Comments received on poems by maydanae
Just enough
sorenbarrett said:
I love the unexpected turns in this poem \"I fear that I\'m okay\". This gives it a playful feel. Nicely done.
October 25th, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
I love the unexpected turns in this poem \"I fear that I\'m okay\". This gives it a playful feel. Nicely done.
October 25th, 2026 03:56
Mechanical Marine Life
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in highly metaphorical lines combines scientific development in a machine designed to withstand oceanic pressures to individuals that have to withstand social societal pressures. Nicely done
October 20th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in highly metaphorical lines combines scientific development in a machine designed to withstand oceanic pressures to individuals that have to withstand social societal pressures. Nicely done
October 20th, 2026 03:53
Unseen
sorenbarrett said:
Such a core feeling expressed here. We all need notice and feel that we get it too little with everyone else vying for the same thing. Well done
October 18th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Such a core feeling expressed here. We all need notice and feel that we get it too little with everyone else vying for the same thing. Well done
October 18th, 2026 04:04
Drop the Ball
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change and dark at that. Nicely done
October 16th, 2026 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of change and dark at that. Nicely done
October 16th, 2026 16:09
I AM A WOMAN
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful, hard and to the point this poem lays it out take it or leave it. Nicely done
October 13th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful, hard and to the point this poem lays it out take it or leave it. Nicely done
October 13th, 2026 03:45
Happy (Belated) Birthday!!!
sorenbarrett said:
A birthday greeting in poetic form very nicely done.
October 11th, 2026 14:16
sorenbarrett said:
A birthday greeting in poetic form very nicely done.
October 11th, 2026 14:16
Fall in Love, Lust, or Loss
sorenbarrett said:
A good read about the flutters of love and red or black it works red just being harder to see, but then I\'m old.
October 9th, 2026 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
A good read about the flutters of love and red or black it works red just being harder to see, but then I\'m old.
October 9th, 2026 19:45
Pity me in Sequins
jarcher54 said:
This is what poetry is for! A little ambiguous, thoughtful, playful, cunning, full of imagery (you knocking on heaven\'s door in tar and feathers!) and surprises!
October 8th, 2026 21:44
jarcher54 said:
This is what poetry is for! A little ambiguous, thoughtful, playful, cunning, full of imagery (you knocking on heaven\'s door in tar and feathers!) and surprises!
October 8th, 2026 21:44
Chirp
sorenbarrett said:
All things spread taking the lowest level as water flowing to the sea. good write
October 8th, 2026 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
All things spread taking the lowest level as water flowing to the sea. good write
October 8th, 2026 07:56
Bed
Paul Bell said:
Counting sheep, was never a good idea.
Now counting dinosaurs, that doesn\'t get you back to sleep either, but at least the neighbours join you when the screaming starts.
October 8th, 2026 04:50
Paul Bell said:
Counting sheep, was never a good idea.
Now counting dinosaurs, that doesn\'t get you back to sleep either, but at least the neighbours join you when the screaming starts.
October 8th, 2026 04:50
Bed
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point this poem portrays an insomniac\'s nightmare. Well done
October 8th, 2026 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point this poem portrays an insomniac\'s nightmare. Well done
October 8th, 2026 03:35
I\'ve changed my Mind, Devilman!!
sorenbarrett said:
A modernistic cubist view of surreal conversation between talking heads. Well organized
October 5th, 2026 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
A modernistic cubist view of surreal conversation between talking heads. Well organized
October 5th, 2026 16:53
The Temporary Art of Packing 🧳
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sparks some past memory of having been there before, filling a suitcase, fitting boxes in a moving van nicely written
October 1st, 2026 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
This poem sparks some past memory of having been there before, filling a suitcase, fitting boxes in a moving van nicely written
October 1st, 2026 03:48
\\< STRUCTURE >/
Alex Arnot said:
Oh I love playing with structure and this is wonderfully chaotic! Well done!
September 30th, 2026 00:24
Alex Arnot said:
Oh I love playing with structure and this is wonderfully chaotic! Well done!
September 30th, 2026 00:24
\\< STRUCTURE >/
sorenbarrett said:
Clever structuring conveys the message well in this write. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 21:12
sorenbarrett said:
Clever structuring conveys the message well in this write. Nicely done
September 29th, 2026 21:12
The Bird in my Dreams Last Night
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of an observation and the questioning of its meaning. So poetically put.
September 25th, 2026 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of an observation and the questioning of its meaning. So poetically put.
September 25th, 2026 11:20
i am scared they won\'t remember all of me
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes common feelings of what we leave behind. That question of whether others will miss us, will we be remembered. Many wright for this purpose to leave something behind. It is a melancholic feeling and one of a questioning of one\'s importance and meaning. It is somewhat haunting. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2026 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes common feelings of what we leave behind. That question of whether others will miss us, will we be remembered. Many wright for this purpose to leave something behind. It is a melancholic feeling and one of a questioning of one\'s importance and meaning. It is somewhat haunting. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2026 04:11
These are Our Streets 9.6.26
sorenbarrett said:
There is good in everything even salted caramel unmeted. Well written
September 7th, 2026 14:46
sorenbarrett said:
There is good in everything even salted caramel unmeted. Well written
September 7th, 2026 14:46
Conquer the Mountain (Laundry Day)
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem began I imagined the washing machine as a monster. Not hard to do. A good read
August 12th, 2026 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem began I imagined the washing machine as a monster. Not hard to do. A good read
August 12th, 2026 18:09
Conquer the Mountain (Laundry Day)
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one immensely!
August 12th, 2026 17:52
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one immensely!
August 12th, 2026 17:52
Not Even Ten Minutes Have Passed
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time and how it is experienced. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time and how it is experienced. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 14:37
Rush in, Roulette!
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with periodic internal rhyme and the questioning lines of why are we still alive. Nicely written
August 9th, 2026 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with periodic internal rhyme and the questioning lines of why are we still alive. Nicely written
August 9th, 2026 13:01
Rush in, Roulette!
Fränz Müller said:
Every day we open our eyes is another chance at life but also another chance that we will get our ticket punched. One never knows! Excellent poem.
August 9th, 2026 12:18
Fränz Müller said:
Every day we open our eyes is another chance at life but also another chance that we will get our ticket punched. One never knows! Excellent poem.
August 9th, 2026 12:18
Pity me in Sequins
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with a strange method of creating pity. Well done
August 8th, 2026 19:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with a strange method of creating pity. Well done
August 8th, 2026 19:11
These days my fingernails stay longer
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of hands that work and those that now no longer have to. Well done
August 6th, 2026 19:56
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of hands that work and those that now no longer have to. Well done
August 6th, 2026 19:56
Slow Burn
peto said:
A tremendous ending to this write
I look forward to reading more from you
August 2nd, 2026 18:48
peto said:
A tremendous ending to this write
I look forward to reading more from you
August 2nd, 2026 18:48
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