the top. Well done
March 10th, 2025 13:46
I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
arqios said:
Very powerful but subtle as well🙏🏻🕊
March 9th, 2025 07:06
arqios said:
Very powerful but subtle as well🙏🏻🕊
March 9th, 2025 07:06
I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor for a relationship gone off the tracks or at least on hold. Short but to the point and disturbing to the passengers. Well spoken
March 9th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor for a relationship gone off the tracks or at least on hold. Short but to the point and disturbing to the passengers. Well spoken
March 9th, 2025 04:11
Her Puppet His Puppet
Poetic Licence said:
Being under emotional control being denied their own freedom, a powerful form of abuse but very hard to break away from, well written piece
March 7th, 2025 14:00
Poetic Licence said:
Being under emotional control being denied their own freedom, a powerful form of abuse but very hard to break away from, well written piece
March 7th, 2025 14:00
Her Puppet His Puppet
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of control and manipulation that leaves one without independence or freedom. It speaks of even subtle control in relationships. Well done
March 7th, 2025 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of control and manipulation that leaves one without independence or freedom. It speaks of even subtle control in relationships. Well done
March 7th, 2025 12:03
Don\'t Leave
Poetic Licence said:
The end of a relationship, but not wanting to make the decision they know is for the best, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 08:06
Poetic Licence said:
The end of a relationship, but not wanting to make the decision they know is for the best, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 08:06
Don\'t Leave
sorenbarrett said:
\"Punching bags put into some body bags\" a brilliant and most poetic line. This poem carries with it a feeling of sadness and recognition that a relationship has seen better days. Very nicely written
March 6th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
\"Punching bags put into some body bags\" a brilliant and most poetic line. This poem carries with it a feeling of sadness and recognition that a relationship has seen better days. Very nicely written
March 6th, 2025 04:33
Words Speaks For Itself
Poetic Licence said:
A wise write, we must listen to all words and sides before we judge or form opinions, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:14
Poetic Licence said:
A wise write, we must listen to all words and sides before we judge or form opinions, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:14
Words Speaks For Itself
sorenbarrett said:
One must have a full mind to have an open one. Listen, learn refine decide. A poem of wisdom
March 5th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
One must have a full mind to have an open one. Listen, learn refine decide. A poem of wisdom
March 5th, 2025 06:31
Shoot The Messenger
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful yet true, wonderful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 11:09
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful yet true, wonderful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 11:09
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