Comments received on poems by ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ
Carpe diem!
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the movie and the saying for we only have one chance to live and each moment lost is a chance lost forever. Well written
July 20th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the movie and the saying for we only have one chance to live and each moment lost is a chance lost forever. Well written
July 20th, 2026 03:45
Funny tricks of time!
Paul Bell said:
Remember, age is just a number.
Though fourteen is double digits, and before you know it, twenty is round the corner.
July 16th, 2026 11:21
Paul Bell said:
Remember, age is just a number.
Though fourteen is double digits, and before you know it, twenty is round the corner.
July 16th, 2026 11:21
Funny tricks of time!
isa kemmy said:
The good old times when we were 12 ,i love it but if wishes were horses poor beggars could ride on it.lets keep the good memories with us .time flies yesterday i was also 8 now am becoming old very soon my parents will ask for a grandchild but am still that 8 yeae old scared of growing. I love ur poem
July 16th, 2026 09:21
isa kemmy said:
The good old times when we were 12 ,i love it but if wishes were horses poor beggars could ride on it.lets keep the good memories with us .time flies yesterday i was also 8 now am becoming old very soon my parents will ask for a grandchild but am still that 8 yeae old scared of growing. I love ur poem
July 16th, 2026 09:21
Funny tricks of time!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really touched me. There\'s something so honest about looking forward and backward at the same time...wanting to hold onto childhood while wondering what comes next. Beautifully heartfelt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really touched me. There\'s something so honest about looking forward and backward at the same time...wanting to hold onto childhood while wondering what comes next. Beautifully heartfelt, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:24
Funny tricks of time!
2781 said:
I was eight, fifty seven years ago.
The thing I noticed with aging is - you get past worrying.
July 16th, 2026 07:00
2781 said:
I was eight, fifty seven years ago.
The thing I noticed with aging is - you get past worrying.
July 16th, 2026 07:00
Funny tricks of time!
2781 said:
I was eight, fifty seven years ago.
The thing I noticed with aging is - you get past worrying.
July 16th, 2026 07:00
2781 said:
I was eight, fifty seven years ago.
The thing I noticed with aging is - you get past worrying.
July 16th, 2026 07:00
Funny tricks of time!
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Sylva of how time flies by and how change is inevitable wanted or not. It gets faster the older we get. A fave
July 16th, 2026 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem Sylva of how time flies by and how change is inevitable wanted or not. It gets faster the older we get. A fave
July 16th, 2026 05:52
Leave me alone;
rhmn_7 said:
This poignant verse beautifully captures the fragile tension between craving solitude and the desperate need to remain tethered to love. Nice poem Sylvia!
July 12th, 2026 07:44
rhmn_7 said:
This poignant verse beautifully captures the fragile tension between craving solitude and the desperate need to remain tethered to love. Nice poem Sylvia!
July 12th, 2026 07:44
Leave me alone;
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really touched me. \"Listen to me, just don\'t tell me not to cry\" especially resonated, and the closing refrain brings the whole poem home so gently. We all need those moments when someone can honor our need for space without letting us feel forgotten. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really touched me. \"Listen to me, just don\'t tell me not to cry\" especially resonated, and the closing refrain brings the whole poem home so gently. We all need those moments when someone can honor our need for space without letting us feel forgotten. Beautiful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:38
Loveable;
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really hit me hard...the repetition builds such a deep sense of longing, and that final question lands with heartbreaking honesty. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really hit me hard...the repetition builds such a deep sense of longing, and that final question lands with heartbreaking honesty. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 11th, 2026 08:06
Loveable;
sorenbarrett said:
Those that think of only self do not love. A wonderful poem Sylva that draws attention to what love is. The print is a bit small for my old eyes but worth the strain.
July 11th, 2026 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
Those that think of only self do not love. A wonderful poem Sylva that draws attention to what love is. The print is a bit small for my old eyes but worth the strain.
July 11th, 2026 06:27
Anxiety;
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really hit me hard. You captured the relentless spiral of anxiety so honestly…especially the way one question becomes twenty before you even realize it. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really hit me hard. You captured the relentless spiral of anxiety so honestly…especially the way one question becomes twenty before you even realize it. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 4th, 2026 22:32
Anxiety;
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of doubt a lack of confidence so sad so many ifs where will and is are what is wanted. Nicely written Sylva
July 3rd, 2026 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of doubt a lack of confidence so sad so many ifs where will and is are what is wanted. Nicely written Sylva
July 3rd, 2026 09:12
If only we\'d been friends;
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, what a heartfelt piece. I love that this isn\'t about grand adventures as much as it is about finding someone with whom even the smallest moments become meaningful. By the end, the repeated wish, \"If only we\'d been friends,\" carries a quiet ache that lingers long after the poem ends. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 19:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, what a heartfelt piece. I love that this isn\'t about grand adventures as much as it is about finding someone with whom even the smallest moments become meaningful. By the end, the repeated wish, \"If only we\'d been friends,\" carries a quiet ache that lingers long after the poem ends. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 19:59
If only we\'d been friends;
Doggerel Dave said:
Relationship possibilities... I wish you had been friends too; enjoyed the richness of it all. The world needs many more...
June 27th, 2026 20:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Relationship possibilities... I wish you had been friends too; enjoyed the richness of it all. The world needs many more...
June 27th, 2026 20:08
If only we\'d been friends;
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and an invitation. Well written
June 27th, 2026 13:18
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing and an invitation. Well written
June 27th, 2026 13:18
NPC;
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this hit me hard. That feeling of being valued only when you\'re needed comes through with painful honesty. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this hit me hard. That feeling of being valued only when you\'re needed comes through with painful honesty. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:31
NPC;
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this poem a recognition of one\'s own faults and admission. It is a twist that is abrupt and turns the poem on its head. Very nicely done a fave
June 26th, 2026 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last line that makes this poem a recognition of one\'s own faults and admission. It is a twist that is abrupt and turns the poem on its head. Very nicely done a fave
June 26th, 2026 05:41
2:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really moved me. There is something so relatable about lying awake while the mind wanders through memories, fears, questions, dreams, and possibilities. The journey from the middle of the night to sunrise feels beautifully human. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 23rd, 2026 22:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this really moved me. There is something so relatable about lying awake while the mind wanders through memories, fears, questions, dreams, and possibilities. The journey from the middle of the night to sunrise feels beautifully human. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 23rd, 2026 22:30
2:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic description of insomnia and all that happens during those long hours until the sun raises. Nicely penned
June 23rd, 2026 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic description of insomnia and all that happens during those long hours until the sun raises. Nicely penned
June 23rd, 2026 04:07
In a life I\'ll never live;
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes pieces of a puzzle and puts them together into a whole at the end. There is reassurance and that is the strongest part of the poem leaving it on a positive note. Well written Sylva
June 22nd, 2026 06:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes pieces of a puzzle and puts them together into a whole at the end. There is reassurance and that is the strongest part of the poem leaving it on a positive note. Well written Sylva
June 22nd, 2026 06:10
I hate it;
sorenbarrett said:
So well said all the discontent and upset circles back to oneself and the last lines tie this all together very nicely done
June 21st, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
So well said all the discontent and upset circles back to oneself and the last lines tie this all together very nicely done
June 21st, 2026 04:24
To crave what you dread;
Paul Bell said:
I like it when people say, 99% of your fears never happen.
Then you think to yourself, that 1%. OMG, I\'m gonna die.
June 19th, 2026 09:30
Paul Bell said:
I like it when people say, 99% of your fears never happen.
Then you think to yourself, that 1%. OMG, I\'m gonna die.
June 19th, 2026 09:30
To crave what you dread;
sorenbarrett said:
Here duality takes precedence in its paradox where we want and fear the same thing. A lovely write where it is in this opposition that there is resolution.
June 19th, 2026 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Here duality takes precedence in its paradox where we want and fear the same thing. A lovely write where it is in this opposition that there is resolution.
June 19th, 2026 06:24
Story of the loser;
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this hit hard, my friend. There is a raw vulnerability here that many people will recognize, whether they admit it or not. The feelings of comparison, frustration, and invisibility come through with real emotional force. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, this hit hard, my friend. There is a raw vulnerability here that many people will recognize, whether they admit it or not. The feelings of comparison, frustration, and invisibility come through with real emotional force. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 17th, 2026 11:51
Story of the loser;
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that describes the world as one of competition where winner takes all. It is stark and hard it is blaming loss on laziness, a form of self blame It seems so in democracy, capitalism, school, jobs, finding a partner, yet there are scavengers that take advantage of the leavings they too with their pecking order. Here I go too far beyond the scope of the poem. It is well rhymed and flows well. Very nicely written leaving a hopeless felling.
June 17th, 2026 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that describes the world as one of competition where winner takes all. It is stark and hard it is blaming loss on laziness, a form of self blame It seems so in democracy, capitalism, school, jobs, finding a partner, yet there are scavengers that take advantage of the leavings they too with their pecking order. Here I go too far beyond the scope of the poem. It is well rhymed and flows well. Very nicely written leaving a hopeless felling.
June 17th, 2026 06:39
Only in the presence of absence;
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, the final lines stayed with me. The longing to be met with understanding rather than explanation feels deeply human. Sometimes there really aren\'t words for what we\'re carrying. Beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sylva, the final lines stayed with me. The longing to be met with understanding rather than explanation feels deeply human. Sometimes there really aren\'t words for what we\'re carrying. Beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:16
Only in the presence of absence;
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, we rarely value things and people as long as they are with us. We do when they are gone...
June 15th, 2026 19:30
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, we rarely value things and people as long as they are with us. We do when they are gone...
June 15th, 2026 19:30
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