Comments received on poems by dyslexic.gun
Bet on It
Poetic Licence said:
Life is a chance and sometimes we have to take gambles, but tread with care, some gambles have a higher price than you realise, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 23:57
Poetic Licence said:
Life is a chance and sometimes we have to take gambles, but tread with care, some gambles have a higher price than you realise, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 23:57
Bet on It
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I gather from your comment that this was a case of experiential learning and you have now walked away from the table never to return?
Neat write.
July 6th, 2025 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I gather from your comment that this was a case of experiential learning and you have now walked away from the table never to return?
Neat write.
July 6th, 2025 18:33
Bet on It
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem but the house always wins. A poem of luck and it could be taken for a metaphor for taking a chance on a mate as well. Nicely done
July 6th, 2025 17:34
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem but the house always wins. A poem of luck and it could be taken for a metaphor for taking a chance on a mate as well. Nicely done
July 6th, 2025 17:34
Bad Truther
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write, you can only write about what you want to write about, I find reading other people\'s work for example on here, has often giving me a spark in a different direction, but people\'s best writings only come from the heart, nicely written write
June 30th, 2025 23:44
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write, you can only write about what you want to write about, I find reading other people\'s work for example on here, has often giving me a spark in a different direction, but people\'s best writings only come from the heart, nicely written write
June 30th, 2025 23:44
Bad Truther
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that all comes back to where it began. I was once told that my poems are always dismal so I started writing about what ever was around me and the topic changed.
June 30th, 2025 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that all comes back to where it began. I was once told that my poems are always dismal so I started writing about what ever was around me and the topic changed.
June 30th, 2025 15:14
Kjoy
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out of the depths of a relationship fallen and cries out for one more meeting to finish the grieving process. A lovely write of regret and sorrow.
June 19th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out of the depths of a relationship fallen and cries out for one more meeting to finish the grieving process. A lovely write of regret and sorrow.
June 19th, 2025 04:05
Backtats and deadlines
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and honest write nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 16:21
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and honest write nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 16:21
Backtats and deadlines
sorenbarrett said:
So satisfying this write is raw but at the same time nostalgic and wistful. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
So satisfying this write is raw but at the same time nostalgic and wistful. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:58
Looking Ahead of Time
sorenbarrett said:
Obsessed is a difficult place to be. A most interesting poem and nicely done
April 11th, 2025 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
Obsessed is a difficult place to be. A most interesting poem and nicely done
April 11th, 2025 14:39
Blind 2
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of declaring there undying love for someone they have lost, lovely write
April 6th, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of declaring there undying love for someone they have lost, lovely write
April 6th, 2025 02:27
Blind 2
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love that still bleeds onto the page. A poem of loss put in such poetic terms
April 5th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love that still bleeds onto the page. A poem of loss put in such poetic terms
April 5th, 2025 15:42
The Beauty of Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of measures of love. When you have nothing you have nothing to loose. This poem also speaks of the ups and downs in relationships. That is what love in a relationship is all and nothing. Well written
April 4th, 2025 17:39
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of measures of love. When you have nothing you have nothing to loose. This poem also speaks of the ups and downs in relationships. That is what love in a relationship is all and nothing. Well written
April 4th, 2025 17:39
Impatient for the Night
Poetic Licence said:
Some people are much more at ease at night when the world slows down others are not, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:02
Poetic Licence said:
Some people are much more at ease at night when the world slows down others are not, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:02
Impatient for the Night
sorenbarrett said:
Night calms seems to be the theme of this poem and so it does for me as well. Nicely done
March 26th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Night calms seems to be the theme of this poem and so it does for me as well. Nicely done
March 26th, 2025 04:33
Eye of the Storm
Poetic Licence said:
A creative and interesting write, that could have many interpretations, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 03:24
Poetic Licence said:
A creative and interesting write, that could have many interpretations, enjoyed the read
March 25th, 2025 03:24
Eye of the Storm
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read. Many different metaphors here
March 24th, 2025 17:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read. Many different metaphors here
March 24th, 2025 17:35
Distractions
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of realization of self. Very nicely done
March 11th, 2025 19:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of realization of self. Very nicely done
March 11th, 2025 19:51
Blind
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting but very different take on obcessive passion and its effects. Lovely images and use of metaphor. Very nicely done
February 12th, 2025 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting but very different take on obcessive passion and its effects. Lovely images and use of metaphor. Very nicely done
February 12th, 2025 07:43
Blind
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece reminding us Love can blind us, with a cracking last line, enjoyed the read
February 12th, 2025 05:39
Poetic Licence said:
A well written piece reminding us Love can blind us, with a cracking last line, enjoyed the read
February 12th, 2025 05:39
Blind
teardrop said:
I really love this piece and your metapors are beautiful...if the moon didn\'t talk so much about you, I wouldn\'t have a clue....masterpiece!! Thank you for sharing.
February 12th, 2025 01:03
teardrop said:
I really love this piece and your metapors are beautiful...if the moon didn\'t talk so much about you, I wouldn\'t have a clue....masterpiece!! Thank you for sharing.
February 12th, 2025 01:03
