Comments received on poems by Hanible
Love Love Love
sorenbarrett said:
The wording is wonderful in this poem with multiple possibilities. Love the ending it is so true the treasure lies within
March 17th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
The wording is wonderful in this poem with multiple possibilities. Love the ending it is so true the treasure lies within
March 17th, 2025 10:49
Bang Bang Boom
sorenbarrett said:
Death and destruction in this poem. Quite to the point
March 15th, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Death and destruction in this poem. Quite to the point
March 15th, 2025 11:42
A Dead Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling dead and destroyed. A most interesting write
March 14th, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feeling dead and destroyed. A most interesting write
March 14th, 2025 19:00
Set Free
Poetic Licence said:
A huge shout out of hurt and pain in every pore of the body, powerful write
March 13th, 2025 07:11
Poetic Licence said:
A huge shout out of hurt and pain in every pore of the body, powerful write
March 13th, 2025 07:11
Set Free
sorenbarrett said:
Lashing out in pain this poem tells of being wounded in love. It calls out in anguish.
March 13th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Lashing out in pain this poem tells of being wounded in love. It calls out in anguish.
March 13th, 2025 06:41
I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title
Poetic Licence said:
I like the style of your writing, accurate bullet points, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
I like the style of your writing, accurate bullet points, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 02:57
I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation and enough emotion bottled up to fizz over the top. Well done
March 10th, 2025 13:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation and enough emotion bottled up to fizz over the top. Well done
March 10th, 2025 13:46
I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
arqios said:
Very powerful but subtle as well๐๐ป๐
March 9th, 2025 07:06
arqios said:
Very powerful but subtle as well๐๐ป๐
March 9th, 2025 07:06
I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor for a relationship gone off the tracks or at least on hold. Short but to the point and disturbing to the passengers. Well spoken
March 9th, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor for a relationship gone off the tracks or at least on hold. Short but to the point and disturbing to the passengers. Well spoken
March 9th, 2025 04:11
Her Puppet His Puppet
Poetic Licence said:
Being under emotional control being denied their own freedom, a powerful form of abuse but very hard to break away from, well written piece
March 7th, 2025 14:00
Poetic Licence said:
Being under emotional control being denied their own freedom, a powerful form of abuse but very hard to break away from, well written piece
March 7th, 2025 14:00
Her Puppet His Puppet
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of control and manipulation that leaves one without independence or freedom. It speaks of even subtle control in relationships. Well done
March 7th, 2025 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of control and manipulation that leaves one without independence or freedom. It speaks of even subtle control in relationships. Well done
March 7th, 2025 12:03
Don\'t Leave
Poetic Licence said:
The end of a relationship, but not wanting to make the decision they know is for the best, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 08:06
Poetic Licence said:
The end of a relationship, but not wanting to make the decision they know is for the best, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 08:06
Don\'t Leave
sorenbarrett said:
\"Punching bags put into some body bags\" a brilliant and most poetic line. This poem carries with it a feeling of sadness and recognition that a relationship has seen better days. Very nicely written
March 6th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
\"Punching bags put into some body bags\" a brilliant and most poetic line. This poem carries with it a feeling of sadness and recognition that a relationship has seen better days. Very nicely written
March 6th, 2025 04:33
Words Speaks For Itself
Poetic Licence said:
A wise write, we must listen to all words and sides before we judge or form opinions, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:14
Poetic Licence said:
A wise write, we must listen to all words and sides before we judge or form opinions, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:14
Words Speaks For Itself
sorenbarrett said:
One must have a full mind to have an open one. Listen, learn refine decide. A poem of wisdom
March 5th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
One must have a full mind to have an open one. Listen, learn refine decide. A poem of wisdom
March 5th, 2025 06:31
Shoot The Messenger
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful yet true, wonderful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 11:09
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful yet true, wonderful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 11:09
Shoot The Messenger
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! you have captured the moment in this poem that grabs you like a hand around the throat. It is powerful and true that is what makes it strong. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! you have captured the moment in this poem that grabs you like a hand around the throat. It is powerful and true that is what makes it strong. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 09:16
The Painting Called Mystery
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting is half the journey in art. Whether the right shadow in painting, the right emotion in poetry, or the right thought for a novel waiting is part of the sport. And the waiting for a response from someone that sees it? Lovely write
March 3rd, 2025 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting is half the journey in art. Whether the right shadow in painting, the right emotion in poetry, or the right thought for a novel waiting is part of the sport. And the waiting for a response from someone that sees it? Lovely write
March 3rd, 2025 05:59
So Pathetic
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write and i think the message is clearly delivered in this excellent write
March 2nd, 2025 11:52
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write and i think the message is clearly delivered in this excellent write
March 2nd, 2025 11:52
So Pathetic
Bird In Red said:
Your work is amazing to say the least. It\'s the second poem I\'ve read by you and I love it.
March 2nd, 2025 09:21
Bird In Red said:
Your work is amazing to say the least. It\'s the second poem I\'ve read by you and I love it.
March 2nd, 2025 09:21
So Pathetic
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with good word choice to send its message. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with good word choice to send its message. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 09:21
Please Don\'t Enter
Bird In Red said:
This poem is so well written! I love the power in that warning.
March 1st, 2025 13:30
Bird In Red said:
This poem is so well written! I love the power in that warning.
March 1st, 2025 13:30
Please Don\'t Enter
Poetic Licence said:
Although they know they need to talk, there not ready as this write expresses well
March 1st, 2025 06:31
Poetic Licence said:
Although they know they need to talk, there not ready as this write expresses well
March 1st, 2025 06:31
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