Comments received on poems by 3nd3r_Dr4g0nt
The Withering
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects feelings of insignificance, inferiority and acceptance. It is sad speaking of internal quiet suffering and sacrifice for others needs. There is the danger of overdependence and self blame. Well written in good poetic form.
March 17th, 2026 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects feelings of insignificance, inferiority and acceptance. It is sad speaking of internal quiet suffering and sacrifice for others needs. There is the danger of overdependence and self blame. Well written in good poetic form.
March 17th, 2026 03:17
A love forever unrequited
sorenbarrett said:
The struggle between friendship and passion and the decision that friendship is worth more. A wise but difficult decision. Well written
January 5th, 2026 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
The struggle between friendship and passion and the decision that friendship is worth more. A wise but difficult decision. Well written
January 5th, 2026 03:41
A love forever unrequited
lunarchloedip said:
this feeling is so hard to process because it\'s both intense and swept under the rug :) been there, felt it entirely, and your poem sums it up very well. thank you for sharing!
January 4th, 2026 22:54
lunarchloedip said:
this feeling is so hard to process because it\'s both intense and swept under the rug :) been there, felt it entirely, and your poem sums it up very well. thank you for sharing!
January 4th, 2026 22:54
The pedestal, reprise
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a journey in this poem of raises and falls. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a journey in this poem of raises and falls. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 04:25
Moth in a butterfly\'s body
Poetic Licence said:
I love the analogy used in this, the battle to be something they want to be, to be themselves and have a happy heart and mind, and not to be what everyone tells them they are, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 05:39
Poetic Licence said:
I love the analogy used in this, the battle to be something they want to be, to be themselves and have a happy heart and mind, and not to be what everyone tells them they are, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 05:39
Moth in a butterfly\'s body
sorenbarrett said:
Quite clever the metaphor is good and the development of it is exceptional. Very nicely done and a fave
August 2nd, 2025 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
Quite clever the metaphor is good and the development of it is exceptional. Very nicely done and a fave
August 2nd, 2025 04:52
An Ode to Those in My Head
sorenbarrett said:
A clever and rhymed poem of that fantasy figure that most of us held in our head through early and mid teen years. A beautiful write
June 25th, 2025 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
A clever and rhymed poem of that fantasy figure that most of us held in our head through early and mid teen years. A beautiful write
June 25th, 2025 04:00
An Ode to Those in My Head
Poetic Licence said:
We all have our idols and hero\'s and in our minds they never change, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 23:00
Poetic Licence said:
We all have our idols and hero\'s and in our minds they never change, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 23:00
So Deceiving the Crown
Poetic Licence said:
A good message delivered in this write, all that appears good is not always for your benefit, power is not something we should trust, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 11:57
Poetic Licence said:
A good message delivered in this write, all that appears good is not always for your benefit, power is not something we should trust, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 11:57
So Deceiving the Crown
sorenbarrett said:
A word of warning that power is not to be trusted but has ulterior motives and good seen may be for the good of the ruler
April 10th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
A word of warning that power is not to be trusted but has ulterior motives and good seen may be for the good of the ruler
April 10th, 2025 09:59
Sitting in class
Poetic Licence said:
Do not judge what you don\'t know, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 03:01
Poetic Licence said:
Do not judge what you don\'t know, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 03:01
Sitting in class
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a great write about not judging others. Well done
March 19th, 2025 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and a great write about not judging others. Well done
March 19th, 2025 13:55
The pedestal
Poetic Licence said:
I think it depends if someone put us on the pedestal that high up or we put ourselves there, not a good place to be at the top, we have further to fall, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 08:18
Poetic Licence said:
I think it depends if someone put us on the pedestal that high up or we put ourselves there, not a good place to be at the top, we have further to fall, enjoyed the read
March 6th, 2025 08:18
The pedestal
sorenbarrett said:
We all have a pedestal we are on some higher than others. A good read
March 6th, 2025 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
We all have a pedestal we are on some higher than others. A good read
March 6th, 2025 08:09
TMP-tober Poems(5 poems)
sorenbarrett said:
Here you have created a myth a legend in epic lyrical form. Very nice this tale.
March 4th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
Here you have created a myth a legend in epic lyrical form. Very nice this tale.
March 4th, 2025 08:14
the moth I\'ll never become
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write with many valued messages, here\'s hoping you break out soon, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 11:58
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write with many valued messages, here\'s hoping you break out soon, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 11:58
the moth I\'ll never become
sorenbarrett said:
We all are who we are some metamorphosize into one type of butterfly and others not. What difference does it make we are all part of the same world and nature. A lovely write and I hope that you soon shed the cocoon.
March 3rd, 2025 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
We all are who we are some metamorphosize into one type of butterfly and others not. What difference does it make we are all part of the same world and nature. A lovely write and I hope that you soon shed the cocoon.
March 3rd, 2025 11:14
The moth prince, a poetic epica(unfinished)
sorenbarrett said:
An epic poem that tells its story in verse. It seems that it is not finished and will have a second chapter. Nicely worded
February 12th, 2025 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
An epic poem that tells its story in verse. It seems that it is not finished and will have a second chapter. Nicely worded
February 12th, 2025 10:00
The moth prince, a poetic epica(unfinished)
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊 and looking forward to the completion of this epic 👍🏻
February 12th, 2025 08:56
arqios said:
Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊 and looking forward to the completion of this epic 👍🏻
February 12th, 2025 08:56
