Comments received on poems by Damaso
Conflict
arqios said:
Nice! Bringing to life that story in a powerful poem🕊️🙏🏻
August 28th, 2025 08:51
arqios said:
Nice! Bringing to life that story in a powerful poem🕊️🙏🏻
August 28th, 2025 08:51
Conflict
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of the story of Gilgamesh filtering through mythology into the Bible and to present. Wonderful poetic lines here loved it A fave
August 28th, 2025 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
This reminds me of the story of Gilgamesh filtering through mythology into the Bible and to present. Wonderful poetic lines here loved it A fave
August 28th, 2025 08:35
Hubbub
Teddy.15 said:
You may say (happy to be here) your words paint a lovely picture. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 14:22
Teddy.15 said:
You may say (happy to be here) your words paint a lovely picture. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 14:22
Hubbub
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a line ( I don\'t know what I\'m going to say) That line goes through every poet\'s mind at some time or other. A good read
August 26th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
Now there is a line ( I don\'t know what I\'m going to say) That line goes through every poet\'s mind at some time or other. A good read
August 26th, 2025 10:55
Dazzled
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damaso, this is 🔥. The Master and the Savage tearing at the same flame…it’s primal, consuming, and relentless. A gripping piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2025 16:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damaso, this is 🔥. The Master and the Savage tearing at the same flame…it’s primal, consuming, and relentless. A gripping piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 23rd, 2025 16:43
Dazzled
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message in this poem and the wording is well done. Loved it
August 23rd, 2025 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message in this poem and the wording is well done. Loved it
August 23rd, 2025 09:31
Balance
NafisaSB said:
until i read your comments was wondering which three were mentioned - great work there..keep it coming
August 21st, 2025 00:07
NafisaSB said:
until i read your comments was wondering which three were mentioned - great work there..keep it coming
August 21st, 2025 00:07
Bet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong piece, my friend. Violent and visionary all at once, where abyss and universe blur together. Well crafted, Damaso. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 19:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A strong piece, my friend. Violent and visionary all at once, where abyss and universe blur together. Well crafted, Damaso. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 19:50
Sunrise
NafisaSB said:
wonderful take on the dawn, and sunrise - a big \'like\'
August 20th, 2025 01:23
NafisaSB said:
wonderful take on the dawn, and sunrise - a big \'like\'
August 20th, 2025 01:23
Bet
sorenbarrett said:
Love your author\'s note that clarifies the poem. A mad hatter dash for a finish line that does not exist. Well done
August 19th, 2025 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
Love your author\'s note that clarifies the poem. A mad hatter dash for a finish line that does not exist. Well done
August 19th, 2025 09:23
Bet
Friendship said:
Your poem addresses themes of violence, existentialism, and the commodification of life and death. It reflects on the idea of being a pawn in larger games controlled by others, as well as the internal conflict of managing one\'s own chaos while grappling with the expectations and calculations of the outside world.
August 19th, 2025 09:21
Friendship said:
Your poem addresses themes of violence, existentialism, and the commodification of life and death. It reflects on the idea of being a pawn in larger games controlled by others, as well as the internal conflict of managing one\'s own chaos while grappling with the expectations and calculations of the outside world.
August 19th, 2025 09:21
Happy Satudays
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around observation and the connection between individuals and their surroundings. It captures a moment of quiet reflection on a Saturday morning, highlighting the beauty of everyday life and the deep sense of familiarity and recognition between people. The subject matter includes vivid descriptions of nature, domestic life, and the warmth of human interaction, suggesting a sense of community and belonging.
August 18th, 2025 08:13
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around observation and the connection between individuals and their surroundings. It captures a moment of quiet reflection on a Saturday morning, highlighting the beauty of everyday life and the deep sense of familiarity and recognition between people. The subject matter includes vivid descriptions of nature, domestic life, and the warmth of human interaction, suggesting a sense of community and belonging.
August 18th, 2025 08:13
Happy Satudays
Poetic Licence said:
A very loving write to loved member of the family who has passed, we forget sometimes when looking at older people, we are looking at our futures, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 13:55
Poetic Licence said:
A very loving write to loved member of the family who has passed, we forget sometimes when looking at older people, we are looking at our futures, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 13:55
Happy Satudays
sorenbarrett said:
Exotic for me but at the same time it feels familiar. A most lovely write
August 17th, 2025 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
Exotic for me but at the same time it feels familiar. A most lovely write
August 17th, 2025 13:05
Cross
Poetic Licence said:
I have often trled to fly and reach out further but I have met many Zeus\'s along the way, making it very difficult to get off the ground, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 09:38
Poetic Licence said:
I have often trled to fly and reach out further but I have met many Zeus\'s along the way, making it very difficult to get off the ground, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 09:38
Cross
sorenbarrett said:
Greek mythology pervades this poem and is always good as metaphors
August 14th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
Greek mythology pervades this poem and is always good as metaphors
August 14th, 2025 08:41
Sunrise
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damaso, this feels like catching a wild, fleeting dream in your hands...only to watch it leap away into the morning. The red fox imagery is brilliant, both sly and luminous, and I love how you hold that moment between beauty and impermanence. Well done. A fave from me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2025 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damaso, this feels like catching a wild, fleeting dream in your hands...only to watch it leap away into the morning. The red fox imagery is brilliant, both sly and luminous, and I love how you hold that moment between beauty and impermanence. Well done. A fave from me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 12th, 2025 10:06
Sunrise
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely, artistic, psychological it speaks to anyone who has seen things in the clouds. A lovely write
August 12th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely, artistic, psychological it speaks to anyone who has seen things in the clouds. A lovely write
August 12th, 2025 09:37
Sunrise
Poetic Licence said:
Many fleeting moments are missed in this world as we are so wrapped up in ourselves, love the idea of the sun being a fox, gracefully gliding by and looking down on us fools, enjoyed the read
August 12th, 2025 09:27
Poetic Licence said:
Many fleeting moments are missed in this world as we are so wrapped up in ourselves, love the idea of the sun being a fox, gracefully gliding by and looking down on us fools, enjoyed the read
August 12th, 2025 09:27
Sunrise
Caring dove said:
I like the idea of the sunrise .. being something else ( the fox )
An interesting and nicely expressed writing
August 12th, 2025 08:25
Caring dove said:
I like the idea of the sunrise .. being something else ( the fox )
An interesting and nicely expressed writing
August 12th, 2025 08:25
Crush
Friendship said:
The poem illuminates the profound intricacies of human existence, inspiring readers to introspectively examine their journeys of struggle, self-discovery, and resilience in the face of adversity, serving as a powerful testament to life\'s dualities and advocating for compassion and profound understanding.
August 9th, 2025 12:14
Friendship said:
The poem illuminates the profound intricacies of human existence, inspiring readers to introspectively examine their journeys of struggle, self-discovery, and resilience in the face of adversity, serving as a powerful testament to life\'s dualities and advocating for compassion and profound understanding.
August 9th, 2025 12:14
Crush
V1RU$ said:
I love the thorough explanation, how well you did and the time/dedication you most likely have used on this!
August 7th, 2025 23:16
V1RU$ said:
I love the thorough explanation, how well you did and the time/dedication you most likely have used on this!
August 7th, 2025 23:16
Crush
Poetic Licence said:
This gave me the sense that the heart has been touched in a good and positive way, over riding the darker element\'s, enjoyed the read
August 7th, 2025 13:24
Poetic Licence said:
This gave me the sense that the heart has been touched in a good and positive way, over riding the darker element\'s, enjoyed the read
August 7th, 2025 13:24
Crush
sorenbarrett said:
This poem like a jigsaw puzzle requires assembly and patience starting with the edges and working toward the middle. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem like a jigsaw puzzle requires assembly and patience starting with the edges and working toward the middle. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 12:59
What was it?
Teddy.15 said:
I see courage and determination to have freedom amongst all the things that could hold one back. Wonderful. 🌹
August 6th, 2025 03:04
Teddy.15 said:
I see courage and determination to have freedom amongst all the things that could hold one back. Wonderful. 🌹
August 6th, 2025 03:04
What was it?
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of freedom, innocence, and the struggles of daily life in a challenging environment. It reflects on the complexities of navigating both physical and emotional landscapes, juxtaposing youthful optimism with the harsh realities of existence.
August 5th, 2025 18:01
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of freedom, innocence, and the struggles of daily life in a challenging environment. It reflects on the complexities of navigating both physical and emotional landscapes, juxtaposing youthful optimism with the harsh realities of existence.
August 5th, 2025 18:01
What was it?
Bella Shepard said:
You describe the little pariah in charming detail. He flies on his wheels of freedom, where it\'s all about the joy of the journey even if he forgets what it\'s for. Thoroughly enjoyed!
August 5th, 2025 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
You describe the little pariah in charming detail. He flies on his wheels of freedom, where it\'s all about the joy of the journey even if he forgets what it\'s for. Thoroughly enjoyed!
August 5th, 2025 12:28
What was it?
peto said:
Could be way off however I liked it so much u will try
The little pariah appears to love his bike
Amidst the bandits and slums his innocence seems to give him a pass
He seems helpful but as soon as he starts pedal everything else takes a back seat
Even his guardian angel snorts on frustration
The chicken or cabbage line is great
Anyway
I thoroughly enjoyed this read
August 5th, 2025 11:47
peto said:
Could be way off however I liked it so much u will try
The little pariah appears to love his bike
Amidst the bandits and slums his innocence seems to give him a pass
He seems helpful but as soon as he starts pedal everything else takes a back seat
Even his guardian angel snorts on frustration
The chicken or cabbage line is great
Anyway
I thoroughly enjoyed this read
August 5th, 2025 11:47
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