Comments received on poems by Damaso
SNG1
Poetic Licence said:
Deeply dark, haunting yet true, the battles always begin within us, nicely expressed and written
May 19th, 2025 09:43
Poetic Licence said:
Deeply dark, haunting yet true, the battles always begin within us, nicely expressed and written
May 19th, 2025 09:43
Soccer Rains
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor! A most powerful write, my friend! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor! A most powerful write, my friend! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:29
Soccer Rains
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of an ongoing battle within themselves, which they feel they are losing, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:26
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of an ongoing battle within themselves, which they feel they are losing, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:26
Soccer Rains
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like competition at its most personal level. An intimate write stated in the public sense. Well done
May 16th, 2025 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like competition at its most personal level. An intimate write stated in the public sense. Well done
May 16th, 2025 09:17
Benito
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Food for thought, my friend. Excellent poem. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Food for thought, my friend. Excellent poem. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:10
Benito
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting chain of thoughts and we all have such chains and then have to ask what are you thinking. Lovely
May 13th, 2025 17:17
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting chain of thoughts and we all have such chains and then have to ask what are you thinking. Lovely
May 13th, 2025 17:17
Treasure
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Damaso, my friend! This one hits direct and closes with power. Well done! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this Damaso, my friend! This one hits direct and closes with power. Well done! 🌹👏
May 10th, 2025 15:37
Treasure
Poetic Licence said:
A direct hit to the heart, loved the last verse, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 11:52
Poetic Licence said:
A direct hit to the heart, loved the last verse, nicely done
May 10th, 2025 11:52
Treasure
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that like an arrow to the heart meet their mark. The whole last stanza was marvelous. A definite Fave
May 10th, 2025 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines in this poem that like an arrow to the heart meet their mark. The whole last stanza was marvelous. A definite Fave
May 10th, 2025 11:39
Coco
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with Aztec images the face with gritted teeth being the skull of death, the bird like the Quetzal bird, the mirror like the obsidian smoking mirror of Tezcatlipoca and his association with darkness, the pulling out of the skin associated with Xipe Totec or the flayed one who wore the skins of the vanquished. I won\'t go on but this poem carries amazing imagery of a past culture. A fave
May 8th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is filled with Aztec images the face with gritted teeth being the skull of death, the bird like the Quetzal bird, the mirror like the obsidian smoking mirror of Tezcatlipoca and his association with darkness, the pulling out of the skin associated with Xipe Totec or the flayed one who wore the skins of the vanquished. I won\'t go on but this poem carries amazing imagery of a past culture. A fave
May 8th, 2025 05:17
Coco
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful, dark, haunting yet somehow beautiful, you can feel the rawness and honesty, wonderfully written
May 8th, 2025 02:26
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful, dark, haunting yet somehow beautiful, you can feel the rawness and honesty, wonderfully written
May 8th, 2025 02:26
Coco
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Haunting meet beautiful. A profoundly powerful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 21:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Haunting meet beautiful. A profoundly powerful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
May 7th, 2025 21:24
I Fear
Poetic Licence said:
A question many of us struggling with self confidence and self worth have asked in the past, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 06:22
Poetic Licence said:
A question many of us struggling with self confidence and self worth have asked in the past, nicely expressed and written
May 7th, 2025 06:22
I Fear
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know the feeling. I have been there and asked that. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know the feeling. I have been there and asked that. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:52
I Fear
sorenbarrett said:
So short but a question that many ask of why our partners are with us. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
So short but a question that many ask of why our partners are with us. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 08:47
Sidewalk Scars
sorenbarrett said:
A peak at this poem reveals a few key holes to places a peeping Tom would look. A most interesting write.
May 1st, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A peak at this poem reveals a few key holes to places a peeping Tom would look. A most interesting write.
May 1st, 2025 04:35
I Couldn\'t Do It
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of power from words said. Nicely done.
April 28th, 2025 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of power from words said. Nicely done.
April 28th, 2025 09:57
I Couldn\'t Do It
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Powerful poem with a powerful note. \"I crawl and crash into everything\". Indeed. I get this, I relate. Well done, Damaso! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 09:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Powerful poem with a powerful note. \"I crawl and crash into everything\". Indeed. I get this, I relate. Well done, Damaso! 🌹👏
April 28th, 2025 09:26
New Moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A traumatizing moment that would endure in one\'s psyche for life. A profound poem that expresses that tragic reality. Well done, Damaso! I really do enjoy your work, my friend. 🌹👏🖤🖤
April 22nd, 2025 20:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! A traumatizing moment that would endure in one\'s psyche for life. A profound poem that expresses that tragic reality. Well done, Damaso! I really do enjoy your work, my friend. 🌹👏🖤🖤
April 22nd, 2025 20:06
New Moon
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and full of sad emotion and grief. It is in such moments that all things seem to jeer. Well written
April 22nd, 2025 09:50
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and full of sad emotion and grief. It is in such moments that all things seem to jeer. Well written
April 22nd, 2025 09:50
Yes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep, dark, desperate, raw and most importantly real. This, my friend, is an excellent expression of being overwhelmed by society, at wits end, and not sure where the \"crossed-line\" exists anymore...and the majority in society, live oblivious to it all, unaware that their opiate oblivion (the opiate being complacency) is afforded them by the oppressed they choose to close their eyes on . Impressive write that should be relatable to many...it certainly is relatable to me, my friend. Well done. 🌹👏
April 20th, 2025 18:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deep, dark, desperate, raw and most importantly real. This, my friend, is an excellent expression of being overwhelmed by society, at wits end, and not sure where the \"crossed-line\" exists anymore...and the majority in society, live oblivious to it all, unaware that their opiate oblivion (the opiate being complacency) is afforded them by the oppressed they choose to close their eyes on . Impressive write that should be relatable to many...it certainly is relatable to me, my friend. Well done. 🌹👏
April 20th, 2025 18:17
Yes
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of going beyond the limit and we all should know our limits. Nicely written
April 20th, 2025 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
A dark poem of going beyond the limit and we all should know our limits. Nicely written
April 20th, 2025 10:40
New Emperor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful metaphor, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
April 18th, 2025 21:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful metaphor, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
April 18th, 2025 21:16
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