Comments received on poems by Damaso
Plague
sorenbarrett said:
The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and need. The metaphor I take is that we are all such a child and in such helpless and homeless, in need without much help but charity. Pain comes in many forms and it grows dark when hope dies. Well written and very emotional. Dark and yet real a sad read.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and need. The metaphor I take is that we are all such a child and in such helpless and homeless, in need without much help but charity. Pain comes in many forms and it grows dark when hope dies. Well written and very emotional. Dark and yet real a sad read.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
Ugly Joint
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very interesting write which needs to be read a few times, nicely expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very interesting write which needs to be read a few times, nicely expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:19
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