Comments received on poems by JuneM



Piano
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of young love that doesn\'t last, the sadness and rejection of that effects the quality of the music that accompanies there life, nicely expressed

March 27th, 2025 04:26

Piano
sorenbarrett said:

A write of young love and infatuation that goes unrequited. Sadness and depression affects the music. A most interesting poem

March 26th, 2025 16:51

I try
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem that tells the tale of physical attributes ruling over the internal. Hard to ignore the external in a world that values what marketers call beauty. A heart wrenching poem of suffering

March 14th, 2025 12:38

I try
Poetic Licence said:

Although clearly having been and still going through painful times, the write is about being positive, treated others how they hope to be treated one day.nicely written and well expressed

March 14th, 2025 11:41

I try
Tony36 said:

Love it

March 14th, 2025 09:39

Ms. Neal - The Sonnet
Poetic Licence said:

Cleverly crafted write, leaving you to draw your own conclusion, enjoyed the read

March 11th, 2025 13:00

Ms. Neal - The Sonnet
sorenbarrett said:

Descriptive and with great images it tells its tale without telling it.

March 11th, 2025 12:42

Letter to my Lost Lover
Cassie58 said:

And the girl suffers. I hear her pain. In my past I have felt it too. The lost lover hurts like hell. It takes time for the hurt to soften. I hear you June.

February 11th, 2025 19:08

Letter to my Lost Lover
Poetic Licence said:

Feelings and emotions still very raw, a write with a lot of hurt and pain but well expressed in the writing

February 11th, 2025 16:53

i witnessed a world end
Tony36 said:

Love it

February 6th, 2025 19:45

i witnessed a world end
Poetic Licence said:

Well that certainly takes you on a powerful journey, enjoyed the read.

February 6th, 2025 17:12

i witnessed a world end
Hey! said:

Love it!

February 6th, 2025 16:36