Comments received on poems by Damaso
Little Bird
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I often talk to the birds, the deer, squirrels, Wally the Woodchuck who frequents by my sliding back door windows. I think they get it. They seem to keep coming around. Even the deer I recognize by there specific markings or look. LOL! Anyway, great poem! I relate to this a lot, my friend! Well done. A fave for me. 🌹👏
March 25th, 2025 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I often talk to the birds, the deer, squirrels, Wally the Woodchuck who frequents by my sliding back door windows. I think they get it. They seem to keep coming around. Even the deer I recognize by there specific markings or look. LOL! Anyway, great poem! I relate to this a lot, my friend! Well done. A fave for me. 🌹👏
March 25th, 2025 08:04
Little Bird
2781 said:
For the ernest expectation of the creature waits for the manifestation of the sons of God.
Talk to the birds x
March 25th, 2025 07:44
2781 said:
For the ernest expectation of the creature waits for the manifestation of the sons of God.
Talk to the birds x
March 25th, 2025 07:44
Easter Child
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hard to completely unlearn what one has been taught, no matter how damaging it may be. Parents, being human, certainly can be purveyors of ill ideas as well as good ones. Navigating which are which can be extremely difficult and often found out through suffering the consequences. But, when those ideas are attached to eternal things...
Well done on this poem, my friend. It speaks truth for many. 👏🌹
March 23rd, 2025 07:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hard to completely unlearn what one has been taught, no matter how damaging it may be. Parents, being human, certainly can be purveyors of ill ideas as well as good ones. Navigating which are which can be extremely difficult and often found out through suffering the consequences. But, when those ideas are attached to eternal things...
Well done on this poem, my friend. It speaks truth for many. 👏🌹
March 23rd, 2025 07:13
Easter Child
Poetic Licence said:
A write that to many parents are guilty off, often without realising they have done it. Children have enough to cope with without having to deal with their parent\'s fears as well, well written and expressed
March 22nd, 2025 10:55
Poetic Licence said:
A write that to many parents are guilty off, often without realising they have done it. Children have enough to cope with without having to deal with their parent\'s fears as well, well written and expressed
March 22nd, 2025 10:55
Easter Child
sorenbarrett said:
It is too bad that parents transmit their own fears to their children. A traumatic poem
March 22nd, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
It is too bad that parents transmit their own fears to their children. A traumatic poem
March 22nd, 2025 09:59
Easter Child
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Memories like these are always deep engraved .. good one
March 22nd, 2025 09:43
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Memories like these are always deep engraved .. good one
March 22nd, 2025 09:43
Plague
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and emotional write, a sense of feeling hopeless and no future to look to, the write is layered with darkness and pain which the author is clearly feeling, very well written and expressed, take care
March 22nd, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and emotional write, a sense of feeling hopeless and no future to look to, the write is layered with darkness and pain which the author is clearly feeling, very well written and expressed, take care
March 22nd, 2025 03:20
Plague
sorenbarrett said:
The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and need. The metaphor I take is that we are all such a child and in such helpless and homeless, in need without much help but charity. Pain comes in many forms and it grows dark when hope dies. Well written and very emotional. Dark and yet real a sad read.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and need. The metaphor I take is that we are all such a child and in such helpless and homeless, in need without much help but charity. Pain comes in many forms and it grows dark when hope dies. Well written and very emotional. Dark and yet real a sad read.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
Ugly Joint
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very interesting write which needs to be read a few times, nicely expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very interesting write which needs to be read a few times, nicely expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:19
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