Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Please Don\'t
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks from the darkness and in darkness one can not see who kicks and trips over or steps on one. A plea for others to be careful. Well done
December 17th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that speaks from the darkness and in darkness one can not see who kicks and trips over or steps on one. A plea for others to be careful. Well done
December 17th, 2025 08:48
I Don\'t Sleep In My Bed
Demar Desu said:
Shikibuton might be better than a couch, great poem.
December 17th, 2025 00:23
Demar Desu said:
Shikibuton might be better than a couch, great poem.
December 17th, 2025 00:23
I Don\'t Sleep In My Bed
sorenbarrett said:
We grow accustomed to certain things even in their discomfort and then again there are times that others angry at us force us from a place of comfort to much less comfortable place. Metaphor or literal a good write all the same
December 16th, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
We grow accustomed to certain things even in their discomfort and then again there are times that others angry at us force us from a place of comfort to much less comfortable place. Metaphor or literal a good write all the same
December 16th, 2025 03:40
Facts Pt3
sorenbarrett said:
And with that thin line one can be bound. A good read
December 14th, 2025 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
And with that thin line one can be bound. A good read
December 14th, 2025 13:39
My Shower
sorenbarrett said:
I got the feeling and have been there. Sometimes one just would rather not get out of the shower especially when the room temperature is forty degrees fahrenheit. Well written
December 13th, 2025 18:43
sorenbarrett said:
I got the feeling and have been there. Sometimes one just would rather not get out of the shower especially when the room temperature is forty degrees fahrenheit. Well written
December 13th, 2025 18:43
Scream
sorenbarrett said:
Shake the bottle or Cham pain it will explode. A good write with feeling
December 12th, 2025 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
Shake the bottle or Cham pain it will explode. A good write with feeling
December 12th, 2025 14:08
Scream
NinjaGirl said:
I need to find somewhere I can scream without alarming someone into calling authorities!
December 12th, 2025 14:01
NinjaGirl said:
I need to find somewhere I can scream without alarming someone into calling authorities!
December 12th, 2025 14:01
Too Mister And Miss Downer
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! a powerful poem that leaves the reader afraid to remark. Well done
December 11th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! a powerful poem that leaves the reader afraid to remark. Well done
December 11th, 2025 08:15
Be Ready
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about the ending of the year, self and world. Well said
December 10th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of warning about the ending of the year, self and world. Well said
December 10th, 2025 03:46
The Hiding
sorenbarrett said:
We all put on our best face to pretend to be what we are not but wish others would think. A lovely write
December 7th, 2025 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
We all put on our best face to pretend to be what we are not but wish others would think. A lovely write
December 7th, 2025 15:56
Facts Pt2
sorenbarrett said:
A lie that is a lie is like two negatives making a positive and becomes the truth. A most interesting write
December 6th, 2025 13:15
sorenbarrett said:
A lie that is a lie is like two negatives making a positive and becomes the truth. A most interesting write
December 6th, 2025 13:15
Facts
sorenbarrett said:
A simple statement in poetic form that uses logic to command emotion. Well done
December 5th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A simple statement in poetic form that uses logic to command emotion. Well done
December 5th, 2025 08:37
Look At Me When I Say This
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the song by Mac Davis Oh lord it\'s hard to be humble. A great read with a twist at the end. Loved it. A fave
December 4th, 2025 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the song by Mac Davis Oh lord it\'s hard to be humble. A great read with a twist at the end. Loved it. A fave
December 4th, 2025 07:11
O Stiff One
sorenbarrett said:
Here the cure becomes worse than the disease or maybe is the disease. A poetic addiction I pour myself a stiff one as I read the poems of the day. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Here the cure becomes worse than the disease or maybe is the disease. A poetic addiction I pour myself a stiff one as I read the poems of the day. Well done
December 2nd, 2025 04:32
Damn You Title
sorenbarrett said:
The title often the hardest to find. We often remain stumped without a title. I always leave my title until the poem is finished. Nicely written
November 30th, 2025 12:33
sorenbarrett said:
The title often the hardest to find. We often remain stumped without a title. I always leave my title until the poem is finished. Nicely written
November 30th, 2025 12:33
Insomnia
sorenbarrett said:
This poem describes well the experience of insomnia and its frustrations. Well done
November 26th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem describes well the experience of insomnia and its frustrations. Well done
November 26th, 2025 04:59
Things That Should Be A Crime
NafisaSB said:
that is a bit of an extreme step - but i agree that one should not sell oneself short, though we normally tend to do so
November 25th, 2025 03:25
NafisaSB said:
that is a bit of an extreme step - but i agree that one should not sell oneself short, though we normally tend to do so
November 25th, 2025 03:25
Things That Should Be A Crime
sorenbarrett said:
An illness that is contagious I\'m afraid and can be terminal and if not recurrent. Inoculations are not always effective. Could be a pandemic. Well written
November 23rd, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
An illness that is contagious I\'m afraid and can be terminal and if not recurrent. Inoculations are not always effective. Could be a pandemic. Well written
November 23rd, 2025 10:44
Things That Should Be A Crime
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brought one thing to mind and it made me laugh. Doing sex by oneself is only considered a crime by certain religious people. I\'m not so sure about probation.
November 21st, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
This poem brought one thing to mind and it made me laugh. Doing sex by oneself is only considered a crime by certain religious people. I\'m not so sure about probation.
November 21st, 2025 14:44
Things That Should Be A Crime
Demar Desu said:
give me the chair… my lack of confidence in myself, relationship with others and business it all makes me feel like I sell myself short.:: great poem
November 20th, 2025 09:01
Demar Desu said:
give me the chair… my lack of confidence in myself, relationship with others and business it all makes me feel like I sell myself short.:: great poem
November 20th, 2025 09:01
Things That Should Be A Crime
sorenbarrett said:
Tough love in poetry and I love it. Short and to the point as all directions should be. Nicely done
November 20th, 2025 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
Tough love in poetry and I love it. Short and to the point as all directions should be. Nicely done
November 20th, 2025 09:00
Alone
sorenbarrett said:
There is a bit of dark humor in this poem and I like it. A fun read
November 19th, 2025 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
There is a bit of dark humor in this poem and I like it. A fun read
November 19th, 2025 16:45
Love Me
applecherry said:
this is well written, it allows you to feel the chaos of your feelings, conversationalist but also like you\'re sneaking into someone\'s head
November 13th, 2025 18:00
applecherry said:
this is well written, it allows you to feel the chaos of your feelings, conversationalist but also like you\'re sneaking into someone\'s head
November 13th, 2025 18:00
That Smile
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how a smile can make all the difference, it sets the mood for the day. A well written poem
November 12th, 2025 20:16
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how a smile can make all the difference, it sets the mood for the day. A well written poem
November 12th, 2025 20:16
It\'s My Move
sorenbarrett said:
Choices and decisions. A poem of the evolution of such choices. Nicely written
November 11th, 2025 15:25
sorenbarrett said:
Choices and decisions. A poem of the evolution of such choices. Nicely written
November 11th, 2025 15:25
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