Comments received on poems by ScrapsnScribbles



Work In Progress
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphoric expression of unhealed wounds is extended in this poem of owning one\'s doing. Nicely worded

August 23rd, 2025 04:23

Work In Progress
Demar Desu said:

Compassion for yourself… forgiveness for ourselves

August 22nd, 2025 21:19

On Cake
sorenbarrett said:

I hear your logic but I would add that if you eat your cake you do have it. It is just inside. A fun read

August 20th, 2025 19:22

Poor Maintenance
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read of mechanics a Jack of all trades and master of none. Surrealist indeed and nicely done.

August 19th, 2025 19:17

Poor Maintenance
Cheeky Missy said:

WTF. [I\'m definitely NOT supposed to use that phraseology, but you started it.] Simply rendered with great imagery and a weighty poignancy, wow. What a conclusion. Awesome. Thank you for sharing.

August 19th, 2025 17:43

Ecdysis
sorenbarrett said:

In this poem I hear the opposing forces of change (I long to be revealed, and wish to stay concealed) a great line. Very nicely done

August 19th, 2025 04:39

Get Buzzed
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write of working in an environment so familier to so many, and the rules and requests employees are expected to follow. Although written in a humourous way it deals with a serious subject, enjoyed the read

August 14th, 2025 05:36

Get Buzzed
sorenbarrett said:

A workplace set of rules that control the behaviors of the workers and thereby cause upset.

August 14th, 2025 03:51

Sloomy Daydream
sorenbarrett said:

I liked this one that turns cliches into poetic images fresh and new. Well done

May 21st, 2025 04:01

Sloomy Daydream
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of something we think alot of people have done, nicely written, enjoyed the read

May 21st, 2025 02:33

Addict To Ashes
Thomas W Case said:

I do understand. I\'ve got 21 months clean and sober. Stay in the fight.

October 9th, 2024 11:49