Comments received on poems by Damaso
Shine
Poetic Licence said:
I am being honest I am finding this a very cryptic write, not sure I have got it all yet, but am working on it, enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 10:50
Poetic Licence said:
I am being honest I am finding this a very cryptic write, not sure I have got it all yet, but am working on it, enjoyed the read
July 15th, 2025 10:50
Shine
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic is the word that comes to mind. Metaphor falls out of these lines. A lovely write
July 15th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic is the word that comes to mind. Metaphor falls out of these lines. A lovely write
July 15th, 2025 09:38
Hyenas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend—there is something sharply raw yet oddly comforting here. I love how you move from Pelé’s declaration into that eerie, striking imagery of hyenas and echoes. Those last two lines really hit deep. A haunting, beautiful piece as always. Thank you for this! 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, my friend—there is something sharply raw yet oddly comforting here. I love how you move from Pelé’s declaration into that eerie, striking imagery of hyenas and echoes. Those last two lines really hit deep. A haunting, beautiful piece as always. Thank you for this! 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:00
Hyenas
David Wakeling said:
This is certainly a powerful write.Good luck with the great spirit.
July 10th, 2025 20:06
David Wakeling said:
This is certainly a powerful write.Good luck with the great spirit.
July 10th, 2025 20:06
Hyenas
MendedFences27 said:
What I get from this, is \"Life,\" death and judgement. Your closing line says a lot as to meaning. We are all equal, or we try to be, but mostly we fail at this. No one \"dies\" more than another. In this, we are equal. Mainly, we are all \"lost.\" There-in is the poet\'s ease. \"You, (we are all) are life! Should be shouted on high, for all to hear. Loved this. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 14:34
MendedFences27 said:
What I get from this, is \"Life,\" death and judgement. Your closing line says a lot as to meaning. We are all equal, or we try to be, but mostly we fail at this. No one \"dies\" more than another. In this, we are equal. Mainly, we are all \"lost.\" There-in is the poet\'s ease. \"You, (we are all) are life! Should be shouted on high, for all to hear. Loved this. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 14:34
Hyenas
Poetic Licence said:
Whenever there someone/something struggling in a dark place or dying there are always Hyena\'s waiting to pounce and gorge on the carcass, this write appears this time they didn\'t get what they came for, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:51
Poetic Licence said:
Whenever there someone/something struggling in a dark place or dying there are always Hyena\'s waiting to pounce and gorge on the carcass, this write appears this time they didn\'t get what they came for, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:51
Hyenas
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is exotic, hypnotic it calls out of a dreamland where through the mists noting is real yet seems so. Lovely and a fave
July 10th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is exotic, hypnotic it calls out of a dreamland where through the mists noting is real yet seems so. Lovely and a fave
July 10th, 2025 09:53
Hyenas
arqios said:
The last line strikes brilliantly, Damaso; capping up the poem solidly🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 09:43
arqios said:
The last line strikes brilliantly, Damaso; capping up the poem solidly🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 09:43
Rotten
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damaso—this buzzes with ache and frequency...and that bridge stanza? It just floored me. 😶 The surreal calm between agony and revelation is masterfully done...truly masterful. And I love that last line, \"Love born from rot\". Wow. Powerful, my friend. Love it! 🌹👏 A def fave for me.
July 7th, 2025 08:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damaso—this buzzes with ache and frequency...and that bridge stanza? It just floored me. 😶 The surreal calm between agony and revelation is masterfully done...truly masterful. And I love that last line, \"Love born from rot\". Wow. Powerful, my friend. Love it! 🌹👏 A def fave for me.
July 7th, 2025 08:47
Rotten
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write, from filth some things are born but yet others will die in the same filth. Sometimes we need to feel bad about ourselves in order to feel good, as that is all we know, like a comfort blanket. If you are wrapped in bad people will leave you alone, intriguing write
July 6th, 2025 13:55
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write, from filth some things are born but yet others will die in the same filth. Sometimes we need to feel bad about ourselves in order to feel good, as that is all we know, like a comfort blanket. If you are wrapped in bad people will leave you alone, intriguing write
July 6th, 2025 13:55
Rotten
sorenbarrett said:
It is from filth that things grow. Plants fertilized with manure, put out beautiful flowers. A most intriguing write
July 6th, 2025 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
It is from filth that things grow. Plants fertilized with manure, put out beautiful flowers. A most intriguing write
July 6th, 2025 12:59
\"China\"
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful, very deeply reflective write, not uncommon for you my friend. Which is why I find a home in what you write. Much, much appreciative of you and all you share! Glad our paths have crossed. 🌹👏
July 4th, 2025 12:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful, very deeply reflective write, not uncommon for you my friend. Which is why I find a home in what you write. Much, much appreciative of you and all you share! Glad our paths have crossed. 🌹👏
July 4th, 2025 12:00
\"China\"
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint raw emotion with striking contrasts—both tender and fierce. A hauntingly beautiful dance of vulnerability and strength.
July 3rd, 2025 13:31
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words paint raw emotion with striking contrasts—both tender and fierce. A hauntingly beautiful dance of vulnerability and strength.
July 3rd, 2025 13:31
\"China\"
sorenbarrett said:
Filled with diametrically opposed elements that unite in one way or another. Well done
July 3rd, 2025 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Filled with diametrically opposed elements that unite in one way or another. Well done
July 3rd, 2025 13:20
\"China\"
Poetic Licence said:
They say inside every devil there is a heart that is crying out for love, it is just many do not know how to recieve it so cannot give it, sorry I waffle!!, enjoyed the read, nicely written
July 3rd, 2025 13:02
Poetic Licence said:
They say inside every devil there is a heart that is crying out for love, it is just many do not know how to recieve it so cannot give it, sorry I waffle!!, enjoyed the read, nicely written
July 3rd, 2025 13:02
Grumpy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mmm. This felt like a moment the muse dictated and I could almost picture you writing this, my friend. I love it cascading and/or \"unscrolling\" feel and form. Well done. 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 11:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Mmm. This felt like a moment the muse dictated and I could almost picture you writing this, my friend. I love it cascading and/or \"unscrolling\" feel and form. Well done. 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 11:33
Rises
Caring dove said:
Sometimes things / feelings have to disappear or yeah be changed into something nicer
A good writing .. nice when difficult feelings change into nice ones
July 1st, 2025 11:42
Caring dove said:
Sometimes things / feelings have to disappear or yeah be changed into something nicer
A good writing .. nice when difficult feelings change into nice ones
July 1st, 2025 11:42
Grumpy
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of just letting the mind flow freely and clear the decks of it\'s thought\'s, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:40
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of just letting the mind flow freely and clear the decks of it\'s thought\'s, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:40
Treasure
Caring dove said:
Really like your poem . Good way with words )) an interesting and engaging read
July 1st, 2025 09:57
Caring dove said:
Really like your poem . Good way with words )) an interesting and engaging read
July 1st, 2025 09:57
Grumpy
sorenbarrett said:
Free floating thoughts in cascading form fall from the mind to the page in lines of poetry. Well done
July 1st, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
Free floating thoughts in cascading form fall from the mind to the page in lines of poetry. Well done
July 1st, 2025 09:46
Sorry
orchidee said:
Good write D. Oops, I got some of my comments on poems mixed up!
June 30th, 2025 01:20
orchidee said:
Good write D. Oops, I got some of my comments on poems mixed up!
June 30th, 2025 01:20
Sorry
NafisaSB said:
The torment and pain is well depicted
Beautifully portrayed
June 29th, 2025 20:04
NafisaSB said:
The torment and pain is well depicted
Beautifully portrayed
June 29th, 2025 20:04
Sorry
orchidee said:
You know one of us is gonna say this - so it might be my turn to say it. Not exorcise, but plenty exercise for Obi and Popeye. Don\'t explain how. Swoon! lol.
June 27th, 2025 09:34
orchidee said:
You know one of us is gonna say this - so it might be my turn to say it. Not exorcise, but plenty exercise for Obi and Popeye. Don\'t explain how. Swoon! lol.
June 27th, 2025 09:34
Sorry
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, I said too many years ago that the initial for my middle name \"S\" represented \"sorry\" since I must apologize all the time. If it\'s any use, I find the Scriptures comforting, \"...there is forgiveness with Thee, that Thou mayest be feared--\" and, \"...Thou, LORD, art good, and ready to forgive, and plentious in mercy to all them that call upon Thee--\" Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 12:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, I said too many years ago that the initial for my middle name \"S\" represented \"sorry\" since I must apologize all the time. If it\'s any use, I find the Scriptures comforting, \"...there is forgiveness with Thee, that Thou mayest be feared--\" and, \"...Thou, LORD, art good, and ready to forgive, and plentious in mercy to all them that call upon Thee--\" Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 12:37
Sorry
Poetic Licence said:
Overpowering feeling if guilt can leave us feeling that we chained and being suffocated by it . When our cries and pleas for forgiveness go unanswered we are left to believe this will be eternal, dark, raw and powerful write
June 26th, 2025 11:05
Poetic Licence said:
Overpowering feeling if guilt can leave us feeling that we chained and being suffocated by it . When our cries and pleas for forgiveness go unanswered we are left to believe this will be eternal, dark, raw and powerful write
June 26th, 2025 11:05
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