Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Neville said:
its not hard to imagine how frustrating and possibly frightening these voices you experience are from your description of them .. whether they are friends or not probably depends on what they are variously saying and your thoughts on the matter .. I would be more than happy to receive a pm if you would like to discuss or explore any further than time or space currently permits .. just nod if you need to .. with kindest regards and with much respect also .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 13:37
Neville said:
its not hard to imagine how frustrating and possibly frightening these voices you experience are from your description of them .. whether they are friends or not probably depends on what they are variously saying and your thoughts on the matter .. I would be more than happy to receive a pm if you would like to discuss or explore any further than time or space currently permits .. just nod if you need to .. with kindest regards and with much respect also .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 13:37
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Cassie58 said:
I have a relative who at times hears voices, I know just how distressing that can be, especially if it is all negative talk. An informative and brave write Tobani. A good composition.
December 10th, 2024 12:43
Cassie58 said:
I have a relative who at times hears voices, I know just how distressing that can be, especially if it is all negative talk. An informative and brave write Tobani. A good composition.
December 10th, 2024 12:43
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
sorenbarrett said:
The old addage that you can\'t give what you don\'t have no longer applies. Great write
December 10th, 2024 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
The old addage that you can\'t give what you don\'t have no longer applies. Great write
December 10th, 2024 11:57
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What do you do when the voices come? You write amazing poetry such as this my friend. Seriously, this is a stigma shattering write...and I truly applaud that. I cannot imagine what having all of those voices must be like, but I thank you for this important share! ❤️🩹🙏🌹👏
December 10th, 2024 10:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What do you do when the voices come? You write amazing poetry such as this my friend. Seriously, this is a stigma shattering write...and I truly applaud that. I cannot imagine what having all of those voices must be like, but I thank you for this important share! ❤️🩹🙏🌹👏
December 10th, 2024 10:15
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
arqios said:
I find writing gives this voices a venue to speak their piece thereby affording me peace.
December 10th, 2024 05:37
arqios said:
I find writing gives this voices a venue to speak their piece thereby affording me peace.
December 10th, 2024 05:37
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
Doggerel Dave said:
This feels very much like a psychosis (and I do hope Neville can lend a hand here), but you would seem, on the evidence of your pins so far, to have come through the other side with a greater perspective, and given us some useful realistic ideas.
A rich write.
December 10th, 2024 05:02
Doggerel Dave said:
This feels very much like a psychosis (and I do hope Neville can lend a hand here), but you would seem, on the evidence of your pins so far, to have come through the other side with a greater perspective, and given us some useful realistic ideas.
A rich write.
December 10th, 2024 05:02
Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head)
evenwheniLie said:
…..we actually do have other people in our heads, characters we develop from fear, anxiety, compulsion, a sense of restraint and other forms of personality forming mechanisms; personalities our main ego knows not to reveal to everyone, so we get a secretary and or mediator if you will. Most smart people have several people in their heads, they’re just aware of it at all times. It is said we are reflections of god in that way
December 10th, 2024 04:49
evenwheniLie said:
…..we actually do have other people in our heads, characters we develop from fear, anxiety, compulsion, a sense of restraint and other forms of personality forming mechanisms; personalities our main ego knows not to reveal to everyone, so we get a secretary and or mediator if you will. Most smart people have several people in their heads, they’re just aware of it at all times. It is said we are reflections of god in that way
December 10th, 2024 04:49
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem and
message too!! 👍
That\'s something I hate
about Christmas
I totally agree with you!! 💯
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:55
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem and
message too!! 👍
That\'s something I hate
about Christmas
I totally agree with you!! 💯
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:55
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
Doggerel Dave said:
The essence of much of Christmas in seven smart stanzas.
I understand the religious significance of Christmas for some - not for me;
And I understand commercialisation of Christmas for many - not for me.
December 9th, 2024 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
The essence of much of Christmas in seven smart stanzas.
I understand the religious significance of Christmas for some - not for me;
And I understand commercialisation of Christmas for many - not for me.
December 9th, 2024 17:28
Dreams and Nighmares
2781 said:
And it shall come to pass afterward, that I will pour out my spirit upon all flesh, and your sons and your daughters shall prophesy, your old men shall dream dreams, your young men shall see visions.
December 9th, 2024 12:38
2781 said:
And it shall come to pass afterward, that I will pour out my spirit upon all flesh, and your sons and your daughters shall prophesy, your old men shall dream dreams, your young men shall see visions.
December 9th, 2024 12:38
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
evenwheniLie said:
Christmas as is the other holidays, was a gimmick from the start, their origins lie in control; early on the mind was the focus, now they mainly want to control the money, they got years invested in brainwashing the public, now they can reap the benefits of every believer pouring money into the rich pockets every holiday
December 9th, 2024 10:04
evenwheniLie said:
Christmas as is the other holidays, was a gimmick from the start, their origins lie in control; early on the mind was the focus, now they mainly want to control the money, they got years invested in brainwashing the public, now they can reap the benefits of every believer pouring money into the rich pockets every holiday
December 9th, 2024 10:04
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an amazing poem.It is an essay about the good and bad aspects of Christmas.Very inspirational.Well done
December 9th, 2024 05:59
David Wakeling said:
This is quite an amazing poem.It is an essay about the good and bad aspects of Christmas.Very inspirational.Well done
December 9th, 2024 05:59
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
arqios said:
The spinner of tales, the town crier corrupted; bought out by those who hold the reigns, Nottinghams in the shire, back to Sherwood most will retire until the Hood rises from lore of yore.
December 9th, 2024 05:53
arqios said:
The spinner of tales, the town crier corrupted; bought out by those who hold the reigns, Nottinghams in the shire, back to Sherwood most will retire until the Hood rises from lore of yore.
December 9th, 2024 05:53
We are not in Control (Ad Man)
rin said:
The poem is like a sharp spear that picks at the contradictions in society. It is amazing.
December 9th, 2024 04:56
rin said:
The poem is like a sharp spear that picks at the contradictions in society. It is amazing.
December 9th, 2024 04:56
Dreams and Nighmares
Neville said:
First we must fall asleep and then just let them happen .. I hope your next ones are golden ..
December 9th, 2024 00:50
Neville said:
First we must fall asleep and then just let them happen .. I hope your next ones are golden ..
December 9th, 2024 00:50
Dreams and Nighmares
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message indeed!! 🤔
Hauntingly beautiful, poetic
perfection, and my pleasure to read!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 8th, 2024 21:08
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message indeed!! 🤔
Hauntingly beautiful, poetic
perfection, and my pleasure to read!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 8th, 2024 21:08
Dreams and Nighmares
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sweet dreams are made of...great poetry...and this, my friend is great poetry! Well done Tobani! ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 16:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sweet dreams are made of...great poetry...and this, my friend is great poetry! Well done Tobani! ❤️🙏
December 8th, 2024 16:58
Dreams and Nighmares
aDarkerMind said:
a poem worthy of much praise Tobani.
a joy to read.
December 8th, 2024 14:10
aDarkerMind said:
a poem worthy of much praise Tobani.
a joy to read.
December 8th, 2024 14:10
Dreams and Nighmares
Cassie58 said:
Much enjoyed read Tobani. Nicely composed stanzas.
December 8th, 2024 14:00
Cassie58 said:
Much enjoyed read Tobani. Nicely composed stanzas.
December 8th, 2024 14:00
Dreams and Nighmares
David Wakeling said:
This is very insightful revealing a real vulnerability. It is always a mistake to put your faith in religion but sadly we need to put our faith in something. Wonderful poem.It made me think for the first time in decades
December 8th, 2024 05:59
David Wakeling said:
This is very insightful revealing a real vulnerability. It is always a mistake to put your faith in religion but sadly we need to put our faith in something. Wonderful poem.It made me think for the first time in decades
December 8th, 2024 05:59
Dreams and Nighmares
arqios said:
It would be good to have a nice dream every now and again!
December 8th, 2024 05:17
arqios said:
It would be good to have a nice dream every now and again!
December 8th, 2024 05:17
Dreams and Nighmares
Teddy.15 said:
Sending you all the sweetest of dreams. 🌹
December 8th, 2024 04:06
Teddy.15 said:
Sending you all the sweetest of dreams. 🌹
December 8th, 2024 04:06
Dreams and Nighmares
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great read wow! I relate to this so much.
December 8th, 2024 03:59
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
Great read wow! I relate to this so much.
December 8th, 2024 03:59
Dreams and Nighmares
teardrop said:
Love, love, love this! Excellent write and beautiful message, understand this all to well1
December 8th, 2024 02:36
teardrop said:
Love, love, love this! Excellent write and beautiful message, understand this all to well1
December 8th, 2024 02:36
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