Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
The Doughnut Donut Shop
sorenbarrett said:
Love the donut shop hate the lines. When you get to the counter better know what you want or the woman behind you will step on you heels. A good upbeat write.
September 16th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
Love the donut shop hate the lines. When you get to the counter better know what you want or the woman behind you will step on you heels. A good upbeat write.
September 16th, 2025 09:41
Jail
Paul Bell said:
Three meals a day, a roof over your head, early release from overcrowding.
Put me down for it.
September 15th, 2025 17:15
Paul Bell said:
Three meals a day, a roof over your head, early release from overcrowding.
Put me down for it.
September 15th, 2025 17:15
Jail
sorenbarrett said:
Jail, death, deportation none of which is desirable
September 15th, 2025 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
Jail, death, deportation none of which is desirable
September 15th, 2025 11:54
Sorry To Tell You
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Nicely written rhythmic poem.
September 12th, 2025 11:08
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Nicely written rhythmic poem.
September 12th, 2025 11:08
Sorry To Tell You
sorenbarrett said:
Brutal and dark this poem speaks of getting even in a most unconventional way. Nicely rhymed and worded powerful.
September 12th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
Brutal and dark this poem speaks of getting even in a most unconventional way. Nicely rhymed and worded powerful.
September 12th, 2025 09:27
Late Night Cries
sorenbarrett said:
Pain of the past awakens when the mind relaxes. nicely done
September 11th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Pain of the past awakens when the mind relaxes. nicely done
September 11th, 2025 03:56
Looking For A True Friend
sorenbarrett said:
Truth to reflect about (pun intended) A fine write
September 10th, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
Truth to reflect about (pun intended) A fine write
September 10th, 2025 08:09
Looking For A True Friend
2781 said:
It doesn\'t come with observation.....it\'s within you.
September 10th, 2025 07:54
2781 said:
It doesn\'t come with observation.....it\'s within you.
September 10th, 2025 07:54
Be Mine
sorenbarrett said:
A proposal in poetic form. A fun light hearted read
September 9th, 2025 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
A proposal in poetic form. A fun light hearted read
September 9th, 2025 16:04
The Hunter
sorenbarrett said:
One generally finds what one is looking for. A short poem with a powerful message. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
One generally finds what one is looking for. A short poem with a powerful message. Nicely done
September 8th, 2025 05:09
Life
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now that is quite a riddle with more than one possible answer. Fun read
September 6th, 2025 17:10
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now that is quite a riddle with more than one possible answer. Fun read
September 6th, 2025 17:10
Love And Pain
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This is sad, nicely written poem.
September 5th, 2025 09:20
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
This is sad, nicely written poem.
September 5th, 2025 09:20
Shower Tears
NinjaGirl said:
I love this! It\'s so relatable, nobody can see you cry if you have water streaming down your face. I love that it\'s so short yet still tells a whole story. This is really well done.
September 4th, 2025 11:06
NinjaGirl said:
I love this! It\'s so relatable, nobody can see you cry if you have water streaming down your face. I love that it\'s so short yet still tells a whole story. This is really well done.
September 4th, 2025 11:06
Shower Tears
sorenbarrett said:
Using the shower as a metaphor and symbolically washing away the unwanted elements of the day is a clever and most poetic manner of cleansing. Nicely said.
September 4th, 2025 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
Using the shower as a metaphor and symbolically washing away the unwanted elements of the day is a clever and most poetic manner of cleansing. Nicely said.
September 4th, 2025 08:01
O Love
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that speaks of life and death and the passion that goes with them. Nicely done
September 3rd, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that speaks of life and death and the passion that goes with them. Nicely done
September 3rd, 2025 07:55
Missing
sorenbarrett said:
Lost is what comes to mind. A feeling of loss and even lost in dreams. A mournful feeling accompanies this poem
September 2nd, 2025 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Lost is what comes to mind. A feeling of loss and even lost in dreams. A mournful feeling accompanies this poem
September 2nd, 2025 06:07
A Stormy Brain
sorenbarrett said:
The world itself is spinning is it any wonder that the brain is in turmoil. A fun but all too accurate state of affairs
August 31st, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
The world itself is spinning is it any wonder that the brain is in turmoil. A fun but all too accurate state of affairs
August 31st, 2025 04:30
The Pain
NinjaGirl said:
It makes us do things, say things we never would. Pain is so so complicated. Well-written poem, good work
August 30th, 2025 19:50
NinjaGirl said:
It makes us do things, say things we never would. Pain is so so complicated. Well-written poem, good work
August 30th, 2025 19:50
The Pain
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you the pills are worse than the pain. Prefer my pain plain. Even when burnt myself up or at least twenty five percent of me didn\'t take the pills. I empathize with you. and wish you well hoping the pain will subside
August 30th, 2025 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you the pills are worse than the pain. Prefer my pain plain. Even when burnt myself up or at least twenty five percent of me didn\'t take the pills. I empathize with you. and wish you well hoping the pain will subside
August 30th, 2025 10:41
What You Call That
sorenbarrett said:
I have seen both before and neither is anything I would want to go through. A lovely write
August 29th, 2025 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
I have seen both before and neither is anything I would want to go through. A lovely write
August 29th, 2025 14:03
Take A Moment
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the thought and message very powerful
August 28th, 2025 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for the thought and message very powerful
August 28th, 2025 08:31
Just Shoot Me Bang Bang
sorenbarrett said:
Despair drips from this verse. Remember that the Phoenix raises from its own ashes to fly again. Powerfully written
August 27th, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Despair drips from this verse. Remember that the Phoenix raises from its own ashes to fly again. Powerfully written
August 27th, 2025 06:53
Yourday
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is, the noting of days, convenient for work has nothing to do with the person. Nicely said
August 26th, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is, the noting of days, convenient for work has nothing to do with the person. Nicely said
August 26th, 2025 09:04
Green, Yellow And Red
sorenbarrett said:
Traffic of any type, a great metaphor and nicely done.
August 24th, 2025 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
Traffic of any type, a great metaphor and nicely done.
August 24th, 2025 07:26
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