Comments received on poems by Hanible
Can\'t Write so sad I am
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and sad write around the deteriorating of there mental wellbeing, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 07:55
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and sad write around the deteriorating of there mental wellbeing, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 07:55
Lying About Your Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting poem of mental state. Most unusual and gives the feel of falling in with the author
May 4th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting poem of mental state. Most unusual and gives the feel of falling in with the author
May 4th, 2025 14:38
Can\'t Write so sad I am
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about not being up to normal and getting worse. Dark and sad. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2025 19:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about not being up to normal and getting worse. Dark and sad. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2025 19:52
You Can\'t Believe
sorenbarrett said:
Marriage can be seen as such. Colorfully worded. Very nice
April 28th, 2025 20:52
sorenbarrett said:
Marriage can be seen as such. Colorfully worded. Very nice
April 28th, 2025 20:52
Butterfly Needle
sorenbarrett said:
Sucked dry. This is the feeling that I get. The last step before they fill you with formaldehyde embalming the body before burial. Good read
April 27th, 2025 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
Sucked dry. This is the feeling that I get. The last step before they fill you with formaldehyde embalming the body before burial. Good read
April 27th, 2025 18:38
Pain Management
sorenbarrett said:
Pain such a fearsome adversary and yet undefeated. Under the guise of a friend to tell us when things are dangerous it remains as an enemy of both day and night. A lovely write
April 26th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
Pain such a fearsome adversary and yet undefeated. Under the guise of a friend to tell us when things are dangerous it remains as an enemy of both day and night. A lovely write
April 26th, 2025 09:19
Ripping Skin Off The Bone
sorenbarrett said:
Violence, pain, no hope is evident in this poem. It is graphic and full of imagery. A most desperate feeling in the read. Well written
April 25th, 2025 15:38
sorenbarrett said:
Violence, pain, no hope is evident in this poem. It is graphic and full of imagery. A most desperate feeling in the read. Well written
April 25th, 2025 15:38
Inner Peace
sorenbarrett said:
I take this poem to say that in order to smile and be really happy one has to feel it from inside oneself. A true and great message
April 21st, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
I take this poem to say that in order to smile and be really happy one has to feel it from inside oneself. A true and great message
April 21st, 2025 15:24
Scared To Say
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of a person that is not all he appears to be. He hides problems that erupt from time to time. People are warry of him because of his history and he is on watch with fear and belief that it will happen again. Do prophesies fulfill themselves? Nicely written
April 20th, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of a person that is not all he appears to be. He hides problems that erupt from time to time. People are warry of him because of his history and he is on watch with fear and belief that it will happen again. Do prophesies fulfill themselves? Nicely written
April 20th, 2025 09:14
FreeFall
rrodriguez said:
I won\'t pull the plug. I\'ll wake you up. You\'re grounded, my friend. Nicely done!
April 19th, 2025 13:56
rrodriguez said:
I won\'t pull the plug. I\'ll wake you up. You\'re grounded, my friend. Nicely done!
April 19th, 2025 13:56
Was It Supposed To Hurt
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness and sadness felt a good write
April 19th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness and sadness felt a good write
April 19th, 2025 13:28
FreeFall
sorenbarrett said:
Low expectations and darkness voiced in this poem. Nicely written.
April 18th, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
Low expectations and darkness voiced in this poem. Nicely written.
April 18th, 2025 18:36
Self Beating
rrodriguez said:
The poem is nicely written, but its message is sad. Thank you for sharing. Stay in touch.
April 17th, 2025 21:02
rrodriguez said:
The poem is nicely written, but its message is sad. Thank you for sharing. Stay in touch.
April 17th, 2025 21:02
Self Beating
Poetic Licence said:
A dark but powerful and raw write of self harming, whether this be physically or mentally, well expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 14:26
Poetic Licence said:
A dark but powerful and raw write of self harming, whether this be physically or mentally, well expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 14:26
Self Beating
sorenbarrett said:
This is a hard read. We all self abuse in some ways mentally, or even verbally. A powerful and dark read
April 17th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
This is a hard read. We all self abuse in some ways mentally, or even verbally. A powerful and dark read
April 17th, 2025 13:13
I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
eugene290390 said:
So, my name is Eugene S (not a pseudonym)...are you channeling me, lol? You got some of the details right...I\'m older, discovered Ren a little over 2 years ago...on April 1, 2023 after repeatedly ignoring youtube enticements ...and I also write poetry at times (but, like Franz K, much of it has been destroyed or forgotten). I participate in some Ren fan groups (and run the main one on reddit r/ren...so people have been thinking that \"I am you, you are me, you are I, I am we\", to coin a phrase...
April 16th, 2025 00:31
eugene290390 said:
So, my name is Eugene S (not a pseudonym)...are you channeling me, lol? You got some of the details right...I\'m older, discovered Ren a little over 2 years ago...on April 1, 2023 after repeatedly ignoring youtube enticements ...and I also write poetry at times (but, like Franz K, much of it has been destroyed or forgotten). I participate in some Ren fan groups (and run the main one on reddit r/ren...so people have been thinking that \"I am you, you are me, you are I, I am we\", to coin a phrase...
April 16th, 2025 00:31
A Dark Place
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety climbed into panic in this poem that is as tense as the E string on a violin. Well worded it conveys its message well
April 15th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety climbed into panic in this poem that is as tense as the E string on a violin. Well worded it conveys its message well
April 15th, 2025 04:14
A Dark Place
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Sometimes it is not easy to be in the dark or in a dark period of our life, a haunting tale
April 15th, 2025 02:34
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Sometimes it is not easy to be in the dark or in a dark period of our life, a haunting tale
April 15th, 2025 02:34
Burning In The Wind
sorenbarrett said:
Thought fragments come like sparks off of a fire quickly burning out to be replaced by another. A thought provoking, interesting read
April 14th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Thought fragments come like sparks off of a fire quickly burning out to be replaced by another. A thought provoking, interesting read
April 14th, 2025 04:02
Burning In The Wind
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There was a dark melancholic echo while reading this poem, a reflective piece
April 14th, 2025 01:13
Mourgana of the Fey said:
There was a dark melancholic echo while reading this poem, a reflective piece
April 14th, 2025 01:13
Tears Of A Cold Heart
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes things get so bad there is no choice left but to suck it up and laugh at it, even though inside your crying, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 09:35
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes things get so bad there is no choice left but to suck it up and laugh at it, even though inside your crying, enjoyed the read
April 12th, 2025 09:35
Tears Of A Cold Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Go for it is the message I get and don\'t worry about the consequences. A fun write
April 12th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
Go for it is the message I get and don\'t worry about the consequences. A fun write
April 12th, 2025 07:55
I am Cursed
sorenbarrett said:
A curse, a spell, Voodoo, witchcraft what ever it seems that more than the obvious there is a metaphor here Nicely written
April 11th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
A curse, a spell, Voodoo, witchcraft what ever it seems that more than the obvious there is a metaphor here Nicely written
April 11th, 2025 09:21
They\'re Waiting For Me To
Poetic Licence said:
The extreme end of dealing with some problems although to the person encountering those problems it will appear the easiest, nicely written and expressed
April 10th, 2025 11:51
Poetic Licence said:
The extreme end of dealing with some problems although to the person encountering those problems it will appear the easiest, nicely written and expressed
April 10th, 2025 11:51
They\'re Waiting For Me To
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have taken. A last line solution. In short lines fragments of thoughts are expressed. This tends to add tot the agitation and despair in the work. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have taken. A last line solution. In short lines fragments of thoughts are expressed. This tends to add tot the agitation and despair in the work. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 09:22
The Gun Against My Head
sorenbarrett said:
Apparent suicide a crime that used to carry the death penalty. A dark write but in metaphoric terms most all of us have committed it many times. A great tale withe metaphoric implications.
April 9th, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Apparent suicide a crime that used to carry the death penalty. A dark write but in metaphoric terms most all of us have committed it many times. A great tale withe metaphoric implications.
April 9th, 2025 08:44
Read Carefully
Poetic Licence said:
Alot of anger leading to thoughts of violence,a very emotional write, nicely expressed
April 9th, 2025 02:13
Poetic Licence said:
Alot of anger leading to thoughts of violence,a very emotional write, nicely expressed
April 9th, 2025 02:13
Read Carefully
sorenbarrett said:
Much violence fills these lines and where there is violence there is anger. Emotions felt in this poem that speaks with power. Well said
April 8th, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
Much violence fills these lines and where there is violence there is anger. Emotions felt in this poem that speaks with power. Well said
April 8th, 2025 16:29
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