Comments received on poems by Anthony Hanible
Homeless Heartless
Abdullah123 said:
I like the tinge of hope at the end. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:06
Abdullah123 said:
I like the tinge of hope at the end. Well written
April 5th, 2026 16:06
Homeless Heartless
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet hopeful this poem speaks of a sense of wandering in search of a home lost and needing reconstruction from ashes no less these need to be mixes with clay and sand to make brick. Well written Anthony
April 5th, 2026 05:30
sorenbarrett said:
Sad yet hopeful this poem speaks of a sense of wandering in search of a home lost and needing reconstruction from ashes no less these need to be mixes with clay and sand to make brick. Well written Anthony
April 5th, 2026 05:30
Nine Days Awake And Counting
Demar Desu said:
Was the two Mys at the end on purpose? If it was I feel like it emphasizes… great poem nonetheless thouhh
April 4th, 2026 10:02
Demar Desu said:
Was the two Mys at the end on purpose? If it was I feel like it emphasizes… great poem nonetheless thouhh
April 4th, 2026 10:02
Nine Days Awake And Counting
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems both surreal and existential. It unspools as if it were tempered wire springing off a reel. Nicely done
April 4th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems both surreal and existential. It unspools as if it were tempered wire springing off a reel. Nicely done
April 4th, 2026 04:35
My Apprehension
sorenbarrett said:
A great write and when fear takes on form it often transforms into paranoia. A poem of haunting proportions and with a frightening scope. Nicely worded
April 3rd, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A great write and when fear takes on form it often transforms into paranoia. A poem of haunting proportions and with a frightening scope. Nicely worded
April 3rd, 2026 04:04
One Book Same Page Different Day
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor of a book as that of life with each day a page works well in this poem where life is written one page at a time. Meanings change as new is added but just enough to shift with it as well
April 2nd, 2026 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor of a book as that of life with each day a page works well in this poem where life is written one page at a time. Meanings change as new is added but just enough to shift with it as well
April 2nd, 2026 05:32
Blind Love
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded Anthony this poem in metaphor speaks of a powerful set force that guides despite blindness. Blindness a misnomer as it sees better without eyes. Nicely written
April 1st, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded Anthony this poem in metaphor speaks of a powerful set force that guides despite blindness. Blindness a misnomer as it sees better without eyes. Nicely written
April 1st, 2026 04:27
Morning Noon And Night
sorenbarrett said:
I have always been intrigued with symbols and this poem takes that to another level weaving them into poetry. It seems almost a symbol itself in its ritual like laying out of its lines and setting forth its symbols. Very nicely done
March 31st, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
I have always been intrigued with symbols and this poem takes that to another level weaving them into poetry. It seems almost a symbol itself in its ritual like laying out of its lines and setting forth its symbols. Very nicely done
March 31st, 2026 04:14
A Pool Of My Tears
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Anthony this poem calls for recognition not sadness it is a reflection itself. It feels a bit melancholy but need not be so maybe it is the nostalgia mistaken for sadness. Well done
March 30th, 2026 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Anthony this poem calls for recognition not sadness it is a reflection itself. It feels a bit melancholy but need not be so maybe it is the nostalgia mistaken for sadness. Well done
March 30th, 2026 07:03
O Love Save Me
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tender this seems the plea of a child, maybe the child in all of us, asking for someone to understand and be there. Very nicely written it calls out for affiliation.
March 29th, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and tender this seems the plea of a child, maybe the child in all of us, asking for someone to understand and be there. Very nicely written it calls out for affiliation.
March 29th, 2026 05:16
Packing My Bags
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic feel to this poem that goes beyond the images and words. It feels poetic and sounds poetic. Its meaning is melancholic and lingers. Nicely written it is a fave
March 28th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is a poetic feel to this poem that goes beyond the images and words. It feels poetic and sounds poetic. Its meaning is melancholic and lingers. Nicely written it is a fave
March 28th, 2026 04:26
1800 Help
sorenbarrett said:
Hesitation is reflected in this poem and one has to ask when does hesitation become procrastination. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Hesitation is reflected in this poem and one has to ask when does hesitation become procrastination. Nicely written
March 27th, 2026 04:27
The Baker Of The Doughnut Donut Shop
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful poem of creation. The baker god who hands out treats to those that can pay and maybe once in a while to one who can\'t. Loved the story and metaphor Anthony
March 26th, 2026 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful poem of creation. The baker god who hands out treats to those that can pay and maybe once in a while to one who can\'t. Loved the story and metaphor Anthony
March 26th, 2026 06:42
Running Mind
sorenbarrett said:
This feels mechanical and sterile a cold and heartless world where everything is matter of fact. It brings images of the book 1984 and maybe Huxley\'s Brave New World. It is metallic. Well done
March 25th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This feels mechanical and sterile a cold and heartless world where everything is matter of fact. It brings images of the book 1984 and maybe Huxley\'s Brave New World. It is metallic. Well done
March 25th, 2026 04:08
Ahhh! Is The New Woo Sah
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poetic manner to express this message. So nicely said
March 24th, 2026 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poetic manner to express this message. So nicely said
March 24th, 2026 06:04
Life As We Know It
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that reminds us of how we are all etched in that stone how our footprints blown away by the wind and eroded by rain still remain in some way. A lovely write my friend.
March 23rd, 2026 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write that reminds us of how we are all etched in that stone how our footprints blown away by the wind and eroded by rain still remain in some way. A lovely write my friend.
March 23rd, 2026 06:02
I Have Been Up For Days Weeks Months
2781 said:
There\'s a lot going on. I\'ve suffered sleeplessness over the years, from both anxiety and drug abuse.
Now I sleep like a log.
I hope you find your piece.
March 22nd, 2026 04:57
2781 said:
There\'s a lot going on. I\'ve suffered sleeplessness over the years, from both anxiety and drug abuse.
Now I sleep like a log.
I hope you find your piece.
March 22nd, 2026 04:57
I Have Been Up For Days Weeks Months
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of persistence in the face of life continuing in this poem. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of persistence in the face of life continuing in this poem. Well done
March 22nd, 2026 04:31
The Kidnapping Of My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic poem of a heart shanghaied a sailor impressed into the service of one adored. Lovely metaphor
March 21st, 2026 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
A most romantic poem of a heart shanghaied a sailor impressed into the service of one adored. Lovely metaphor
March 21st, 2026 07:37
Hug’s And Kisses
sorenbarrett said:
Loving gestures that let us know that someone near cares and is there for us. Romantic and sensual it sings of support and tenderness. Well done
March 20th, 2026 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Loving gestures that let us know that someone near cares and is there for us. Romantic and sensual it sings of support and tenderness. Well done
March 20th, 2026 05:20
A Poet Superhero
sorenbarrett said:
With each line I had memories of the beginning of the superman series as it described the man of steel. Here each line described the man of ink. A lovely write that had overtones of nostalgia and super heroes
March 19th, 2026 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
With each line I had memories of the beginning of the superman series as it described the man of steel. Here each line described the man of ink. A lovely write that had overtones of nostalgia and super heroes
March 19th, 2026 04:45
Mommy And Daddy Is Fighting Again
sorenbarrett said:
Is it no wonder that when a child learns that love is expressed like this that they too do the same with those they love. A powerful write
March 18th, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Is it no wonder that when a child learns that love is expressed like this that they too do the same with those they love. A powerful write
March 18th, 2026 07:15
Are You Listening
Carmen Luca said:
\"Your silence grows antlers\" I loved that. Beautiful poem.
March 17th, 2026 04:25
Carmen Luca said:
\"Your silence grows antlers\" I loved that. Beautiful poem.
March 17th, 2026 04:25
Are You Listening
sorenbarrett said:
There are several good lines here but it is the last phrase that captured my mind. Mistaking warmth for the weather struck me. Well done
March 17th, 2026 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
There are several good lines here but it is the last phrase that captured my mind. Mistaking warmth for the weather struck me. Well done
March 17th, 2026 04:23
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