Comments received on poems by maydanae



Phoenix Rebirth
sorenbarrett said:

A graphic description of a regeneration of the fabled bird that burst into flames and regenerated from the ashes. Well done with rhyme and good meter

July 11th, 2025 05:05

Phoenix Rebirth
Poetic Licence said:

The sense of someone ready to move on from a difficult past and mould a postive future, enjoyed the read

July 11th, 2025 00:16

I Miss Myself
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! So relatable. Love the flow and rhyme of this too! Well done! 🌹👏

June 23rd, 2025 11:33

I Miss Myself
RSM0812 said:

A very unique write. I really like it.

June 22nd, 2025 04:52

I Miss Myself
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

June 19th, 2025 16:38

I Miss Myself
Poetic Licence said:

Written with a touch of humour but has a serious side to the write, nicely expressed and written

June 19th, 2025 06:01

I Miss Myself
sorenbarrett said:

This poem was clever mixing just the right amount of wisdom and humor with clever rhyme to make a most balanced poem and a fave

June 19th, 2025 04:45

Cross Your T\'s and Dot Your I\'s
Soman Ragavan said:

Queen Elizabeth was known for her frugality. Once she said, to save on ink : \"Don\'t cross your T\'s and dot your I\'s...\"

May 7th, 2025 04:29

Cross Your T\'s and Dot Your I\'s
sorenbarrett said:

The use of chess and the doting of i\'s and crossing of t\'s is a most interesting metaphor for making decisions in this life. Well done

May 7th, 2025 03:32

Grocery Store
RSM0812 said:

Makes a grocery store visit more interesting then just buying food. Great write.

May 6th, 2025 16:00

Some Things I Do Not Need
sorenbarrett said:

Never felt better than when I got rid of all I didn\'t need. Everything but cloths, house, food, and dishes. A great message and nicely done

May 5th, 2025 18:38

Could I Touch the Clouds
Salvia.S said:

Lovely and whimsical!!

May 4th, 2025 01:52

Could I Touch the Clouds
sorenbarrett said:

Cute, catchy, clever, creative couldn\'t be better

May 3rd, 2025 19:04

My Memory Fails Me, but Never for Songs
sunshine777 said:

Beautiful

May 3rd, 2025 16:29

My Memory Fails Me, but Never for Songs
Salvia.S said:

Your words beautifully capture the powerful connection between memory and music. Lovely poem!

May 3rd, 2025 02:38

My Memory Fails Me, but Never for Songs
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely, art is not planned but felt what makes AI not eligible

May 2nd, 2025 16:27

Rumination, I Pray
sorenbarrett said:

In this poem of doting love there is great rhyme internal and not that is a pepper to this steak giving it flavor. Nicely done

May 2nd, 2025 04:32

Grocery Store
Salvia.S said:

Lovely poem!

April 28th, 2025 07:01

Grocery Store
rrodriguez said:

Yeah, but on Black Friday people turn vicious... Thank you for sharing.

April 25th, 2025 06:28

Grocery Store
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed appropriate for a grocery store where all people meet for a common purpose. Well said

April 24th, 2025 21:33

Your Ghost
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has a most interesting rhyme scheme that catches attention. A sensual poem with a message.

April 23rd, 2025 18:52

Through Concrete Curtains
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem of nature and the season. I loved the change of rhyme scheme in the middle stanza. Very well written.

April 22nd, 2025 20:08

Names Turned to Praise
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that all can relate to. I don\'t think there is a person that has not been called a name by someone else. A heart felt write and no one should take too seriously what others say that don\'t match what you know is true.

April 21st, 2025 14:17

Pens and Markers
sorenbarrett said:

Short and to the point it makes sense to me. Very nicely done

April 20th, 2025 18:44

Productivity
sorenbarrett said:

Productivity is all a matter of what deems to be worth while. Poetry is a worthy production. A great write

April 19th, 2025 11:49

Sardines on Pizza
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor there are many types of pizza and many types of people different tastes for different people. Very nice

April 18th, 2025 20:13

Today the Sky Looked Painted
Salvia.S said:

Beautiful write!!!

April 18th, 2025 06:17

Today the Sky Looked Painted
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely image as you read, enjoyed the read

April 18th, 2025 02:01

Today the Sky Looked Painted
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful picture painted in words and no no one is finished until their final day. A great poem

April 17th, 2025 18:48

Now isn\'t that Lovely.
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting write appearing all okay and acceptable either way in life until the last line, nicely written

April 17th, 2025 02:13

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