Comments received on poems by Damaso
Wall
Poetic Licence said:
Pain hurt, losses,love beauty everything wrapped up in this write, it is a wonderful piece of writing
March 29th, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
Pain hurt, losses,love beauty everything wrapped up in this write, it is a wonderful piece of writing
March 29th, 2025 12:47
Wall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Promises of forgotten loves, rusted by rain, sun, and moon\". Wow! One of many amazing lines, Damaso! Great job on this. A fave for me. 🌹👏
March 29th, 2025 12:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Promises of forgotten loves, rusted by rain, sun, and moon\". Wow! One of many amazing lines, Damaso! Great job on this. A fave for me. 🌹👏
March 29th, 2025 12:03
Wall
sorenbarrett said:
Numbers and letters have colors in the mind that blend into a picture of a poem. A lovely thought. Loved the creativity of the write
March 29th, 2025 10:00
sorenbarrett said:
Numbers and letters have colors in the mind that blend into a picture of a poem. A lovely thought. Loved the creativity of the write
March 29th, 2025 10:00
Pogo
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting and well written write,raw and passionate, also loved the picture
March 28th, 2025 20:41
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting and well written write,raw and passionate, also loved the picture
March 28th, 2025 20:41
Pogo
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful metaphor and, not sure if intentional, but it almost looks like an inverted pogo stick. Love the poem and its structure. Well done, Damaso!
March 28th, 2025 20:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful metaphor and, not sure if intentional, but it almost looks like an inverted pogo stick. Love the poem and its structure. Well done, Damaso!
March 28th, 2025 20:30
Pogo
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting metaphor the pogo stick and bouncing from one place by flying a most interesting poem
March 28th, 2025 17:03
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting metaphor the pogo stick and bouncing from one place by flying a most interesting poem
March 28th, 2025 17:03
Palace
Poetic Licence said:
If we survive the storms of the night the world is a wonderful place until the next night, although your writes are dark and haunting, I connect with them, as a regular visitor to hell before, great write
March 27th, 2025 11:32
Poetic Licence said:
If we survive the storms of the night the world is a wonderful place until the next night, although your writes are dark and haunting, I connect with them, as a regular visitor to hell before, great write
March 27th, 2025 11:32
Palace
sorenbarrett said:
Every day that we wake up is a good day. A lovely write of taking the good and realizing that freedom is the key to happiness. Wonderful
March 27th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
Every day that we wake up is a good day. A lovely write of taking the good and realizing that freedom is the key to happiness. Wonderful
March 27th, 2025 08:41
Palace
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend! Another great piece! Def a fave. This poem feels like a near-death experience, a moment of enlightenment, or an existential realization. I love the paradox of truth also being a lie—are they really so opposite? This is deeply philosophical, existential and thought-provoking. Well done! 👏🌹
March 27th, 2025 08:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend! Another great piece! Def a fave. This poem feels like a near-death experience, a moment of enlightenment, or an existential realization. I love the paradox of truth also being a lie—are they really so opposite? This is deeply philosophical, existential and thought-provoking. Well done! 👏🌹
March 27th, 2025 08:10
Easter Child
NafisaSB said:
sad and touching. sometimes parents can scare a child to death with such stories not realizing the deadly impact it can leave...
March 26th, 2025 23:49
NafisaSB said:
sad and touching. sometimes parents can scare a child to death with such stories not realizing the deadly impact it can leave...
March 26th, 2025 23:49
Fight
Poetic Licence said:
That is a nightmare for sure dark and violent but you sense an inner strength amongst the turmoil, some people will relate well to this, write,nicely written and expressed
March 26th, 2025 13:00
Poetic Licence said:
That is a nightmare for sure dark and violent but you sense an inner strength amongst the turmoil, some people will relate well to this, write,nicely written and expressed
March 26th, 2025 13:00
Fight
sorenbarrett said:
Creation and violence part of this poem that is well worded. Very nice
March 26th, 2025 12:01
sorenbarrett said:
Creation and violence part of this poem that is well worded. Very nice
March 26th, 2025 12:01
Little Bird
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely flowing write , the feeling of safety, confidence, trust and that they actually be listening in ones hours of darkness can be so refreshing but also a life saver, that\'s why they say a dog is a man\'s best friend, always there whenever you need him, great write
March 25th, 2025 09:34
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely flowing write , the feeling of safety, confidence, trust and that they actually be listening in ones hours of darkness can be so refreshing but also a life saver, that\'s why they say a dog is a man\'s best friend, always there whenever you need him, great write
March 25th, 2025 09:34
Little Bird
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem so well imaged and with great flow. The other day I had a iridescent blue humming bird fly in my room and up to my face hovering there looking me in the eye for a very long time then turned as if to say follow if you care and flew back out the door. Feelings that words can not express. Very nice
March 25th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem so well imaged and with great flow. The other day I had a iridescent blue humming bird fly in my room and up to my face hovering there looking me in the eye for a very long time then turned as if to say follow if you care and flew back out the door. Feelings that words can not express. Very nice
March 25th, 2025 08:14
Little Bird
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I often talk to the birds, the deer, squirrels, Wally the Woodchuck who frequents by my sliding back door windows. I think they get it. They seem to keep coming around. Even the deer I recognize by there specific markings or look. LOL! Anyway, great poem! I relate to this a lot, my friend! Well done. A fave for me. 🌹👏
March 25th, 2025 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I often talk to the birds, the deer, squirrels, Wally the Woodchuck who frequents by my sliding back door windows. I think they get it. They seem to keep coming around. Even the deer I recognize by there specific markings or look. LOL! Anyway, great poem! I relate to this a lot, my friend! Well done. A fave for me. 🌹👏
March 25th, 2025 08:04
Little Bird
2781 said:
For the ernest expectation of the creature waits for the manifestation of the sons of God.
Talk to the birds x
March 25th, 2025 07:44
2781 said:
For the ernest expectation of the creature waits for the manifestation of the sons of God.
Talk to the birds x
March 25th, 2025 07:44
Easter Child
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hard to completely unlearn what one has been taught, no matter how damaging it may be. Parents, being human, certainly can be purveyors of ill ideas as well as good ones. Navigating which are which can be extremely difficult and often found out through suffering the consequences. But, when those ideas are attached to eternal things...
Well done on this poem, my friend. It speaks truth for many. 👏🌹
March 23rd, 2025 07:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hard to completely unlearn what one has been taught, no matter how damaging it may be. Parents, being human, certainly can be purveyors of ill ideas as well as good ones. Navigating which are which can be extremely difficult and often found out through suffering the consequences. But, when those ideas are attached to eternal things...
Well done on this poem, my friend. It speaks truth for many. 👏🌹
March 23rd, 2025 07:13
Easter Child
Poetic Licence said:
A write that to many parents are guilty off, often without realising they have done it. Children have enough to cope with without having to deal with their parent\'s fears as well, well written and expressed
March 22nd, 2025 10:55
Poetic Licence said:
A write that to many parents are guilty off, often without realising they have done it. Children have enough to cope with without having to deal with their parent\'s fears as well, well written and expressed
March 22nd, 2025 10:55
Easter Child
sorenbarrett said:
It is too bad that parents transmit their own fears to their children. A traumatic poem
March 22nd, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
It is too bad that parents transmit their own fears to their children. A traumatic poem
March 22nd, 2025 09:59
Easter Child
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Memories like these are always deep engraved .. good one
March 22nd, 2025 09:43
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Memories like these are always deep engraved .. good one
March 22nd, 2025 09:43
Plague
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and emotional write, a sense of feeling hopeless and no future to look to, the write is layered with darkness and pain which the author is clearly feeling, very well written and expressed, take care
March 22nd, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and emotional write, a sense of feeling hopeless and no future to look to, the write is layered with darkness and pain which the author is clearly feeling, very well written and expressed, take care
March 22nd, 2025 03:20
Plague
sorenbarrett said:
The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and need. The metaphor I take is that we are all such a child and in such helpless and homeless, in need without much help but charity. Pain comes in many forms and it grows dark when hope dies. Well written and very emotional. Dark and yet real a sad read.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and need. The metaphor I take is that we are all such a child and in such helpless and homeless, in need without much help but charity. Pain comes in many forms and it grows dark when hope dies. Well written and very emotional. Dark and yet real a sad read.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
Ugly Joint
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very interesting write which needs to be read a few times, nicely expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very interesting write which needs to be read a few times, nicely expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:19
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