Comments received on poems by dyslexic.gun



Looking Ahead of Time
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic and powerful.

April 11th, 2025 14:54

Looking Ahead of Time
sorenbarrett said:

Obsessed is a difficult place to be. A most interesting poem and nicely done

April 11th, 2025 14:39

Blind 2
Poetic Licence said:

A very poetic way of declaring there undying love for someone they have lost, lovely write

April 6th, 2025 02:27

Blind 2
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of unrequited love that still bleeds onto the page. A poem of loss put in such poetic terms

April 5th, 2025 15:42

The Beauty of Nothing
sorenbarrett said:

A great poem of measures of love. When you have nothing you have nothing to loose. This poem also speaks of the ups and downs in relationships. That is what love in a relationship is all and nothing. Well written

April 4th, 2025 17:39

Impatient for the Night
Poetic Licence said:

Some people are much more at ease at night when the world slows down others are not, enjoyed the read

March 26th, 2025 07:02

Impatient for the Night
sorenbarrett said:

Night calms seems to be the theme of this poem and so it does for me as well. Nicely done

March 26th, 2025 04:33

Eye of the Storm
Poetic Licence said:

A creative and interesting write, that could have many interpretations, enjoyed the read

March 25th, 2025 03:24

Eye of the Storm
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting read. Many different metaphors here

March 24th, 2025 17:35

Distractions
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of realization of self. Very nicely done

March 11th, 2025 19:51

Poser
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 12th, 2025 17:16

Blind
Tony36 said:

Love it

February 12th, 2025 08:30

Blind
sorenbarrett said:

A haunting but very different take on obcessive passion and its effects. Lovely images and use of metaphor. Very nicely done

February 12th, 2025 07:43

Blind
Poetic Licence said:

A well written piece reminding us Love can blind us, with a cracking last line, enjoyed the read

February 12th, 2025 05:39

Blind
teardrop said:

I really love this piece and your metapors are beautiful...if the moon didn\'t talk so much about you, I wouldn\'t have a clue....masterpiece!! Thank you for sharing.

February 12th, 2025 01:03