Comments received on poems by Mourgana of the Fey
O
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, I am not of understanding of all of it, which makes it more enjoyable to read as my slow thought process kicks into gear, a very enjoyable and interesting read
April 16th, 2025 10:55
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, I am not of understanding of all of it, which makes it more enjoyable to read as my slow thought process kicks into gear, a very enjoyable and interesting read
April 16th, 2025 10:55
O
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"o i am but / a dotted / line\". Wow. 🤯 I have never heard it expressed this way, but this is the sort of existential line that just makes my mind explode and all of the thought juices flowing. A brilliant ending line to a brilliantly beautiful Odin-invoking poem. Brava! 🌹👏
April 16th, 2025 07:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"o i am but / a dotted / line\". Wow. 🤯 I have never heard it expressed this way, but this is the sort of existential line that just makes my mind explode and all of the thought juices flowing. A brilliant ending line to a brilliantly beautiful Odin-invoking poem. Brava! 🌹👏
April 16th, 2025 07:22
O
sorenbarrett said:
I love this cryptic reference to the title and its implications the O in Odin, with reference to ravens, wise eyes (eye Odin had only one) eyes depicted as o\'s, coiled serpentine the ouroboros serpent swallowing its own tail in the shape of an o. A fave
April 16th, 2025 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
I love this cryptic reference to the title and its implications the O in Odin, with reference to ravens, wise eyes (eye Odin had only one) eyes depicted as o\'s, coiled serpentine the ouroboros serpent swallowing its own tail in the shape of an o. A fave
April 16th, 2025 05:11
the keening woman
NafisaSB said:
beautiful use of the Gods/goddesses of yore..enjoyed reading it
April 14th, 2025 23:59
NafisaSB said:
beautiful use of the Gods/goddesses of yore..enjoyed reading it
April 14th, 2025 23:59
Abstract journey
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful and profoundly deep. The short, brief lines almost give the poem a fragmented feel, like thoughts coming in one\'s head while riding the train. Again, great job, R. 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful and profoundly deep. The short, brief lines almost give the poem a fragmented feel, like thoughts coming in one\'s head while riding the train. Again, great job, R. 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:20
Abstract journey
sorenbarrett said:
What seem at first to be non related bits and pieces come together in a chain of thought as one reads it over and over. Are not all our thoughts like this at times. A dead man\'s newspaper are we not all dead men just walking toward that destination? A most thought provoking read.
April 14th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
What seem at first to be non related bits and pieces come together in a chain of thought as one reads it over and over. Are not all our thoughts like this at times. A dead man\'s newspaper are we not all dead men just walking toward that destination? A most thought provoking read.
April 14th, 2025 04:46
Elphin
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite lyrical/musical and feels like a dance as one reads it. The imagery paints quite the scene. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite lyrical/musical and feels like a dance as one reads it. The imagery paints quite the scene. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏
April 13th, 2025 07:29
Elphin
David Wakeling said:
What a delightful poem.I love the word images and the cadence is musical.An enjoyable read
April 13th, 2025 05:34
David Wakeling said:
What a delightful poem.I love the word images and the cadence is musical.An enjoyable read
April 13th, 2025 05:34
Elphin
sorenbarrett said:
So much hidden here. This indeed is a different world an inner world perhaps but with so much of this. Most lovely in its imagery and well developed, what appears disjointed is united here. The more one reads it the more meanings it takes on
April 13th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
So much hidden here. This indeed is a different world an inner world perhaps but with so much of this. Most lovely in its imagery and well developed, what appears disjointed is united here. The more one reads it the more meanings it takes on
April 13th, 2025 05:00
the killing of a conifer
David Wakeling said:
Trees are amazing.Well highlighted in this powerful work.It made me think.Well done
April 12th, 2025 16:35
David Wakeling said:
Trees are amazing.Well highlighted in this powerful work.It made me think.Well done
April 12th, 2025 16:35
the killing of a conifer
Tristan Robert Lange said:
We really do destroy nature, do we not? And, we destroy our own nature and identity in doing so. A most beautiful poem that speaks in equal measure beauty and urgency. Well done! 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
We really do destroy nature, do we not? And, we destroy our own nature and identity in doing so. A most beautiful poem that speaks in equal measure beauty and urgency. Well done! 🌹👏
April 12th, 2025 08:12
the killing of a conifer
sorenbarrett said:
The vary wording and metaphors in this write make it most intriguing and as one reads on it has more and more hooks that take one to a faintly remembered place of origin. Lovely
April 12th, 2025 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
The vary wording and metaphors in this write make it most intriguing and as one reads on it has more and more hooks that take one to a faintly remembered place of origin. Lovely
April 12th, 2025 07:52
the killing of a conifer
MDStone said:
A well written piece. I felt at one with nature. I see the circle of life and the connections to it that come back around to us. Thank you for sharing.
April 12th, 2025 07:32
MDStone said:
A well written piece. I felt at one with nature. I see the circle of life and the connections to it that come back around to us. Thank you for sharing.
April 12th, 2025 07:32
Hymn for the hooved
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful imagery, sone wonderful lines and soaked in metaphor it was a pleasure to read.
April 11th, 2025 09:32
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful imagery, sone wonderful lines and soaked in metaphor it was a pleasure to read.
April 11th, 2025 09:32
Hymn for the hooved
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this. A beautiful poem rich in imagery in and metaphor. Well done, my friend! This was masterful, as Soren rightly wrote, and rather than repeat what he wrote, I will simply say. Brava! An obvious fave from me as well. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 08:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this. A beautiful poem rich in imagery in and metaphor. Well done, my friend! This was masterful, as Soren rightly wrote, and rather than repeat what he wrote, I will simply say. Brava! An obvious fave from me as well. 🌹👏
April 11th, 2025 08:20
Hymn for the hooved
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful work this poem uses vivid and identifiable imagery to paint a picture in the mind of the reader and then takes that image in such poetic form to sprout a feeling of compassion for what we normally ignore. There are several beautiful lines in this poem my favorite are the last two stanzas
staples stacked lavished leathery scent
from each bovine hide scarlet dried
blood songs are sung
through roughed vales
meandering green pastures
ethereally we still graze
There is a wonderful metaphor here as well that I need not go into but is reflected in that mirror mentioned in the poem. This is a masterpiece of work and is a fave without saying
April 11th, 2025 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful work this poem uses vivid and identifiable imagery to paint a picture in the mind of the reader and then takes that image in such poetic form to sprout a feeling of compassion for what we normally ignore. There are several beautiful lines in this poem my favorite are the last two stanzas
staples stacked lavished leathery scent
from each bovine hide scarlet dried
blood songs are sung
through roughed vales
meandering green pastures
ethereally we still graze
There is a wonderful metaphor here as well that I need not go into but is reflected in that mirror mentioned in the poem. This is a masterpiece of work and is a fave without saying
April 11th, 2025 06:05
Once upon a dark moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, my friend. Love the imagery and the way the poem feels almost chant like. Wonderful job, R. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, my friend. Love the imagery and the way the poem feels almost chant like. Wonderful job, R. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:16
Once upon a dark moon
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed the read but for me this is a bit of a mind tingle, nicely written
April 10th, 2025 07:05
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed the read but for me this is a bit of a mind tingle, nicely written
April 10th, 2025 07:05
Once upon a dark moon
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem. I enjoyed the images created.I had to look up some of the big words however.Well done
April 10th, 2025 05:16
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem. I enjoyed the images created.I had to look up some of the big words however.Well done
April 10th, 2025 05:16
Once upon a dark moon
sorenbarrett said:
The use of variegated alliteration in this poem pulls the reader along. Unexpected associations dot the landscape and paint a Salvador Dahil like painting. Nicely done
April 10th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
The use of variegated alliteration in this poem pulls the reader along. Unexpected associations dot the landscape and paint a Salvador Dahil like painting. Nicely done
April 10th, 2025 04:31
the keening woman
David Wakeling said:
An amazing poem. It is certainly magical. Be careful poetry can cast a spell. Wonderful read and yes Love is the only way to remember. Enjoyable read
April 9th, 2025 18:24
David Wakeling said:
An amazing poem. It is certainly magical. Be careful poetry can cast a spell. Wonderful read and yes Love is the only way to remember. Enjoyable read
April 9th, 2025 18:24
the keening woman
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The norse gods and goddesses summoned in a poem that most captivates the imagination and the heart. Indeed, \"love is the only way to remember\". Brilliant, Rian, brilliant! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The norse gods and goddesses summoned in a poem that most captivates the imagination and the heart. Indeed, \"love is the only way to remember\". Brilliant, Rian, brilliant! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 08:54
the keening woman
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely combination of images as you read through this write, ending in a lovely stanza, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:06
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely combination of images as you read through this write, ending in a lovely stanza, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:06
the keening woman
sorenbarrett said:
Like sparks off a fire brief flashes glow and then extinguish into darkness in this poem. These images pass yet there remains a light that glows. Lovely and warming. Particularly like the last stanza.
April 9th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Like sparks off a fire brief flashes glow and then extinguish into darkness in this poem. These images pass yet there remains a light that glows. Lovely and warming. Particularly like the last stanza.
April 9th, 2025 04:22
nautical compass
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking along the beach Rian can bring so m uch joy to our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking along the beach Rian can bring so m uch joy to our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:20
nautical compass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can see that bird, seagull maybe?, barely escaping the swell of the wave. Wonderful oceanic poem, my friend. I can smell the saltwater in this. Brilliantly penned. This easily gets a fave 🤩 from me. And, oh my, welcome to MPS. Very much looking forward to reading more from you, Rian! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 18:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can see that bird, seagull maybe?, barely escaping the swell of the wave. Wonderful oceanic poem, my friend. I can smell the saltwater in this. Brilliantly penned. This easily gets a fave 🤩 from me. And, oh my, welcome to MPS. Very much looking forward to reading more from you, Rian! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 18:33
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