Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
My Big Sis
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beat in this meter combined with the rhyme and short lines that drive this poem forward with a beat. A lovely and positive feel to this tribute Anthony and a fave
September 4th, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
There is a beat in this meter combined with the rhyme and short lines that drive this poem forward with a beat. A lovely and positive feel to this tribute Anthony and a fave
September 4th, 2026 03:48
Drop The Act
NafisaSB said:
agree with you here - prefer the straightforward always, even if it\'s a bitter pill to swallow
September 4th, 2026 02:38
NafisaSB said:
agree with you here - prefer the straightforward always, even if it\'s a bitter pill to swallow
September 4th, 2026 02:38
Let’s Have Brunch
sorenbarrett said:
Food always an offering of peace, friendship and love it becomes seductive and even sexual. Here it is a companion of love and memories with one that is loved. Nicely written Anthony
September 3rd, 2026 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Food always an offering of peace, friendship and love it becomes seductive and even sexual. Here it is a companion of love and memories with one that is loved. Nicely written Anthony
September 3rd, 2026 05:22
Good Morning Good Night
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a floating feel that soars and drifts through the ears. Nicely done
September 2nd, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a floating feel that soars and drifts through the ears. Nicely done
September 2nd, 2026 04:21
The Hidden Math Behind Being Alive
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like this a lot - interesting analogy of Life calculating each moment that sums up our existence and balances our actions.
September 1st, 2026 06:36
Michael A. McGuire said:
I like this a lot - interesting analogy of Life calculating each moment that sums up our existence and balances our actions.
September 1st, 2026 06:36
Love Hard
sorenbarrett said:
All in or stay out seems the message of this poem. Give it your all and hang on for the ride. Nicely written Anthony. My father believed in tough love.
September 1st, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
All in or stay out seems the message of this poem. Give it your all and hang on for the ride. Nicely written Anthony. My father believed in tough love.
September 1st, 2026 04:02
The Hidden Math Behind Being Alive
sorenbarrett said:
Calculated and very Newtonian even quantum chances could be calculated. A most interesting write that in its cold lack of romanticism remains poetic
August 31st, 2026 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Calculated and very Newtonian even quantum chances could be calculated. A most interesting write that in its cold lack of romanticism remains poetic
August 31st, 2026 04:51
The Door To My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme carries one through this poem as if a never ending beating heart. Well written my friend
August 30th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme carries one through this poem as if a never ending beating heart. Well written my friend
August 30th, 2026 06:30
Emotional On Fire
sorenbarrett said:
Like building flames the continual rhyme in this poem burns through it. Nicely done
August 29th, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Like building flames the continual rhyme in this poem burns through it. Nicely done
August 29th, 2026 04:07
I’m Titled All Out
sorenbarrett said:
There is quite the string of rhyme in this write that flows as free thought from beginning to end. Lovely
August 28th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
There is quite the string of rhyme in this write that flows as free thought from beginning to end. Lovely
August 28th, 2026 04:32
Drop The Act
sorenbarrett said:
Be who one is, is the message that I get from this write. Nicely framed it tells it clearly. Well done
August 27th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Be who one is, is the message that I get from this write. Nicely framed it tells it clearly. Well done
August 27th, 2026 04:26
Please Hold My Hand
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of companionship gives strength in this lovely write. Well done Anthony
August 26th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of companionship gives strength in this lovely write. Well done Anthony
August 26th, 2026 04:03
Sorry This Is Not A Game
sorenbarrett said:
A warning given in this poem where things are not a game. Nicely done Anthony
August 25th, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A warning given in this poem where things are not a game. Nicely done Anthony
August 25th, 2026 04:48
I’m A Writer Not A Reader
sorenbarrett said:
We each have our roles and I hear this one is to write and not read.
August 24th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
We each have our roles and I hear this one is to write and not read.
August 24th, 2026 04:30
I Love You Today Tomorrow Forever
sorenbarrett said:
The merging of rhyme with meaning in this short well metered poem makes for a fave
August 23rd, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
The merging of rhyme with meaning in this short well metered poem makes for a fave
August 23rd, 2026 04:32
Ember
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships burn you down and it appears that this one did just that. Well written
August 22nd, 2026 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
Some relationships burn you down and it appears that this one did just that. Well written
August 22nd, 2026 05:53
Choose And Use Your Weapon Wisely
sorenbarrett said:
I love this short line repetitive rhyme style for this write it emphasizes the message and gives a quick feel to the poem. Well done Anthony
August 21st, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
I love this short line repetitive rhyme style for this write it emphasizes the message and gives a quick feel to the poem. Well done Anthony
August 21st, 2026 04:30
Silence Words Action
sorenbarrett said:
Parts of speech personified gave this write life and like Frankenstein sewn together from dead body parts this write was given life in the same fashion. Well done my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Parts of speech personified gave this write life and like Frankenstein sewn together from dead body parts this write was given life in the same fashion. Well done my friend
August 20th, 2026 03:45
They’re In Love: The Killer And The Victim
sorenbarrett said:
The lives of killer and victim intertwined in this poem. Nicely written in good rhyme and rapid cadence
August 19th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
The lives of killer and victim intertwined in this poem. Nicely written in good rhyme and rapid cadence
August 19th, 2026 04:15
Slang
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme in short lines leads the reader toward the end like sliding down a rope. Nicely done Anthony
August 18th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme following rhyme in short lines leads the reader toward the end like sliding down a rope. Nicely done Anthony
August 18th, 2026 04:33
One Month Married My Love
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet, touching and a proclamation of love. A pledge of loyalty and fidelity till the end. A powerful statement in poetic form with rhyme. Nicely said Anthony.
August 17th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Sweet, touching and a proclamation of love. A pledge of loyalty and fidelity till the end. A powerful statement in poetic form with rhyme. Nicely said Anthony.
August 17th, 2026 04:26
One Month Married My Love
Tasha Green said:
One month declaration of love and counting. A lifetime of memories still to create. To cherish every moment and appreciate the highs and lows. Marriage is not easy both must put in the work. A love that is worth the time and effort only come once in a lifetime.
August 17th, 2026 04:06
Tasha Green said:
One month declaration of love and counting. A lifetime of memories still to create. To cherish every moment and appreciate the highs and lows. Marriage is not easy both must put in the work. A love that is worth the time and effort only come once in a lifetime.
August 17th, 2026 04:06
Ransom What Does It Cost To Get My Heart Back
sorenbarrett said:
Anthony you have joined some most interesting word combinations to make for a haunting although somewhat dark write. Nicely done my friend a fave
August 16th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Anthony you have joined some most interesting word combinations to make for a haunting although somewhat dark write. Nicely done my friend a fave
August 16th, 2026 04:44
Cognitive Fog
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely expressed this confusion and interference in the mind. Well done Anthony
August 15th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely expressed this confusion and interference in the mind. Well done Anthony
August 15th, 2026 04:02
I Can’t Be Without You
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry ghosts with us and this poem reinforces their strength and power changing all around us. Nicely done Anthony
August 14th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry ghosts with us and this poem reinforces their strength and power changing all around us. Nicely done Anthony
August 14th, 2026 04:20
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