Comments received on poems by StuckInSweetSurrender
My Wall
Sophie said:
A great piece. The last verse encapsulates the message very, very nicely: "I'll come to drink from the words of another soul's glass. But the more my wall comes crashing down, The stronger it'll be the next time around."
The strength that comes from getting up after a fall and another eventually prevents all falls - I could not agree more.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
April 19th, 2016 13:40
Sophie said:
A great piece. The last verse encapsulates the message very, very nicely: "I'll come to drink from the words of another soul's glass. But the more my wall comes crashing down, The stronger it'll be the next time around."
The strength that comes from getting up after a fall and another eventually prevents all falls - I could not agree more.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
April 19th, 2016 13:40
Broken Dawn
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW SSS another great intraspective poem ! It's 8 am here and your poems sure make me think. I love rhyming couplets so much flow and rhythm in this ode great to recite ! Love the last triplet. Life does have a plan for each of us but sometimes we see it too late ! "The world better have a plan for the broken - For that is all i am - I am just a broken man" Awesome finale - BRIAN
April 11th, 2016 02:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW SSS another great intraspective poem ! It's 8 am here and your poems sure make me think. I love rhyming couplets so much flow and rhythm in this ode great to recite ! Love the last triplet. Life does have a plan for each of us but sometimes we see it too late ! "The world better have a plan for the broken - For that is all i am - I am just a broken man" Awesome finale - BRIAN
April 11th, 2016 02:35
Steal You Away
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
It happens and produces in our heart both Agony (for his treatment of her) and Hope (of what might develop between you). All true love starts as friendship. A beautifully crafted love poem. Thanks for carin' an' sharin' BRIAN
April 9th, 2016 01:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
It happens and produces in our heart both Agony (for his treatment of her) and Hope (of what might develop between you). All true love starts as friendship. A beautifully crafted love poem. Thanks for carin' an' sharin' BRIAN
April 9th, 2016 01:42
The Night\'s Light
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SSS - Welcome to MY POETIC SIDE - Great site - awesome poems - nice people. Great first poem - replete with hope which is what we all need. In my experience "The LIGHT shines in the DARKNESS and the darkness can never extinguish it !" That LIGHT is HOPE" Thanks for sharing - please check my poems - BRIAN
April 7th, 2016 05:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SSS - Welcome to MY POETIC SIDE - Great site - awesome poems - nice people. Great first poem - replete with hope which is what we all need. In my experience "The LIGHT shines in the DARKNESS and the darkness can never extinguish it !" That LIGHT is HOPE" Thanks for sharing - please check my poems - BRIAN
April 7th, 2016 05:46
