Comments received on poems by Damaso
Coco
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with Aztec images the face with gritted teeth being the skull of death, the bird like the Quetzal bird, the mirror like the obsidian smoking mirror of Tezcatlipoca and his association with darkness, the pulling out of the skin associated with Xipe Totec or the flayed one who wore the skins of the vanquished. I won\'t go on but this poem carries amazing imagery of a past culture. A fave
May 8th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with Aztec images the face with gritted teeth being the skull of death, the bird like the Quetzal bird, the mirror like the obsidian smoking mirror of Tezcatlipoca and his association with darkness, the pulling out of the skin associated with Xipe Totec or the flayed one who wore the skins of the vanquished. I won\'t go on but this poem carries amazing imagery of a past culture. A fave
May 8th, 2025 05:17
Coco
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful, dark, haunting yet somehow beautiful, you can feel the rawness and honesty, wonderfully written
May 8th, 2025 02:26
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful, dark, haunting yet somehow beautiful, you can feel the rawness and honesty, wonderfully written
May 8th, 2025 02:26
Coco
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Haunting meet beautiful. A profoundly powerful poem, my friend! πΉπ
May 7th, 2025 21:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Haunting meet beautiful. A profoundly powerful poem, my friend! πΉπ
May 7th, 2025 21:24
I Fear
Poetic Licence said:
A question many of us struggling with self confidence and self worth have asked in the past, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 06:22
Poetic Licence said:
A question many of us struggling with self confidence and self worth have asked in the past, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 06:22
I Fear
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know the feeling. I have been there and asked that. Powerful write, my friend. πΉπ
May 4th, 2025 18:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know the feeling. I have been there and asked that. Powerful write, my friend. πΉπ
May 4th, 2025 18:52
I Fear
sorenbarrett said:
So short but a question that many ask of why our partners are with us. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
So short but a question that many ask of why our partners are with us. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 08:47
Sidewalk Scars
sorenbarrett said:
A peak at this poem reveals a few key holes to places a peeping Tom would look. A most interesting write.
May 1st, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A peak at this poem reveals a few key holes to places a peeping Tom would look. A most interesting write.
May 1st, 2025 04:35
I Couldn\'t Do It
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of power from words said. Nicely done.
April 28th, 2025 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of power from words said. Nicely done.
April 28th, 2025 09:57
I Couldn\'t Do It
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Powerful poem with a powerful note. \"I crawl and crash into everything\". Indeed. I get this, I relate. Well done, Damaso! πΉπ
April 28th, 2025 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Powerful poem with a powerful note. \"I crawl and crash into everything\". Indeed. I get this, I relate. Well done, Damaso! πΉπ
April 28th, 2025 09:26
New Moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A traumatizing moment that would endure in one\'s psyche for life. A profound poem that expresses that tragic reality. Well done, Damaso! I really do enjoy your work, my friend. πΉππ€π€
April 22nd, 2025 20:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A traumatizing moment that would endure in one\'s psyche for life. A profound poem that expresses that tragic reality. Well done, Damaso! I really do enjoy your work, my friend. πΉππ€π€
April 22nd, 2025 20:06
New Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and full of sad emotion and grief. It is in such moments that all things seem to jeer. Well written
April 22nd, 2025 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and full of sad emotion and grief. It is in such moments that all things seem to jeer. Well written
April 22nd, 2025 09:50
Yes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep, dark, desperate, raw and most importantly real. This, my friend, is an excellent expression of being overwhelmed by society, at wits end, and not sure where the \"crossed-line\" exists anymore...and the majority in society, live oblivious to it all, unaware that their opiate oblivion (the opiate being complacency) is afforded them by the oppressed they choose to close their eyes on . Impressive write that should be relatable to many...it certainly is relatable to me, my friend. Well done. πΉπ
April 20th, 2025 18:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep, dark, desperate, raw and most importantly real. This, my friend, is an excellent expression of being overwhelmed by society, at wits end, and not sure where the \"crossed-line\" exists anymore...and the majority in society, live oblivious to it all, unaware that their opiate oblivion (the opiate being complacency) is afforded them by the oppressed they choose to close their eyes on . Impressive write that should be relatable to many...it certainly is relatable to me, my friend. Well done. πΉπ
April 20th, 2025 18:17
Yes
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of going beyond the limit and we all should know our limits. Nicely written
April 20th, 2025 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of going beyond the limit and we all should know our limits. Nicely written
April 20th, 2025 10:40
New Emperor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful metaphor, my friend. Well done! πΉπ
April 18th, 2025 21:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful metaphor, my friend. Well done! πΉπ
April 18th, 2025 21:16
New Emperor
sorenbarrett said:
A great fantasy poem but I feel a metaphor here. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
A great fantasy poem but I feel a metaphor here. Nicely done
April 18th, 2025 13:47
The Two Madmen
Poetic Licence said:
Those who will kill and those who just think of doing it, a very fine indeed that some people walk, powerful write again, nicely written
April 6th, 2025 02:13
Poetic Licence said:
Those who will kill and those who just think of doing it, a very fine indeed that some people walk, powerful write again, nicely written
April 6th, 2025 02:13
The Two Madmen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful running metaphor. Well done on this, Damaso! Hope your weekend is awesome!
April 5th, 2025 12:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful running metaphor. Well done on this, Damaso! Hope your weekend is awesome!
April 5th, 2025 12:34
The Two Madmen
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that works in all areas of this world. Nicely penned
April 5th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that works in all areas of this world. Nicely penned
April 5th, 2025 10:58
Paralysis
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting write with an underlying sense of anguish and pain of a reccuring nightmares, and is desperate for the demon\'s to be quite so they can sleep in peace, wonderful write
March 30th, 2025 11:33
Poetic Licence said:
A quite haunting write with an underlying sense of anguish and pain of a reccuring nightmares, and is desperate for the demon\'s to be quite so they can sleep in peace, wonderful write
March 30th, 2025 11:33
Paralysis
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors that speak silence, now that\'s a deep thing to ponder. Somber and a bit dark this poem speaks with anguish. Nicely written
March 30th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphors that speak silence, now that\'s a deep thing to ponder. Somber and a bit dark this poem speaks with anguish. Nicely written
March 30th, 2025 10:45
Wall
Poetic Licence said:
Pain hurt, losses,love beauty everything wrapped up in this write, it is a wonderful piece of writing
March 29th, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
Pain hurt, losses,love beauty everything wrapped up in this write, it is a wonderful piece of writing
March 29th, 2025 12:47
Wall
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Promises of forgotten loves, rusted by rain, sun, and moon\". Wow! One of many amazing lines, Damaso! Great job on this. A fave for me. πΉπ
March 29th, 2025 12:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Promises of forgotten loves, rusted by rain, sun, and moon\". Wow! One of many amazing lines, Damaso! Great job on this. A fave for me. πΉπ
March 29th, 2025 12:03
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