Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Tears
sorenbarrett said:
These are hard words to hear because I have heard the last few lines from cutters before. The pain gives meaning to life and indeed it does as a contrast to joy but to self inflict bothers me. This poem holds deeper existential meaning and is very nicely done
April 6th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
These are hard words to hear because I have heard the last few lines from cutters before. The pain gives meaning to life and indeed it does as a contrast to joy but to self inflict bothers me. This poem holds deeper existential meaning and is very nicely done
April 6th, 2026 04:29
Homeless Heartless
NafisaSB said:
i hope you succeed in your venture, and build a modest one to begin with, and then move forward...all the best...
April 6th, 2026 01:06
NafisaSB said:
i hope you succeed in your venture, and build a modest one to begin with, and then move forward...all the best...
April 6th, 2026 01:06
Homeless Heartless
Abdullah123 said:
I like the tinge of hope at the end. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:06
Abdullah123 said:
I like the tinge of hope at the end. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:06
Homeless Heartless
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet hopeful this poem speaks of a sense of wandering in search of a home lost and needing reconstruction from ashes no less these need to be mixes with clay and sand to make brick. Well written Anthony
April 5th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet hopeful this poem speaks of a sense of wandering in search of a home lost and needing reconstruction from ashes no less these need to be mixes with clay and sand to make brick. Well written Anthony
April 5th, 2026 05:30
Nine Days Awake And Counting
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Was the two Mys at the end on purpose? If it was I feel like it emphasizes… great poem nonetheless thouhh
April 4th, 2026 10:02
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Was the two Mys at the end on purpose? If it was I feel like it emphasizes… great poem nonetheless thouhh
April 4th, 2026 10:02
Nine Days Awake And Counting
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems both surreal and existential. It unspools as if it were tempered wire springing off a reel. Nicely done
April 4th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems both surreal and existential. It unspools as if it were tempered wire springing off a reel. Nicely done
April 4th, 2026 04:35
My Apprehension
sorenbarrett said:
A great write and when fear takes on form it often transforms into paranoia. A poem of haunting proportions and with a frightening scope. Nicely worded
April 3rd, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A great write and when fear takes on form it often transforms into paranoia. A poem of haunting proportions and with a frightening scope. Nicely worded
April 3rd, 2026 04:04
One Book Same Page Different Day
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor of a book as that of life with each day a page works well in this poem where life is written one page at a time. Meanings change as new is added but just enough to shift with it as well
April 2nd, 2026 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor of a book as that of life with each day a page works well in this poem where life is written one page at a time. Meanings change as new is added but just enough to shift with it as well
April 2nd, 2026 05:32
Blind Love
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded Anthony this poem in metaphor speaks of a powerful set force that guides despite blindness. Blindness a misnomer as it sees better without eyes. Nicely written
April 1st, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded Anthony this poem in metaphor speaks of a powerful set force that guides despite blindness. Blindness a misnomer as it sees better without eyes. Nicely written
April 1st, 2026 04:27
Morning Noon And Night
sorenbarrett said:
I have always been intrigued with symbols and this poem takes that to another level weaving them into poetry. It seems almost a symbol itself in its ritual like laying out of its lines and setting forth its symbols. Very nicely done
March 31st, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
I have always been intrigued with symbols and this poem takes that to another level weaving them into poetry. It seems almost a symbol itself in its ritual like laying out of its lines and setting forth its symbols. Very nicely done
March 31st, 2026 04:14
A Pool Of My Tears
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Anthony this poem calls for recognition not sadness it is a reflection itself. It feels a bit melancholy but need not be so maybe it is the nostalgia mistaken for sadness. Well done
March 30th, 2026 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Anthony this poem calls for recognition not sadness it is a reflection itself. It feels a bit melancholy but need not be so maybe it is the nostalgia mistaken for sadness. Well done
March 30th, 2026 07:03
O Love Save Me
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tender this seems the plea of a child, maybe the child in all of us, asking for someone to understand and be there. Very nicely written it calls out for affiliation.
March 29th, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tender this seems the plea of a child, maybe the child in all of us, asking for someone to understand and be there. Very nicely written it calls out for affiliation.
March 29th, 2026 05:16
Angels And Butterflies
Vipassana said:
When an angel passes
The air folds into a hush
When a butterfly lifts
The hush becomes a blessing
My screen name might suggest how much I value that hush, that silence.
March 29th, 2026 04:08
Vipassana said:
When an angel passes
The air folds into a hush
When a butterfly lifts
The hush becomes a blessing
My screen name might suggest how much I value that hush, that silence.
March 29th, 2026 04:08
If I Cry
Vipassana said:
It will be because something inside me
Finally stopped pretending
It was stone
Even mountains erode
When no one is watching
very nice.
March 29th, 2026 03:43
Vipassana said:
It will be because something inside me
Finally stopped pretending
It was stone
Even mountains erode
When no one is watching
very nice.
March 29th, 2026 03:43
An Online Poet Me
Vipassana said:
love the poem.
I write in the blue hush
Of a screen that hums like prayer
Sending small lanterns of language
Into the endless dark
really nice.
March 29th, 2026 03:36
Vipassana said:
love the poem.
I write in the blue hush
Of a screen that hums like prayer
Sending small lanterns of language
Into the endless dark
really nice.
March 29th, 2026 03:36
Phases Of The Moon
Vipassana said:
love the imagery, like this passage, for instance
A blade hung high
Cutting the night
Into keep
And release
Waxing
A white wound
Opening wider
Spilling its light
March 29th, 2026 03:30
Vipassana said:
love the imagery, like this passage, for instance
A blade hung high
Cutting the night
Into keep
And release
Waxing
A white wound
Opening wider
Spilling its light
March 29th, 2026 03:30
Fixing Broken Pieces
Vipassana said:
very nice. especially like
Until the shape of me
Starts to look less like a warning
And more like a beginning
March 29th, 2026 03:25
Vipassana said:
very nice. especially like
Until the shape of me
Starts to look less like a warning
And more like a beginning
March 29th, 2026 03:25
Packing My Bags
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic feel to this poem that goes beyond the images and words. It feels poetic and sounds poetic. Its meaning is melancholic and lingers. Nicely written it is a fave
March 28th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic feel to this poem that goes beyond the images and words. It feels poetic and sounds poetic. Its meaning is melancholic and lingers. Nicely written it is a fave
March 28th, 2026 04:26
1800 Help
sorenbarrett said:
Hesitation is reflected in this poem and one has to ask when does hesitation become procrastination. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Hesitation is reflected in this poem and one has to ask when does hesitation become procrastination. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:27
The Baker Of The Doughnut Donut Shop
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful poem of creation. The baker god who hands out treats to those that can pay and maybe once in a while to one who can\'t. Loved the story and metaphor Anthony
March 26th, 2026 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful poem of creation. The baker god who hands out treats to those that can pay and maybe once in a while to one who can\'t. Loved the story and metaphor Anthony
March 26th, 2026 06:42
Running Mind
sorenbarrett said:
This feels mechanical and sterile a cold and heartless world where everything is matter of fact. It brings images of the book 1984 and maybe Huxley\'s Brave New World. It is metallic. Well done
March 25th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This feels mechanical and sterile a cold and heartless world where everything is matter of fact. It brings images of the book 1984 and maybe Huxley\'s Brave New World. It is metallic. Well done
March 25th, 2026 04:08
Ahhh! Is The New Woo Sah
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poetic manner to express this message. So nicely said
March 24th, 2026 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poetic manner to express this message. So nicely said
March 24th, 2026 06:04
Life As We Know It
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that reminds us of how we are all etched in that stone how our footprints blown away by the wind and eroded by rain still remain in some way. A lovely write my friend.
March 23rd, 2026 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that reminds us of how we are all etched in that stone how our footprints blown away by the wind and eroded by rain still remain in some way. A lovely write my friend.
March 23rd, 2026 06:02
I Have Been Up For Days Weeks Months
2781 said:
There\'s a lot going on. I\'ve suffered sleeplessness over the years, from both anxiety and drug abuse.
Now I sleep like a log.
I hope you find your piece.
March 22nd, 2026 04:57
2781 said:
There\'s a lot going on. I\'ve suffered sleeplessness over the years, from both anxiety and drug abuse.
Now I sleep like a log.
I hope you find your piece.
March 22nd, 2026 04:57
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