Comments received on poems by Hanible
The One That Gets On My Nerves
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of a relationship is shown in this poem. Usually poems speak to one side or the other and ignore the other . This poem represents the reality not the fantasy of relationships and reality is not what poetry usually is. A great and original type of poetry. Very nice
June 1st, 2025 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
The duality of a relationship is shown in this poem. Usually poems speak to one side or the other and ignore the other . This poem represents the reality not the fantasy of relationships and reality is not what poetry usually is. A great and original type of poetry. Very nice
June 1st, 2025 19:45
One Sided
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where one is the one and all. A very nicely crafted piece
May 26th, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where one is the one and all. A very nicely crafted piece
May 26th, 2025 14:57
Just Shoot Me
sorenbarrett said:
This seems scattered thoughts of a free association that takes one through the halls of a distracted mind. Well presented to leave the trail marked behind. Nicely written
May 24th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
This seems scattered thoughts of a free association that takes one through the halls of a distracted mind. Well presented to leave the trail marked behind. Nicely written
May 24th, 2025 03:52
Tug Of War
sorenbarrett said:
Dark images in this poem leave feelings of insignificance and depression that are powerfully depicted in violent and empty scattered pieces. Powerful
May 23rd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Dark images in this poem leave feelings of insignificance and depression that are powerfully depicted in violent and empty scattered pieces. Powerful
May 23rd, 2025 04:43
Screaming All Alone
sorenbarrett said:
Such feeling of tension in this poem like a tire overfilled it expands and bursts in a scream releasing the pressure. Well written
May 20th, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Such feeling of tension in this poem like a tire overfilled it expands and bursts in a scream releasing the pressure. Well written
May 20th, 2025 06:28
Earthquake
sorenbarrett said:
A great run on words encapsulating the final word. I loved the flow of this poem as it literally came tumbling down. Well done
May 12th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A great run on words encapsulating the final word. I loved the flow of this poem as it literally came tumbling down. Well done
May 12th, 2025 04:45
I Take Medicine For That
sorenbarrett said:
I guess we all take medicines of one type or another for our demons some pharmaceutical some herbal some mental. Lovely
May 11th, 2025 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
I guess we all take medicines of one type or another for our demons some pharmaceutical some herbal some mental. Lovely
May 11th, 2025 07:13
Blood In My Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of frustration and desperation fill this poem for me. A society where confirming the diagnosis and prognosis is expected not only by the doctors and public but by the patient themself. Hard hitting
May 10th, 2025 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of frustration and desperation fill this poem for me. A society where confirming the diagnosis and prognosis is expected not only by the doctors and public but by the patient themself. Hard hitting
May 10th, 2025 13:07
Blood In My Eyes
Muse of Calliope said:
Far too often the people who are in a position to potentially help the most, actually care the least. Good write 🌹
May 10th, 2025 12:47
Muse of Calliope said:
Far too often the people who are in a position to potentially help the most, actually care the least. Good write 🌹
May 10th, 2025 12:47
Platonic
sorenbarrett said:
The words I love you have become so trite and worn but little other that poetic metaphors serve. Te amo Je t\'aime all the same. A very nice poem of the difficulty of explaining this feeling without being overly dramatic or too common.
May 9th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
The words I love you have become so trite and worn but little other that poetic metaphors serve. Te amo Je t\'aime all the same. A very nice poem of the difficulty of explaining this feeling without being overly dramatic or too common.
May 9th, 2025 04:17
Can\'t Write so sad I am
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and sad write around the deteriorating of there mental wellbeing, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 07:55
Poetic Licence said:
A dark and sad write around the deteriorating of there mental wellbeing, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 07:55
Lying About Your Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting poem of mental state. Most unusual and gives the feel of falling in with the author
May 4th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting poem of mental state. Most unusual and gives the feel of falling in with the author
May 4th, 2025 14:38
Can\'t Write so sad I am
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about not being up to normal and getting worse. Dark and sad. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2025 19:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about not being up to normal and getting worse. Dark and sad. Nicely written
May 2nd, 2025 19:52
You Can\'t Believe
sorenbarrett said:
Marriage can be seen as such. Colorfully worded. Very nice
April 28th, 2025 20:52
sorenbarrett said:
Marriage can be seen as such. Colorfully worded. Very nice
April 28th, 2025 20:52
Butterfly Needle
sorenbarrett said:
Sucked dry. This is the feeling that I get. The last step before they fill you with formaldehyde embalming the body before burial. Good read
April 27th, 2025 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
Sucked dry. This is the feeling that I get. The last step before they fill you with formaldehyde embalming the body before burial. Good read
April 27th, 2025 18:38
Pain Management
sorenbarrett said:
Pain such a fearsome adversary and yet undefeated. Under the guise of a friend to tell us when things are dangerous it remains as an enemy of both day and night. A lovely write
April 26th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
Pain such a fearsome adversary and yet undefeated. Under the guise of a friend to tell us when things are dangerous it remains as an enemy of both day and night. A lovely write
April 26th, 2025 09:19
Ripping Skin Off The Bone
sorenbarrett said:
Violence, pain, no hope is evident in this poem. It is graphic and full of imagery. A most desperate feeling in the read. Well written
April 25th, 2025 15:38
sorenbarrett said:
Violence, pain, no hope is evident in this poem. It is graphic and full of imagery. A most desperate feeling in the read. Well written
April 25th, 2025 15:38
Inner Peace
sorenbarrett said:
I take this poem to say that in order to smile and be really happy one has to feel it from inside oneself. A true and great message
April 21st, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
I take this poem to say that in order to smile and be really happy one has to feel it from inside oneself. A true and great message
April 21st, 2025 15:24
Scared To Say
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of a person that is not all he appears to be. He hides problems that erupt from time to time. People are warry of him because of his history and he is on watch with fear and belief that it will happen again. Do prophesies fulfill themselves? Nicely written
April 20th, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of a person that is not all he appears to be. He hides problems that erupt from time to time. People are warry of him because of his history and he is on watch with fear and belief that it will happen again. Do prophesies fulfill themselves? Nicely written
April 20th, 2025 09:14
FreeFall
rrodriguez said:
I won\'t pull the plug. I\'ll wake you up. You\'re grounded, my friend. Nicely done!
April 19th, 2025 13:56
rrodriguez said:
I won\'t pull the plug. I\'ll wake you up. You\'re grounded, my friend. Nicely done!
April 19th, 2025 13:56
Was It Supposed To Hurt
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness and sadness felt a good write
April 19th, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
Loneliness and sadness felt a good write
April 19th, 2025 13:28
FreeFall
sorenbarrett said:
Low expectations and darkness voiced in this poem. Nicely written.
April 18th, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
Low expectations and darkness voiced in this poem. Nicely written.
April 18th, 2025 18:36
Self Beating
rrodriguez said:
The poem is nicely written, but its message is sad. Thank you for sharing. Stay in touch.
April 17th, 2025 21:02
rrodriguez said:
The poem is nicely written, but its message is sad. Thank you for sharing. Stay in touch.
April 17th, 2025 21:02
Self Beating
Poetic Licence said:
A dark but powerful and raw write of self harming, whether this be physically or mentally, well expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 14:26
Poetic Licence said:
A dark but powerful and raw write of self harming, whether this be physically or mentally, well expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 14:26
Self Beating
sorenbarrett said:
This is a hard read. We all self abuse in some ways mentally, or even verbally. A powerful and dark read
April 17th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
This is a hard read. We all self abuse in some ways mentally, or even verbally. A powerful and dark read
April 17th, 2025 13:13
I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
eugene290390 said:
So, my name is Eugene S (not a pseudonym)...are you channeling me, lol? You got some of the details right...I\'m older, discovered Ren a little over 2 years ago...on April 1, 2023 after repeatedly ignoring youtube enticements ...and I also write poetry at times (but, like Franz K, much of it has been destroyed or forgotten). I participate in some Ren fan groups (and run the main one on reddit r/ren...so people have been thinking that \"I am you, you are me, you are I, I am we\", to coin a phrase...
April 16th, 2025 00:31
eugene290390 said:
So, my name is Eugene S (not a pseudonym)...are you channeling me, lol? You got some of the details right...I\'m older, discovered Ren a little over 2 years ago...on April 1, 2023 after repeatedly ignoring youtube enticements ...and I also write poetry at times (but, like Franz K, much of it has been destroyed or forgotten). I participate in some Ren fan groups (and run the main one on reddit r/ren...so people have been thinking that \"I am you, you are me, you are I, I am we\", to coin a phrase...
April 16th, 2025 00:31
A Dark Place
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety climbed into panic in this poem that is as tense as the E string on a violin. Well worded it conveys its message well
April 15th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Anxiety climbed into panic in this poem that is as tense as the E string on a violin. Well worded it conveys its message well
April 15th, 2025 04:14
A Dark Place
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Sometimes it is not easy to be in the dark or in a dark period of our life, a haunting tale
April 15th, 2025 02:34
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Sometimes it is not easy to be in the dark or in a dark period of our life, a haunting tale
April 15th, 2025 02:34
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