Comments received on poems by Mourgana of the Fey



Once upon a dark moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful, my friend. Love the imagery and the way the poem feels almost chant like. Wonderful job, R. 🌹👏

April 10th, 2025 16:16

Once upon a dark moon
Poetic Licence said:

I have enjoyed the read but for me this is a bit of a mind tingle, nicely written

April 10th, 2025 07:05

Once upon a dark moon
David Wakeling said:

This is a powerful poem. I enjoyed the images created.I had to look up some of the big words however.Well done

April 10th, 2025 05:16

Once upon a dark moon
sorenbarrett said:

The use of variegated alliteration in this poem pulls the reader along. Unexpected associations dot the landscape and paint a Salvador Dahil like painting. Nicely done

April 10th, 2025 04:31

the keening woman
David Wakeling said:

An amazing poem. It is certainly magical. Be careful poetry can cast a spell. Wonderful read and yes Love is the only way to remember. Enjoyable read

April 9th, 2025 18:24

the keening woman
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The norse gods and goddesses summoned in a poem that most captivates the imagination and the heart. Indeed, \"love is the only way to remember\". Brilliant, Rian, brilliant! 🌹👏

April 9th, 2025 08:54

the keening woman
Lorenz said:

Wild goose flight over the fjord !

April 9th, 2025 06:29

the keening woman
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely combination of images as you read through this write, ending in a lovely stanza, enjoyed the read

April 9th, 2025 05:06

the keening woman
sorenbarrett said:

Like sparks off a fire brief flashes glow and then extinguish into darkness in this poem. These images pass yet there remains a light that glows. Lovely and warming. Particularly like the last stanza.

April 9th, 2025 04:22

nautical compass
Goldfinch60 said:

Walking along the beach Rian can bring so m uch joy to our lives.

Andy

April 9th, 2025 01:20

nautical compass
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I can see that bird, seagull maybe?, barely escaping the swell of the wave. Wonderful oceanic poem, my friend. I can smell the saltwater in this. Brilliantly penned. This easily gets a fave 🤩 from me. And, oh my, welcome to MPS. Very much looking forward to reading more from you, Rian! 🌹👏

April 8th, 2025 18:33

nautical compass
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

April 8th, 2025 17:39

nautical compass
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 8th, 2025 09:50

nautical compass
Poetic Licence said:

A gentle stroll along the beach in peace with your drifting thoughts, enjoyed the read

April 8th, 2025 07:06

nautical compass
sorenbarrett said:

A snapshot of the beach. I have been there many times in reality and mind. A most lovely poetic picture cast here. Metaphor of drifting thoughts

April 8th, 2025 06:21

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