Comments received on poems by ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ
Girl In the Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement to get up and get going that there is no time like the present and that time passes too fast. Well done
June 7th, 2026 15:21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement to get up and get going that there is no time like the present and that time passes too fast. Well done
June 7th, 2026 15:21
Moonchild, rewritten;
sorenbarrett said:
There is much here about the lack of confidence that comes with growth and reflections on direction. Well written
June 6th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
There is much here about the lack of confidence that comes with growth and reflections on direction. Well written
June 6th, 2026 03:59
Moonchild;
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely but most melancholic and sad poem of poor self esteem where value should be given. Nicely written
June 3rd, 2026 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely but most melancholic and sad poem of poor self esteem where value should be given. Nicely written
June 3rd, 2026 15:10
Im okay;
Amber D. Petty Patrick said:
Words cannot express how deeply, word for word, you have described my everyday life over the past four years. How i felt this, was truly heartfelt and understood. I can offer a little piece of advice from my own experience in this same emotion...keep your head up. Stay grounded. Do not stop. Keep going. If it comes, let it, if it goes, let it. And hold the faith... Your dreams are not just a dream. They are undefined goals. Define them. And then Just Do It....idk you. But I know you got this..thank u for these beautiful words friend. #BeTru2U
June 1st, 2026 16:37
Amber D. Petty Patrick said:
Words cannot express how deeply, word for word, you have described my everyday life over the past four years. How i felt this, was truly heartfelt and understood. I can offer a little piece of advice from my own experience in this same emotion...keep your head up. Stay grounded. Do not stop. Keep going. If it comes, let it, if it goes, let it. And hold the faith... Your dreams are not just a dream. They are undefined goals. Define them. And then Just Do It....idk you. But I know you got this..thank u for these beautiful words friend. #BeTru2U
June 1st, 2026 16:37
Im okay;
sorenbarrett said:
Vacillating moods, emotions and behaviors like a rollercoaster in this poem. Well done
June 1st, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Vacillating moods, emotions and behaviors like a rollercoaster in this poem. Well done
June 1st, 2026 04:19
The moon yearns the sun;
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly beautiful the weaving of the yearnings and needs and the longs works so well. It is so nicely woven into a fabric. A fave
May 26th, 2026 07:31
sorenbarrett said:
This is truly beautiful the weaving of the yearnings and needs and the longs works so well. It is so nicely woven into a fabric. A fave
May 26th, 2026 07:31
The weight we carry;
NinjaGirl said:
And breaking apart can be beautiful too, in its own way
December 8th, 2025 15:07
NinjaGirl said:
And breaking apart can be beautiful too, in its own way
December 8th, 2025 15:07
The weight we carry;
Paul Bell said:
Yes, life should come with a health warning, but what doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.
December 8th, 2025 05:59
Paul Bell said:
Yes, life should come with a health warning, but what doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.
December 8th, 2025 05:59
The weight we carry;
Katie B. said:
Really enjoyed it, nice read. Thanks for sharing!
December 8th, 2025 05:04
Katie B. said:
Really enjoyed it, nice read. Thanks for sharing!
December 8th, 2025 05:04
The weight we carry;
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing is perfect but all have their place and everything goes on in whatever form so make the best of it. A lovely poem
December 8th, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing is perfect but all have their place and everything goes on in whatever form so make the best of it. A lovely poem
December 8th, 2025 04:54
Unapologetically me;
Paul Bell said:
In the end, all you have is yourself, and sometimes that\'s not a bad thing.
November 14th, 2025 04:16
Paul Bell said:
In the end, all you have is yourself, and sometimes that\'s not a bad thing.
November 14th, 2025 04:16
Unapologetically me;
sorenbarrett said:
Being yourself has its benefits an its consequences but in the balance it is better to be oneself than a facade and phony. Nicely done.
November 14th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Being yourself has its benefits an its consequences but in the balance it is better to be oneself than a facade and phony. Nicely done.
November 14th, 2025 04:06
All that matters;
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in this poem. We sometimes ascribe too much importance to certain things and ignore the real importance of life that we find in the common and little things. Well done
October 28th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great message in this poem. We sometimes ascribe too much importance to certain things and ignore the real importance of life that we find in the common and little things. Well done
October 28th, 2025 03:41
Always but never;
Paul Bell said:
I suppose it works both ways.
The ones out in front sometimes have to force themselves to perform.
The introvert in a way is usually the writer, the producer, part of the ingredient to success.
October 27th, 2025 14:09
Paul Bell said:
I suppose it works both ways.
The ones out in front sometimes have to force themselves to perform.
The introvert in a way is usually the writer, the producer, part of the ingredient to success.
October 27th, 2025 14:09
Always but never;
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling a part but not the whole is not necessarily a bad thing for we are all parts of something greater with an illusion of independence. The form of this poem is intriguing in the triple repetition of each line. Nicely worded and constructed building of the previous lines it culminates in the difference between existing and living. Well done
October 27th, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Feeling a part but not the whole is not necessarily a bad thing for we are all parts of something greater with an illusion of independence. The form of this poem is intriguing in the triple repetition of each line. Nicely worded and constructed building of the previous lines it culminates in the difference between existing and living. Well done
October 27th, 2025 03:51
Always but never;
peto said:
Know the feeling
Always the poison never the cure
Really like how you got this message across
Thanks for sharing
October 27th, 2025 03:34
peto said:
Know the feeling
Always the poison never the cure
Really like how you got this message across
Thanks for sharing
October 27th, 2025 03:34
Invisible;
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The poem talks about something that is very close to my heart.
September 18th, 2025 10:06
rebellion_in_sanity said:
The poem talks about something that is very close to my heart.
September 18th, 2025 10:06
Invisible;
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem captures the quiet ache of wanting to matter to someone, highlighting both the pain of invisibility and the fragile hope for recognition. Nice work
September 17th, 2025 16:25
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem captures the quiet ache of wanting to matter to someone, highlighting both the pain of invisibility and the fragile hope for recognition. Nice work
September 17th, 2025 16:25
Invisible;
sorenbarrett said:
Second place never gets much recognition. A poem of a wish to be first in choice not yet recognized. Well written
September 17th, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Second place never gets much recognition. A poem of a wish to be first in choice not yet recognized. Well written
September 17th, 2025 09:28
So much life left to live;
RSM0812 said:
Beutiful entanglement of words. It tells me that life will always a find a way. Very well done.
September 16th, 2025 09:31
RSM0812 said:
Beutiful entanglement of words. It tells me that life will always a find a way. Very well done.
September 16th, 2025 09:31
So much life left to live;
Demar Desu said:
I’ve felt that feeling strongly lately… probably why I resonate with this poem as well. Yet, what helps me is dig into what I’ve loved in the past… sometimes I got to combine all the things I’ve love into one path… it’s a big road ahead for those who think
September 16th, 2025 07:09
Demar Desu said:
I’ve felt that feeling strongly lately… probably why I resonate with this poem as well. Yet, what helps me is dig into what I’ve loved in the past… sometimes I got to combine all the things I’ve love into one path… it’s a big road ahead for those who think
September 16th, 2025 07:09
So much life left to live;
sorenbarrett said:
Existential questions in poetic form. You have become a song writer. A familiar song for many of us. Most lovely
September 16th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Existential questions in poetic form. You have become a song writer. A familiar song for many of us. Most lovely
September 16th, 2025 06:59
Who are you;
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful message. Yes too many are steered into directions they do not wish to pursue but they should know the difficulties of success in pursuing what they want a child that wants to play in the NFL or NBA should know what it takes, one that wants to be a successful singer, actor, or artist should know what that life style involves. Informed choices and the freedom to make them is the key.
August 31st, 2025 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful message. Yes too many are steered into directions they do not wish to pursue but they should know the difficulties of success in pursuing what they want a child that wants to play in the NFL or NBA should know what it takes, one that wants to be a successful singer, actor, or artist should know what that life style involves. Informed choices and the freedom to make them is the key.
August 31st, 2025 07:56
Why I Cry;
peto said:
You appear to be doing some self inventory sylva
Can\'t beat a write from the heart
Felt it
August 4th, 2025 12:18
peto said:
You appear to be doing some self inventory sylva
Can\'t beat a write from the heart
Felt it
August 4th, 2025 12:18
Why I Cry;
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of someone hiding their issues from the world and trying to from themselves, but their mind wont let them, especially at night, nicely expressed and written, wishing you all the best
August 4th, 2025 11:46
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of someone hiding their issues from the world and trying to from themselves, but their mind wont let them, especially at night, nicely expressed and written, wishing you all the best
August 4th, 2025 11:46
Why I Cry;
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that calls out of the darkness of night. Very emotive
August 4th, 2025 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that calls out of the darkness of night. Very emotive
August 4th, 2025 10:15
Not very long ago; In a land not so far away;
Poetic Licence said:
I sincerely hope peace can somehow be found on all sides and quickly, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:32
Poetic Licence said:
I sincerely hope peace can somehow be found on all sides and quickly, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:32
Not very long ago; In a land not so far away;
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that bleeds and speaks for the wounded and dead, the abandoned and lost. A sad poem that extends a hand of hope. Nicely written
August 1st, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that bleeds and speaks for the wounded and dead, the abandoned and lost. A sad poem that extends a hand of hope. Nicely written
August 1st, 2025 05:31
Tears;
lostinfantasy said:
I really like your comment and thought about this piece... I\'ve never realized this! Thanks!
June 26th, 2025 17:04
lostinfantasy said:
I really like your comment and thought about this piece... I\'ve never realized this! Thanks!
June 26th, 2025 17:04
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