Comments received on poems by Hanible
Don\'t Leave
Poetic Licence said:
The end of a relationship, but not wanting to make the decision they know is for the best, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 08:06
Poetic Licence said:
The end of a relationship, but not wanting to make the decision they know is for the best, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 08:06
Don\'t Leave
sorenbarrett said:
\"Punching bags put into some body bags\" a brilliant and most poetic line. This poem carries with it a feeling of sadness and recognition that a relationship has seen better days. Very nicely written
March 6th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
\"Punching bags put into some body bags\" a brilliant and most poetic line. This poem carries with it a feeling of sadness and recognition that a relationship has seen better days. Very nicely written
March 6th, 2025 04:33
Words Speaks For Itself
Poetic Licence said:
A wise write, we must listen to all words and sides before we judge or form opinions, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:14
Poetic Licence said:
A wise write, we must listen to all words and sides before we judge or form opinions, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 07:14
Words Speaks For Itself
sorenbarrett said:
One must have a full mind to have an open one. Listen, learn refine decide. A poem of wisdom
March 5th, 2025 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
One must have a full mind to have an open one. Listen, learn refine decide. A poem of wisdom
March 5th, 2025 06:31
Shoot The Messenger
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful yet true, wonderful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 11:09
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful yet true, wonderful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 11:09
Shoot The Messenger
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! you have captured the moment in this poem that grabs you like a hand around the throat. It is powerful and true that is what makes it strong. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! you have captured the moment in this poem that grabs you like a hand around the throat. It is powerful and true that is what makes it strong. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 09:16
The Painting Called Mystery
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting is half the journey in art. Whether the right shadow in painting, the right emotion in poetry, or the right thought for a novel waiting is part of the sport. And the waiting for a response from someone that sees it? Lovely write
March 3rd, 2025 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting is half the journey in art. Whether the right shadow in painting, the right emotion in poetry, or the right thought for a novel waiting is part of the sport. And the waiting for a response from someone that sees it? Lovely write
March 3rd, 2025 05:59
So Pathetic
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write and i think the message is clearly delivered in this excellent write
March 2nd, 2025 11:52
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write and i think the message is clearly delivered in this excellent write
March 2nd, 2025 11:52
So Pathetic
Bird In Red said:
Your work is amazing to say the least. It\'s the second poem I\'ve read by you and I love it.
March 2nd, 2025 09:21
Bird In Red said:
Your work is amazing to say the least. It\'s the second poem I\'ve read by you and I love it.
March 2nd, 2025 09:21
So Pathetic
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with good word choice to send its message. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
Clever with good word choice to send its message. Nicely done
March 2nd, 2025 09:21
Please Don\'t Enter
Bird In Red said:
This poem is so well written! I love the power in that warning.
March 1st, 2025 13:30
Bird In Red said:
This poem is so well written! I love the power in that warning.
March 1st, 2025 13:30
Please Don\'t Enter
Poetic Licence said:
Although they know they need to talk, there not ready as this write expresses well
March 1st, 2025 06:31
Poetic Licence said:
Although they know they need to talk, there not ready as this write expresses well
March 1st, 2025 06:31
Please Don\'t Enter
sorenbarrett said:
Does OSHA know of this place? Just kidding. This sounds like someone that wants their space and is giving warning to those around them to stay clear. Very nice
March 1st, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Does OSHA know of this place? Just kidding. This sounds like someone that wants their space and is giving warning to those around them to stay clear. Very nice
March 1st, 2025 05:20
These Eyes
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of end of the line, no more, a powerful and poignant write
February 28th, 2025 15:47
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of end of the line, no more, a powerful and poignant write
February 28th, 2025 15:47
These Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write of enough being enough. Well written
February 28th, 2025 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write of enough being enough. Well written
February 28th, 2025 13:29
My Love My Love
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt plea to someone, expressed well in this write
February 28th, 2025 03:17
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt plea to someone, expressed well in this write
February 28th, 2025 03:17
My Love My Love
sorenbarrett said:
It is a difficult thing to loose something. This is well expressed in this poem. Nicely written in poetic form
February 27th, 2025 19:32
sorenbarrett said:
It is a difficult thing to loose something. This is well expressed in this poem. Nicely written in poetic form
February 27th, 2025 19:32
Useless
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately we are all disposable and replaceable. This poem emphasizes the modern throw away world were even people are expendable.
February 26th, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately we are all disposable and replaceable. This poem emphasizes the modern throw away world were even people are expendable.
February 26th, 2025 14:24
Useless
Poetic Licence said:
Sense a lack of self worth and value, no one\'s broken, people are just different, nicely expressed write
February 26th, 2025 13:02
Poetic Licence said:
Sense a lack of self worth and value, no one\'s broken, people are just different, nicely expressed write
February 26th, 2025 13:02
Detained
sorenbarrett said:
This write is dark from the start and grows darker. It feels confined and with no escape. A wonderful image of entrapment is cast.
February 25th, 2025 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
This write is dark from the start and grows darker. It feels confined and with no escape. A wonderful image of entrapment is cast.
February 25th, 2025 13:57
Detained
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of being enclosed in a tiny space , the walls and life are piling on the pressure which is becoming to much, they only see death as a way out. A poignant, quite haunting and slightly dark write, well written and expressed.
February 25th, 2025 13:17
Poetic Licence said:
I get the sense of being enclosed in a tiny space , the walls and life are piling on the pressure which is becoming to much, they only see death as a way out. A poignant, quite haunting and slightly dark write, well written and expressed.
February 25th, 2025 13:17
So In Love I Fell
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling that someone\'s feelings over time are just as strong as they always were, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:46
Poetic Licence said:
The feeling that someone\'s feelings over time are just as strong as they always were, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:46
So In Love I Fell
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with a feeling of a history, a sense of past commitment. Of a timeless love. Nicely written
February 25th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
This poem leaves me with a feeling of a history, a sense of past commitment. Of a timeless love. Nicely written
February 25th, 2025 03:39
Running Dry
NafisaSB said:
here\'s hoping the love is reignited, and rekindled
February 24th, 2025 00:19
NafisaSB said:
here\'s hoping the love is reignited, and rekindled
February 24th, 2025 00:19
Running Dry
sorenbarrett said:
A symptom too often seen. When love dries up it is hard to bring it back. A touching read
February 23rd, 2025 16:22
sorenbarrett said:
A symptom too often seen. When love dries up it is hard to bring it back. A touching read
February 23rd, 2025 16:22
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