Comments received on poems by maydanae



Cross Your T\'s and Dot Your I\'s
Soman Ragavan said:

Queen Elizabeth was known for her frugality. Once she said, to save on ink : \"Don\'t cross your T\'s and dot your I\'s...\"

May 7th, 2025 04:29

Cross Your T\'s and Dot Your I\'s
sorenbarrett said:

The use of chess and the doting of i\'s and crossing of t\'s is a most interesting metaphor for making decisions in this life. Well done

May 7th, 2025 03:32

Grocery Store
RSM0812 said:

Makes a grocery store visit more interesting then just buying food. Great write.

May 6th, 2025 16:00

Some Things I Do Not Need
sorenbarrett said:

Never felt better than when I got rid of all I didn\'t need. Everything but cloths, house, food, and dishes. A great message and nicely done

May 5th, 2025 18:38

Could I Touch the Clouds
Salvia.S said:

Lovely and whimsical!!

May 4th, 2025 01:52

Could I Touch the Clouds
sorenbarrett said:

Cute, catchy, clever, creative couldn\'t be better

May 3rd, 2025 19:04

My Memory Fails Me, but Never for Songs
sunshine777 said:

Beautiful

May 3rd, 2025 16:29

My Memory Fails Me, but Never for Songs
Salvia.S said:

Your words beautifully capture the powerful connection between memory and music. Lovely poem!

May 3rd, 2025 02:38

My Memory Fails Me, but Never for Songs
sorenbarrett said:

Lovely, art is not planned but felt what makes AI not eligible

May 2nd, 2025 16:27

Rumination, I Pray
sorenbarrett said:

In this poem of doting love there is great rhyme internal and not that is a pepper to this steak giving it flavor. Nicely done

May 2nd, 2025 04:32

Grocery Store
Salvia.S said:

Lovely poem!

April 28th, 2025 07:01

Grocery Store
rrodriguez said:

Yeah, but on Black Friday people turn vicious... Thank you for sharing.

April 25th, 2025 06:28

Grocery Store
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed appropriate for a grocery store where all people meet for a common purpose. Well said

April 24th, 2025 21:33

Your Ghost
sorenbarrett said:

This poem has a most interesting rhyme scheme that catches attention. A sensual poem with a message.

April 23rd, 2025 18:52

Through Concrete Curtains
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful poem of nature and the season. I loved the change of rhyme scheme in the middle stanza. Very well written.

April 22nd, 2025 20:08

Names Turned to Praise
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that all can relate to. I don\'t think there is a person that has not been called a name by someone else. A heart felt write and no one should take too seriously what others say that don\'t match what you know is true.

April 21st, 2025 14:17

Pens and Markers
sorenbarrett said:

Short and to the point it makes sense to me. Very nicely done

April 20th, 2025 18:44

Productivity
sorenbarrett said:

Productivity is all a matter of what deems to be worth while. Poetry is a worthy production. A great write

April 19th, 2025 11:49

Sardines on Pizza
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor there are many types of pizza and many types of people different tastes for different people. Very nice

April 18th, 2025 20:13

Today the Sky Looked Painted
Salvia.S said:

Beautiful write!!!

April 18th, 2025 06:17

Today the Sky Looked Painted
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely image as you read, enjoyed the read

April 18th, 2025 02:01

Today the Sky Looked Painted
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful picture painted in words and no no one is finished until their final day. A great poem

April 17th, 2025 18:48

Now isn\'t that Lovely.
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting write appearing all okay and acceptable either way in life until the last line, nicely written

April 17th, 2025 02:13

Now isn\'t that Lovely.
sorenbarrett said:

In this poem all seems well until the last line. Everything with or without is okay The issue of it being a type of palindrome is intriguing and makes even more sense. Very original A fave for that reason

April 16th, 2025 20:07

Enough?
Poetic Licence said:

A very relatable write that many have asked the same question, the pressure\'s of today\'s living can make you feel overwhelmed and that whatever you do, it is never enough, nicely expressed and written

April 16th, 2025 02:05

Enough?
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊️

April 16th, 2025 00:19

Enough?
sorenbarrett said:

We all ask at times how much is enough. A good poem that emphasizes this very issue.

April 15th, 2025 19:39