Comments received on poems by maydanae
Conquer the Mountain (Laundry Day)
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem began I imagined the washing machine as a monster. Not hard to do. A good read
August 12th, 2026 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem began I imagined the washing machine as a monster. Not hard to do. A good read
August 12th, 2026 18:09
Conquer the Mountain (Laundry Day)
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one immensely!
August 12th, 2026 17:52
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one immensely!
August 12th, 2026 17:52
Not Even Ten Minutes Have Passed
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time and how it is experienced. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 14:37
sorenbarrett said:
The passage of time and how it is experienced. Nicely done
August 10th, 2026 14:37
Rush in, Roulette!
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with periodic internal rhyme and the questioning lines of why are we still alive. Nicely written
August 9th, 2026 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with periodic internal rhyme and the questioning lines of why are we still alive. Nicely written
August 9th, 2026 13:01
Rush in, Roulette!
Fränz Müller said:
Every day we open our eyes is another chance at life but also another chance that we will get our ticket punched. One never knows! Excellent poem.
August 9th, 2026 12:18
Fränz Müller said:
Every day we open our eyes is another chance at life but also another chance that we will get our ticket punched. One never knows! Excellent poem.
August 9th, 2026 12:18
Pity me in Sequins
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with a strange method of creating pity. Well done
August 8th, 2026 19:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write with a strange method of creating pity. Well done
August 8th, 2026 19:11
These days my fingernails stay longer
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of hands that work and those that now no longer have to. Well done
August 6th, 2026 19:56
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of hands that work and those that now no longer have to. Well done
August 6th, 2026 19:56
Slow Burn
peto said:
A tremendous ending to this write
I look forward to reading more from you
August 2nd, 2026 18:48
peto said:
A tremendous ending to this write
I look forward to reading more from you
August 2nd, 2026 18:48
Not Care to Remember
sorenbarrett said:
Some things are just not important to remember. Well written with good rhyme and meter
July 15th, 2026 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
Some things are just not important to remember. Well written with good rhyme and meter
July 15th, 2026 18:17
Behind the Mountain
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of what one yearns for but only comes with time and sacrifice. All things have a price. Well done
July 12th, 2026 20:38
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of what one yearns for but only comes with time and sacrifice. All things have a price. Well done
July 12th, 2026 20:38
Spineless Girl
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes feelings of pity and sadness the image of a young woman broken in bed with more ailments than one can be expected to endure. Well imaged it calls out with anger for such misfortune. Nicely written
June 20th, 2026 03:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes feelings of pity and sadness the image of a young woman broken in bed with more ailments than one can be expected to endure. Well imaged it calls out with anger for such misfortune. Nicely written
June 20th, 2026 03:36
Spineless Girl
peto said:
Really snappy ending that almost takes away from the feeling woven in these words
\"Of the breaks and the fractures \"
Really hit hard as well
Thoroughly enjoyed
June 19th, 2026 22:38
peto said:
Really snappy ending that almost takes away from the feeling woven in these words
\"Of the breaks and the fractures \"
Really hit hard as well
Thoroughly enjoyed
June 19th, 2026 22:38
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sorenbarrett said:
The frustrations of technology in this poem. Well voiced
December 2nd, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
The frustrations of technology in this poem. Well voiced
December 2nd, 2025 20:05
Piece by Piece
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting metaphor of the egg and bit by bit. Going home bit by bit evokes the idea of aging and going home to death and the earth day by day it also brings to mind the idea of getting mentally better or worse whatever is home bit by bit. Nicely done
August 24th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting metaphor of the egg and bit by bit. Going home bit by bit evokes the idea of aging and going home to death and the earth day by day it also brings to mind the idea of getting mentally better or worse whatever is home bit by bit. Nicely done
August 24th, 2025 04:35
Phoenix Rebirth
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic description of a regeneration of the fabled bird that burst into flames and regenerated from the ashes. Well done with rhyme and good meter
July 11th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A graphic description of a regeneration of the fabled bird that burst into flames and regenerated from the ashes. Well done with rhyme and good meter
July 11th, 2025 05:05
Phoenix Rebirth
Poetic Licence said:
The sense of someone ready to move on from a difficult past and mould a postive future, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:16
Poetic Licence said:
The sense of someone ready to move on from a difficult past and mould a postive future, enjoyed the read
July 11th, 2025 00:16
I Miss Myself
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! So relatable. Love the flow and rhyme of this too! Well done! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 11:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! So relatable. Love the flow and rhyme of this too! Well done! 🌹👏
June 23rd, 2025 11:33
I Miss Myself
Poetic Licence said:
Written with a touch of humour but has a serious side to the write, nicely expressed and written
June 19th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
Written with a touch of humour but has a serious side to the write, nicely expressed and written
June 19th, 2025 06:01
I Miss Myself
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever mixing just the right amount of wisdom and humor with clever rhyme to make a most balanced poem and a fave
June 19th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem was clever mixing just the right amount of wisdom and humor with clever rhyme to make a most balanced poem and a fave
June 19th, 2025 04:45
Cross Your T\'s and Dot Your I\'s
Soman Ragavan said:
Queen Elizabeth was known for her frugality. Once she said, to save on ink : \"Don\'t cross your T\'s and dot your I\'s...\"
May 7th, 2025 04:29
Soman Ragavan said:
Queen Elizabeth was known for her frugality. Once she said, to save on ink : \"Don\'t cross your T\'s and dot your I\'s...\"
May 7th, 2025 04:29
Cross Your T\'s and Dot Your I\'s
sorenbarrett said:
The use of chess and the doting of i\'s and crossing of t\'s is a most interesting metaphor for making decisions in this life. Well done
May 7th, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
The use of chess and the doting of i\'s and crossing of t\'s is a most interesting metaphor for making decisions in this life. Well done
May 7th, 2025 03:32
Grocery Store
RSM0812 said:
Makes a grocery store visit more interesting then just buying food. Great write.
May 6th, 2025 16:00
RSM0812 said:
Makes a grocery store visit more interesting then just buying food. Great write.
May 6th, 2025 16:00
Some Things I Do Not Need
sorenbarrett said:
Never felt better than when I got rid of all I didn\'t need. Everything but cloths, house, food, and dishes. A great message and nicely done
May 5th, 2025 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
Never felt better than when I got rid of all I didn\'t need. Everything but cloths, house, food, and dishes. A great message and nicely done
May 5th, 2025 18:38
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