Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Emotional On Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Like building flames the continual rhyme in this poem burns through it. Nicely done
August 29th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Like building flames the continual rhyme in this poem burns through it. Nicely done
August 29th, 2026 04:07
I’m Titled All Out
sorenbarrett said:
There is quite the string of rhyme in this write that flows as free thought from beginning to end. Lovely
August 28th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
There is quite the string of rhyme in this write that flows as free thought from beginning to end. Lovely
August 28th, 2026 04:32
Drop The Act
sorenbarrett said:
Be who one is, is the message that I get from this write. Nicely framed it tells it clearly. Well done
August 27th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Be who one is, is the message that I get from this write. Nicely framed it tells it clearly. Well done
August 27th, 2026 04:26
Please Hold My Hand
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of companionship gives strength in this lovely write. Well done Anthony
August 26th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of companionship gives strength in this lovely write. Well done Anthony
August 26th, 2026 04:03
Sorry This Is Not A Game
sorenbarrett said:
A warning given in this poem where things are not a game. Nicely done Anthony
August 25th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A warning given in this poem where things are not a game. Nicely done Anthony
August 25th, 2026 04:48
I’m A Writer Not A Reader
sorenbarrett said:
We each have our roles and I hear this one is to write and not read.
August 24th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
We each have our roles and I hear this one is to write and not read.
August 24th, 2026 04:30
I Love You Today Tomorrow Forever
sorenbarrett said:
The merging of rhyme with meaning in this short well metered poem makes for a fave
August 23rd, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
The merging of rhyme with meaning in this short well metered poem makes for a fave
August 23rd, 2026 04:32
Ember
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships burn you down and it appears that this one did just that. Well written
August 22nd, 2026 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships burn you down and it appears that this one did just that. Well written
August 22nd, 2026 05:53
Choose And Use Your Weapon Wisely
sorenbarrett said:
I love this short line repetitive rhyme style for this write it emphasizes the message and gives a quick feel to the poem. Well done Anthony
August 21st, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love this short line repetitive rhyme style for this write it emphasizes the message and gives a quick feel to the poem. Well done Anthony
August 21st, 2026 04:30
Silence Words Action
sorenbarrett said:
Parts of speech personified gave this write life and like Frankenstein sewn together from dead body parts this write was given life in the same fashion. Well done my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Parts of speech personified gave this write life and like Frankenstein sewn together from dead body parts this write was given life in the same fashion. Well done my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:45
They’re In Love: The Killer And The Victim
sorenbarrett said:
The lives of killer and victim intertwined in this poem. Nicely written in good rhyme and rapid cadence
August 19th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
The lives of killer and victim intertwined in this poem. Nicely written in good rhyme and rapid cadence
August 19th, 2026 04:15
Slang
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme in short lines leads the reader toward the end like sliding down a rope. Nicely done Anthony
August 18th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme in short lines leads the reader toward the end like sliding down a rope. Nicely done Anthony
August 18th, 2026 04:33
One Month Married My Love
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet, touching and a proclamation of love. A pledge of loyalty and fidelity till the end. A powerful statement in poetic form with rhyme. Nicely said Anthony.
August 17th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet, touching and a proclamation of love. A pledge of loyalty and fidelity till the end. A powerful statement in poetic form with rhyme. Nicely said Anthony.
August 17th, 2026 04:26
One Month Married My Love
Tasha Green said:
One month declaration of love and counting. A lifetime of memories still to create. To cherish every moment and appreciate the highs and lows. Marriage is not easy both must put in the work. A love that is worth the time and effort only come once in a lifetime.
August 17th, 2026 04:06
Tasha Green said:
One month declaration of love and counting. A lifetime of memories still to create. To cherish every moment and appreciate the highs and lows. Marriage is not easy both must put in the work. A love that is worth the time and effort only come once in a lifetime.
August 17th, 2026 04:06
Ransom What Does It Cost To Get My Heart Back
sorenbarrett said:
Anthony you have joined some most interesting word combinations to make for a haunting although somewhat dark write. Nicely done my friend a fave
August 16th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Anthony you have joined some most interesting word combinations to make for a haunting although somewhat dark write. Nicely done my friend a fave
August 16th, 2026 04:44
Cognitive Fog
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely expressed this confusion and interference in the mind. Well done Anthony
August 15th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely expressed this confusion and interference in the mind. Well done Anthony
August 15th, 2026 04:02
I Can’t Be Without You
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry ghosts with us and this poem reinforces their strength and power changing all around us. Nicely done Anthony
August 14th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry ghosts with us and this poem reinforces their strength and power changing all around us. Nicely done Anthony
August 14th, 2026 04:20
I Think I Found The Exit Sign
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a description of memory itself a maze at times with distortions a glue that will not let go often distorting and darkening the truth. Nicely written my friend
August 13th, 2026 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
This seems to me a description of memory itself a maze at times with distortions a glue that will not let go often distorting and darkening the truth. Nicely written my friend
August 13th, 2026 04:17
O God I Need You Now
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a plea for strength and courage and calls out to a higher power for that which it needs. Well written it flows well with an ebb and flow in its rhythm. Nicely done Anthony
August 12th, 2026 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a plea for strength and courage and calls out to a higher power for that which it needs. Well written it flows well with an ebb and flow in its rhythm. Nicely done Anthony
August 12th, 2026 03:31
The Closet
Thomas W Case said:
This is a tight little nightmare where ordinary objects slowly turn hostile, and the short lines keep the tension damn claustrophobic. The ending works especially well—the idea that every rhyme is a thread makes the poem itself feel like the trap.
August 11th, 2026 06:56
Thomas W Case said:
This is a tight little nightmare where ordinary objects slowly turn hostile, and the short lines keep the tension damn claustrophobic. The ending works especially well—the idea that every rhyme is a thread makes the poem itself feel like the trap.
August 11th, 2026 06:56
The Closet
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem wonderfully creates a strong sense of claustrophobia, mystery, and psychological fear.
August 11th, 2026 04:13
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem wonderfully creates a strong sense of claustrophobia, mystery, and psychological fear.
August 11th, 2026 04:13
The Closet
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme that tells its tale in this poem. Nicely done
August 11th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme that tells its tale in this poem. Nicely done
August 11th, 2026 04:04
It’s Time To Die
sorenbarrett said:
A winding journey in this short lined poem of rhyme. Nicely written it ends in the divine. Well done
August 10th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
A winding journey in this short lined poem of rhyme. Nicely written it ends in the divine. Well done
August 10th, 2026 04:15
I Love You This Much
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of the vastness and reaches of love. Well done
August 9th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of the vastness and reaches of love. Well done
August 9th, 2026 04:24
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