Comments received on poems by JuneM
I hate you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of conflicting feelings and how often we all feel them. Like when someone you love steppes on your toe and you give them a shove then pull them back and give them a hug. A heart felt write.
April 19th, 2025 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of conflicting feelings and how often we all feel them. Like when someone you love steppes on your toe and you give them a shove then pull them back and give them a hug. A heart felt write.
April 19th, 2025 13:36
Piano
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of young love that doesn\'t last, the sadness and rejection of that effects the quality of the music that accompanies there life, nicely expressed
March 27th, 2025 04:26
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of young love that doesn\'t last, the sadness and rejection of that effects the quality of the music that accompanies there life, nicely expressed
March 27th, 2025 04:26
Piano
sorenbarrett said:
A write of young love and infatuation that goes unrequited. Sadness and depression affects the music. A most interesting poem
March 26th, 2025 16:51
sorenbarrett said:
A write of young love and infatuation that goes unrequited. Sadness and depression affects the music. A most interesting poem
March 26th, 2025 16:51
I try
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that tells the tale of physical attributes ruling over the internal. Hard to ignore the external in a world that values what marketers call beauty. A heart wrenching poem of suffering
March 14th, 2025 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that tells the tale of physical attributes ruling over the internal. Hard to ignore the external in a world that values what marketers call beauty. A heart wrenching poem of suffering
March 14th, 2025 12:38
I try
Poetic Licence said:
Although clearly having been and still going through painful times, the write is about being positive, treated others how they hope to be treated one day.nicely written and well expressed
March 14th, 2025 11:41
Poetic Licence said:
Although clearly having been and still going through painful times, the write is about being positive, treated others how they hope to be treated one day.nicely written and well expressed
March 14th, 2025 11:41
Ms. Neal - The Sonnet
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, leaving you to draw your own conclusion, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 13:00
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write, leaving you to draw your own conclusion, enjoyed the read
March 11th, 2025 13:00
Ms. Neal - The Sonnet
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive and with great images it tells its tale without telling it.
March 11th, 2025 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive and with great images it tells its tale without telling it.
March 11th, 2025 12:42
Letter to my Lost Lover
Cassie58 said:
And the girl suffers. I hear her pain. In my past I have felt it too. The lost lover hurts like hell. It takes time for the hurt to soften. I hear you June.
February 11th, 2025 19:08
Cassie58 said:
And the girl suffers. I hear her pain. In my past I have felt it too. The lost lover hurts like hell. It takes time for the hurt to soften. I hear you June.
February 11th, 2025 19:08
Letter to my Lost Lover
Poetic Licence said:
Feelings and emotions still very raw, a write with a lot of hurt and pain but well expressed in the writing
February 11th, 2025 16:53
Poetic Licence said:
Feelings and emotions still very raw, a write with a lot of hurt and pain but well expressed in the writing
February 11th, 2025 16:53
i witnessed a world end
Poetic Licence said:
Well that certainly takes you on a powerful journey, enjoyed the read.
February 6th, 2025 17:12
Poetic Licence said:
Well that certainly takes you on a powerful journey, enjoyed the read.
February 6th, 2025 17:12
