Comments received on poems by cassiopeiaxneptune



The One Constant
Poetic Licence said:

All of our greatest fears, change, many end up in situations are not good because they are scared to change what they know and are used to, nicely expressed and written write

July 31st, 2025 12:45

The One Constant
sorenbarrett said:

True not just for this person but for all of us. Change is the greatest fear, what it holds, the unknown, new ground. Be it the change of death or within life itself it scares us. Many pretend to change but few are courageous enough to really take the leap. A wonderful poem

July 31st, 2025 08:36

The Loneliest Soul
Tony36 said:

Really enjoyed it

July 30th, 2025 08:27

The Loneliest Soul
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of feeling isolated, separated from the world, not a nice place to be. Regarding the ending at different times I can feel either, close to home for me this one, nicely expressed and written

July 30th, 2025 06:12

The Loneliest Soul
sorenbarrett said:

Cleverly written. It speaks of alienation. Nicely done

July 30th, 2025 04:52

The Illusion Of Cool
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

July 29th, 2025 18:38

The Illusion Of Cool
Poetic Licence said:

A strong write that many may not care to admit, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read

July 29th, 2025 09:19

The Illusion Of Cool
Doggerel Dave said:

A totally correct analysis, I think... though to some degree most of us are social beings.

Really enjoyed this one.

July 29th, 2025 08:08

The Illusion Of Cool
sorenbarrett said:

A vision of hypocrisy that hides behind a professed belief but cowers to fight the battle they profess. Idols of stone that cast shadows that move with the sun. A powerful poem that yet may not be too popular with the masses. A strong message that gets a fave

July 29th, 2025 06:56

A Head Full Of Dreams
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of transforming dreams into reality, enjoyed the read

July 28th, 2025 06:09

A Head Full Of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:

The line between dreams and reality and how to transform one into the other. Nicely written

July 28th, 2025 05:01

Ennui
Tony36 said:

Great write

July 27th, 2025 08:24

Ennui
Poetic Licence said:

Short, sweet and right to the point, nicely done,

July 27th, 2025 06:57

Ennui
sorenbarrett said:

This poem addresses entropy at its worst on an individual basis. Short and to the point it gives its message

July 27th, 2025 05:32

An Everlasting Remembrance
RSM0812 said:

This poem reminds me of the beauty of the universe. Even in death it holds on. An exploding star is seen for billions of years. It\'s beauty is a remnant of its life.

May 8th, 2025 06:17

An Everlasting Remembrance
Poetic Licence said:

Wonderful write and how true are those last two lines, enjoyed the read

April 7th, 2025 13:30

An Everlasting Remembrance
sorenbarrett said:

Loved your last two lines they are truly poetic. Very nice

April 7th, 2025 10:03

This Very Moment
sorenbarrett said:

There is deep philosophy in this poem. Living in the moment Carpe Diem is all we have to live in yesterday is living in a shadow and to live in tomorrow is to live a fantasy. Feelings only exist in the present. A lovely write

April 6th, 2025 06:24

This Very Moment
Poetic Licence said:

Life is not a bed of roses, you have some pain to appreciate the gains, nicely written and expressed write, enjoyed the read

April 6th, 2025 05:39

Passion Play
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poetic invitation in this poem. Nicely penned it calls out.

April 5th, 2025 05:46

More Than Words
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 4th, 2025 17:39

More Than Words
Poetic Licence said:

An appreciation and acknowledgement of someone just excepting and valueing you as just being you, nicely expressed and written

April 4th, 2025 06:31

More Than Words
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful acknowledgement and recognition that is expressed in gratitude nicely done in rhyme and poetic form

April 4th, 2025 05:53

Western Skies
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 3rd, 2025 18:09

Western Skies
sorenbarrett said:

Very well written and thought provoking requiring careful reading that takes the reader into the same mindset. None of us are exactly where we expected to be and this incongruity can inspire confusion if not despair. (as if fate and certainty were ever the same thing) a clever line that provokes careful thought. This poem was very nicely penned

April 3rd, 2025 06:43

Theory Of Evolution
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s one to make you have a think, very nicely written

April 2nd, 2025 06:43

Theory Of Evolution
sorenbarrett said:

Well written in terms that confront without confronting. A lovely piece

April 2nd, 2025 06:36

State Of Mind
Poetic Licence said:

An very interesting and thought provoking write, enjoyed the read

April 1st, 2025 06:33

State Of Mind
sorenbarrett said:

Real or metaphoric is the question. A wonderful write that poses the question of although life is temporal do we ever get to see our end. Thought provoking

April 1st, 2025 06:24