Comments received on poems by maydanae
Phoenix Rebirth
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic description of a regeneration of the fabled bird that burst into flames and regenerated from the ashes. Well done with rhyme and good meter
July 11th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic description of a regeneration of the fabled bird that burst into flames and regenerated from the ashes. Well done with rhyme and good meter
July 11th, 2025 05:05
Phoenix Rebirth
Poetic Licence said:
The sense of someone ready to move on from a difficult past and mould a postive future, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:16
Poetic Licence said:
The sense of someone ready to move on from a difficult past and mould a postive future, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:16
I Miss Myself
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! So relatable. Love the flow and rhyme of this too! Well done! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 11:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! So relatable. Love the flow and rhyme of this too! Well done! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 11:33
I Miss Myself
Poetic Licence said:
Written with a touch of humour but has a serious side to the write, nicely expressed and written
June 19th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
Written with a touch of humour but has a serious side to the write, nicely expressed and written
June 19th, 2025 06:01
I Miss Myself
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever mixing just the right amount of wisdom and humor with clever rhyme to make a most balanced poem and a fave
June 19th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever mixing just the right amount of wisdom and humor with clever rhyme to make a most balanced poem and a fave
June 19th, 2025 04:45
Cross Your T\'s and Dot Your I\'s
Soman Ragavan said:
Queen Elizabeth was known for her frugality. Once she said, to save on ink : \"Don\'t cross your T\'s and dot your I\'s...\"
May 7th, 2025 04:29
Soman Ragavan said:
Queen Elizabeth was known for her frugality. Once she said, to save on ink : \"Don\'t cross your T\'s and dot your I\'s...\"
May 7th, 2025 04:29
Cross Your T\'s and Dot Your I\'s
sorenbarrett said:
The use of chess and the doting of i\'s and crossing of t\'s is a most interesting metaphor for making decisions in this life. Well done
May 7th, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
The use of chess and the doting of i\'s and crossing of t\'s is a most interesting metaphor for making decisions in this life. Well done
May 7th, 2025 03:32
Grocery Store
RSM0812 said:
Makes a grocery store visit more interesting then just buying food. Great write.
May 6th, 2025 16:00
RSM0812 said:
Makes a grocery store visit more interesting then just buying food. Great write.
May 6th, 2025 16:00
Some Things I Do Not Need
sorenbarrett said:
Never felt better than when I got rid of all I didn\'t need. Everything but cloths, house, food, and dishes. A great message and nicely done
May 5th, 2025 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
Never felt better than when I got rid of all I didn\'t need. Everything but cloths, house, food, and dishes. A great message and nicely done
May 5th, 2025 18:38
Could I Touch the Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
Cute, catchy, clever, creative couldn\'t be better
May 3rd, 2025 19:04
sorenbarrett said:
Cute, catchy, clever, creative couldn\'t be better
May 3rd, 2025 19:04
My Memory Fails Me, but Never for Songs
Salvia.S said:
Your words beautifully capture the powerful connection between memory and music. Lovely poem!
May 3rd, 2025 02:38
Salvia.S said:
Your words beautifully capture the powerful connection between memory and music. Lovely poem!
May 3rd, 2025 02:38
My Memory Fails Me, but Never for Songs
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely, art is not planned but felt what makes AI not eligible
May 2nd, 2025 16:27
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely, art is not planned but felt what makes AI not eligible
May 2nd, 2025 16:27
Rumination, I Pray
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem of doting love there is great rhyme internal and not that is a pepper to this steak giving it flavor. Nicely done
May 2nd, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem of doting love there is great rhyme internal and not that is a pepper to this steak giving it flavor. Nicely done
May 2nd, 2025 04:32
Grocery Store
rrodriguez said:
Yeah, but on Black Friday people turn vicious... Thank you for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 06:28
rrodriguez said:
Yeah, but on Black Friday people turn vicious... Thank you for sharing.
April 25th, 2025 06:28
Grocery Store
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed appropriate for a grocery store where all people meet for a common purpose. Well said
April 24th, 2025 21:33
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed appropriate for a grocery store where all people meet for a common purpose. Well said
April 24th, 2025 21:33
Your Ghost
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a most interesting rhyme scheme that catches attention. A sensual poem with a message.
April 23rd, 2025 18:52
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a most interesting rhyme scheme that catches attention. A sensual poem with a message.
April 23rd, 2025 18:52
Through Concrete Curtains
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of nature and the season. I loved the change of rhyme scheme in the middle stanza. Very well written.
April 22nd, 2025 20:08
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of nature and the season. I loved the change of rhyme scheme in the middle stanza. Very well written.
April 22nd, 2025 20:08
Names Turned to Praise
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that all can relate to. I don\'t think there is a person that has not been called a name by someone else. A heart felt write and no one should take too seriously what others say that don\'t match what you know is true.
April 21st, 2025 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that all can relate to. I don\'t think there is a person that has not been called a name by someone else. A heart felt write and no one should take too seriously what others say that don\'t match what you know is true.
April 21st, 2025 14:17
Pens and Markers
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point it makes sense to me. Very nicely done
April 20th, 2025 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point it makes sense to me. Very nicely done
April 20th, 2025 18:44
Productivity
sorenbarrett said:
Productivity is all a matter of what deems to be worth while. Poetry is a worthy production. A great write
April 19th, 2025 11:49
sorenbarrett said:
Productivity is all a matter of what deems to be worth while. Poetry is a worthy production. A great write
April 19th, 2025 11:49
Sardines on Pizza
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor there are many types of pizza and many types of people different tastes for different people. Very nice
April 18th, 2025 20:13
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor there are many types of pizza and many types of people different tastes for different people. Very nice
April 18th, 2025 20:13
Today the Sky Looked Painted
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely image as you read, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 02:01
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely image as you read, enjoyed the read
April 18th, 2025 02:01
Today the Sky Looked Painted
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in words and no no one is finished until their final day. A great poem
April 17th, 2025 18:48
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture painted in words and no no one is finished until their final day. A great poem
April 17th, 2025 18:48
Now isn\'t that Lovely.
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write appearing all okay and acceptable either way in life until the last line, nicely written
April 17th, 2025 02:13
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write appearing all okay and acceptable either way in life until the last line, nicely written
April 17th, 2025 02:13
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