Comments received on poems by Damaso



Beasts
nephilim56 said:

enjoyed the write, we have been there I think

May 30th, 2025 05:31

Beasts
Tristan Robert Lange said:

One cannot escape that which lives within. The only way out is deeper in. Something i have been reflecting on lately. Wonderful poem that speaks deeply to me, my friend! Well done. A fave! 👏🌹

May 29th, 2025 20:47

Beasts
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 29th, 2025 10:27

Beasts
Poetic Licence said:

Very relatable to me, sometimes I want to crawl away but can\'t, nicely expressed and written

May 29th, 2025 09:58

Beasts
sorenbarrett said:

The metaphor in this poem conveys the message well. Nicely said

May 29th, 2025 09:51

Ruined
nephilim56 said:

a very good write, enjoyed

May 29th, 2025 08:46

Ruined
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Indeed. I get this message to its core...personally. Thank you for this. 👏🌹

May 28th, 2025 19:57

Ruined
nephilim56 said:

much enjoyed, thanks for sharing

May 28th, 2025 07:55

Ruined
sorenbarrett said:

A deep message in this poem dark and foreboding it speaks to the doubt and questioning or ourselves that reside in all of us. Lovely

May 28th, 2025 07:26

Family (Famel)
Poetic Licence said:

A great meaning for us, how dare we think are better, I doubt we are in a position to question anything, great write

May 22nd, 2025 12:31

Soccer Rains
nephilim56 said:

thoroughly enjoyed this

May 22nd, 2025 11:00

Family (Famel)
nephilim56 said:

great write

May 22nd, 2025 10:58

Family (Famel)
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem and metaphor of us as well. How dare we feel greater than they. They understand things we don\'t and we what they don\'t so which is better?

May 22nd, 2025 09:23

SNG1
Poetic Licence said:

Deeply dark, haunting yet true, the battles always begin within us, nicely expressed and written

May 19th, 2025 09:43

SNG1
sorenbarrett said:

So true most attacks do begin within. A lovely write.

May 19th, 2025 08:34

Soccer Rains
Mutley Ravishes said:

This poem is intriguing!

May 16th, 2025 23:01

Soccer Rains
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great metaphor! A most powerful write, my friend! 🌹👏

May 16th, 2025 20:29

Soccer Rains
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

May 16th, 2025 10:48

Soccer Rains
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of an ongoing battle within themselves, which they feel they are losing, nicely expressed and written

May 16th, 2025 09:26

Soccer Rains
sorenbarrett said:

This sounds like competition at its most personal level. An intimate write stated in the public sense. Well done

May 16th, 2025 09:17

Benito
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Food for thought, my friend. Excellent poem. 🌹👏

May 14th, 2025 11:10

Benito
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting chain of thoughts and we all have such chains and then have to ask what are you thinking. Lovely

May 13th, 2025 17:17

Treasure
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Love this Damaso, my friend! This one hits direct and closes with power. Well done! 🌹👏

May 10th, 2025 15:37

Treasure
Poetic Licence said:

A direct hit to the heart, loved the last verse, nicely done

May 10th, 2025 11:52

Treasure
sorenbarrett said:

Great lines in this poem that like an arrow to the heart meet their mark. The whole last stanza was marvelous. A definite Fave

May 10th, 2025 11:39

Coco
sorenbarrett said:

This poem is filled with Aztec images the face with gritted teeth being the skull of death, the bird like the Quetzal bird, the mirror like the obsidian smoking mirror of Tezcatlipoca and his association with darkness, the pulling out of the skin associated with Xipe Totec or the flayed one who wore the skins of the vanquished. I won\'t go on but this poem carries amazing imagery of a past culture. A fave

May 8th, 2025 05:17

Coco
Poetic Licence said:

Powerful, dark, haunting yet somehow beautiful, you can feel the rawness and honesty, wonderfully written

May 8th, 2025 02:26

Coco
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Haunting meet beautiful. A profoundly powerful poem, my friend! 🌹👏

May 7th, 2025 21:24

I Fear
Poetic Licence said:

A question many of us struggling with self confidence and self worth have asked in the past, nicely expressed and written

May 7th, 2025 06:22

I Fear
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I know the feeling. I have been there and asked that. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹👏

May 4th, 2025 18:52

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