Comments received on poems by dyslexic.gun
Travels
sorenbarrett said:
Difference is good, broadening oneself is quite healthy. Variety is the key to health, physical or mental. Good write
December 8th, 2025 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
Difference is good, broadening oneself is quite healthy. Variety is the key to health, physical or mental. Good write
December 8th, 2025 20:40
Collection of Anguish
sorenbarrett said:
We all play the cards we are dealt and I sense the frustration in this poem
December 2nd, 2025 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
We all play the cards we are dealt and I sense the frustration in this poem
December 2nd, 2025 20:45
December\'s Eve
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening prospect and experience when allergies take hold. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening prospect and experience when allergies take hold. Well done
December 1st, 2025 04:28
All about today
sorenbarrett said:
That would seem to be the best choice. Clever and well done.
October 7th, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
That would seem to be the best choice. Clever and well done.
October 7th, 2025 14:42
Shelter in Place
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that every news break speaks of explosions each bigger than the last. A good write
October 6th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that every news break speaks of explosions each bigger than the last. A good write
October 6th, 2025 17:11
For when I wake up
sorenbarrett said:
The excitement of life expressed in this write where there are things to look forward to in many aspects. Nicely stated
October 2nd, 2025 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
The excitement of life expressed in this write where there are things to look forward to in many aspects. Nicely stated
October 2nd, 2025 12:50
Crescent Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Bait? A message given now the wait. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 18:52
sorenbarrett said:
Bait? A message given now the wait. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 18:52
Who lied to you?
Demar Desu said:
Ahh the old age modern question, “wtf?” Philosophy at its finest. Good poem
September 18th, 2025 11:06
Demar Desu said:
Ahh the old age modern question, “wtf?” Philosophy at its finest. Good poem
September 18th, 2025 11:06
Who lied to you?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of deception and love lost. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of deception and love lost. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 11:04
Blessings
sorenbarrett said:
Idols rull the life of the worshiper, be they a lover or a god. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
Idols rull the life of the worshiper, be they a lover or a god. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 19:49
The Groove of Things
RSM0812 said:
Short and sweet. Lots of imagery. A good meaningful write.
July 21st, 2025 09:19
RSM0812 said:
Short and sweet. Lots of imagery. A good meaningful write.
July 21st, 2025 09:19
Glass Race
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of trauma in a way a shock that disrupted the day. Keep going is the word. Nicely written
July 13th, 2025 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of trauma in a way a shock that disrupted the day. Keep going is the word. Nicely written
July 13th, 2025 13:33
The Groove of Things
Poetic Licence said:
Just relax and take it easy, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 23:31
Poetic Licence said:
Just relax and take it easy, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 23:31
The Groove of Things
sorenbarrett said:
Yes there is that question of what to do days with long nights. I would guess nap. A fun read
July 12th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
Yes there is that question of what to do days with long nights. I would guess nap. A fun read
July 12th, 2025 20:43
Bet on It
Poetic Licence said:
Life is a chance and sometimes we have to take gambles, but tread with care, some gambles have a higher price than you realise, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 23:57
Poetic Licence said:
Life is a chance and sometimes we have to take gambles, but tread with care, some gambles have a higher price than you realise, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 23:57
Bet on It
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I gather from your comment that this was a case of experiential learning and you have now walked away from the table never to return?
Neat write.
July 6th, 2025 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I gather from your comment that this was a case of experiential learning and you have now walked away from the table never to return?
Neat write.
July 6th, 2025 18:33
Bet on It
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem but the house always wins. A poem of luck and it could be taken for a metaphor for taking a chance on a mate as well. Nicely done
July 6th, 2025 17:34
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem but the house always wins. A poem of luck and it could be taken for a metaphor for taking a chance on a mate as well. Nicely done
July 6th, 2025 17:34
Bad Truther
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write, you can only write about what you want to write about, I find reading other people\'s work for example on here, has often giving me a spark in a different direction, but people\'s best writings only come from the heart, nicely written write
June 30th, 2025 23:44
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write, you can only write about what you want to write about, I find reading other people\'s work for example on here, has often giving me a spark in a different direction, but people\'s best writings only come from the heart, nicely written write
June 30th, 2025 23:44
Bad Truther
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that all comes back to where it began. I was once told that my poems are always dismal so I started writing about what ever was around me and the topic changed.
June 30th, 2025 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that all comes back to where it began. I was once told that my poems are always dismal so I started writing about what ever was around me and the topic changed.
June 30th, 2025 15:14
Kjoy
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out of the depths of a relationship fallen and cries out for one more meeting to finish the grieving process. A lovely write of regret and sorrow.
June 19th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out of the depths of a relationship fallen and cries out for one more meeting to finish the grieving process. A lovely write of regret and sorrow.
June 19th, 2025 04:05
Backtats and deadlines
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and honest write nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 16:21
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and honest write nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 16:21
Backtats and deadlines
sorenbarrett said:
So satisfying this write is raw but at the same time nostalgic and wistful. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
So satisfying this write is raw but at the same time nostalgic and wistful. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:58
Looking Ahead of Time
sorenbarrett said:
Obsessed is a difficult place to be. A most interesting poem and nicely done
April 11th, 2025 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
Obsessed is a difficult place to be. A most interesting poem and nicely done
April 11th, 2025 14:39
Blind 2
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of declaring there undying love for someone they have lost, lovely write
April 6th, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of declaring there undying love for someone they have lost, lovely write
April 6th, 2025 02:27
Blind 2
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love that still bleeds onto the page. A poem of loss put in such poetic terms
April 5th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love that still bleeds onto the page. A poem of loss put in such poetic terms
April 5th, 2025 15:42
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