Comments received on poems by Damaso
Scrouger
RSM0812 said:
Nothing like getting lost in your own thoughts and emotions. This poem conveys heritage and necessity. I enjoyed it very much.
June 1st, 2025 23:42
RSM0812 said:
Nothing like getting lost in your own thoughts and emotions. This poem conveys heritage and necessity. I enjoyed it very much.
June 1st, 2025 23:42
Scrouger
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write over the continued descriminitory behaviour and actions that are still so prevelant in today\'s society. There should be no room for any descrmination of any form, especially racism, strong and well expressed write
June 1st, 2025 12:25
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write over the continued descriminitory behaviour and actions that are still so prevelant in today\'s society. There should be no room for any descrmination of any form, especially racism, strong and well expressed write
June 1st, 2025 12:25
Scrouger
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is sad and feels discriminating against color and social class. Great wording
June 1st, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is sad and feels discriminating against color and social class. Great wording
June 1st, 2025 11:56
Beasts
Dan Williams said:
The mysterious Golden Beast. Clever, thought provoking. Well Done.
May 31st, 2025 00:57
Dan Williams said:
The mysterious Golden Beast. Clever, thought provoking. Well Done.
May 31st, 2025 00:57
Beasts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One cannot escape that which lives within. The only way out is deeper in. Something i have been reflecting on lately. Wonderful poem that speaks deeply to me, my friend! Well done. A fave! 👏🌹
May 29th, 2025 20:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One cannot escape that which lives within. The only way out is deeper in. Something i have been reflecting on lately. Wonderful poem that speaks deeply to me, my friend! Well done. A fave! 👏🌹
May 29th, 2025 20:47
Beasts
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me, sometimes I want to crawl away but can\'t, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 09:58
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me, sometimes I want to crawl away but can\'t, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 09:58
Beasts
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor in this poem conveys the message well. Nicely said
May 29th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor in this poem conveys the message well. Nicely said
May 29th, 2025 09:51
Ruined
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I get this message to its core...personally. Thank you for this. 👏🌹
May 28th, 2025 19:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I get this message to its core...personally. Thank you for this. 👏🌹
May 28th, 2025 19:57
Ruined
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message in this poem dark and foreboding it speaks to the doubt and questioning or ourselves that reside in all of us. Lovely
May 28th, 2025 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message in this poem dark and foreboding it speaks to the doubt and questioning or ourselves that reside in all of us. Lovely
May 28th, 2025 07:26
Family (Famel)
Poetic Licence said:
A great meaning for us, how dare we think are better, I doubt we are in a position to question anything, great write
May 22nd, 2025 12:31
Poetic Licence said:
A great meaning for us, how dare we think are better, I doubt we are in a position to question anything, great write
May 22nd, 2025 12:31
Family (Famel)
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and metaphor of us as well. How dare we feel greater than they. They understand things we don\'t and we what they don\'t so which is better?
May 22nd, 2025 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and metaphor of us as well. How dare we feel greater than they. They understand things we don\'t and we what they don\'t so which is better?
May 22nd, 2025 09:23
SNG1
Poetic Licence said:
Deeply dark, haunting yet true, the battles always begin within us, nicely expressed and written
May 19th, 2025 09:43
Poetic Licence said:
Deeply dark, haunting yet true, the battles always begin within us, nicely expressed and written
May 19th, 2025 09:43
Soccer Rains
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor! A most powerful write, my friend! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor! A most powerful write, my friend! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:29
Soccer Rains
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of an ongoing battle within themselves, which they feel they are losing, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:26
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of an ongoing battle within themselves, which they feel they are losing, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:26
Soccer Rains
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like competition at its most personal level. An intimate write stated in the public sense. Well done
May 16th, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like competition at its most personal level. An intimate write stated in the public sense. Well done
May 16th, 2025 09:17
Benito
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Food for thought, my friend. Excellent poem. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Food for thought, my friend. Excellent poem. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:10
Benito
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting chain of thoughts and we all have such chains and then have to ask what are you thinking. Lovely
May 13th, 2025 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting chain of thoughts and we all have such chains and then have to ask what are you thinking. Lovely
May 13th, 2025 17:17
Treasure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Damaso, my friend! This one hits direct and closes with power. Well done! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Damaso, my friend! This one hits direct and closes with power. Well done! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:37
Treasure
Poetic Licence said:
A direct hit to the heart, loved the last verse, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 11:52
Poetic Licence said:
A direct hit to the heart, loved the last verse, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 11:52
Treasure
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that like an arrow to the heart meet their mark. The whole last stanza was marvelous. A definite Fave
May 10th, 2025 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that like an arrow to the heart meet their mark. The whole last stanza was marvelous. A definite Fave
May 10th, 2025 11:39
Coco
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with Aztec images the face with gritted teeth being the skull of death, the bird like the Quetzal bird, the mirror like the obsidian smoking mirror of Tezcatlipoca and his association with darkness, the pulling out of the skin associated with Xipe Totec or the flayed one who wore the skins of the vanquished. I won\'t go on but this poem carries amazing imagery of a past culture. A fave
May 8th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with Aztec images the face with gritted teeth being the skull of death, the bird like the Quetzal bird, the mirror like the obsidian smoking mirror of Tezcatlipoca and his association with darkness, the pulling out of the skin associated with Xipe Totec or the flayed one who wore the skins of the vanquished. I won\'t go on but this poem carries amazing imagery of a past culture. A fave
May 8th, 2025 05:17
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