Comments received on poems by dyslexic.gun
All about today
sorenbarrett said:
That would seem to be the best choice. Clever and well done.
October 7th, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
That would seem to be the best choice. Clever and well done.
October 7th, 2025 14:42
Shelter in Place
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that every news break speaks of explosions each bigger than the last. A good write
October 6th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that every news break speaks of explosions each bigger than the last. A good write
October 6th, 2025 17:11
For when I wake up
sorenbarrett said:
The excitement of life expressed in this write where there are things to look forward to in many aspects. Nicely stated
October 2nd, 2025 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
The excitement of life expressed in this write where there are things to look forward to in many aspects. Nicely stated
October 2nd, 2025 12:50
Crescent Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Bait? A message given now the wait. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 18:52
sorenbarrett said:
Bait? A message given now the wait. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 18:52
Who lied to you?
Demar Desu said:
Ahh the old age modern question, “wtf?” Philosophy at its finest. Good poem
September 18th, 2025 11:06
Demar Desu said:
Ahh the old age modern question, “wtf?” Philosophy at its finest. Good poem
September 18th, 2025 11:06
Who lied to you?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of deception and love lost. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of deception and love lost. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 11:04
Blessings
sorenbarrett said:
Idols rull the life of the worshiper, be they a lover or a god. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
Idols rull the life of the worshiper, be they a lover or a god. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 19:49
The Groove of Things
RSM0812 said:
Short and sweet. Lots of imagery. A good meaningful write.
July 21st, 2025 09:19
RSM0812 said:
Short and sweet. Lots of imagery. A good meaningful write.
July 21st, 2025 09:19
Glass Race
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of trauma in a way a shock that disrupted the day. Keep going is the word. Nicely written
July 13th, 2025 13:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of trauma in a way a shock that disrupted the day. Keep going is the word. Nicely written
July 13th, 2025 13:33
The Groove of Things
Poetic Licence said:
Just relax and take it easy, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 23:31
Poetic Licence said:
Just relax and take it easy, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 23:31
The Groove of Things
sorenbarrett said:
Yes there is that question of what to do days with long nights. I would guess nap. A fun read
July 12th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
Yes there is that question of what to do days with long nights. I would guess nap. A fun read
July 12th, 2025 20:43
Bet on It
Poetic Licence said:
Life is a chance and sometimes we have to take gambles, but tread with care, some gambles have a higher price than you realise, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 23:57
Poetic Licence said:
Life is a chance and sometimes we have to take gambles, but tread with care, some gambles have a higher price than you realise, nicely expressed and written
July 6th, 2025 23:57
Bet on It
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I gather from your comment that this was a case of experiential learning and you have now walked away from the table never to return?
Neat write.
July 6th, 2025 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I gather from your comment that this was a case of experiential learning and you have now walked away from the table never to return?
Neat write.
July 6th, 2025 18:33
Bet on It
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem but the house always wins. A poem of luck and it could be taken for a metaphor for taking a chance on a mate as well. Nicely done
July 6th, 2025 17:34
sorenbarrett said:
A good poem but the house always wins. A poem of luck and it could be taken for a metaphor for taking a chance on a mate as well. Nicely done
July 6th, 2025 17:34
Bad Truther
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write, you can only write about what you want to write about, I find reading other people\'s work for example on here, has often giving me a spark in a different direction, but people\'s best writings only come from the heart, nicely written write
June 30th, 2025 23:44
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting write, you can only write about what you want to write about, I find reading other people\'s work for example on here, has often giving me a spark in a different direction, but people\'s best writings only come from the heart, nicely written write
June 30th, 2025 23:44
Bad Truther
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that all comes back to where it began. I was once told that my poems are always dismal so I started writing about what ever was around me and the topic changed.
June 30th, 2025 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking piece that all comes back to where it began. I was once told that my poems are always dismal so I started writing about what ever was around me and the topic changed.
June 30th, 2025 15:14
Kjoy
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out of the depths of a relationship fallen and cries out for one more meeting to finish the grieving process. A lovely write of regret and sorrow.
June 19th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem calls out of the depths of a relationship fallen and cries out for one more meeting to finish the grieving process. A lovely write of regret and sorrow.
June 19th, 2025 04:05
Backtats and deadlines
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and honest write nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 16:21
Poetic Licence said:
A raw and honest write nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 16th, 2025 16:21
Backtats and deadlines
sorenbarrett said:
So satisfying this write is raw but at the same time nostalgic and wistful. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:58
sorenbarrett said:
So satisfying this write is raw but at the same time nostalgic and wistful. Lovely
June 16th, 2025 15:58
Looking Ahead of Time
sorenbarrett said:
Obsessed is a difficult place to be. A most interesting poem and nicely done
April 11th, 2025 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
Obsessed is a difficult place to be. A most interesting poem and nicely done
April 11th, 2025 14:39
Blind 2
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of declaring there undying love for someone they have lost, lovely write
April 6th, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of declaring there undying love for someone they have lost, lovely write
April 6th, 2025 02:27
Blind 2
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love that still bleeds onto the page. A poem of loss put in such poetic terms
April 5th, 2025 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of unrequited love that still bleeds onto the page. A poem of loss put in such poetic terms
April 5th, 2025 15:42
The Beauty of Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of measures of love. When you have nothing you have nothing to loose. This poem also speaks of the ups and downs in relationships. That is what love in a relationship is all and nothing. Well written
April 4th, 2025 17:39
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of measures of love. When you have nothing you have nothing to loose. This poem also speaks of the ups and downs in relationships. That is what love in a relationship is all and nothing. Well written
April 4th, 2025 17:39
Impatient for the Night
Poetic Licence said:
Some people are much more at ease at night when the world slows down others are not, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:02
Poetic Licence said:
Some people are much more at ease at night when the world slows down others are not, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 07:02
Impatient for the Night
sorenbarrett said:
Night calms seems to be the theme of this poem and so it does for me as well. Nicely done
March 26th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Night calms seems to be the theme of this poem and so it does for me as well. Nicely done
March 26th, 2025 04:33
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