Comments received on poems by Damaso
What was it?
Poetic Licence said:
Now this a thinker with much hidden meaning, its like the devil burrowing into your mind,always letting you know he will be back, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 10:13
Poetic Licence said:
Now this a thinker with much hidden meaning, its like the devil burrowing into your mind,always letting you know he will be back, enjoyed the read
August 5th, 2025 10:13
What was it?
sorenbarrett said:
In its hidden metaphors and symbols hides a feeling in this poem. Well written and creative. Nicely done
August 5th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
In its hidden metaphors and symbols hides a feeling in this poem. Well written and creative. Nicely done
August 5th, 2025 09:59
Walk
Poetic Licence said:
I am probably way off here but my feeling is off drifting back through time and different stages of their past, trying to evade or possibly change it, but it always catches them up. They also know they will keep running into it in the future, very interesting and nicely written write
July 31st, 2025 10:50
Poetic Licence said:
I am probably way off here but my feeling is off drifting back through time and different stages of their past, trying to evade or possibly change it, but it always catches them up. They also know they will keep running into it in the future, very interesting and nicely written write
July 31st, 2025 10:50
Walk
sorenbarrett said:
In its vagueness it speaks to the listener. Like a haze that keeps one from seeing but where one can still fell the ground under one\'s feet it does not guide but supports. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
In its vagueness it speaks to the listener. Like a haze that keeps one from seeing but where one can still fell the ground under one\'s feet it does not guide but supports. Nicely done
July 31st, 2025 10:45
Balance
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Balance\" revolves around the concept of equilibrium between the physical and metaphysical realms. It explores the tension between existence and non-existence, emphasizing the struggle to find stability amidst chaos. The poet explores themes of time, identity, and the paradox of being both grounded and ethereal, as embodied in the imagery of a spiderweb that suspends time.
July 31st, 2025 08:02
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Balance\" revolves around the concept of equilibrium between the physical and metaphysical realms. It explores the tension between existence and non-existence, emphasizing the struggle to find stability amidst chaos. The poet explores themes of time, identity, and the paradox of being both grounded and ethereal, as embodied in the imagery of a spiderweb that suspends time.
July 31st, 2025 08:02
Balance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, a beautiful poem…ritual and riddle...almost trance-like. “I am three / of three / by three”—that echo resonates like a spell. Wonderful job! A fave! 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 29th, 2025 16:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, a beautiful poem…ritual and riddle...almost trance-like. “I am three / of three / by three”—that echo resonates like a spell. Wonderful job! A fave! 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 29th, 2025 16:13
Balance
Poetic Licence said:
The mystery of the number three and what it represents to some, I am the now, not the past and not the future, enjoyed the read
July 29th, 2025 11:09
Poetic Licence said:
The mystery of the number three and what it represents to some, I am the now, not the past and not the future, enjoyed the read
July 29th, 2025 11:09
Balance
sorenbarrett said:
Three a magical number a number of stability, the trinity in christianity, the three dimensions of our world a good write.
July 29th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Three a magical number a number of stability, the trinity in christianity, the three dimensions of our world a good write.
July 29th, 2025 10:54
Relic
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of struggle, guardianship, and the interplay between fear and protection. It presents a narrative of a guardian figure, possibly representing a protector of cultural or spiritual relics, who confronts the challenges and fears associated with their role. The use of mythological references (e.g., Kerberos) and symbols (e.g., sword, relic) suggests a deeper commentary on personal and collective responsibility, the burdens of judgment and fear, and the complexity of loyalty and defiance. The poem hints at a journey that involves both internal and external battles, perhaps reflecting the conflicts faced by individuals who stand against societal norms for a greater cause.
July 28th, 2025 06:57
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of struggle, guardianship, and the interplay between fear and protection. It presents a narrative of a guardian figure, possibly representing a protector of cultural or spiritual relics, who confronts the challenges and fears associated with their role. The use of mythological references (e.g., Kerberos) and symbols (e.g., sword, relic) suggests a deeper commentary on personal and collective responsibility, the burdens of judgment and fear, and the complexity of loyalty and defiance. The poem hints at a journey that involves both internal and external battles, perhaps reflecting the conflicts faced by individuals who stand against societal norms for a greater cause.
July 28th, 2025 06:57
Relic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a dense and striking piece, my friend. The sacred and the savage pulse side by side here...mythic and defiant. I love it.. Truly, an excellent job, Damaso. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a dense and striking piece, my friend. The sacred and the savage pulse side by side here...mythic and defiant. I love it.. Truly, an excellent job, Damaso. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:23
Relic
Bella Shepard said:
A dark and ominous figure, a guardian I would not want to encounter. Good write!
July 26th, 2025 12:32
Bella Shepard said:
A dark and ominous figure, a guardian I would not want to encounter. Good write!
July 26th, 2025 12:32
Relic
Poetic Licence said:
A darkened and quite intimidating character, choosing to be like that, born with a dark soul, on a lighter note it reminded me of when I was married!!, enjoyed the resd
July 26th, 2025 11:10
Poetic Licence said:
A darkened and quite intimidating character, choosing to be like that, born with a dark soul, on a lighter note it reminded me of when I was married!!, enjoyed the resd
July 26th, 2025 11:10
Magma Fever
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful incarnation of that mythic figure, Damaso. She’s fierce, elusive, and fully alive here...written into heat, rhythm, and ruin. A tango of flame and fangs. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a powerful incarnation of that mythic figure, Damaso. She’s fierce, elusive, and fully alive here...written into heat, rhythm, and ruin. A tango of flame and fangs. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:40
Magma Fever
Priya Tomar said:
The poem explores emotion, desire , surrender using intense imagery and contrasts.
Well written
July 25th, 2025 00:01
Priya Tomar said:
The poem explores emotion, desire , surrender using intense imagery and contrasts.
Well written
July 25th, 2025 00:01
Magma Fever
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem seems to stem from a desire to articulate the complexities of human emotions, revealing the dual nature of intimacy as both fulfilling and painful. Overall, the poem captures the essence of a tumultuous emotional landscape, reflecting the intricacies of desire, identity, and the human condition.
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July 24th, 2025 18:59
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem seems to stem from a desire to articulate the complexities of human emotions, revealing the dual nature of intimacy as both fulfilling and painful. Overall, the poem captures the essence of a tumultuous emotional landscape, reflecting the intricacies of desire, identity, and the human condition.
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July 24th, 2025 18:59
Magma Fever
Poetic Licence said:
I am hoping this is more fantasy than reality, because you wouldn\'t want to be in this world, though I feel the character has chosen this and offered himself, very interesting, intriguing, entertaining and dark write, very nicely written
July 24th, 2025 15:07
Poetic Licence said:
I am hoping this is more fantasy than reality, because you wouldn\'t want to be in this world, though I feel the character has chosen this and offered himself, very interesting, intriguing, entertaining and dark write, very nicely written
July 24th, 2025 15:07
Buble
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful imagery, light and airy, almost fairy like. Thoroughly enjoyed!
July 22nd, 2025 12:34
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful imagery, light and airy, almost fairy like. Thoroughly enjoyed!
July 22nd, 2025 12:34
Buble
Poetic Licence said:
The Deceit amongst humanity that lays beneath the beauty of nature, very nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 15:16
Poetic Licence said:
The Deceit amongst humanity that lays beneath the beauty of nature, very nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 15:16
Buble
sorenbarrett said:
A bubble submerged or better yet one on a mirror the form of the poem. On top nature then the mirror of man made delight and beneath humanity and the hidden lies. Well done and superbly crafted.
July 21st, 2025 15:01
sorenbarrett said:
A bubble submerged or better yet one on a mirror the form of the poem. On top nature then the mirror of man made delight and beneath humanity and the hidden lies. Well done and superbly crafted.
July 21st, 2025 15:01
Shine
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful imagery, I\'m thinking each reader gets their own imagination with this one, I quite see nature human and mother. 🌹
July 18th, 2025 09:45
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful imagery, I\'m thinking each reader gets their own imagination with this one, I quite see nature human and mother. 🌹
July 18th, 2025 09:45
SNG2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damaso, this reads like a transmission from another plane...part prophecy, part resistance chant. I can feel the urgency in it. “We woke up how many we could”...that line hit. There\'s something fierce and searching here. 🌹👏 Loved it. A fave, my friend.
July 18th, 2025 06:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damaso, this reads like a transmission from another plane...part prophecy, part resistance chant. I can feel the urgency in it. “We woke up how many we could”...that line hit. There\'s something fierce and searching here. 🌹👏 Loved it. A fave, my friend.
July 18th, 2025 06:12
SNG2
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write, the problem with today\'s world is being bad is very good business for some, as always enjoyed your writing
July 17th, 2025 08:46
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write, the problem with today\'s world is being bad is very good business for some, as always enjoyed your writing
July 17th, 2025 08:46
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