Comments received on poems by ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ
Tears;
Poetic Licence said:
I had never thought of tears like that before, a lovely write, short but very powerful in its message, enjoyed the read
June 13th, 2025 05:19
Poetic Licence said:
I had never thought of tears like that before, a lovely write, short but very powerful in its message, enjoyed the read
June 13th, 2025 05:19
Tears;
sorenbarrett said:
Tears such a weak poetic word but so frequently used and here it is used with weight and power. It is indeed most metaphoric the issue of water and salt as if the sea and how eyes are cast as lipid pools. This poem in its brevity is like a single tear that calls attention to a mood to those that are listening. Very nice
June 13th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Tears such a weak poetic word but so frequently used and here it is used with weight and power. It is indeed most metaphoric the issue of water and salt as if the sea and how eyes are cast as lipid pools. This poem in its brevity is like a single tear that calls attention to a mood to those that are listening. Very nice
June 13th, 2025 04:39
What mother earth taught me;
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write highlighting we have so much out there too learn from if only we opened our eyes, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 12:32
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write highlighting we have so much out there too learn from if only we opened our eyes, enjoyed the read
May 21st, 2025 12:32
What mother earth taught me;
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of how each thing can teach us something. Well written and a fave
May 21st, 2025 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice poem of how each thing can teach us something. Well written and a fave
May 21st, 2025 10:18
Stuck;
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the dilemma in this poem of being oneself and what others want. One can not live for others like a bird with clipped wings it sings but can not fly. In a cage fed and protected it is safe but not itself. Making that choice to fly means taking the responsibility of caring for oneself and all the dangers involved. A tough message in this poem that calls out to many. Raw and with some rhyme it needs to fly to become happy. Some birds return to their cages after being freed.
May 20th, 2025 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the dilemma in this poem of being oneself and what others want. One can not live for others like a bird with clipped wings it sings but can not fly. In a cage fed and protected it is safe but not itself. Making that choice to fly means taking the responsibility of caring for oneself and all the dangers involved. A tough message in this poem that calls out to many. Raw and with some rhyme it needs to fly to become happy. Some birds return to their cages after being freed.
May 20th, 2025 09:01
Stuck;
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write over the very relatable pressures many feel, doing what everyone says and expects you to do or doing what you actually what to do , Nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 08:36
Poetic Licence said:
A poignant write over the very relatable pressures many feel, doing what everyone says and expects you to do or doing what you actually what to do , Nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 08:36
Listen;
sorenbarrett said:
Such a powerful message in a world too busy for us to listen. Loved the nature images and the general presentation. A lovely poem
May 19th, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
Such a powerful message in a world too busy for us to listen. Loved the nature images and the general presentation. A lovely poem
May 19th, 2025 06:34
Listen;
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, we should just stop sometimes and listen, we miss so much constantly rushing around, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, we should just stop sometimes and listen, we miss so much constantly rushing around, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 05:17
Escape;
sorenbarrett said:
Whether you believe this message or not the wording is so beautiful it deserves a fave. Very nicely done
May 17th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
Whether you believe this message or not the wording is so beautiful it deserves a fave. Very nicely done
May 17th, 2025 04:32
Escape;
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, sometimes we struggle to find the key, nicely written
May 17th, 2025 04:24
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, sometimes we struggle to find the key, nicely written
May 17th, 2025 04:24
