Comments received on poems by Damaso
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Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt and very real write, general society only See\'s what it wants to see, and chooses to close it\'s eyes to others reality even if it is on their doorstep. This write touching on the life of living on the streets from a young age, where in order to survive, different rules apply, relatable to millions of people around the world still living like this, great write
June 3rd, 2025 11:16
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt and very real write, general society only See\'s what it wants to see, and chooses to close it\'s eyes to others reality even if it is on their doorstep. This write touching on the life of living on the streets from a young age, where in order to survive, different rules apply, relatable to millions of people around the world still living like this, great write
June 3rd, 2025 11:16
I Couldn\'t Do It
Poetic Licence said:
Very strong write with some wonderful lines, to me very relatable I crawl and crash into everything, great write
June 3rd, 2025 11:10
Poetic Licence said:
Very strong write with some wonderful lines, to me very relatable I crawl and crash into everything, great write
June 3rd, 2025 11:10
Scrouger
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sad and horrifically real. The ugly sin of racism persists pervasively. Discrimination as a whole, actually, not just racism. It really seems to be on the rise now-a-days, which is both tragically sad and totally angering. Thank you for sharing this. It needs to be read, heard, processed, digested, absorbed by all, especially those who have never had such experiences. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
June 2nd, 2025 07:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sad and horrifically real. The ugly sin of racism persists pervasively. Discrimination as a whole, actually, not just racism. It really seems to be on the rise now-a-days, which is both tragically sad and totally angering. Thank you for sharing this. It needs to be read, heard, processed, digested, absorbed by all, especially those who have never had such experiences. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
June 2nd, 2025 07:04
Beasts
RSM0812 said:
To me this conveys the thoughts of a self admirer. It\'s good to love oneself but too much of a good thing is still narcissistic right
June 1st, 2025 23:49
RSM0812 said:
To me this conveys the thoughts of a self admirer. It\'s good to love oneself but too much of a good thing is still narcissistic right
June 1st, 2025 23:49
Scrouger
RSM0812 said:
Nothing like getting lost in your own thoughts and emotions. This poem conveys heritage and necessity. I enjoyed it very much.
June 1st, 2025 23:42
RSM0812 said:
Nothing like getting lost in your own thoughts and emotions. This poem conveys heritage and necessity. I enjoyed it very much.
June 1st, 2025 23:42
Scrouger
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write over the continued descriminitory behaviour and actions that are still so prevelant in today\'s society. There should be no room for any descrmination of any form, especially racism, strong and well expressed write
June 1st, 2025 12:25
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write over the continued descriminitory behaviour and actions that are still so prevelant in today\'s society. There should be no room for any descrmination of any form, especially racism, strong and well expressed write
June 1st, 2025 12:25
Scrouger
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is sad and feels discriminating against color and social class. Great wording
June 1st, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is sad and feels discriminating against color and social class. Great wording
June 1st, 2025 11:56
Beasts
Dan Williams said:
The mysterious Golden Beast. Clever, thought provoking. Well Done.
May 31st, 2025 00:57
Dan Williams said:
The mysterious Golden Beast. Clever, thought provoking. Well Done.
May 31st, 2025 00:57
Beasts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One cannot escape that which lives within. The only way out is deeper in. Something i have been reflecting on lately. Wonderful poem that speaks deeply to me, my friend! Well done. A fave! 👏🌹
May 29th, 2025 20:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One cannot escape that which lives within. The only way out is deeper in. Something i have been reflecting on lately. Wonderful poem that speaks deeply to me, my friend! Well done. A fave! 👏🌹
May 29th, 2025 20:47
Beasts
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me, sometimes I want to crawl away but can\'t, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 09:58
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me, sometimes I want to crawl away but can\'t, nicely expressed and written
May 29th, 2025 09:58
Beasts
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor in this poem conveys the message well. Nicely said
May 29th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor in this poem conveys the message well. Nicely said
May 29th, 2025 09:51
Ruined
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I get this message to its core...personally. Thank you for this. 👏🌹
May 28th, 2025 19:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I get this message to its core...personally. Thank you for this. 👏🌹
May 28th, 2025 19:57
Ruined
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message in this poem dark and foreboding it speaks to the doubt and questioning or ourselves that reside in all of us. Lovely
May 28th, 2025 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
A deep message in this poem dark and foreboding it speaks to the doubt and questioning or ourselves that reside in all of us. Lovely
May 28th, 2025 07:26
Family (Famel)
Poetic Licence said:
A great meaning for us, how dare we think are better, I doubt we are in a position to question anything, great write
May 22nd, 2025 12:31
Poetic Licence said:
A great meaning for us, how dare we think are better, I doubt we are in a position to question anything, great write
May 22nd, 2025 12:31
Family (Famel)
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and metaphor of us as well. How dare we feel greater than they. They understand things we don\'t and we what they don\'t so which is better?
May 22nd, 2025 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem and metaphor of us as well. How dare we feel greater than they. They understand things we don\'t and we what they don\'t so which is better?
May 22nd, 2025 09:23
SNG1
Poetic Licence said:
Deeply dark, haunting yet true, the battles always begin within us, nicely expressed and written
May 19th, 2025 09:43
Poetic Licence said:
Deeply dark, haunting yet true, the battles always begin within us, nicely expressed and written
May 19th, 2025 09:43
Soccer Rains
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor! A most powerful write, my friend! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great metaphor! A most powerful write, my friend! 🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:29
Soccer Rains
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of an ongoing battle within themselves, which they feel they are losing, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:26
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of an ongoing battle within themselves, which they feel they are losing, nicely expressed and written
May 16th, 2025 09:26
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