Comments received on poems by Damaso
Sorry
orchidee said:
You know one of us is gonna say this - so it might be my turn to say it. Not exorcise, but plenty exercise for Obi and Popeye. Don\'t explain how. Swoon! lol.
June 27th, 2025 09:34
orchidee said:
You know one of us is gonna say this - so it might be my turn to say it. Not exorcise, but plenty exercise for Obi and Popeye. Don\'t explain how. Swoon! lol.
June 27th, 2025 09:34
Sorry
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, I said too many years ago that the initial for my middle name \"S\" represented \"sorry\" since I must apologize all the time. If it\'s any use, I find the Scriptures comforting, \"...there is forgiveness with Thee, that Thou mayest be feared--\" and, \"...Thou, LORD, art good, and ready to forgive, and plentious in mercy to all them that call upon Thee--\" Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 12:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, I said too many years ago that the initial for my middle name \"S\" represented \"sorry\" since I must apologize all the time. If it\'s any use, I find the Scriptures comforting, \"...there is forgiveness with Thee, that Thou mayest be feared--\" and, \"...Thou, LORD, art good, and ready to forgive, and plentious in mercy to all them that call upon Thee--\" Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 12:37
Sorry
Poetic Licence said:
Overpowering feeling if guilt can leave us feeling that we chained and being suffocated by it . When our cries and pleas for forgiveness go unanswered we are left to believe this will be eternal, dark, raw and powerful write
June 26th, 2025 11:05
Poetic Licence said:
Overpowering feeling if guilt can leave us feeling that we chained and being suffocated by it . When our cries and pleas for forgiveness go unanswered we are left to believe this will be eternal, dark, raw and powerful write
June 26th, 2025 11:05
Sorry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. Guilt. It consumes and devours, does it not? Guilt need not be forever, but when one doesn\'t respond to the plea for forgiveness we are left with having to find closure on our own. That can feel, and for some it is, eternally damning. This is very well expressed in this poem. I have been here...I have carried this regret. Thank you friend. 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah. Guilt. It consumes and devours, does it not? Guilt need not be forever, but when one doesn\'t respond to the plea for forgiveness we are left with having to find closure on our own. That can feel, and for some it is, eternally damning. This is very well expressed in this poem. I have been here...I have carried this regret. Thank you friend. 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:41
Sorry
sorenbarrett said:
Such passion in this poem it speaks raw and bleeding. With bloody hands the poem is crafted. A fave
June 26th, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Such passion in this poem it speaks raw and bleeding. With bloody hands the poem is crafted. A fave
June 26th, 2025 08:19
True Madness
NafisaSB said:
resistance under attack - i find this poem has deep meanings..
good read
June 24th, 2025 01:30
NafisaSB said:
resistance under attack - i find this poem has deep meanings..
good read
June 24th, 2025 01:30
Uncle Mojarra
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello again, to me this poem reached out from the paragraphs. There was something about it becoming an intense lament . A lamentation for life for reversed reflections. For taking the embers from the fire and using them as voices that speak through the flakes and the flames. For me this piece had great impact. Its voice is just so strong and compelling that I felt drawn in. Though not by mere emotions since your piece reflects many realities. The darker ones that perhaps we turn our back towards, the shards, the bits and pieces. Thank you for sharing this poem!
June 22nd, 2025 15:03
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello again, to me this poem reached out from the paragraphs. There was something about it becoming an intense lament . A lamentation for life for reversed reflections. For taking the embers from the fire and using them as voices that speak through the flakes and the flames. For me this piece had great impact. Its voice is just so strong and compelling that I felt drawn in. Though not by mere emotions since your piece reflects many realities. The darker ones that perhaps we turn our back towards, the shards, the bits and pieces. Thank you for sharing this poem!
June 22nd, 2025 15:03
Uncle Mojarra
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend. The character development and meaning of the poem stand out. A fave from me! 🌹👏
June 21st, 2025 20:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent, my friend. The character development and meaning of the poem stand out. A fave from me! 🌹👏
June 21st, 2025 20:43
Uncle Mojarra
Poetic Licence said:
I have to be honest I am still working on this one, I like the building of the character and story but I think the meaning is multilayered and I haven\'t quite got it yet, dark, haunting and enjoyable read
June 21st, 2025 12:39
Poetic Licence said:
I have to be honest I am still working on this one, I like the building of the character and story but I think the meaning is multilayered and I haven\'t quite got it yet, dark, haunting and enjoyable read
June 21st, 2025 12:39
Uncle Mojarra
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely character development in this poem. Loved it
June 21st, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely character development in this poem. Loved it
June 21st, 2025 10:54
True Madness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haunting and powerful poem, my friend. I could feel the pain in it. Well done. 👏🌹
June 17th, 2025 22:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haunting and powerful poem, my friend. I could feel the pain in it. Well done. 👏🌹
June 17th, 2025 22:01
True Madness
Poetic Licence said:
A very deep write, they say without pain there is no gain but I beg to differ with that opinion, if every time we tried to push forward someone treads you down by the throat, the pain you end up feeling is self inflicted and there is no gain in that, nicely expressed write, wishing you all the best
June 17th, 2025 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very deep write, they say without pain there is no gain but I beg to differ with that opinion, if every time we tried to push forward someone treads you down by the throat, the pain you end up feeling is self inflicted and there is no gain in that, nicely expressed write, wishing you all the best
June 17th, 2025 10:38
True Madness
hzugman said:
Interesting poem and thanx for the favorites. And you are never alone.
June 17th, 2025 09:48
hzugman said:
Interesting poem and thanx for the favorites. And you are never alone.
June 17th, 2025 09:48
True Madness
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reaches deep and in it I see standing for what one is may result in being trodden under foot of (progress?) A thought provoking piece
June 17th, 2025 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reaches deep and in it I see standing for what one is may result in being trodden under foot of (progress?) A thought provoking piece
June 17th, 2025 08:29
Rises
NafisaSB said:
poets can find inspiration in the most mundane things as you have proved
good write - and yes things do reappear sometimes in another form
June 17th, 2025 00:35
NafisaSB said:
poets can find inspiration in the most mundane things as you have proved
good write - and yes things do reappear sometimes in another form
June 17th, 2025 00:35
Fury
Poetic Licence said:
A dark, angry and spiritual write, possibly the anger being aimed at god. Forgiving Vengeance, a frightening thought, the read grabs you by the horns and says listen, nicely expressed and written
June 16th, 2025 01:14
Poetic Licence said:
A dark, angry and spiritual write, possibly the anger being aimed at god. Forgiving Vengeance, a frightening thought, the read grabs you by the horns and says listen, nicely expressed and written
June 16th, 2025 01:14
Fury
sorenbarrett said:
Spiritual in nature with religious overtones this poem feels threatening. Well done.
June 15th, 2025 20:22
sorenbarrett said:
Spiritual in nature with religious overtones this poem feels threatening. Well done.
June 15th, 2025 20:22
Fury
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Silence is the voice of God.\" A profound line in a sea of profound lines. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
June 15th, 2025 19:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Silence is the voice of God.\" A profound line in a sea of profound lines. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
June 15th, 2025 19:57
Rises
Poetic Licence said:
Nostalgia bearing wisdom, nothing stays the same, everything is transformed in one way or another as it completes it cycle, combined with essence of our existence to search for the light, pleasure to read as always
June 11th, 2025 08:14
Poetic Licence said:
Nostalgia bearing wisdom, nothing stays the same, everything is transformed in one way or another as it completes it cycle, combined with essence of our existence to search for the light, pleasure to read as always
June 11th, 2025 08:14
Rises
sorenbarrett said:
It is the nostalgia brought by the steam off of the mate that triggered the fave.
(The smoke rises,
and the steam from the boiled water in my mate also rises,
seeking the light)
Memories of the past and the combined metaphor of the cycle of life, this paired with the seeking of the light a fantastic touch where all that pass through this cycle seek the light, the understanding of it all. A wonderful poem
June 11th, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is the nostalgia brought by the steam off of the mate that triggered the fave.
(The smoke rises,
and the steam from the boiled water in my mate also rises,
seeking the light)
Memories of the past and the combined metaphor of the cycle of life, this paired with the seeking of the light a fantastic touch where all that pass through this cycle seek the light, the understanding of it all. A wonderful poem
June 11th, 2025 08:04
Corsican
Poetic Licence said:
Many blinders on peoples dreams, some have no control over these blinders. They attack and control from within building barriers and destroying progress in the persons effort to find a restful inner peace, well expressed write
June 9th, 2025 21:37
Poetic Licence said:
Many blinders on peoples dreams, some have no control over these blinders. They attack and control from within building barriers and destroying progress in the persons effort to find a restful inner peace, well expressed write
June 9th, 2025 21:37
Corsican
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read with multiple metaphors. I liked the line (Blinders on my dreams)
June 9th, 2025 16:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read with multiple metaphors. I liked the line (Blinders on my dreams)
June 9th, 2025 16:57
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