Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
The Closet
Thomas W Case said:
This is a tight little nightmare where ordinary objects slowly turn hostile, and the short lines keep the tension damn claustrophobic. The ending works especially well—the idea that every rhyme is a thread makes the poem itself feel like the trap.
August 11th, 2026 06:56
Thomas W Case said:
This is a tight little nightmare where ordinary objects slowly turn hostile, and the short lines keep the tension damn claustrophobic. The ending works especially well—the idea that every rhyme is a thread makes the poem itself feel like the trap.
August 11th, 2026 06:56
The Closet
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem wonderfully creates a strong sense of claustrophobia, mystery, and psychological fear.
August 11th, 2026 04:13
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem wonderfully creates a strong sense of claustrophobia, mystery, and psychological fear.
August 11th, 2026 04:13
The Closet
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme that tells its tale in this poem. Nicely done
August 11th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme that tells its tale in this poem. Nicely done
August 11th, 2026 04:04
It’s Time To Die
sorenbarrett said:
A winding journey in this short lined poem of rhyme. Nicely written it ends in the divine. Well done
August 10th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A winding journey in this short lined poem of rhyme. Nicely written it ends in the divine. Well done
August 10th, 2026 04:15
I Love You This Much
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of the vastness and reaches of love. Well done
August 9th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of the vastness and reaches of love. Well done
August 9th, 2026 04:24
Why Should I If You Don’t
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the message that the burden carried only by one breaks the relationship. Well written Anthony
August 8th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the message that the burden carried only by one breaks the relationship. Well written Anthony
August 8th, 2026 04:40
May I Read My Mind To You
sorenbarrett said:
A free flow of associations set in short broken lines make this poem feel like a series of snapshots and almost breathless. Nicely constructed and in these glimpses I see the past. Well done
August 7th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A free flow of associations set in short broken lines make this poem feel like a series of snapshots and almost breathless. Nicely constructed and in these glimpses I see the past. Well done
August 7th, 2026 04:00
Can I Be Romantic For A Moment
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes, a fine Poem. Fave for sure.
August 6th, 2026 06:41
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes, a fine Poem. Fave for sure.
August 6th, 2026 06:41
Miles Without A Destination
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of existential metaphor. Nicely written
August 6th, 2026 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of existential metaphor. Nicely written
August 6th, 2026 05:17
Can I Be Romantic For A Moment
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of attraction in this poem of passion. Nicely written my friend
August 5th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A declaration of attraction in this poem of passion. Nicely written my friend
August 5th, 2026 04:07
Don’t Be Mad At The Answers When You Ask The Questions
Doggerel Dave said:
Depends how coherent both the questions and answers are......
August 4th, 2026 06:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Depends how coherent both the questions and answers are......
August 4th, 2026 06:48
Don’t Be Mad At The Answers When You Ask The Questions
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to put it where the answer lies in short phrases and well said.
August 4th, 2026 03:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to put it where the answer lies in short phrases and well said.
August 4th, 2026 03:10
Deepness Of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Love mapped and drawn in this poem. Nicely done Anthony
August 3rd, 2026 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Love mapped and drawn in this poem. Nicely done Anthony
August 3rd, 2026 03:52
That Pen And Pad Is All I Have
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry and its writing therapy for the soul. Nicely written Anthony
August 2nd, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry and its writing therapy for the soul. Nicely written Anthony
August 2nd, 2026 04:27
How Can You Help Me Pt 8 Psychology 801 The Mind You Need To Know
sorenbarrett said:
Hypno therapy maybe where counting backwards is the induction process. A wonderful write that reaches out for help. Well done my friend
August 1st, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
Hypno therapy maybe where counting backwards is the induction process. A wonderful write that reaches out for help. Well done my friend
August 1st, 2026 03:49
How Can You Help Pt. 7 Psychology 701 The Systems Of
sorenbarrett said:
The beat is echoed in the meter of this poem with rhyme added it marches forward toward its end. Nicely done Anthony
July 31st, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
The beat is echoed in the meter of this poem with rhyme added it marches forward toward its end. Nicely done Anthony
July 31st, 2026 04:05
How Can You Help Me Pt. 6 Psychology 601: The Roots That Made Me
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the flow and meter of this poem along with its rhyme. It all fits together to give it a driving force. As it unfolds it sends its message well done
July 30th, 2026 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the flow and meter of this poem along with its rhyme. It all fits together to give it a driving force. As it unfolds it sends its message well done
July 30th, 2026 03:35
How Can You Help Me Pt 5 Psychology 501: Theory, Research, and Practice
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of the mental and reaching for help. It looks for meaning in an existential manner and cries out of the darkness. Well done
July 29th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of the mental and reaching for help. It looks for meaning in an existential manner and cries out of the darkness. Well done
July 29th, 2026 04:19
How Can You Help Me Pt 4 Psychology 401 Mind And Body Fight
Demar Desu said:
Masterpiece as usual, I hope you’re out there performing open mics… take care
July 28th, 2026 06:36
Demar Desu said:
Masterpiece as usual, I hope you’re out there performing open mics… take care
July 28th, 2026 06:36
How Can You Help Me Pt 4 Psychology 401 Mind And Body Fight
sorenbarrett said:
The battle between body and mind encapsulated in this poem that has rhyme as well. Nicely done
July 28th, 2026 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
The battle between body and mind encapsulated in this poem that has rhyme as well. Nicely done
July 28th, 2026 05:03
How Can You Help Me Pt 3 Psychology 301 Mirror Mirror Helping Not Helping
sorenbarrett said:
The constant rechecking that comes with uncertainty. Nicely written.
July 27th, 2026 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
The constant rechecking that comes with uncertainty. Nicely written.
July 27th, 2026 04:38
How Can You Help Me Pt. 2: Psychology 201 What the Pills Tried to Teach Me
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic metaphor of a society that has become chemically dependent. One where there are no other options. It is the pill or the illness. I have seen people taking twenty pills at a sitting a cereal bowl full one for this another for the side effects the first gives another for the side effects of the second and so forth. A pharmaceutical gold mine where prognosis is measured on the stock exchange. A society lost in chemical hope and dependence. Well written
July 26th, 2026 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic metaphor of a society that has become chemically dependent. One where there are no other options. It is the pill or the illness. I have seen people taking twenty pills at a sitting a cereal bowl full one for this another for the side effects the first gives another for the side effects of the second and so forth. A pharmaceutical gold mine where prognosis is measured on the stock exchange. A society lost in chemical hope and dependence. Well written
July 26th, 2026 05:11
How Can You Help Me Pt. I: Psychology 101 Lessons From the Quiet Room
sorenbarrett said:
We all look for help not realizing that even in a therapist\'s office help only comes from within oneself. Nicely written
July 25th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
We all look for help not realizing that even in a therapist\'s office help only comes from within oneself. Nicely written
July 25th, 2026 04:41
Some Apologies Are Never Satisfying
sorenbarrett said:
Here the imperfections of man in vows made broken apologies made but mean little some things can not be forgotten of forgiven. Well done
July 24th, 2026 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
Here the imperfections of man in vows made broken apologies made but mean little some things can not be forgotten of forgiven. Well done
July 24th, 2026 05:33
Thank You For Everything
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and said with grace. Well done Anthony
July 23rd, 2026 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and said with grace. Well done Anthony
July 23rd, 2026 03:47
Say It If You Care
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice poem as it gives good advice !
There is a proverb in Tamil, it says, \"A child with expressing-mouth will survive\"
I had never told anyone my fear when I was a young man and that led to chronic depression !
Thanks, at least others will escape from troubles!
July 22nd, 2026 05:33
mvvenkataraman said:
Nice poem as it gives good advice !
There is a proverb in Tamil, it says, \"A child with expressing-mouth will survive\"
I had never told anyone my fear when I was a young man and that led to chronic depression !
Thanks, at least others will escape from troubles!
July 22nd, 2026 05:33
Say It If You Care
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that challenges the reader to speak out. Nicely done in repeated requests for voicing one\'s feelings.
July 22nd, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that challenges the reader to speak out. Nicely done in repeated requests for voicing one\'s feelings.
July 22nd, 2026 04:21
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