Comments received on poems by Damaso
Easter Child
Poetic Licence said:
A write that to many parents are guilty off, often without realising they have done it. Children have enough to cope with without having to deal with their parent\'s fears as well, well written and expressed
March 22nd, 2025 10:55
Poetic Licence said:
A write that to many parents are guilty off, often without realising they have done it. Children have enough to cope with without having to deal with their parent\'s fears as well, well written and expressed
March 22nd, 2025 10:55
Easter Child
sorenbarrett said:
It is too bad that parents transmit their own fears to their children. A traumatic poem
March 22nd, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
It is too bad that parents transmit their own fears to their children. A traumatic poem
March 22nd, 2025 09:59
Easter Child
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Memories like these are always deep engraved .. good one
March 22nd, 2025 09:43
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Memories like these are always deep engraved .. good one
March 22nd, 2025 09:43
Plague
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and emotional write, a sense of feeling hopeless and no future to look to, the write is layered with darkness and pain which the author is clearly feeling, very well written and expressed, take care
March 22nd, 2025 03:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very sad and emotional write, a sense of feeling hopeless and no future to look to, the write is layered with darkness and pain which the author is clearly feeling, very well written and expressed, take care
March 22nd, 2025 03:20
Plague
sorenbarrett said:
The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and need. The metaphor I take is that we are all such a child and in such helpless and homeless, in need without much help but charity. Pain comes in many forms and it grows dark when hope dies. Well written and very emotional. Dark and yet real a sad read.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and need. The metaphor I take is that we are all such a child and in such helpless and homeless, in need without much help but charity. Pain comes in many forms and it grows dark when hope dies. Well written and very emotional. Dark and yet real a sad read.
March 21st, 2025 15:07
Ugly Joint
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very interesting write which needs to be read a few times, nicely expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very interesting write which needs to be read a few times, nicely expressed
March 21st, 2025 03:19
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