Comments received on poems by HollyGolightly
I saw a quote on Instagram
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, nicely written
June 26th, 2025 21:33
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, nicely written
June 26th, 2025 21:33
I saw a quote on Instagram
sorenbarrett said:
Loved it always believed in balance and here it is in this poem. Nicely written
June 26th, 2025 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
Loved it always believed in balance and here it is in this poem. Nicely written
June 26th, 2025 16:18
Licking love off knives
Poetic Licence said:
Love can hurt sometimes but it doesn\'t stop us loving them, nicely expressed and written
June 18th, 2025 01:30
Poetic Licence said:
Love can hurt sometimes but it doesn\'t stop us loving them, nicely expressed and written
June 18th, 2025 01:30
Licking love off knives
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor here love cuts sometimes to the bone. People bleed with love and the stains need to be set aside to be cleaned. Well done.
June 17th, 2025 19:20
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor here love cuts sometimes to the bone. People bleed with love and the stains need to be set aside to be cleaned. Well done.
June 17th, 2025 19:20
Never good enough
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of abuse and pain that leaves one vulnerable a sad write.
June 15th, 2025 17:03
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of abuse and pain that leaves one vulnerable a sad write.
June 15th, 2025 17:03
I miss you
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting appeal to a old love to return and a desire for commitment. Nicely done in rhyme
June 12th, 2025 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting appeal to a old love to return and a desire for commitment. Nicely done in rhyme
June 12th, 2025 03:40
Fall in line
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone trying everything to control someone and it has failed, nicely written
June 4th, 2025 00:31
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of someone trying everything to control someone and it has failed, nicely written
June 4th, 2025 00:31
Fall in line
sorenbarrett said:
Threatening, demanding, commanding, Authoritative so many things a good write
June 3rd, 2025 16:52
sorenbarrett said:
Threatening, demanding, commanding, Authoritative so many things a good write
June 3rd, 2025 16:52
Boundaries
sorenbarrett said:
I could hear the march in this poem\'s meter. A meaningful message measured in meter most gratifying and well done.
May 19th, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
I could hear the march in this poem\'s meter. A meaningful message measured in meter most gratifying and well done.
May 19th, 2025 04:05
How it should go
2781 said:
There\'s a name for it?? I heard it\'s about the transfer of energy. Energy began in harmony, but as it expanded, chaos ensured.
\"They\" said, that chaos, and time, will stop when all the energy of the universe is used up.
What happens after that is anyones guess, but, hear we are.
May 15th, 2025 10:13
2781 said:
There\'s a name for it?? I heard it\'s about the transfer of energy. Energy began in harmony, but as it expanded, chaos ensured.
\"They\" said, that chaos, and time, will stop when all the energy of the universe is used up.
What happens after that is anyones guess, but, hear we are.
May 15th, 2025 10:13
How it should go
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, to one a positive to another a negative, as we all do in life look for the right balance, enjoyed the read
May 15th, 2025 09:38
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, to one a positive to another a negative, as we all do in life look for the right balance, enjoyed the read
May 15th, 2025 09:38
How it should go
sorenbarrett said:
To one a positive to another an negative, true to one false to another, the world is grey and so it should be in the balance of eternity. A wonderful write of balance.
May 15th, 2025 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
To one a positive to another an negative, true to one false to another, the world is grey and so it should be in the balance of eternity. A wonderful write of balance.
May 15th, 2025 09:01
How it should go
Caring dove said:
An interesting writing
Liked the read
Yeah , the soul says one thing .. the ego another
May 15th, 2025 08:24
Caring dove said:
An interesting writing
Liked the read
Yeah , the soul says one thing .. the ego another
May 15th, 2025 08:24
Te amo
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem and it can be said in any language for love is multilingual. Very nice
May 11th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem and it can be said in any language for love is multilingual. Very nice
May 11th, 2025 04:41
Te amo
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write and declaration of love and commitment, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 02:41
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write and declaration of love and commitment, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 02:41
I remember
Poetic Licence said:
An honest,sad and painful write, the feeling of hurt and rejection in a one sided relationship, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
An honest,sad and painful write, the feeling of hurt and rejection in a one sided relationship, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 02:19
I remember
sorenbarrett said:
Sad even tragic it bleeds on the page and cries out to the reader in raw and letters as an undercooked relationship that is served with cold hurtful sauce. Well written a fave
May 7th, 2025 17:32
sorenbarrett said:
Sad even tragic it bleeds on the page and cries out to the reader in raw and letters as an undercooked relationship that is served with cold hurtful sauce. Well written a fave
May 7th, 2025 17:32
It\'s cold
vicecream said:
Incredible write especially with the context of your comment. I love this poem so much I hope you can find an ember of warmth and trust ❤️
April 29th, 2025 19:40
vicecream said:
Incredible write especially with the context of your comment. I love this poem so much I hope you can find an ember of warmth and trust ❤️
April 29th, 2025 19:40
It\'s cold
sorenbarrett said:
The cold here sounds literal but could be metaphorical as well. A lovely poem that can be taken either way. Lovely
April 29th, 2025 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
The cold here sounds literal but could be metaphorical as well. A lovely poem that can be taken either way. Lovely
April 29th, 2025 09:12
Flat line
sorenbarrett said:
Unconscious, numb, there is seldom pain in the red just numbness. I have seen the red and there is nothing wrong with it but it is not alive. Lovely piece wishing you a speedy recovery to yellow then green
April 22nd, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Unconscious, numb, there is seldom pain in the red just numbness. I have seen the red and there is nothing wrong with it but it is not alive. Lovely piece wishing you a speedy recovery to yellow then green
April 22nd, 2025 08:17
Torture
sorenbarrett said:
Arguments and power struggles lead to break ups in couples and nations and wars that take lives. A good write
April 21st, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Arguments and power struggles lead to break ups in couples and nations and wars that take lives. A good write
April 21st, 2025 04:10
