Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
What Do I Mean Something Or Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Anthony and those memories after a while turn to ghosts as well but ghosts are spirits that haunt and that may be enough. Good write my friend
October 29th, 2026 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Well written Anthony and those memories after a while turn to ghosts as well but ghosts are spirits that haunt and that may be enough. Good write my friend
October 29th, 2026 04:56
I Lost My Glasses
Jabberwocky said:
Ha ha, as a fellow glasses loser...and house keys misplacer... and careless hat placer...I can empathise. Really nice write. Cheers
October 28th, 2026 08:19
Jabberwocky said:
Ha ha, as a fellow glasses loser...and house keys misplacer... and careless hat placer...I can empathise. Really nice write. Cheers
October 28th, 2026 08:19
I Lost My Glasses
sorenbarrett said:
A fun search Anthony where I expected you to find them on your head not bed. Loved it. It flowed well with the short lines and rhyme.
October 28th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
A fun search Anthony where I expected you to find them on your head not bed. Loved it. It flowed well with the short lines and rhyme.
October 28th, 2026 04:24
Thank You God For Another Year
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and thanksgiving to a higher power. Nicely written Anthony
October 27th, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of gratitude and thanksgiving to a higher power. Nicely written Anthony
October 27th, 2026 04:31
The Day Before
Novaselic said:
“The wind blew hard
Across the yard
Without regard
Leaving scars
Up climbed hope
Down slipped rope
Hard to cope
When dreams don\'t float”
This is one of my favorite stanza from the poem. Wonderful poem 😊
October 26th, 2026 10:22
Novaselic said:
“The wind blew hard
Across the yard
Without regard
Leaving scars
Up climbed hope
Down slipped rope
Hard to cope
When dreams don\'t float”
This is one of my favorite stanza from the poem. Wonderful poem 😊
October 26th, 2026 10:22
The Day Before
sorenbarrett said:
In sequential mono rhyme this poem unfolded a story that ends in what I felt the most catching segment in the last stanza:
\"Morning waited
Quiet and still
While the world stood
On the hill\"
Nicely done Anthony
October 26th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
In sequential mono rhyme this poem unfolded a story that ends in what I felt the most catching segment in the last stanza:
\"Morning waited
Quiet and still
While the world stood
On the hill\"
Nicely done Anthony
October 26th, 2026 04:15
The Attack On My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Anthony and nicely executed. All heart attacks don\'t need to be bad.
October 25th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Anthony and nicely executed. All heart attacks don\'t need to be bad.
October 25th, 2026 04:11
Just Forget It
sorenbarrett said:
I love the flow and the downward spiral of letting something go to be told at the end not to forget. Well done Anthony
October 24th, 2026 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
I love the flow and the downward spiral of letting something go to be told at the end not to forget. Well done Anthony
October 24th, 2026 05:34
It\'s Me Not AI
sorenbarrett said:
There was a different but most definite beat and meter to this poem and its claim to be oneself not false or fake made it most meaningful. I loved it a fave Anthony
October 23rd, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
There was a different but most definite beat and meter to this poem and its claim to be oneself not false or fake made it most meaningful. I loved it a fave Anthony
October 23rd, 2026 04:47
Warning Spaces
sorenbarrett said:
I love the slippery rhyme that pulls one along this narrow path (short lines). It creates its own rhythm that feels like a water slide slick and smooth all the way to the end. Very nice
October 22nd, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
I love the slippery rhyme that pulls one along this narrow path (short lines). It creates its own rhythm that feels like a water slide slick and smooth all the way to the end. Very nice
October 22nd, 2026 04:25
Love Forever
sorenbarrett said:
There is a charm in the sound of the rhyme in this poem stanzas like:
\"No chain can drain
No tide divide
No grave can hide
What lives inside\"
Make more sense to the ear than the brain and whole last portion of this poem with its weaving of rhyme is hypnotic and enchanting. Nicely done Anthony
October 21st, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
There is a charm in the sound of the rhyme in this poem stanzas like:
\"No chain can drain
No tide divide
No grave can hide
What lives inside\"
Make more sense to the ear than the brain and whole last portion of this poem with its weaving of rhyme is hypnotic and enchanting. Nicely done Anthony
October 21st, 2026 04:01
A Good Title A Bad Title
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree Anthony a title can make or break a poem, story or film. Nicely written my friend
October 20th, 2026 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
I would have to agree Anthony a title can make or break a poem, story or film. Nicely written my friend
October 20th, 2026 05:10
My Heart Is Blind
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful message put poetically my friend. Lovely a fave
October 19th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful message put poetically my friend. Lovely a fave
October 19th, 2026 04:16
There\'s Always A Reason
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Anthony now read twice and understood better. Every thing knows its place and purpose. Well done and a fave
October 17th, 2026 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Anthony now read twice and understood better. Every thing knows its place and purpose. Well done and a fave
October 17th, 2026 13:24
Learn The Rules
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly constructed this poem preaches a marvelous message of wisdom. Knowing the law and understanding its purpose allows for breaking the rules when called for. Every artist knows this as should every judge. Well written
October 16th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Cleverly constructed this poem preaches a marvelous message of wisdom. Knowing the law and understanding its purpose allows for breaking the rules when called for. Every artist knows this as should every judge. Well written
October 16th, 2026 04:10
If You Ever Wonder
sorenbarrett said:
With lemons making lemonade so to speak this poem turns adversity into an exercise of strength. Nicely worded my friend.
October 15th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
With lemons making lemonade so to speak this poem turns adversity into an exercise of strength. Nicely worded my friend.
October 15th, 2026 04:29
Life No Rewinding Or Fast Forwarding
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Anthony about life itself and its continual march forward
October 14th, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Anthony about life itself and its continual march forward
October 14th, 2026 04:51
Broken Window
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the personification used here and the rhyme and meter it flowed well my friend.
October 13th, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the personification used here and the rhyme and meter it flowed well my friend.
October 13th, 2026 04:37
Missing Home
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries nostalgia, melancholic its sadness is also warm and familiar. A most lovely write Anthony and a fave
October 12th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries nostalgia, melancholic its sadness is also warm and familiar. A most lovely write Anthony and a fave
October 12th, 2026 04:06
Don\'t Be Surprised
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive take on the unexpected. Nicely done Anthony
October 11th, 2026 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive take on the unexpected. Nicely done Anthony
October 11th, 2026 04:47
These Are Not Just Words
sorenbarrett said:
How often I write something down searching for the right word to express the feeling and not finding it. There must be words that are more than words and sometimes they are found but it is so rare. Those words move to tears and shake the earth. Nicely done
October 10th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
How often I write something down searching for the right word to express the feeling and not finding it. There must be words that are more than words and sometimes they are found but it is so rare. Those words move to tears and shake the earth. Nicely done
October 10th, 2026 04:03
Giving My All
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow of this poem caused by the cadence of the meter due to the rhyme and short lines. It marched on as if in a soldiers file. Well done as the poem itself said.
October 9th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the flow of this poem caused by the cadence of the meter due to the rhyme and short lines. It marched on as if in a soldiers file. Well done as the poem itself said.
October 9th, 2026 04:08
I Chicken Out
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one Anthony it put out there the feeling that many of us have about this world and its challenges where we chicken out sometimes at the last minute. Nicely written
October 8th, 2026 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one Anthony it put out there the feeling that many of us have about this world and its challenges where we chicken out sometimes at the last minute. Nicely written
October 8th, 2026 05:09
Burning Desire
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of desire seemed to burn bright in this poem Anthony. Nicely done
October 7th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of desire seemed to burn bright in this poem Anthony. Nicely done
October 7th, 2026 03:56
Why You Hit Me With A Lie
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for honesty. Sadness in cuts that hurt but one needs to know the reason for such injury to prevent future harm and be able to clean the wound so it can heal. Very nicely written
October 6th, 2026 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic plea for honesty. Sadness in cuts that hurt but one needs to know the reason for such injury to prevent future harm and be able to clean the wound so it can heal. Very nicely written
October 6th, 2026 05:06
You Dirty Rat
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this is the reverse of a woman scorned.
The gentle sex, don\'t believe it.
October 5th, 2026 05:04
Paul Bell said:
I suppose this is the reverse of a woman scorned.
The gentle sex, don\'t believe it.
October 5th, 2026 05:04
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