Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
A Funeral For Our Bed
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of memories encapsulated in an object. Well written it speaks to me. I wrote a poem some time ago about the same thing. You might want to look at it called (Bed). Enjoyed the write
December 30th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of memories encapsulated in an object. Well written it speaks to me. I wrote a poem some time ago about the same thing. You might want to look at it called (Bed). Enjoyed the write
December 30th, 2025 11:41
There’s a Bullet in My Brain
sorenbarrett said:
Memories can be bullets and do more damage than one. A good write
December 29th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
Memories can be bullets and do more damage than one. A good write
December 29th, 2025 17:11
There’s a Bullet in My Brain
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the concept of trauma and the enduring impact of painful memories or experiences. The metaphor of a \"bullet\" in the brain symbolizes a deep-seated thought or trauma that is difficult to expunge, yet the speaker learns to navigate life around it, suggesting resilience and the ability to find light and meaning despite suffering.
December 29th, 2025 14:17
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the concept of trauma and the enduring impact of painful memories or experiences. The metaphor of a \"bullet\" in the brain symbolizes a deep-seated thought or trauma that is difficult to expunge, yet the speaker learns to navigate life around it, suggesting resilience and the ability to find light and meaning despite suffering.
December 29th, 2025 14:17
Where My Heart Refused To Whisper
Soman Ragavan said:
The heart is a most mysterious part of our body. Through it we experience pain, joy, doubt, etc. Perhaps our greatest protector is the heart. It senses that which other parts of our body do not detect. It warns us of dangers that remain unseen. The ways of the heart are mysterious, but most of the time they work for our own benefit, for our safety.
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December 29th, 2025 07:00
Soman Ragavan said:
The heart is a most mysterious part of our body. Through it we experience pain, joy, doubt, etc. Perhaps our greatest protector is the heart. It senses that which other parts of our body do not detect. It warns us of dangers that remain unseen. The ways of the heart are mysterious, but most of the time they work for our own benefit, for our safety.
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December 29th, 2025 07:00
Where My Heart Refused To Whisper
sorenbarrett said:
I love the counter current of this poem and the wording itself, Nicely done
December 28th, 2025 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
I love the counter current of this poem and the wording itself, Nicely done
December 28th, 2025 19:35
Dozen Of Roses
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the color does matter. A good read.
December 26th, 2025 18:52
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the color does matter. A good read.
December 26th, 2025 18:52
I Don\'t Sleep In My Bed
NafisaSB said:
Wishing that you get to sleep in your bed soonest in a relaxed frame of mind
stay happy - and pls leave the couch...
December 25th, 2025 02:14
NafisaSB said:
Wishing that you get to sleep in your bed soonest in a relaxed frame of mind
stay happy - and pls leave the couch...
December 25th, 2025 02:14
It\'s The Truth
Katie B. said:
Deep, heavy and sad. Dealing with loss is the hardest of all.
December 24th, 2025 06:26
Katie B. said:
Deep, heavy and sad. Dealing with loss is the hardest of all.
December 24th, 2025 06:26
It\'s The Truth
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of missing someone and that loss. Well written one can hear the sadness. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of missing someone and that loss. Well written one can hear the sadness. Happy holidays to you
December 24th, 2025 04:13
I Love You
sorenbarrett said:
It is a distinction I have made with my children from time to time and I feel it. Nicely said in poetic form
December 22nd, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
It is a distinction I have made with my children from time to time and I feel it. Nicely said in poetic form
December 22nd, 2025 03:54
Too The Knife I Pulled Out Of My Back
sorenbarrett said:
I take this dramatic poem as a warning and a statement. Well written and a fave
December 19th, 2025 19:26
sorenbarrett said:
I take this dramatic poem as a warning and a statement. Well written and a fave
December 19th, 2025 19:26
That One Last Cry
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of finalization. Emotional and directly stated. Well done
December 18th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of finalization. Emotional and directly stated. Well done
December 18th, 2025 08:13
Please Don\'t
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks from the darkness and in darkness one can not see who kicks and trips over or steps on one. A plea for others to be careful. Well done
December 17th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks from the darkness and in darkness one can not see who kicks and trips over or steps on one. A plea for others to be careful. Well done
December 17th, 2025 08:48
I Don\'t Sleep In My Bed
Demar Desu said:
Shikibuton might be better than a couch, great poem.
December 17th, 2025 00:23
Demar Desu said:
Shikibuton might be better than a couch, great poem.
December 17th, 2025 00:23
I Don\'t Sleep In My Bed
sorenbarrett said:
We grow accustomed to certain things even in their discomfort and then again there are times that others angry at us force us from a place of comfort to much less comfortable place. Metaphor or literal a good write all the same
December 16th, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
We grow accustomed to certain things even in their discomfort and then again there are times that others angry at us force us from a place of comfort to much less comfortable place. Metaphor or literal a good write all the same
December 16th, 2025 03:40
Facts Pt3
sorenbarrett said:
And with that thin line one can be bound. A good read
December 14th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
And with that thin line one can be bound. A good read
December 14th, 2025 13:39
My Shower
sorenbarrett said:
I got the feeling and have been there. Sometimes one just would rather not get out of the shower especially when the room temperature is forty degrees fahrenheit. Well written
December 13th, 2025 18:43
sorenbarrett said:
I got the feeling and have been there. Sometimes one just would rather not get out of the shower especially when the room temperature is forty degrees fahrenheit. Well written
December 13th, 2025 18:43
Scream
sorenbarrett said:
Shake the bottle or Cham pain it will explode. A good write with feeling
December 12th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
Shake the bottle or Cham pain it will explode. A good write with feeling
December 12th, 2025 14:08
Scream
NinjaGirl said:
I need to find somewhere I can scream without alarming someone into calling authorities!
December 12th, 2025 14:01
NinjaGirl said:
I need to find somewhere I can scream without alarming someone into calling authorities!
December 12th, 2025 14:01
Too Mister And Miss Downer
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! a powerful poem that leaves the reader afraid to remark. Well done
December 11th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! a powerful poem that leaves the reader afraid to remark. Well done
December 11th, 2025 08:15
Be Ready
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about the ending of the year, self and world. Well said
December 10th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about the ending of the year, self and world. Well said
December 10th, 2025 03:46
The Hiding
sorenbarrett said:
We all put on our best face to pretend to be what we are not but wish others would think. A lovely write
December 7th, 2025 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
We all put on our best face to pretend to be what we are not but wish others would think. A lovely write
December 7th, 2025 15:56
Facts Pt2
sorenbarrett said:
A lie that is a lie is like two negatives making a positive and becomes the truth. A most interesting write
December 6th, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
A lie that is a lie is like two negatives making a positive and becomes the truth. A most interesting write
December 6th, 2025 13:15
Facts
sorenbarrett said:
A simple statement in poetic form that uses logic to command emotion. Well done
December 5th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A simple statement in poetic form that uses logic to command emotion. Well done
December 5th, 2025 08:37
Look At Me When I Say This
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the song by Mac Davis Oh lord it\'s hard to be humble. A great read with a twist at the end. Loved it. A fave
December 4th, 2025 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the song by Mac Davis Oh lord it\'s hard to be humble. A great read with a twist at the end. Loved it. A fave
December 4th, 2025 07:11
O Stiff One
sorenbarrett said:
Here the cure becomes worse than the disease or maybe is the disease. A poetic addiction I pour myself a stiff one as I read the poems of the day. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Here the cure becomes worse than the disease or maybe is the disease. A poetic addiction I pour myself a stiff one as I read the poems of the day. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:32
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