Comments received on poems by Hanible



Love Love Love
sorenbarrett said:

The wording is wonderful in this poem with multiple possibilities. Love the ending it is so true the treasure lies within

March 17th, 2025 10:49

Bang Bang Boom
sorenbarrett said:

Death and destruction in this poem. Quite to the point

March 15th, 2025 11:42

A Dead Rose
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of feeling dead and destroyed. A most interesting write

March 14th, 2025 19:00

Happy Go
Caring dove said:

Very nice ))

March 14th, 2025 17:28

Set Free
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 13th, 2025 09:22

Set Free
Poetic Licence said:

A huge shout out of hurt and pain in every pore of the body, powerful write

March 13th, 2025 07:11

Set Free
sorenbarrett said:

Lashing out in pain this poem tells of being wounded in love. It calls out in anguish.

March 13th, 2025 06:41

Happy Go
Poetic Licence said:

Appreciative of his loved one, nicely expressed

March 11th, 2025 12:40

Happy Go
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 11th, 2025 12:28

I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title
Poetic Licence said:

I like the style of your writing, accurate bullet points, enjoyed the read

March 11th, 2025 02:57

I Can\'t Cage You Up With A Title
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of desperation and enough emotion bottled up to fizz over the top. Well done

March 10th, 2025 13:46

I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
arqios said:

Very powerful but subtle as well๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

March 9th, 2025 07:06

I\'m Not Going To Cry About It Sorry I Lied
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphor for a relationship gone off the tracks or at least on hold. Short but to the point and disturbing to the passengers. Well spoken

March 9th, 2025 04:11

A Dying Need To Die
sorenbarrett said:

Touching, lovely, hopeful. Very nice

March 8th, 2025 19:34

Her Puppet His Puppet
Poetic Licence said:

Being under emotional control being denied their own freedom, a powerful form of abuse but very hard to break away from, well written piece

March 7th, 2025 14:00

Her Puppet His Puppet
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of control and manipulation that leaves one without independence or freedom. It speaks of even subtle control in relationships. Well done

March 7th, 2025 12:03

Don\'t Leave
Tony36 said:

BRAVO

March 6th, 2025 10:44

Don\'t Leave
Poetic Licence said:

The end of a relationship, but not wanting to make the decision they know is for the best, enjoyed the read

March 6th, 2025 08:06

Don\'t Leave
sorenbarrett said:

\"Punching bags put into some body bags\" a brilliant and most poetic line. This poem carries with it a feeling of sadness and recognition that a relationship has seen better days. Very nicely written

March 6th, 2025 04:33

Words Speaks For Itself
Poetic Licence said:

A wise write, we must listen to all words and sides before we judge or form opinions, enjoyed the read

March 5th, 2025 07:14

Words Speaks For Itself
sorenbarrett said:

One must have a full mind to have an open one. Listen, learn refine decide. A poem of wisdom

March 5th, 2025 06:31

Shoot The Messenger
Poetic Licence said:

Powerful yet true, wonderful piece of writing, enjoyed the read

March 4th, 2025 11:09

Shoot The Messenger
Tony36 said:

WOW

March 4th, 2025 10:38

Shoot The Messenger
sorenbarrett said:

Wow! you have captured the moment in this poem that grabs you like a hand around the throat. It is powerful and true that is what makes it strong. Lovely

March 4th, 2025 09:16

The Painting Called Mystery
sorenbarrett said:

Waiting is half the journey in art. Whether the right shadow in painting, the right emotion in poetry, or the right thought for a novel waiting is part of the sport. And the waiting for a response from someone that sees it? Lovely write

March 3rd, 2025 05:59

So Pathetic
Poetic Licence said:

A powerful write and i think the message is clearly delivered in this excellent write

March 2nd, 2025 11:52

So Pathetic
Bird In Red said:

Your work is amazing to say the least. It\'s the second poem I\'ve read by you and I love it.

March 2nd, 2025 09:21

So Pathetic
sorenbarrett said:

Clever with good word choice to send its message. Nicely done

March 2nd, 2025 09:21

Please Don\'t Enter
Bird In Red said:

This poem is so well written! I love the power in that warning.

March 1st, 2025 13:30

Please Don\'t Enter
Poetic Licence said:

Although they know they need to talk, there not ready as this write expresses well

March 1st, 2025 06:31

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