Comments received on poems by Li Yanmey
Nightlife
sorenbarrett said:
Dualities not only in light and dark but in the good and bad of the night. A lovely write that opens up the night.
February 23rd, 2025 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
Dualities not only in light and dark but in the good and bad of the night. A lovely write that opens up the night.
February 23rd, 2025 06:00
How can I change my past?
Poetic Licence said:
I can feel the pain and see where it coming from in this well written write, I myself find it very difficult to write about being happy, I find it easy to write about pain and darkness,as that is what I have experienced the most and i know Best, great write
February 22nd, 2025 14:48
Poetic Licence said:
I can feel the pain and see where it coming from in this well written write, I myself find it very difficult to write about being happy, I find it easy to write about pain and darkness,as that is what I have experienced the most and i know Best, great write
February 22nd, 2025 14:48
How can I change my past?
sorenbarrett said:
I hear pain in this poem. There is an existential question of purpose here. A poem calling out from the dark.
February 22nd, 2025 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
I hear pain in this poem. There is an existential question of purpose here. A poem calling out from the dark.
February 22nd, 2025 13:35
Moonlight Stories 6. Breathe out/breathe in
sorenbarrett said:
A reaching out to another fellow spirit in pain. A lovely poem of joining forces and giving assistance. Lovely
February 21st, 2025 05:58
sorenbarrett said:
A reaching out to another fellow spirit in pain. A lovely poem of joining forces and giving assistance. Lovely
February 21st, 2025 05:58
Moonlight Stories: 5. Your body is my temple
sorenbarrett said:
Playing with love like fire is an apt analogy and reminds how one can so easily be burned. Passion\'s heat burns for good and ill it can feel like salvation or damnation. Lovely
February 20th, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Playing with love like fire is an apt analogy and reminds how one can so easily be burned. Passion\'s heat burns for good and ill it can feel like salvation or damnation. Lovely
February 20th, 2025 05:01
From Station to Station
sorenbarrett said:
Life part of a cycle that repeats itself as the cosmic clock winds down in entropy. The poem emphasizes the changing at each station and that the train may derail between stations. A very cyclical feel to the poem itself. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Life part of a cycle that repeats itself as the cosmic clock winds down in entropy. The poem emphasizes the changing at each station and that the train may derail between stations. A very cyclical feel to the poem itself. Lovely
February 19th, 2025 05:21
Depression
sorenbarrett said:
Depression is very solitary and in that aloneness a sense of helplessness. A heavy write
February 18th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
Depression is very solitary and in that aloneness a sense of helplessness. A heavy write
February 18th, 2025 05:05
Depression
Poetic Licence said:
Very true words, unless you have been there you will not understand the impact it has, well written
February 18th, 2025 04:05
Poetic Licence said:
Very true words, unless you have been there you will not understand the impact it has, well written
February 18th, 2025 04:05
She’s dancing in the flame
Poetic Licence said:
Sensual, evocative and beautifully written, loved this read
February 17th, 2025 07:12
Poetic Licence said:
Sensual, evocative and beautifully written, loved this read
February 17th, 2025 07:12
She’s dancing in the flame
sorenbarrett said:
Exotic, sensual metaphoric and ending in a dance with a cobra king very Freudian indeed. A lovely read
February 17th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Exotic, sensual metaphoric and ending in a dance with a cobra king very Freudian indeed. A lovely read
February 17th, 2025 05:22
to C. Y.
Poetic Licence said:
Wouldn`t it be nice if everyone could fully support someone as you are declaring in this write, long may they inspire you
February 16th, 2025 06:26
Poetic Licence said:
Wouldn`t it be nice if everyone could fully support someone as you are declaring in this write, long may they inspire you
February 16th, 2025 06:26
to C. Y.
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful outpouring and offer of support. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful outpouring and offer of support. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 06:17
Moonlight Stories: 4. Untitled
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written invite to dying love to give it another shot, and that it is never to late to start again, enjoyed the read.
February 15th, 2025 08:06
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written invite to dying love to give it another shot, and that it is never to late to start again, enjoyed the read.
February 15th, 2025 08:06
Moonlight Stories: 4. Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A plead to a lover to reignite a dying love and renew a relationship. Nicely written I particularly loved the line \"Have you ever seen the sun burn\"
February 15th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A plead to a lover to reignite a dying love and renew a relationship. Nicely written I particularly loved the line \"Have you ever seen the sun burn\"
February 15th, 2025 05:19
Moonlight Stories: 3. Halloween
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write slightly on the dark side, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 12:29
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write slightly on the dark side, enjoyed the read
February 14th, 2025 12:29
Moonlight Stories: 3. Halloween
sorenbarrett said:
Moods of a dark love. A haunting write or passion. Lovely
February 14th, 2025 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Moods of a dark love. A haunting write or passion. Lovely
February 14th, 2025 06:07
Moonlight Stories: 2. No more fear
Poetic Licence said:
A multi layered poem with evokes different feelings and emotions as you read, very well written
February 13th, 2025 05:40
Poetic Licence said:
A multi layered poem with evokes different feelings and emotions as you read, very well written
February 13th, 2025 05:40
Moonlight Stories: 2. No more fear
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that can be taken on different levels and evokes different feelings at each one. Nicely done
February 13th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that can be taken on different levels and evokes different feelings at each one. Nicely done
February 13th, 2025 04:44
Moonlight Stories: 1. The Land of Sand
sorenbarrett said:
Although it at first seemed a romantic poem between lovers it soon turned to me into a deeper meaning of death as a lover where one is taken home to one\'s origin in a land of sand. Sorry if this was not the intent but it was just too strong a metaphor to ignore.
February 12th, 2025 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
Although it at first seemed a romantic poem between lovers it soon turned to me into a deeper meaning of death as a lover where one is taken home to one\'s origin in a land of sand. Sorry if this was not the intent but it was just too strong a metaphor to ignore.
February 12th, 2025 07:27
Moonlight Stories: 1. The Land of Sand
Poetic Licence said:
That was a very enjoyable read
February 12th, 2025 06:12
Poetic Licence said:
That was a very enjoyable read
February 12th, 2025 06:12
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