Comments received on poems by Mourgana of the Fey
Once upon a dark moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, my friend. Love the imagery and the way the poem feels almost chant like. Wonderful job, R. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, my friend. Love the imagery and the way the poem feels almost chant like. Wonderful job, R. 🌹👏
April 10th, 2025 16:16
Once upon a dark moon
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed the read but for me this is a bit of a mind tingle, nicely written
April 10th, 2025 07:05
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed the read but for me this is a bit of a mind tingle, nicely written
April 10th, 2025 07:05
Once upon a dark moon
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem. I enjoyed the images created.I had to look up some of the big words however.Well done
April 10th, 2025 05:16
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem. I enjoyed the images created.I had to look up some of the big words however.Well done
April 10th, 2025 05:16
Once upon a dark moon
sorenbarrett said:
The use of variegated alliteration in this poem pulls the reader along. Unexpected associations dot the landscape and paint a Salvador Dahil like painting. Nicely done
April 10th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
The use of variegated alliteration in this poem pulls the reader along. Unexpected associations dot the landscape and paint a Salvador Dahil like painting. Nicely done
April 10th, 2025 04:31
the keening woman
David Wakeling said:
An amazing poem. It is certainly magical. Be careful poetry can cast a spell. Wonderful read and yes Love is the only way to remember. Enjoyable read
April 9th, 2025 18:24
David Wakeling said:
An amazing poem. It is certainly magical. Be careful poetry can cast a spell. Wonderful read and yes Love is the only way to remember. Enjoyable read
April 9th, 2025 18:24
the keening woman
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The norse gods and goddesses summoned in a poem that most captivates the imagination and the heart. Indeed, \"love is the only way to remember\". Brilliant, Rian, brilliant! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 08:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The norse gods and goddesses summoned in a poem that most captivates the imagination and the heart. Indeed, \"love is the only way to remember\". Brilliant, Rian, brilliant! 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 08:54
the keening woman
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely combination of images as you read through this write, ending in a lovely stanza, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:06
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely combination of images as you read through this write, ending in a lovely stanza, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 05:06
the keening woman
sorenbarrett said:
Like sparks off a fire brief flashes glow and then extinguish into darkness in this poem. These images pass yet there remains a light that glows. Lovely and warming. Particularly like the last stanza.
April 9th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Like sparks off a fire brief flashes glow and then extinguish into darkness in this poem. These images pass yet there remains a light that glows. Lovely and warming. Particularly like the last stanza.
April 9th, 2025 04:22
nautical compass
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking along the beach Rian can bring so m uch joy to our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking along the beach Rian can bring so m uch joy to our lives.
Andy
April 9th, 2025 01:20
nautical compass
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can see that bird, seagull maybe?, barely escaping the swell of the wave. Wonderful oceanic poem, my friend. I can smell the saltwater in this. Brilliantly penned. This easily gets a fave 🤩 from me. And, oh my, welcome to MPS. Very much looking forward to reading more from you, Rian! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 18:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I can see that bird, seagull maybe?, barely escaping the swell of the wave. Wonderful oceanic poem, my friend. I can smell the saltwater in this. Brilliantly penned. This easily gets a fave 🤩 from me. And, oh my, welcome to MPS. Very much looking forward to reading more from you, Rian! 🌹👏
April 8th, 2025 18:33
nautical compass
Poetic Licence said:
A gentle stroll along the beach in peace with your drifting thoughts, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 07:06
Poetic Licence said:
A gentle stroll along the beach in peace with your drifting thoughts, enjoyed the read
April 8th, 2025 07:06
nautical compass
sorenbarrett said:
A snapshot of the beach. I have been there many times in reality and mind. A most lovely poetic picture cast here. Metaphor of drifting thoughts
April 8th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
A snapshot of the beach. I have been there many times in reality and mind. A most lovely poetic picture cast here. Metaphor of drifting thoughts
April 8th, 2025 06:21
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