Comments received on poems by Hanible
Please Don\'t Enter
sorenbarrett said:
Does OSHA know of this place? Just kidding. This sounds like someone that wants their space and is giving warning to those around them to stay clear. Very nice
March 1st, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Does OSHA know of this place? Just kidding. This sounds like someone that wants their space and is giving warning to those around them to stay clear. Very nice
March 1st, 2025 05:20
These Eyes
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of end of the line, no more, a powerful and poignant write
February 28th, 2025 15:47
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of end of the line, no more, a powerful and poignant write
February 28th, 2025 15:47
These Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write of enough being enough. Well written
February 28th, 2025 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write of enough being enough. Well written
February 28th, 2025 13:29
My Love My Love
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt plea to someone, expressed well in this write
February 28th, 2025 03:17
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt plea to someone, expressed well in this write
February 28th, 2025 03:17
My Love My Love
sorenbarrett said:
It is a difficult thing to loose something. This is well expressed in this poem. Nicely written in poetic form
February 27th, 2025 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
It is a difficult thing to loose something. This is well expressed in this poem. Nicely written in poetic form
February 27th, 2025 19:32
Useless
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately we are all disposable and replaceable. This poem emphasizes the modern throw away world were even people are expendable.
February 26th, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately we are all disposable and replaceable. This poem emphasizes the modern throw away world were even people are expendable.
February 26th, 2025 14:24
Useless
Poetic Licence said:
Sense a lack of self worth and value, no one\'s broken, people are just different, nicely expressed write
February 26th, 2025 13:02
Poetic Licence said:
Sense a lack of self worth and value, no one\'s broken, people are just different, nicely expressed write
February 26th, 2025 13:02
Detained
sorenbarrett said:
This write is dark from the start and grows darker. It feels confined and with no escape. A wonderful image of entrapment is cast.
February 25th, 2025 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
This write is dark from the start and grows darker. It feels confined and with no escape. A wonderful image of entrapment is cast.
February 25th, 2025 13:57
Detained
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of being enclosed in a tiny space , the walls and life are piling on the pressure which is becoming to much, they only see death as a way out. A poignant, quite haunting and slightly dark write, well written and expressed.
February 25th, 2025 13:17
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of being enclosed in a tiny space , the walls and life are piling on the pressure which is becoming to much, they only see death as a way out. A poignant, quite haunting and slightly dark write, well written and expressed.
February 25th, 2025 13:17
So In Love I Fell
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling that someone\'s feelings over time are just as strong as they always were, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:46
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling that someone\'s feelings over time are just as strong as they always were, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:46
So In Love I Fell
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with a feeling of a history, a sense of past commitment. Of a timeless love. Nicely written
February 25th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with a feeling of a history, a sense of past commitment. Of a timeless love. Nicely written
February 25th, 2025 03:39
Running Dry
NafisaSB said:
here\'s hoping the love is reignited, and rekindled
February 24th, 2025 00:19
NafisaSB said:
here\'s hoping the love is reignited, and rekindled
February 24th, 2025 00:19
Running Dry
sorenbarrett said:
A symptom too often seen. When love dries up it is hard to bring it back. A touching read
February 23rd, 2025 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
A symptom too often seen. When love dries up it is hard to bring it back. A touching read
February 23rd, 2025 16:22
Running Dry
Poetic Licence said:
Searching for a Way to ignite a dying relationship, nicely expressed in this read
February 23rd, 2025 15:37
Poetic Licence said:
Searching for a Way to ignite a dying relationship, nicely expressed in this read
February 23rd, 2025 15:37
Medicine Medicine Medicine
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem bringing attention to how pharmaceutically oriented our society is and how dependent we are on drugs. We call it medicine because those are the ones condoned by society and we are told by someone in authority that we not only could but should take. Poignant write
February 22nd, 2025 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem bringing attention to how pharmaceutically oriented our society is and how dependent we are on drugs. We call it medicine because those are the ones condoned by society and we are told by someone in authority that we not only could but should take. Poignant write
February 22nd, 2025 13:33
How To Catch A Suicider
Poetic Licence said:
I think there is a message in here that you should never get in deeper than you can handle,a powerful write
February 21st, 2025 09:49
Poetic Licence said:
I think there is a message in here that you should never get in deeper than you can handle,a powerful write
February 21st, 2025 09:49
How To Catch A Suicider
sorenbarrett said:
Empathy requires experience and I hear this in this poem. A deep write of psychological spider webs that one may get caught in. Lovely
February 21st, 2025 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
Empathy requires experience and I hear this in this poem. A deep write of psychological spider webs that one may get caught in. Lovely
February 21st, 2025 08:58
How To Catch A Suicider
2781 said:
In my experience, you don\'t see it coming. Those that did it didn\'t talk about it.
But maybe it\'s best they didn\'t?
February 21st, 2025 08:33
2781 said:
In my experience, you don\'t see it coming. Those that did it didn\'t talk about it.
But maybe it\'s best they didn\'t?
February 21st, 2025 08:33
Tears Stories
Poetic Licence said:
Do we keep in the good or bad ones, which ones do we let go, well written, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 11:27
Poetic Licence said:
Do we keep in the good or bad ones, which ones do we let go, well written, enjoyed the read
February 20th, 2025 11:27
Tears Stories
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words a decision as to whether we push out the sad or the happy thoughts. A lovely poem
February 20th, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words a decision as to whether we push out the sad or the happy thoughts. A lovely poem
February 20th, 2025 08:36
My Mighty 13
Poetic Licence said:
That is written in such a simple format it is brilliant, the last line say\'s it all, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 08:51
Poetic Licence said:
That is written in such a simple format it is brilliant, the last line say\'s it all, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 08:51
My Mighty 13
sorenbarrett said:
Whether neologisms , skating or rap it all comes to the same fun and poetry. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Whether neologisms , skating or rap it all comes to the same fun and poetry. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 08:49
My Mighty 13
Cassie58 said:
Lucky 13. I love you says so much. That is poetry in its simplest form. Nice.
February 19th, 2025 07:58
Cassie58 said:
Lucky 13. I love you says so much. That is poetry in its simplest form. Nice.
February 19th, 2025 07:58
Staying Alone
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of the ghostly here and the last line is haunting. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of the ghostly here and the last line is haunting. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 05:50
Staying Alone
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of numbness and emptiness inside, well expressed write
February 18th, 2025 05:18
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling of numbness and emptiness inside, well expressed write
February 18th, 2025 05:18
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